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Real name: Liz
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I am a 23 year old mom and a new Twilight and fan-fic fan.  Now I can't get enough.


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Reviews by lotusblossom
 
Summary:

This is my response to some negative comments I saw people making about the Romeo and Juliet theme surrounding Edward and Bella, and about Edward and Bella in general.

One Shot.


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Charlie, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5935
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2008 Updated: July 17, 2008


Reviewer: lotusblossom Signed
Date: July 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Truth About Juliet

Oh, wow, this was AMAZING!  Heartbreaking and painful to read, but so well-written.  Thank you for sharing it :)

 
Breathe Again by Ysar Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5440]
Summary: Feature

You know those fics where Edward doesn't come back and Bella forgets about him and five seconds later she's in bed with Jacob and none of it makes any damn sense?
Yeah, this isn't one of them.

This story picks up from the moment in New Moon when Jacob has driven Bella home after the cliff diving incident, right before he catches the scent of Alice. Only in this telling, Alice wasn't looking, so there's no sudden appearance at Bella's house, no Rosalie calling Edward and sending him on a suicidal mission to Volterra, and no reason for Bella to do anything but believe that Edward didn't love her anymore. This is simply a story of what might have happened if everyone stayed mostly in character and Edward's return was delayed. Yes, delayed. Because we all know that he was "this close" to coming back on his own anyhow.
So what would have happened if Bella had tried to move on with her life?  Would she have found happiness with Jacob?  And would Edward be too late?

* First in a series of stories


~I thought of Jacob’s warm arms wrapped around me, his infectious laughter, and his ability to keep me from falling to pieces again… The pain choking my heart relaxed and I could breathe.~

 

~“More than anything,” I whispered, not caring what I'd just agreed to. When it came to Bella, it didn't matter what the question was. I just wanted.~

Winner of:

Best Author, Most Romantic, Favorite Jacob, Most Suspenseful, & Best WIP in the Wolfpack Awards | Best Non-Canon Pairing (Incomplete) and Best WIP in the Moonlight Awards | Best During the Series in the Razzle Dazzle Awards | The Storyteller Award in the Shimmer Awards | Best JacobxBella in the Silent Tear Awards  


Categories: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: A Blazing Sun
Chapters: 76 Completed: No Word count: 164405
[Report This] Published: December 07, 2008 Updated: September 11, 2010


Reviewer: lotusblossom Signed
Date: July 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 51: Quiet: Bella's POV

I am firmly Team Edward but I can appreciate a good Jake/Bella story too.  I'm Team Jacob as far as this story goes!

 

Keep up the great writing, I just love this story and it is awesome that you update so often!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

 
Reviewer: lotusblossom Signed
Date: July 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 53: Nuisance: Bella's POV

I thought Seth was going to imprint on Jessica, damn it!  I don't know why that pairing seemed perfect in my head, I guess because they both talk so much!

 

Great chapter :)



Author's Response:

LOL! Thank you!

 
The List by Laura Cullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13646]
Summary:

Four weeks before her wedding to Edward, Bella is frustrated. She knows there's little-to-no chance of getting him to bend his rules and boundaries now, but there's no harm in fantasizing about what could happen later. So she begins compiling a list of things that she and Edward can do together once they're happily married. She's surprised to find she might be able to cross some things off earlier than she thought...

Story contains mature themes and is not intended for younger readers.

Thanks to Mandi, aka m81170, for the great banner!


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 187877
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2010


Reviewer: lotusblossom Signed
Date: March 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I

Great story!  I hope you'll keep writing after she is changed, I definitely want to read the scene when Edward gets to drink the blood she drew for him!

 
Reviewer: lotusblossom Signed
Date: May 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: The Wedding

Oh my God, that was perfect.  Absolutely perfect.  It's what I wish the wedding and wedding night in BD were like (were the story not YA fiction, lol), especially with Jake's gift and his imprint.

 

I loved the gifts Bella gave Edward, too.  I can't think of anything that would mean more to him than having the sound of her heartbeat preserved.  Such an original idea.

 

Thank you for writing this great story, I can't wait for more.

 
Reviewer: lotusblossom Signed
Date: August 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

That was some hot vampire lovin!  I love this story so much I'm sad to see it end.  Happy birthday!!

