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Penname: sherylb [ Contact]
Real name: sheryl
Status: Member
Member Since: March 17, 2009
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Summary: This is my take on bella and edward's first time in the cottage, after her transformation.
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 1608
[Report This] Published: May 12, 2009 Updated: May 13, 2009
Reviewer: sherylb Signed 
Date: May 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
VERY NICE....VERY SEXY!!!! "I'm not tired.":) Author's Response: thank you!
Summary: 
Bella is a 25 year old Editor's assistant in New York City. She has been a casual observer in life, never really actively participating in it.
Edward is a 25 year old tattoo artist who enters Bella's life and knocks it off its hinges.
Will Edward be able to open Bella up to life and all it has to offer, or will she shut him out and return to watching the world happen around her?
(Thanks to Shug for the AWESOME banner!!)
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No
Word count: 52545
[Report This] Published: May 12, 2009 Updated: May 01, 2010
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: January 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - When the Other Shoe Drops
I want Tanya tarred and feathered..........Poor Bella........That has go to hurt. When you're far away, these things are magnified
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: May 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-A Chance Encounter.
VERY HOT AND SEXY!!!!!!!YOU'VE GOT ME HOOKED!!!!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: May 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Reality Check
I TOTALLY LOVE THIS!!!!AND LOVE THE UNINHIBITED( AN SLIGHTLY BAD BOY??) EDWARD!!!!!!!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: May 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - A Subtle Beginning
DAMN IT!!!!!!!!!TOTALLY CURIOUS ABOUT THOSE TATTOOS!!!!THIS STORY IS HOT!!!!MORE PLEASE!!!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: June 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Tattoo Show
This is both sexy and cute at the same time..............It's funny, I have been thinking about getting a tattoo lately, and I NEVER thought I would!!!!!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: June 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Truth or Dare?
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!SO SEXY!!!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: June 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Moving Forward
THIS CHAPTER IS SO SWEET..........AND I LOVE THAT HE WANTED HER TO COME OVER WHILE HE'S WORKING...SO THEY CAN ACTUALLY TALK.......WHEN THERE IS SUCH A STRONG PHYSICAL ATTRACTION, SOMETIMES IT IS HARD TO JUST TALK!!!!I'VE BEEN THERE!!!!!!THIS IS A VERY NICE PROGRESSION IN THEIR RELATIONSHIP...HE EVEN WANTS TO MEET ALICE..........I REALLY LOVE THE LEMONY CHAPTERS, TOO......BUT THIS IS GREAT.........
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: June 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7-Working hard or hardly working?
VERY SWEET AND SEXY!!!!AND, OF COURSE, EMMETT IS GREAT!
I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!I HAVE BEEN THINKING ABOUT A TATTOO LATELY, AND NOW I WANT ONE EVEN MORE!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: June 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8- Flying by the Seat of Our Pants
Love the story, love this chapter!!!!Thank you for making Edward brave enough to tell Bella he is falling in love with her..Please have her tell him she loves him, too!!!
Love that he took her out for a day of fun and adventure, and the hallway kiss was great!!!
It will be fun when Alice meets Edward's brothers.
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: July 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - What the hell just happened?
OH MY GOD!!!! I'M GUESSING HE HAS BELLA'S NAME TATOOED ON HIS CHEST!!!!!I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!!!THANKS!!!!!!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: July 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10- Tattoos, Oranges and Breakfast
I TOTALLY love this, an Edward is so SEXY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: July 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Footsie and Napkins
Not Emmett!!!!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: July 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - A Fallen Brother
So Rose is the one telling Emmett to fight?
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: August 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13-Meeting the Family
Loved it. It was so nice that Edward's parents were so welcoming to Bella..
And hot sex twice???? Awesome....Especially in the parking garage! Author's Response: Thanks for the review! The chapters had been serious for a bit, characters needed a "release" of sorts! I'm glad you liked it!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: September 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - A Good Day
"What I didn’t tell him was that I hoped he would be in every chapter for the rest of my life."
Good Day, indeed!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: September 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Moving Forward
I hope Edward doesn't really start pulling away.. I wonder if he is upset that she is leaving or if he is a bit threatened at what her success may mean for their relationship?
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: February 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - When Your World Implodes
YES!!!!!!! LOVE IT!! I think Tanya needs to be fired or laid off. She should never have answered Edward's phone...and she TOTALLY knew what she was doing.
Summary: When Bella (fifteen, anorexic, and slightly paranoid) moves from Arizona to England to escape her stepmother and live with her late mother's workaholic best friend, Esme, she doesn’t expect much. After an eventful arrival and being driven to her new home by Esme's son, Edward, she realizes that she should have known better. With only two children, twins to top it all off, actually related to Esme, strange noises in the middle of the night, and a world teetering on the edge of World War Three, Bella finds out that she's just about as far from home as one can get.
Rated for underage drinking only. Loosely based off the novel 'How I Live Now'. Very OOC.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No
Word count: 23570
[Report This] Published: May 12, 2009 Updated: August 30, 2009
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: August 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six: I Want To Hold Your Hand
Edward is just an angel...And I love that the last kiss wasn't so sweet....... Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
Sweet can be a little sickening at times, if overused, in my opinion.
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: September 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven: Taxman
So love them sneaking off together........
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: September 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven: Taxman
I love that Bella and Edward are together, but her not eating is really bad.
Summary: 
When bad girl Bella gets sent to live with her dad in Forks, she meets her equal counterpart. Turned off by his promiscuous ways, Bella tries her hardest not to get wrapped up in Edward Cullen. AU, AH, OOC. Rated NC-17 for lemons & naughty language.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No
Word count: 23511
[Report This] Published: May 13, 2009 Updated: August 25, 2009
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: May 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Popsicle
COOL!!!!!AWESOME!!!MORE PLEASE!!!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: May 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Window
I AM TOTALLY LOVE IT!!!!!!!IT IS GOING TO BE SO FUN WHEN THESE TWO HOS FINALLY HAVE SEX AND A RELATIONSHIP!!!!!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: July 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Birthday
I hate Edward right now! Bastard!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: August 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Apologies
Well, I'm sure glad Edward didn't have sex with Lauren and Jessica..I do wish Bella would relent, and that Edward would ask her out on an actual date..start things slow-something that neither of them has probably ever done before....
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