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Penname: sherylb [ Contact]
Real name: sheryl
Status: Member
Member Since: March 17, 2009
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Summary:
Edward and Jasper are best friends and the sexiest guys at Forks High. They get what and who they want whenever they want it. When clumsy Bella arrives at Forks High and brings something new to the table, Edward and Jasper find they must work together to get what they desire. Some OOC, especially for some characters, but not so much for others. Rated NC-17 for very mature themes and can we say lemons?! later. Takes place during the same time as Twilight.
Collaboration between VoluptuousVamp and Puppymama0909.
Thanks to readergoof for the amazing banner.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Word count: 26571
[Report This] Published: June 15, 2009 Updated: September 08, 2009
Reviewer: sherylb Signed 
Date: July 15, 2009
Title: Sometime Around Midnight
I'm liking it---teenagers actually behaving like teenagers!!!!! Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to read! Thats kinda what we were going for!
Pups
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: July 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2
"Fucking me running. What was this girl doing to me? I wanted to make her feel the same way as I did." I made her faint! There is a God and he loves me! Yes, I really want Edward and Bella together, not Bella and Jasper,, PLEASE???
" I grabbed Bella around her waist and pressed myself up against her back."I'll see you after school sweetheart. Don't keep waiting." Melting!
"Edward wrapped his arms around me and pulled me against him. "Are you sure?" His voice was low in my ear. "Because I could always carry you the rest of the way, I truly don't mind." Oh Baby, Oh Baby, wouldn't it be great to be carried by Edward?
I think the plan is for a threesome, which is probably OK with Jasper, since it is just a game to him, but I don't think Edward would like a threesome- he wants Bella to him self...After all , he is feeling protective of her..a telltale sign of deeper feelings.......Love it, Ladies!
Author's Response: Yes, I'm pretty sure we'd all loved to be carried by Edward, but I think that's number 358 on the list of things I'd like Edward to do me. I'm glad that you're picking up on little things. I love it!
~V
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: July 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: She Stands Under the Barlights
I like Edward's POV best.............I'm really hoping Edward and Bella end up a couple. I like Jasper, but like Edward more. I'm hoping for a very hot kiss on the balcony, at the very least..... Author's Response: And your balcony wishes have been granted! Glad you are enjoying it!
Puole dances and panty flashes,
Pups
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: August 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: You Know That She's Watching
I just want it to be Bella and Edward.....just like 99.9% of your readers, I guess.... Author's Response: Yeah, thats kind of the general opinion...I am a bit of a rebel and a J/B fan......Thanks for reading Sheryl, I am really glad you are enjoying it!
Pole dances and panty flashes,
Pups
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: September 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: You Can Smell Her Perfume
I've gotta say, I would really rather have Bella with just Edward alone...not Edward and Jasper...........
Summary: The Cullens leave Forks after Edward encounters Bella, but he never forgets her. Meanwhile, Bella has vivid dreams about a man whose face she cannot see. Does destiny have something in store for them? AU, OOC. Co-written by Fantasy Mother and Lilliput.
Perchance to Dream is an Indie TwiFic Awards Final Round Finalist for
Best Collaboration
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes
Word count: 94664
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2009 Updated: August 03, 2009
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: July 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
This is just awesome: " I held my breath as he leaned towards me, painfully slowly until his cloudy face hovered over mine and I heard him faintly whisper, “My love,” as his hand touched my cheek and he lowered his lips to mine. As smooth as glass they glided and my body caught fire as a strangled moan of desire left my throat. And then with another whispered, “Beloved,” he faded, and faded, and all that was left was the scent of sun and honey and man and myself, trembling in my bed." Love it!!!!!!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: July 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Whoaa, Mike touching her made her sick!!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: July 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Damn, I'm feeling frustrated for the poor girl!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: July 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Awesome: "There, right in the middle of the bed, was a button from a man’s shirt. And right next to it, were three small drops of blood."
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: July 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Come on, Edward......grow a set and be with her......Turn her if you need to....
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: July 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
I'm liking it, but it is getting a bit frustrating/irritating that they don't move things into reality - Bella is really lonely :( Author's Response: Don't get too frustrated. Don't forget, Bella doesn't really know the real Edward - she just saw him in the class and the cafeteria that one day. She doesn't equate him with the man in her dreams at all. But things will progress because...in spite of everything else, they are still Bella and Edward.
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: July 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
"What would it be like to truly have her in my arms, in my bed, pressing against those tender lips..." Well, I CAN'T WAIT for them to be together, in the flesh, for real!!!!!!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: July 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
"It wasn’t my overactive imagination. And when he reached down to take me in his arms to carry me to the ambulance, he called me his beloved.
And, later that night, in my dream, that was exactly what my dream lover had called me."
OMG!!!!!!! I just love this!!!!!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: July 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
"It wasn’t my overactive imagination. And when he reached down to take me in his arms to carry me to the ambulance, he called me his beloved.
And, later that night, in my dream, that was exactly what my dream lover had called me."
OMG!!!!!!! I just love this!!!!! Author's Response: Thank you!!!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: July 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Just Awesome!!!!! He asked her out on a date!!!!!!!!!!!!THANK YOU!!! Author's Response: You needed to reach this chapter before we could respond. And, you're welcome! LOL
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: July 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
More Please!! More reality..less dream, maybe??? Author's Response: Comin' up.....
And thank you!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: July 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Thank You!! Love the chapter, love their date and LOVE the KISS!!!!!!! Author's Response: Thank you! It was so much fun to write :-)
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: July 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
I LOVE THIS: "Speaking in hushed voices with an occasional kiss — because we couldn’t stop kissing. "
Ooooo I can't wait for her to figure out that Edward is her dream lover.....and yeah, the real-life sex to foillow!!!! Author's Response: Thank you and...shhhh. Soon.
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: July 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
That was AWESOME and SO worth the wait...............Just lovely..........Are they going to figure out that they are one another's dream lover????? Author's Response: Thank you so much! Hope you'll stay with us as the story continues to unfold..... :-)
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: July 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
I just HATE when Edward goes into his self-loathing..I would love it if he embraced what he is....maybe thought of changing Bella, if she wishes. Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! Hope you'll bear with us through this storyline, as we're taking some canon concepts and turning them around a bit . . . We hope you'll like what's to come! :-)
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: August 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
I just love this!!! can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, and hopfully the next chapter will be later today!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: August 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
"“Will you marry me? Will you be my mate?” SO SWEET, SO BEAUTIFUL!!! Author's Response: Thank you and yes, we will ;-)
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: August 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
Love this SO MUCH!!!!!!!!! This chapter is so lovely and poignant.....Just perfect.......Am sorry for the ending of this story, but am eager to read the epilogue!
Author's Response: Thank you, and we'll see if we can get the epilogue up tonight.
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: August 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 32: Epilogue
Such a lovely ending to the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Thank You! Author's Response: Thank you for your words, and you're very welcome, from both of us.
Summary: Written for the Quote Challenge Contest.
After a long day at work, Bella comes home to relax, but will she be alone for long? One-shot, rated NC-17 for the lemon.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 4952
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2009 Updated: June 24, 2009
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: June 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Risky Business
AWESOME!!!
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