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Penname: sherylb [Contact]
Real name: sheryl
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Member Since: March 17, 2009
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Summary:

 

Drawing lines is, for a time, on hiatus. Please be patient with me. I'll let you know what's going on when I know.

 

Drawing Lines by Arizona Hale

 

The whole world is turned upside down when Bella is attacked in Port Angeles and she must be changed if Edward wants to keep her in his life. It is clear from the beginning that Bella is much more than she seems and the circumstances involving her attack and new found abilities prove to be a challenge that Edward and the rest of the family may be unable to prevail against.

When Bella turns to an unlikely source for help, will she be able to heal? Or will they become the keepers of the pieces of her broken heart?

An Edward and Bella story.


Canon-based AU, mostly canon pairings.

Story rating pertains to crude language, moderate sexuality, and graphic references to rape and violence.



Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Marcus, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 31596
[Report This] Published: October 29, 2009 Updated: June 14, 2010


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Negotiations

No one will ever hurt you again, dear one. I promise.”...so sweet

 
Summary:

When a completely innocent Bella has her life turned upside down, she finds herself hardened, angry, and refuses to take it anymore. She used to pine for Edward, but is now indifferent.  Edward, once a slightly cocky jock who set out to humiliate Bella, finds some truths to the loss of his parents, making him slightly rebellious, stand-offish, and completely detached.

 

Will they fall in together, and find a way to mend each other? Or will it all fall to pieces?

 

 

 

As such, the sun was up before the night was down, and I couldnt pin my eyes open and empty any longer, my lips searched for words, but they only found yours, I was broken, alone...

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 59253
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2009 Updated: June 23, 2010


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Blank Paper

I just started reading, but I'm liking it. That was a really shitty thing that Edward wrote in her yearbook!

 
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Date: December 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: Claustrophobic

Love it!..I would have chosen to watch "Pulp Fiction", though...favorite film...

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Russian Roulette

Charlie is a stupid, lazy ass wuss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and a really shitty father!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Dead Man

"I don't think they would mind.  Emmett and Alice already accept you as a sister.  I don't however, no sisterly vibes coming from me," ...LOL!

I'm happy that they are together...

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Nightingale

Awesome chapter. so glad Charlie ok'd for Bella to stay with the Cullens.

Can'y wait for the two weeks to pass

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstar
Date: June 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Fight, Flight, or Front...

I hope Lauren's crotch rots out! And I hope that Bella relaizes that text is all Lauren - no Edward

 
Summary:

Edward and Bella Playing Chess

 

Best friends, a freak snowstorm, and a blackout.  Throw in some board games and nice sheets, and who knows what will happen?

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 106661
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2009 Updated: October 31, 2011


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I am so glad Edward threw Renee out - she is such a crap mopther! I always thought of Renee as completely selfish.

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I wanna see some kissing...and more....hopefully soon.......

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So sad that Bella has so litle confidence....

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Charlie is an ass....those comments about her weight......really pisses me off. My dad did that crap to me when Iwas a teenager, and I always felt fat..yet when I look at photos and remember back, I was actually thin and wore a size 5......funny how someone can warp your perception...



Author's Response:

It is really interesting how someone else's opions, even if they are untrue, can shape how we see ourselves and how we relate to other people.  I am so sorry you had to go through that.  Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I'm glad Edward is hanging in there...

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Poor Bella. Charlie sure messed her up.....

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstar
Date: August 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Well, Bella is a complete fool(and a liar). I just don't understand why she didn't run off to Vegas with Edward! Seriously! I would think, after Esme near death experience, Bella would realize that life is short, with no guarantees- she should live, and love..now.  

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I hope they have a very short engagement since they're waiting...And Bella can't leave Edward now!!!!!!!!

 
Summary:

Banner by superstar ms_ambrosia

 

Is there nothing haughty, naughty Edward cannot do? *Le sigh* Savant, aesthete, gourmand, cavalier, critic. Ever patient, ever hard, ever handy, Pedanticward is about to get hands-on.

