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Penname: sherylb [Contact]
Real name: sheryl
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Member Since: March 17, 2009
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Summary:

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Is there nothing haughty, naughty Edward cannot do? *Le sigh* Savant, aesthete, gourmand, cavalier, critic. Ever patient, ever hard, ever handy, Pedanticward is about to get hands-on.

Join snooty, uncut and uncensored, Edward as he attempts to tutor his Bella-love during their first forays into the one subject he never studied: Carnal Knowledge 101.

Pedantic:
adjective
1. ostentatious in one's learning.
2. overly concerned with minute details or formalisms, esp. in teaching.


 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 21708
[Report This] Published: November 01, 2009 Updated: January 11, 2010


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Touch

YES!!! MORE PLEASE!!



Author's Response:

Such an eager...beaver?

Ha ha ha!

Cheers,

Rie~

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Voracious

Ok, , I'm all for the sexing, but a threesome for Bella and Edward isn't right....

 

 



Author's Response:

Ha ha ha, sorry!

Hey, I never said they were gonna' do it :).

Cheers,

Rie~

 
Summary:

Ten years ago, Edward left Bella to go to Italy. Faced with two options, she chose to stay behind and start a new life with Jacob. Now, she's been given the chance to go back and make the other choice and see what could have been. Once she comes back, she'll get to choose one past, to make one present. Which road will she choose? J/B and E/B


Categories: Breaking Dawn, New Moon, Post-Breaking Dawn, Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 17952
[Report This] Published: November 02, 2009 Updated: December 01, 2009


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Abandonment and Setting Out

Well, I'm not a Jacob fan at all, so anything that puts her with Edward is good with me. Little instances of deja-vu might be a nice touch.. Maybe she can develop some more self esateem, too? I always thought that if she had more self esteem, she would not have let Edward leave. 



Author's Response:

I plan on developing a backbone in her a bit as time goes on. :3 Thank you for your feedback, and you'll be very pleased to know that, at the end of this story, readers will be allowed to vote on which past she chooses to keep. So if you stick around, you just may get to make that the way it ends. :3

 
Summary:

The Path We Chose

 

A look at the relationship & love of Edward and Bella, two self-aware teenagers who are forced to grow up quickly. Together, they battle problems and find their inner strength. No love triangles. Fluffy beginning, drama ensues, no dark themes. AH AU OOC All canon pairings  E/B, J/A, Em/R, C/E    


Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 32007
[Report This] Published: November 05, 2009 Updated: May 15, 2010


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: November Hail

I do like that your Bella, though not experienced, still has self confidence, and is not as insecure as Bella is in the novels. 



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm glad you like my characterization of Bella. 

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: What We Carry

Woo Hoo! I'm ready for you?  can't wait for the next chapter



Author's Response:

Coming very soon. Thanks! 

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: The Sound of Love

“You’re my love,” he said.

“And you’re mine.”......So sweet. I loved it. love how gentle he was... 

 
The Runaway by rosalielinnea Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 179]
Summary:

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Edward left after the van crash but he hasn't forgotten Bella.  Living in Phoenix she has an unusual job and a complicated family life. When he finally sees her again she is a different person than he imagined she would be. Leaving her set forward events that can't be undone. Can he redeem himself in her eyes? Is she ready for love? All canon couples.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: No Word count: 84835
[Report This] Published: November 06, 2009 Updated: April 11, 2012


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: In The Mood

So glad that Bella was persistent!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Cadence

I hope he stays, but hope they don't have sex...yet

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Waltz # 2

I just started reading. so sad for Bella. how can Edward think she is better off without him now?

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Monster

So sad that they each think of themselves as monsters

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Pretty Ballerina

Well, I'm partial to: I love LA 

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Pearls of Water

Poor Bella...I'm glad she told Edward.

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Little Man

That was so sweet!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: The New Dawn

"In that moment I realized that I loved him too. I wasn’t going to let Bella go and I wasn’t going to let Ryland go. I had found my family"....This is so sweet, but your note at the end scares me!

My son just loved Thomas the tank when he was little- really brings back memories - he still has all the toys boxed up - He also had Thomas sheets, lunch bos, a cool denim jacket, mug, Thomas toy box, and a halloween costume! 

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Gardenia

I guess that I don't understand why she ran-she has the whole Cullen family to protect her and Ryland...

 
Summary:

 

During a chance return to Forks, Bella Swan runs into her high school crush only to discover that things were never as they appeared.  What has Edward been waiting for all this time?


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 203247
[Report This] Published: November 06, 2009 Updated: September 20, 2010


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I love this oh so manly, Edward..not afraid to have sex!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

 "Get started on your paper, you little vixen, or I'll reward you right here and now on the couch."....I really don't know how she turned that down...seriously!

So hot, so sexy..love it!



Author's Response:

I hear you...I very seriously considered squeezing in a quickie on the couch, but I do promise I'll make it up to you guys in future chapters!!!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"He kissed my neck and sat back, smiling at me.  "That's very true.  But isn't it possible that a vampire might want your body too?"....Oh YES baby!!

This is so freakin' hot!!!!! I love it and hope that you will continue. I just love sexy Edward!!!!!



Author's Response:

Me too...what's the point of writing your own Edward if you can't make him drop-dead sexy?!?  ;-)  Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I just love this so much!.. I love that Edward is now able to really embrace the love he feesl for Bella...and of course, is having AWESOME HOT SEX with her!!!l

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I have to say that I'm pretty angry wtih Alice for ruining the surprise!. That was selfish of her......



Author's Response:

I can't say that I disagree with you.  She needs to work on that whole brain/mouth filter thing for sure.  sigh  Oh well, at least she means well...

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

"Hearing you what, love? Moan in pleasure when I lick and suck your delectable body? Whimper when I bring you right to the edge and then back off?" His voice dropped to a husky whisper. "Scream my name when you come around me?".......I LOVE IT!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Yes!  They're getting married!!

 
Summary:

Isabella Swan has begun to notice changes in her body - strange, unlikely occurances that are accompanied by horrific bouts of pain.

 

And when Edward Cullen - miles away and living a stagnant life after leaving the only one he has ever loved - gets a frantic call from Alice, he must rush back to Forks. His next descision will change the course of their lives.

 

Will Bella be able to forgive Edward for breaking her heart? And when a not-so-new threat meets her eye to eye, Bella is finally strong enough to fight for herself - but will she be able to win?

 

AU-New Moon. Canon pairings. Rated for gore, intense scenes, and eventually some hot vampire lovin'.


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 24477
[Report This] Published: November 07, 2009 Updated: July 01, 2010


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Killer

I can understand that Bella needs more time befoer becoming intimate, but I hope it's not TOO long! 



Author's Response:

Haha - I promise it won't be too long. Even I can't hold off for that. :D

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Days

Poor Bella..she must have been afraid that Edward ran away again...especially after ordering him away during her change..



Author's Response:

Yes. That would be rather scary, no?

Thank you for reading!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Sudden Change

Edward better get his ass back to her ASAP!



Author's Response:

Ahaha! Completely agree!

Thank you for reading! ;D

 




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