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Penname: sherylb [Contact]
Real name: sheryl
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Member Since: March 17, 2009
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Theodicy by Kristonio Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 85]
Summary:

"God's Justice." 

After suffering the transformation alone in the Arizona desert, sixteen year old Bella must find the strength to go on with her life.  Wrestling with existential questions, she makes her way across the country to her only hope of refuge, Forks, Washington State.  Will she find the answers she's looking for?  When you're an indestructable mythical being, is there any chance for normalcy?


Categories: Pre-Twilight, Twilight, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 36905
[Report This] Published: October 24, 2009 Updated: November 16, 2009


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Homecoming

OMG!!!!! Edward,.....YES!!!!!!

 
Requiem by pixiekiller Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

A dire accident changed the lives of Edward and Alice Cullen and Bella and James Swan. Four years later, after her twin brother's death, a broken Bella Swan is back to Forks, and to Edward's life. Can Edward forgive his first love and best friend for walking away when he needed her the most? What is the mystery surrounding the accident? Can Bella let go of the guilt and the secrets that have been consuming her? Or it will all fall apart once again? AUH, very OOC.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 11455
[Report This] Published: October 27, 2009 Updated: January 05, 2010


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Sleepwalker

I want to read more, please...



Author's Response:

Chapter 2 is on queue, I hope it will be available here soon. However, it's already available on FF.net. ;) Link is on my profile.

 
Getting Warmer by Eiluned Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 244]
Summary:

After their honeymoon on Isle Esme, Bella gets to spend more time being human with Edward as they travel cross-country to New Hampshire and beyond, and learn about art, love and temperature differentials. Newlyweds being newlyweds, so lemons.

 [GW.png]  art by manyafandom for the Perv Pack Smut Shack

  

 


Categories: Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 159917
[Report This] Published: October 27, 2009 Updated: May 22, 2011


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: GIG

I like that they have Bella on birth control, so she doesn't get pregnant on her honeymoon...That would suck

 



Author's Response:

Sorry, she doesn't get pregant on the honeymoon, but she's not on the pill. I've tried to make that clearer. Thanks!

 
Summary:

It's been fifty-three years since Edward left Bella in the woods. Since then, the Cullens have added two new members to their coven, and have moved back to Forks. Feeling compromised, the Volturi travel to Forks to dispose of the Cullens. As war is about to commence, the newest Volturi member suffers an onslaught of memories of her human past. The Cullens' saving grace may also mean the end of Edward. Or will Bella Volturi have a change of undead heart. 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Heidi, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Marcus, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 33135
[Report This] Published: October 28, 2009 Updated: December 13, 2010


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Three's Company

I'm interested, but if Edward mated with someone else, I can't stay with the story - that would be too painful to read......



Author's Response:

have faith! I'm not here to cause any pain to anyone, save Edward, and mating him off with someone else wouldn't be very painful now would it?

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstar
Date: December 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Diff'rnt Strokes

Just started reading. Crap! Edward didn't say that wasn't his mate!!!  I HATE him, if she is. I know that Bella has been with Demetri, but she had no memory- Edward does and it is ALL HIS FAULT!!! If he moved on with someone else(how could he? vamps mate for life and Bella was his true mate?) I will never forgive him.

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Once and Again

Thank god he doesn't have a mate- I can keep reading now

 
Summary:

 

Drawing lines is, for a time, on hiatus. Please be patient with me. I'll let you know what's going on when I know.

 

Drawing Lines by Arizona Hale

 

The whole world is turned upside down when Bella is attacked in Port Angeles and she must be changed if Edward wants to keep her in his life. It is clear from the beginning that Bella is much more than she seems and the circumstances involving her attack and new found abilities prove to be a challenge that Edward and the rest of the family may be unable to prevail against.

When Bella turns to an unlikely source for help, will she be able to heal? Or will they become the keepers of the pieces of her broken heart?

An Edward and Bella story.


Canon-based AU, mostly canon pairings.

Story rating pertains to crude language, moderate sexuality, and graphic references to rape and violence.



Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Marcus, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 31596
[Report This] Published: October 28, 2009 Updated: June 13, 2010


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: One Way Or Another

Wow!! Can't wait for more...The thought of Edward and Bella burning/dying together was horrible...