Join snooty, uncut and uncensored, Edward as he attempts to tutor his Bella-love during their first forays into the one subject he never studied: Carnal Knowledge 101.

Pedantic:
adjective
1. ostentatious in one's learning.
2. overly concerned with minute details or formalisms, esp. in teaching.


 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 21708
[Report This] Published: November 01, 2009 Updated: January 11, 2010


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: ASSthetic

OK, this is bugging me....Here he is, fantasizing about a threesome with he, Bella, and Tanya (which makes me vomit in my mouth- I think of Tanya as a total HO!),, and then he is proposing to Bella?...These two things just don't seem to go together.......



Author's Response:

Oh dear.  I hope you are not reading this for a romantic fic, because if so, you're in the wrong place.  This is a parody.  It's for a laugh.  Edward is a vampire/man/boy and has sex on the brain as such.  In fact, probably more so because he thinks non-stop and never sleeps.  The thought of a threesome titillates him.  This is NOT in-character Edward and Bella and was never meant to be.

Rie~ 

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Touch

YES!!! MORE PLEASE!!



Author's Response:

Such an eager...beaver?

Ha ha ha!

Cheers,

Rie~

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Voracious

Ok, , I'm all for the sexing, but a threesome for Bella and Edward isn't right....

 

 



Author's Response:

Ha ha ha, sorry!

Hey, I never said they were gonna' do it :).

Cheers,

Rie~

 
Summary:

Ten years ago, Edward left Bella to go to Italy. Faced with two options, she chose to stay behind and start a new life with Jacob. Now, she's been given the chance to go back and make the other choice and see what could have been. Once she comes back, she'll get to choose one past, to make one present. Which road will she choose? J/B and E/B


Categories: Breaking Dawn, New Moon, Post-Breaking Dawn, Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 17952
[Report This] Published: November 02, 2009 Updated: December 01, 2009


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Abandonment and Setting Out

Well, I'm not a Jacob fan at all, so anything that puts her with Edward is good with me. Little instances of deja-vu might be a nice touch.. Maybe she can develop some more self esateem, too? I always thought that if she had more self esteem, she would not have let Edward leave. 



Author's Response:

I plan on developing a backbone in her a bit as time goes on. :3 Thank you for your feedback, and you'll be very pleased to know that, at the end of this story, readers will be allowed to vote on which past she chooses to keep. So if you stick around, you just may get to make that the way it ends. :3

 
Summary:

The Path We Chose

 

A look at the relationship & love of Edward and Bella, two self-aware teenagers who are forced to grow up quickly. Together, they battle problems and find their inner strength. No love triangles. Fluffy beginning, drama ensues, no dark themes. AH AU OOC All canon pairings  E/B, J/A, Em/R, C/E    


Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 32007
[Report This] Published: November 05, 2009 Updated: May 15, 2010


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: November Hail

I do like that your Bella, though not experienced, still has self confidence, and is not as insecure as Bella is in the novels. 



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm glad you like my characterization of Bella. 

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: What We Carry

Woo Hoo! I'm ready for you?  can't wait for the next chapter



Author's Response:

Coming very soon. Thanks! 

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: The Sound of Love

“You’re my love,” he said.

“And you’re mine.”......So sweet. I loved it. love how gentle he was... 

 
The Runaway by rosalielinnea Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 179]
Summary:

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Edward left after the van crash but he hasn't forgotten Bella.  Living in Phoenix she has an unusual job and a complicated family life. When he finally sees her again she is a different person than he imagined she would be. Leaving her set forward events that can't be undone. Can he redeem himself in her eyes? Is she ready for love? All canon couples.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: No Word count: 84835
[Report This] Published: November 06, 2009 Updated: April 11, 2012


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: In The Mood

So glad that Bella was persistent!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Cadence

I hope he stays, but hope they don't have sex...yet

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Waltz # 2

I just started reading. so sad for Bella. how can Edward think she is better off without him now?

 




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