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Hello! I'm a 23 year old student, working on my teaching degree, I live in California and I love twilight. Need I say anymore? 
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Dutiful Son by Eclipsedofsoul Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 241]
Summary:

Jasper Whitlock and his two best friends, Edward Mason and Emmett McCarty, are attending college and living the life, as all students do. Things start to get complicated when they meet a trio of amazing girls, as these three boys are hiding one huge secret...

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 22795
[Report This] Published: March 24, 2009 Updated: May 26, 2010


Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl Signed
Date: June 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

SNAP! I hope they find him. I don't want them to get fired!!!

 
Summary:

 

Bella meets Edward when he picks up his nephew from her Pre-K class and the sparks fly.  As their feelings for each other grow, Edward has a prior commitment that he is convinced must be seen through. A commitment that is effectively keeping them apart. Are there some complications that even the strongest hearts can't overcome? Can they resist the one thing they can't have--Each other?

To get to the prize, they'll have to survive the temptation of one another, in this emotional waiting game.

Show and Don't Tell.

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Stephenie Meyer owns any Twilight characters and Twilight plot lines that may appear in this story.  The remainder is my original work.    No copying or reproduction of this work is permitted without my express written authorization.  Copyright 2009 by Brits23.
 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Kate, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 124914
[Report This] Published: March 25, 2009 Updated: December 16, 2009


Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl Signed
Date: April 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Lol, can't wait for more. Nice poem :P. Oh but why does Edward looked pained to be dancing with Bella? Hmm..

 
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl Signed
Date: August 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Can he just break up with her please? PLEASE? She's a horrible woman.



Author's Response:

Yes, she's horrible. And HELL yes, he's breaking up with her. Just hang in there dude, I won't let you down. :)

 
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl Signed
Date: August 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

*gasp!* cliff hanger.. mean... :P Edward better end it!

 
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl Signed
Date: August 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

YAY! XD

 
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl Signed
Date: August 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!

 
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl Signed
Date: November 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

*sigh* I don't want it to be over. XD



Author's Response:

Aw, I know. I don't either, but maybe my new fic, Laid Bare, will ease your pain? Hmmmmmm?  :D THanks!!

 
Summary:

"After a few moments, I peeked through my wet eyelashes. My parents, both bone-pale and lifeless, lay at his feet. A squeak of terror escaped my lips. The man's head snapped up. His strange crimson eyes focused on my face, a wicked-evil grin stretching across his perfect features."

"So this has been your plan all along? Killing everyone I care about, then leaving me no reason to live? Having me almost welcoming death?"

"Such a shame they had to die, isn't it?"

"Yes, such a shame."

"'Bella, angel, don't you see? I care about you . . . so much. I feel the need to protect you from anything and everything that could hurt you in any way,' he murmured, so softly no one but the two of us could hear."

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Vampire Edward & Human Bella.

Isabella Marie Swan is not your average teenager. When she was just the age of seven, she watched as her parents were killed in front of her young, innocent eyes. As far as the public knew, her parents committed suicide, but Bella is the only one who knows the truth. She had to watch as her parents were murdered by a monster - a vampire.

Ten years have gone by since the night that changed Bella's life in the most awful of ways. It seems as if Bella is finally getting over her parents' death, despite the nightmares that make her terrified to sleep. Having the help from her older brother Emmett and his girlfriend Rosalie, she is expected to make a full recovery. Just as it seems that everything is falling into place for the damaged family, everything changes when a new coven of vampires moves to Forks, Washington and into Bella and Emmett's old home-the home where she experience the most tragic night of her life.

When the past comes to finish what it had started, what must Bella do to prevent history from repeating itself?

DISCLAIMER: I OWN NOTHING.

Proud member of Project Team Beta!


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No Word count: 44127
[Report This] Published: March 29, 2009 Updated: April 29, 2010


Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl Signed
Date: June 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Nightly Visitor

The first one. XD

 
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl Signed
Date: February 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Fingerprint Bruises

Can't wait for the update, and the post of FTBF.

 
Détruit by Somah4 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 473]
Summary:

 

“It’s all real. They did this, but I’m still here. Always, Bella. Find me.”

Those cryptic words, whispered in a last breath, continue to haunt Bella Swan five years after the supposed death of her love, Edward Masen.

