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Penname: sherylb [Contact]
Real name: sheryl
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Bella meets Edward while she is a pre-kindergartener, and Edward becomes her best friend.  When Bella’s life is in danger, Edward is forced to leave to prevent her death.  As Bella grows older, Edward is forgotten.

A new family moves to Forks at the start of Bella’s senior year and changes Bella’s life forever.  What the mind forgets, the heart will always remember.


Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 69283
[Report This] Published: March 12, 2010 Updated: December 20, 2011


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Divine Intervention

Well, I would love to see NIN and QotSA!! My last concert was Alice in Chains(for my birthday) in february.. Love this comment:"not one country music CD"...I TOTALLY HATE country music..LOL! Can't wait for the date!



Author's Response:

I would have loved to been at that concert!  I've been a long-time AIC fan as well, broke my heart when Layne Staley died...  I lean toward the alternative and indie genres myself, although I am a fan of nearly every type - my iPod collection ranges from classical music, Glen Miller, Frank Sinatra, Peggy Lee, to The Police, Journey, Styx all the way to Coldplay, Muse and Blue October (my favorites!), Linkin Park, MGT, NIN and Korn, throw in a little Nelly and Usher just for fun (my son's fault!)... I have somewhere around 8,000 songs on my iPod so far.

I actually got Edward's dislike of country music from Stephenie Meyer's answer to a question about the type of music Edward liked, either from her website or the Twilight Lexicon.

The "date" will be fun!  ;-)

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Two Steps Back

"I knew it would have been the wrong thing to do, but I really wanted to kiss her."........Come on, Eddie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KISS HER ALREADY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 
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Date: June 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Somewhere Only We Know

I loved it! So glad she remembered...And that he caught her when she fell!



Author's Response:

YAY!!!!  I'm so glad you loved it!  I was waiting impatiently to post Chapter 13 (I've had it written since just after I started the story!).  It was difficult not to shout out "Chapter 13" when people would ask if/when Bella would ever remember Edward from her childhood!

Edward will NEVERlet Bella fall...

 
Guardian by ChampagneAnyone Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 345]
Summary:

What if you met the love of your life as a child? Would he ever admit his love of you as a woman? Would you ever let him go?

Plot: Orphaned at 8, Bella Swan is placed in the care of her godmother, Esme Cullen. Heiress to Cullen Swan Enterprises, Bella grows up hero worshipping 17 year old joint heir, pseudo step brother and self appointed guardian Edward.  


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 43324
[Report This] Published: March 13, 2010 Updated: July 23, 2010


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Flight

"No Bella. Idon't want to talk about fucking Dartmouth. I WANT to do this. I've waited four long months to do this." His words trailed off in sensual whisper, stroking my erogenous zones and bringing my body to life.

"I should have done this."....YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 
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Date: June 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7:Evade

Crap! I freakin' HATE Tanya! I HATE it even more when she and Edward have had sex. I just can't stand the thought of him being intimate with anyone other than Bella.

 
Summary:

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Rendezvous in the boys' room under the bleachers at the football field was a regular routine. It's a way to pass the time, with good friends and a few smokes. What happens when things get complicated and feelings start to interfere?    


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 176896
[Report This] Published: March 28, 2010 Updated: February 08, 2011


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Date: April 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Games for the Injured

Ah, poor Bella! She thinks Edwars only wants to be "friends" So sad....

Ummmmm.....REALLY want those buttons popping for me



Author's Response:

*hears buttons coming undone*

 
For Better or Worse by Tess84 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 184]
Summary:

Sequel to "Hearts in Pain", so it might be a good idea to read that first. The happily ever after part of the fairytale. Because nothing bad could possibly  happen now, right?

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes Word count: 196995
[Report This] Published: March 28, 2010 Updated: December 19, 2010


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Date: September 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: 23 - Come-ons and Insecurities

I'm proud of Edward for sticking up to that bitch, Kate!

 
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Date: April 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: 5 - Camping

so sad....

" I didn’t deserve her comfort. And I promised myself that I would never put her through something like this again."...I hope this doesn't mean he'll say NO to more babies..........   