 
Summary:

It's been three long years since Edward left Bella, and things within The Cullen family have changed epically. After Edward's final stand off with Victoria, Emmett is left heartbroken and alone. A chance vision sends him back to Forks, and into the healing arms of the one person he never expected. Why fight with fate?

 

 New Moon AU - Bella/Emmett.

 


Categories: New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Irina, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Kate, Laurent, Leah, Marcus, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: Emmett Stories
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 64433
[Report This] Published: January 13, 2009 Updated: February 22, 2011


Reviewer: lotusblossom Signed
Date: March 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - You and Me

Great story so far.  This is beautifully written!!  I don't think I saw one typo in any of the 6 chapters :)  I can't wait to read more, now I'm curious about where the plot will take Leah!

 
Summary:

Special thanks to mellyfrisco6 for this new and improved banner.

Post Eclipse.  Breaking Dawn never happened.  Bella and Edward are engaged to be married, but Bella can't seem to ignore the feelings she still has for Jacob.  Will she stay with the vampire who broke her heart, or will she run to the werewolf who put it back together?

Coming Full Circle has won praise from The Wolfpack Awards:

MOST SUSPENSEFUL

MOST ORIGINAL PLOT

BEST IMPRINT

Winner of "Most Loved Imprint Character" in the Summer JBNP Awards!

 

*And special thanks also go out to precioustandi for this banner as well.

 


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 46 Completed: No Word count: 415372
[Report This] Published: January 31, 2009 Updated: September 24, 2012


Reviewer: lotusblossom Signed
Date: July 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Fifteen

Oooh, great chapter!  That lemon was hot and even better with Seth's little lesson in sex ed there at the end, haha!

 

I love that you addressed the whole Edward's charm on Jake's bracelet issue - I am Team Edward but that bugged the fuck out of me in the books!



Author's Response:

Ahh, I love it when Team Edward people review me.  I really appreciate it.  I hope you can see in my story that I'm not trying to be mean or unfair to Edward.  Rather, I'm just painting the picture of what would have happened if Bella would have picked Jacob instead...based on the personalities already laid out by SM.  And yes, Edward's charm really bothered me.  I'm glad you agree.:)

 
Summary:

Bella takes a vacation to Hilton Head Island in South Carolina to meet Alice's new boyfriend, Jasper. Rosalie and Emmett come along, too, just in case Bella didn't feel like enough of a fifth wheel. With Jasper's roommate out of town, Bella has his nice big bed all to herself. Until Edward comes home in the middle of the night...

Beautiful banner by the awesome achelle131


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes Word count: 163211
[Report This] Published: March 01, 2009 Updated: December 21, 2011


Reviewer: lotusblossom Signed
Date: July 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

OMG you almost killed me there.  Thank you so much for not ending on a cliffie or I would have jumped out the window, for serious. 

 

This chapter was just so, so, so good.  I'm so glad they're moving forward in their relationship - and I'm hazarding a guess that after this scare there may be a proposal in the works from Southernward... maybe?  possibly?  Thanks for an awesome chapter!!

 
Summary:

Edward leaves Bella, much like the beginning of 'New Moon', however, this time, they are all human and there is quite the twist.  Why did Edward leave Bella?  And what secret is Bella keeping when he leaves?

Can they make a nightmare turn into a dream?

THANKS TO EMERALD_ROSALIE FOR THE ABOVE BANNER AND ATHENALOVE FOR THE BELOW.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 61 Completed: Yes Word count: 155064
[Report This] Published: April 14, 2009 Updated: August 05, 2010


Reviewer: lotusblossom Signed
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

Beautiful chapter.  I'm running out of words to describe your writing at this point.  I knew it was a dream in the beginning but I wanted so badly for it to be real for them :(  I know, I know, you believe in happy endings.

I'm back to choosing Edward as my shirtless Cullen again after this one.

 



Author's Response:

LOL!  Shirtless Edward it is!

I'm so glad it made sense to you and you enjoyed it!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: lotusblossom Signed
Date: July 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

Wow, thanks for the quick update!  Beautiful, haunting chapter, as always.  I can't get enough of this story even though I always wind up crying!  As hard as it was to read it was good to get some more insight into Edward's reaction at the hospital and hearing it from an outside perspective.  Thank you for writing this, for real.  It's incredible.