 

                      


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Leah, Mike, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 95630
[Report This] Published: April 01, 2009 Updated: November 08, 2010


Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl Signed
Date: November 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 Grey

OH!!!! O.O more please.

 
Summary:

Bella runs into her former high school crush after 5 years. Will she finally open up to him only to have him shut down after a tragic accident? - AU. AH. Canon pairings.

***TYCF is on a bit of a break, as you've noticed.  Please do not expect any updates for a while.  I apologize for this, but given the circumstances right now in my life, I am currently unable to continue the story.  Thank you for understanding.***

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 21566
[Report This] Published: April 02, 2009 Updated: June 23, 2009


Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl Signed
Date: April 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Show Me How You Do That Trick

haha, cute. :D



Author's Response:

Thankie! Glad you like it.

 
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl Signed
Date: May 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Hummingbird

:D Can't wait for more.

 
Summary:

Multi-millionaire Edward Cullen makes a proposal that Jacob Black can’t resist.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 10924
[Report This] Published: April 06, 2009 Updated: August 31, 2009


Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl Signed
Date: August 31, 2009 Title: It Started With Indecency

ahhh! Can't wait for more. Stupid Jake.

 
Undercover Blue by alphadork Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 162]
Summary:

Copward and Officer Bella go undercover to solve a case.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 35183
[Report This] Published: April 06, 2009 Updated: May 04, 2009


Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl Signed
Date: April 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

LOL! Totally can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

New chappy submitted this morning.  I'm glad you like it :)

 
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl Signed
Date: April 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

can't wait for more! :D



Author's Response:

Thanks.  I just submitted the next chappy into the queue.  Vjgm is awesome at validating me quickly so your wish should soon be granted.

 
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl Signed
Date: April 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

can't wait for more! :D



Author's Response:

More is on the way.  Thanks!

 
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl Signed
Date: April 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

More is on the way m'lady.

 
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl Signed
Date: April 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

NO! Fix it! Edward can't be dead!! *pouts and gives you chocolate and cookies* pleaseeee?????



Author's Response:

I heartily accept your humble offering of chocolate and cookies and offer you an update in the queue.

 
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl Signed
Date: April 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

ACK!!! Fix it please!



Author's Response:

ACK!!! Ok!

 
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl Signed
Date: May 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

YAY! :D



Author's Response:

YAY! for awesome reviewers like you :)

 
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl Signed
Date: May 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Epilogue

*sighs* It's over? :(



Author's Response:

*sighs* Yep.  Glad you liked it though :)

 
Guarding Edward by katmom Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1578]
Summary:

  Guarding Edward

 

A stalker is trying to get close to Edward Masen, a green-eyed 24 year old concert pianist.

 He hires Elite Guardians to keep him safe from the one who is hunting him.

 Bella Cullen is the owner/operator of the company.  She's also a 110 year old vampire.

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  In the MYSTIC AWARDS:

GUARDING EDWARD WON FIRST RUNNER UP IN THE

CUTE CATEGORY:

Story that makes you feel all warm and fuzzy!


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Other Character, Rosalie, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 48 Completed: Yes Word count: 200265
[Report This] Published: April 07, 2009 Updated: August 30, 2010


Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl Signed
Date: May 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12~~His Girl Friday~~

Icky creepy Laruen...



Author's Response:

But isn't she FUN?  Of course, I know how it works out...which makes it easier for me...

Next chapter should be up soon....

Kathie

 
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl Signed
Date: April 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue and Chapter 1... Blood Singer

I'm totally interested in seeing what will happen next!



Author's Response:

Glad you are liking it...

I think I know where there are going, then one of the characters takes a turn!  So they are keeping me guessing too...

But there will be a HEA....Happily Ever After...eventually!

Thanks for reading...

Kathie

 
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl Signed
Date: April 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Choices

OOOOOOO! Can't wait for more. By the way I do really enjoy the little things to changed that are Bella's things as a vampire. Such as the car and how it was a deer was a he not a she like in the movie (when edward is chasing in the beginning).



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading AND reviewing...

I liked Bella's car too...I drive a beat up old red mini van...LOL...so I'm living vicariously through HER car...in BLUE!

Kathie

 
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl Signed
Date: April 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8~~Too Close To Home~~

Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

You and me both fightinsurfgrl!

I'll be putting it in the line up today!

Thanks for reading...

Kathie

 




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