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Wellspring

Favorite journal line: "How can I justify these sentiments? Perhaps they cannot be justified, but for the longing in my heart to see Edward mated, no longer alone, no longer half of a man in search of the one he is missing: his other half."

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Negotiations

No one will ever hurt you again, dear one. I promise.”...so sweet

 
Summary:

When a completely innocent Bella has her life turned upside down, she finds herself hardened, angry, and refuses to take it anymore. She used to pine for Edward, but is now indifferent.  Edward, once a slightly cocky jock who set out to humiliate Bella, finds some truths to the loss of his parents, making him slightly rebellious, stand-offish, and completely detached.

 

Will they fall in together, and find a way to mend each other? Or will it all fall to pieces?

 

 

 

As such, the sun was up before the night was down, and I couldnt pin my eyes open and empty any longer, my lips searched for words, but they only found yours, I was broken, alone...

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 59253
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2009 Updated: June 23, 2010


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Blank Paper

I just started reading, but I'm liking it. That was a really shitty thing that Edward wrote in her yearbook!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: Claustrophobic

Love it!..I would have chosen to watch "Pulp Fiction", though...favorite film...

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Russian Roulette

Charlie is a stupid, lazy ass wuss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and a really shitty father!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Dead Man

"I don't think they would mind.  Emmett and Alice already accept you as a sister.  I don't however, no sisterly vibes coming from me," ...LOL!

I'm happy that they are together...

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Nightingale

Awesome chapter. so glad Charlie ok'd for Bella to stay with the Cullens.

Can'y wait for the two weeks to pass

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstar
Date: June 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Fight, Flight, or Front...

I hope Lauren's crotch rots out! And I hope that Bella relaizes that text is all Lauren - no Edward

 
Summary:

Edward and Bella Playing Chess

 

Best friends, a freak snowstorm, and a blackout.  Throw in some board games and nice sheets, and who knows what will happen?

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 106661
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2009 Updated: October 31, 2011


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I am so glad Edward threw Renee out - she is such a crap mopther! I always thought of Renee as completely selfish.

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I wanna see some kissing...and more....hopefully soon.......

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So sad that Bella has so litle confidence....

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Charlie is an ass....those comments about her weight......really pisses me off. My dad did that crap to me when Iwas a teenager, and I always felt fat..yet when I look at photos and remember back, I was actually thin and wore a size 5......funny how someone can warp your perception...



Author's Response:

It is really interesting how someone else's opions, even if they are untrue, can shape how we see ourselves and how we relate to other people.  I am so sorry you had to go through that.  Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I'm glad Edward is hanging in there...

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Poor Bella. Charlie sure messed her up.....

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstar
Date: August 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Well, Bella is a complete fool(and a liar). I just don't understand why she didn't run off to Vegas with Edward! Seriously! I would think, after Esme near death experience, Bella would realize that life is short, with no guarantees- she should live, and love..now.  

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I hope they have a very short engagement since they're waiting...And Bella can't leave Edward now!!!!!!!!

 
Summary:

Banner by superstar ms_ambrosia

 

Is there nothing haughty, naughty Edward cannot do? *Le sigh* Savant, aesthete, gourmand, cavalier, critic. Ever patient, ever hard, ever handy, Pedanticward is about to get hands-on.

Join snooty, uncut and uncensored, Edward as he attempts to tutor his Bella-love during their first forays into the one subject he never studied: Carnal Knowledge 101.

Pedantic:
adjective
1. ostentatious in one's learning.
2. overly concerned with minute details or formalisms, esp. in teaching.


 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 21708
[Report This] Published: October 31, 2009 Updated: January 11, 2010


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: ASSthetic

OK, this is bugging me....Here he is, fantasizing about a threesome with he, Bella, and Tanya (which makes me vomit in my mouth- I think of Tanya as a total HO!),, and then he is proposing to Bella?...These two things just don't seem to go together.......



Author's Response:

Oh dear.  I hope you are not reading this for a romantic fic, because if so, you're in the wrong place.  This is a parody.  It's for a laugh.  Edward is a vampire/man/boy and has sex on the brain as such.  In fact, probably more so because he thinks non-stop and never sleeps.  The thought of a threesome titillates him.  This is NOT in-character Edward and Bella and was never meant to be.

Rie~ 

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Touch

YES!!! MORE PLEASE!!



Author's Response:

Such an eager...beaver?

Ha ha ha!

Cheers,

Rie~

 




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