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Penname: sherylb [Contact]
Real name: sheryl
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Summary:

 

During a chance return to Forks, Bella Swan runs into her high school crush only to discover that things were never as they appeared.  What has Edward been waiting for all this time?


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 203247
[Report This] Published: November 06, 2009 Updated: September 20, 2010


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"He kissed my neck and sat back, smiling at me.  "That's very true.  But isn't it possible that a vampire might want your body too?"....Oh YES baby!!

This is so freakin' hot!!!!! I love it and hope that you will continue. I just love sexy Edward!!!!!



Author's Response:

Me too...what's the point of writing your own Edward if you can't make him drop-dead sexy?!?  ;-)  Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I just love this so much!.. I love that Edward is now able to really embrace the love he feesl for Bella...and of course, is having AWESOME HOT SEX with her!!!l

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I have to say that I'm pretty angry wtih Alice for ruining the surprise!. That was selfish of her......



Author's Response:

I can't say that I disagree with you.  She needs to work on that whole brain/mouth filter thing for sure.  sigh  Oh well, at least she means well...

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

"Hearing you what, love? Moan in pleasure when I lick and suck your delectable body? Whimper when I bring you right to the edge and then back off?" His voice dropped to a husky whisper. "Scream my name when you come around me?".......I LOVE IT!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Yes!  They're getting married!!

 
Summary:

Isabella Swan has begun to notice changes in her body - strange, unlikely occurances that are accompanied by horrific bouts of pain.

 

And when Edward Cullen - miles away and living a stagnant life after leaving the only one he has ever loved - gets a frantic call from Alice, he must rush back to Forks. His next descision will change the course of their lives.

 

Will Bella be able to forgive Edward for breaking her heart? And when a not-so-new threat meets her eye to eye, Bella is finally strong enough to fight for herself - but will she be able to win?

 

AU-New Moon. Canon pairings. Rated for gore, intense scenes, and eventually some hot vampire lovin'.


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 24477
[Report This] Published: November 07, 2009 Updated: July 01, 2010


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Killer

I can understand that Bella needs more time befoer becoming intimate, but I hope it's not TOO long! 



Author's Response:

Haha - I promise it won't be too long. Even I can't hold off for that. :D

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Days

Poor Bella..she must have been afraid that Edward ran away again...especially after ordering him away during her change..



Author's Response:

Yes. That would be rather scary, no?

Thank you for reading!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Sudden Change

Edward better get his ass back to her ASAP!



Author's Response:

Ahaha! Completely agree!

Thank you for reading! ;D

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Splitting

Well, that was pretty gross!!

I'm glad Edward is changing her ,though!!!



Author's Response:

;D Thanks!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Learning

I love this line: "I was able to taste gravity and life on just the tip of my tongue."


Love the kiss!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I love that line too. ;D

Thank you for reading!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Core

CRAP!!! VICTORIA IS ALWAYS BAD NEWS!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Silly Soul Stuff

"And she had cracked the hard shell that had encased my soul, slowly whittling away at my pessimistic self."......I love it and am so HAPPY they made love!

 
Summary:

She's haunted daily, but learns to deal with her gift. He hides behind his opinions,seeking closure. When their worlds collide can they help each other. For the winning bidder, HooiserNina of the Support Stacie Auction. Not for the light hearted. M rating.  All human with supernatual elements. Banner by emerald_rosalie.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 44372
[Report This] Published: November 07, 2009 Updated: September 12, 2010


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Not Alone

Oh MY!!!!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Dancing in the Light

Yes, you did indeed make me cry.

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Writing

So sad for poor Edward...Glad that he had a little bit of happy at the end..

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Now That She's Gone

"Tomorrow all hell will break loose, and I could lose Edward forever...With this curse, I was destined to be alone."...Well, I HOPE this isn't true!

And, as much as I want these two together, I am glad it wasn't now...



Author's Response:

It wasn't the right time, and this story isn't only about them.

 

Erica

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Almost Time

I love the story..and hope you do write a sequel

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Interrupted

That is so sad......

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Trance

This is so sad...I feel so badly for poor Edward

 

 
Tutor by Mentalistecbm Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 180]
Summary:

The Cullens move to a new school, in a new state, with new students. Edward is… pretty much a nerd. Dweeb, Geek, Turd, Loser. Whatever you wanna call him. Bella isn’t. She already goes to Forks High. Well-known, actually. Not your average Nerdy Edward/Slutty Bella fanfic. Originality is all over, babe. So read.

 Thank you to ebonyy and PosionousGarden! (: original two inside. this one is just to perfect.

 

 

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Leah, Mike, Rosalie, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 46201
[Report This] Published: November 12, 2009 Updated: May 05, 2010


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awesome.. I love nerdy Edward...



Author's Response:

I like him too.  Thank you for reading.

>

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

"I didn’t want to talk, for fear that my voice would betray me, and I’d say something like, “Yes, my name is Bella, and I would very much like to fuck your brother senseless.”....It would have been funny if she HAD said that...it would certainly be a boost to Edward's ego - he needs it!

 "You'll see more wisps of hair... jut not on his chest... *winkwink*"...OK - bring it on - I'm ready!!!



Author's Response:

Hmmm... that gives me an ideaaa....

 

Thank you. Look forward to Bella having no filter.

>

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

"Bella spread out eagle- style on my bed, moaning my name as I pound into her, over and over again. Bella sprawled out across my bed as I fucked every single inch of her body. Bella sitting up on my couch as I went down on her, milking her to orgasm and leaving her at the edge ev-"......YOU GO EDWARD....BELLA WANTS THAT TOO!!!!



Author's Response:

He doesn't know that, though...

... Yet.

Thanks for reading?

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

"I mean, I‘m not like climbing into his windows while he sleeps or anything extreme like that."....LOL!

I love her dreams! Hmmmm...Edward commando? Yummy!



Author's Response:

I know. Edward commando is very yum. Makes me like lollipops even more.

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I love that he reads the fanfic porn! LOL!



Author's Response:

everyone has some form of porn. his- and ours- just hapoens to be literary and online.  

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Robert Pattinson blow- up doll. ....OMG!!! perfect present...LOL!



Author's Response: I'm actually trying to figure out if they really make them... Thanks for reading.

 




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