 

For my Nekky Cullen dinner I request lobster tails prepared by Edward, please! :)



Author's Response: I am so grateful for your kind words and your review! Sending Edward in nothing but a bow tie and carrying a tray of lobster!

 
Reviewer: lotusblossom Signed
Date: July 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30 - Little Girls

That was SO good, sad in the best way.  Beautifully done!



Author's Response:

I am glad you feel I did it justice.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: lotusblossom Signed
Date: July 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

Great chapter :) And don't worry, I'm not going anywhere, I'm too hooked on this story, even if it takes a while for updates!  I can't wait to see the name Edward chooses!

 

This time around, I'll go with shirtless Jasper.  He needs more love!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!

You will find out the name in the very next chapter!  I hope you approve!

And Jasper definitely gets some love in the next chap!  I'm just sayin'

Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: lotusblossom Signed
Date: August 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32 - Classics

I love the name, because it's my name! (well, just the first name)  This was such a sweet chapter and a nice angst-break.  It's good to see Charlie warming up a bit.  I love Jasper's POV, so so much, I was already smiling when I read the first line.

I'll take Emmett this time, because that boy probably gives a damn good massage ;) (Lilac please!)



Author's Response: I truly love writing Jasper. He is a blast! I am glad you like the name! Thanks so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: lotusblossom Signed
Date: August 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34 - Deals

Aw, I just love Jasper.  He's so quick to forgive.  Excellent chapter, again!



Author's Response:

Jasper definitely is very perceptive and expresses himself in his own… interesting way!  He’s a blast for me to write though!

Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: lotusblossom Signed
Date: August 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

Oh, finally!  This was exactly how I pictured her waking up.  I loved the CPOV.  Can't wait for more! :)



Author's Response: I am so glad I got it right! Carlisle is so wonderful.. Thanks so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: lotusblossom Signed
Date: January 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act

Whew, that was the perfect mix of hot and sweet.  Beautiful chapter, as always, I adore this story and I'm also obsessed with Chubward.  You can do no wrong in my book, lady :)



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!  Aw, and you read Chubward too?  That means a lot:)

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: lotusblossom Signed
Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 56: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso

A+ sister!!! That was so beautiful I actually missed being pregnant for a second!



Author's Response:

Wow.  That's sayin' something!  LOL!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: lotusblossom Signed
Date: March 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 57: Epilogue the Sixth - World of Magic

I'm guessing either Rose or one of the kids because I can't think of another POV we haven't heard from.  Fab chapter as always.  Gotta love Daddy C!



Author's Response:

We have heard from Rose tho:)  I think it was the chapter Blood and Inhumanity.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Summary:

 

 

When Bella and Edward meet the first day of High School, he is a chubby misfit with no friends in a new town, aside from his popular cousins.  He meets Bella Swan, a well-liked, if uncoordinated, local with problems of her own.  This is the story of their friendship, their loss, their love and destruction.  Can they find their way back to each other?  And can they survive the changes they have both gone through since the fateful day they met?

HUGE THANKS TO ATHENALOVE and READERGOOF FOR THE AMAZING BANNERS!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 41 Completed: No Word count: 164271
[Report This] Published: August 12, 2009 Updated: December 03, 2012


Reviewer: lotusblossom Signed
Date: January 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: I'd come for you

Oh I love that Jake turned out to be a good enough guy to man up and apologize!!  And, uh, I have no words for the lemon except you owe me some new panties.



Author's Response:

Hahahaha!  What size knickers do you wear?  Or as Chubward would say Babettes?

Glad you enjoyed!

 
Reviewer: lotusblossom Signed
Date: March 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Nightingale

My first thought is GRRRR these two really need to get laid already!!  Totally get it though and it will be more than worth it in the end, I'm sure.



Author's Response:

Chubward hardly needs that!  LOL!  He's had quite enough!  Although Bella's love would be good for him:) 

Alas, this had to happen....

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: lotusblossom Signed
Date: March 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: The Words I Couldn't Say

Awww, loved it!  Edward gets a hug for sure and I'm considering offering Charlie something extra special for how awesome he was in this chapter... Of course I'd rather give it to Edward but he's taken :(  Haha thank you for the update!





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