 

 
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Date: April 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: 4 - Anniversary

I wasn’t quite sure why I was so hesitant to tell our families. Sure, there was always a risk that something would go wrong at this stage,... really hoping this isn't a bad omen....... 

 
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Date: May 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: 6 - Guilt

These two need to talk to each other.....

 
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Date: May 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: 7 - Vicious Circle

I hope things start warming up between them-every marriage faces challenging times..

 
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Date: June 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: 12 - A Day at the Beach

AN: I just couldn't resist the Nessie thing!...LOL!

“You know . . .” I started, pulling myself out of the sink and wrapping my legs around his waist. “There is a very comfortable bed just in the next room.”...Good to know that they are both feeling a bit better. 

 
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Date: August 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: 17 - A Week in the Sun

Edward really did plan the perfect vacation! He is such a sweetheart!

 
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Date: August 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: 18 - Second Time's a Charm?

It's gotta be twins! Woo Hoo! Hope that snaps Edward out of his funk.

 
Summary:

Bella's back hurts, can her new roommate Edward, the chiropractor help her? Will they behave?

 Or are they naughty to the bone?

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 37531
[Report This] Published: March 30, 2010 Updated: September 02, 2011


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm loving this and can't wait to read more



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

"Need anything? How about a nice, relaxing massage, leading up to a good, hard fuck, my dear chiropractor roomie?" YES YES YES!!!

Love that they are thinking the same thing--if only they could each somehow make their feelings of attraction know....Hmmmmm



Author's Response:

loooooolz your review made me smile...thanks you!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Well, Bella and edward OBVIOUSLY want each other....They just have to ignore their cockblocking friends!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Ha ha, we'll see... Thanks for reviewing ^_^

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

"Forgive me lord for I have sinned."....Awww come, on, Edward! I just don't think he should feel this way...It isn't 1900, after all!



Author's Response:

Nah...he's just scared shitless!



Author's Response:

Nah...he's just scared shitless!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

"I wanted this; screw the shower, fuck the food at IHOP. My body wanted Edward Cullen for breakfast, lunch, dinner, and dessert"......Me too! .....raises hand....

"Don't get me wrong, I'd had sex before, but sex with Edward was like going to Disney Land for the first time; magical, breathtaking, and awe-inducing."...Ummmm...YUMMY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

"Bella," he breathed, "you feel so perfect. Everything about you is so…perfect. Say you want me too; tell me you want to be with me like I want to be with you."....LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!

 

 
Einstein's Dreams by as63926 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 136]
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Alice doesn’t come back to check on Bella after the cliff diving incident. She comes back to collect her for college. The trials and tribulations of Bella going through the motions of school, missing Edward, and finding herself in spite of everything...


Categories: New Moon, Eclipse, Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 28966
[Report This] Published: April 04, 2010 Updated: October 29, 2010


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: There's a light in your eyes, did you leave that light burning for me?

Jacob is an idiot! Saying sh*t about Edward when they were having sex?

“A physical relationship with me will not fix this, but we can try. I will give you what you want. I do have one condition, though.”...Well, this makes me happier



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Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstar
Date: September 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Dialing Six Numbers Just to Hang up the Phone

I'm really angry with Bella



Author's Response: Well, Bella is angry with stress..

 
Sins of the Father by bethaboo Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 596]
Summary:

Bella Swan breaks free from her mother's influence and is desperate
to prove her music blog speaks for her generation. Edward Cullen is an Irish
punk rocker with a dark past. When they collide, nothing will ever be the
same. AH, OOC.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jane, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: No Word count: 198044
[Report This] Published: April 05, 2010 Updated: April 14, 2011


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue - A Letter from a Disillusioned Fan

Just started reading and this is very intriguing!...Wow! this dude's music has gone downhill! Although I have never had a much loved band sink this low, I am currently rather disappointed at the most recent and, to me, crappy, albums of two long time faves- Green Day and The Offspring, so I get it. 

 
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Date: June 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: A Mother-Daughter Showdown

"And the idea of crawling back to Renee was only slightly less loathsome than being a bum on the street corner".....Renee sure is one shitty mother!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The King of the Fucking World

Damn! Edward is a supreme dick!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Rosalie Snaps

Whooooa! Can't imagine what Emmett has to do.

 




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