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Penname: sherylb [ Contact]
Real name: sheryl
Status: Member
Member Since: March 17, 2009
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Edward’s rebellious period didn’t last a few years; it lasted seventy. A solitary hunter on the fringe of society, he stumbles across a young woman praying. Can he seduce her away from everything she's ever known? And will he be willing to fight for Bella instead of fighting against her?
AU, a bit OOC, canon couples. Rated for lemons, violence and adult subject matter.
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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes
Word count: 129165
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2009 Updated: March 27, 2010
Reviewer: sherylb Signed 
Date: March 27, 2010
Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 Amen
LOVED it SO much!!!!!!! Author's Response: ;-) Thanks!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: October 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Choices
I am happy that Edward is accepting that he is in love with Bella. I also like that he asked Carlilse if he would turn Bella if asked. At least he is thinking about it.
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: October 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Chariot Ride
I love it! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: October 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 I Will Not Be Denied
"She will be mine!" I bellowed. "I will not be denied!"...I really do LOVE it when he isn't angsty......
My son drives a red camaro with white racing stripes!
LOVE the story!!! I'm sorry about Bella's inability to have children now, but I'm glad it eliminates any possible half-human, half-vamp pregnancy.
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: October 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Lazarus Rising
"The flowers, the courtly attitude, and the conscious, polite diffidence were making me feel like I was being wooed, in the old-fashioned sense of the word"...Oh, I LOVE this!!! Love that he is doing it the old-fashioned way...so sweet.
I Love his slip up - hasn't been in church for 40 years?
Man, I wonder what is up with the Monsignor?
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: November 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Burning
“Harder to stop from doing what I want to, to continue this.”.....He smiled, the most enchanting crooked smile and I was glad for the door behind my back, holding me up. “Good night, Bella.”.....I love this!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: November 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Pouring Gas on the Fire
"Alright, Edward, enough with the flowery language. Just admit it, you want to fuck the bejeezus out of her.".....at least he is admitting the truth to himself!
"Puppies," I said, shaking my head in mock sympathy, "I hope they're housebroken."......LOL!!!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: December 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Fusion
“One lifetime is all we have.”....she is SOOOO wrong!
This chapter is just amazingly beautiful, sexy, romantic.. passionate!..Just Yum!!!!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: December 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Seeds Of The Whirlwind
Jake is a dick!!! I really hate him!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: January 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Dances With Wolves
I LOVE this: "I fought the temptation to bend over to take it in my lips and to wake her to make love again. And again. And again."
I hope you update soon!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: January 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Delivering The Wind
I'm glad that Edward has Bella away with him, but the "mutual friends in Volterra" scare me!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: January 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Before The Fire
"That’s what I told myself anyway, not yet willing to admit that being with Edward, regardless of what he was, was worth whatever price I would have to pay."
I know that Edward will give Bella the time she needs,but part of me wants him to to go to her now, profess his true, deep love for her and make love to her.
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: January 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 A Bite To Eat
"I had to take the leap to trust her as well...
From out of fear to trust. From trust to love. I sent a fervent prayer into the ether and began to answer her questions."........I LOVE THIS!!!!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: February 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 1743
How can Bella think of a life without Edward? Can she even imagine how empty. how lonely, it would be?
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: February 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 The Nature of Being
“Believe this, then. There will never be another like you for me.”....“Nor you for me,” she said without looking up."....I want Bella to stop worrying about the church and her religion - has she even noticed how flawed many church leaders are? She could be happy...FOREVER...with Edward.
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: March 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 The Pride of Lions
Man, I hope that they can save Bella in time to turn her..
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: March 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 This Is My Blood
I AM SO HAPPY SHE"LL BE WITH EDWARD FOREVER!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: March 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 Gethsemane
Will Edward really think it is a miracle?
Summary: 
Bella did what he asked, she moved on. She married another man but that man betrayed her. What happens when he comes back into her life years later? What happens when Edward realizes he made a mistake? Can he make her believe he always loved her? Can he atone for his mistakes? And what is Bella and their families hiding from Edward?
AU/AH ExB, canon couples, not a canon story
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie, Seth
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: No
Word count: 276724
[Report This] Published: August 19, 2009 Updated: June 13, 2010
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: February 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 (vjgm)
Awwww. That was so sweet!
Summary: One and a half years. That’s how long it's been since Edward Cullen had banished himself and his family from Isabella Swan’s life, from Forks, from the one place they truly felt at home.
A lot can change in that small amount of time, and it becomes painfully apparent to the Cullen’s when they come face to face with the girl they left behind, only she’s not the same girl anymore.
In an effort to protect herself from the pain of her past, she has become more confident, self assured and fierce. She’s a fighter now and their fate, along with many others, now rests in her hands.
Will she save them or punish them for past grievances?
AU set during New Moon
Let me set everyones mind at ease about the coupling in this story. It IS completely CANON. That means that no matter what I may make it look like between Bella and Marcus by the end of this fic Edward and Bella will be together again...well sort of.
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: The Eyes Series
Chapters: 16 Completed: No
Word count: 83819
[Report This] Published: August 20, 2009 Updated: January 14, 2012
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: October 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Strange
So, was Bella changed into a vampire and then lost her memory? She is in Volterra? Author's Response: Hey,
Lol sorry can't tell, if I did... well it wouldn't be nice for you. Lol jokes. Thanks for the review but you will have to wait for your answers to be revealed... hopefully the next chapter will answer those for you. Hehe.
Bubbalicious_91 xoxo
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: September 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
More Please!!!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: November 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Changed
“The other thing you should know about Isabella is that she means what she says. Provoke her again and she will dispose of you in seconds and trust me when I say that you wouldn’t be the first of our kind to suffer an untimely death by her hands.”..,.....OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I mean, Damn!!!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: November 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Changed
Is it wrong of me to want Bella to kill Tanya? Author's Response: No that's not wrong at all in fact I have had many fantasies about Isabella ripping Tanya's head off but it doesn't fit in with the story. It's okay though I can give you the next best thing, Tanya smack down. It will happen in later chapters but I promise it will come. lol.
Thanks for the review.
bubbalicious_91 xo
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: November 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Reintroductions
This is just so incredibly sad,,, for Edward, Bella................You've got me teary eyed...
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: December 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Truths - Part 2
Bella is a complete fool...she knows the truth now...You can't deny true love without suffering...in her case...forever...and you can't manufacture true love, either...
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