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Penname: sherylb [ Contact]
Real name: sheryl
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Member Since: March 17, 2009
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Summary:
Summary: On September 11, 2001, Edward was traveling on United Airlines Flight 175 from Boston to New York and Bella worked in the South Tower of the World Trade Center. Will they be able to survive our nation’s greatest tragedy?
WARNING! THIS STORY IS NOT FOR EVERYONE. IT CONTAINS SIMILIAR EVENTS AND GRAPHIC SCENES FROM 9/11.
The characters are not true canon.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No
Word count: 45407
[Report This] Published: April 18, 2009 Updated: August 08, 2010
Reviewer: sherylb Signed 
Date: June 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2
KEEP WRITING! LET'S SEE WHAT YOU'VE GOT!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: July 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4
So sorry about your friend! Feel better. Author's Response: Thank you! It's nice to know that my readers are very understanding.
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: August 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 Part I
This is scary..both Bella and Edward are in peril...as well as everyone else..
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: August 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 6 Part II
Bella saying goodbye to Charlie is so very sad....And Esme fearing she's lost Edward....heartbreaking..... Author's Response: I can only imagine what it was like to have those conversations.
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: August 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 7
Does the invisible force have something to do with Bella? Author's Response: No it doesn't. You will find out more about it later.
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: March 27, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 13
OMG!!!!!! Please update ASAP! Author's Response: I'm working on the next chapters. :)
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: September 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 8
A strange word popped into my mind as I gazed down at her....Mine.
LOVE IT!
And Yeah, totally surprised that Bell is blind..
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: October 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 10
Wow! That was great!. The description of the destruction was realistic. I SO LOVE that Edward realizes the he is feeling love for her..love at first sight does happen......I wonder if he will have to change her to save her? Author's Response: thanks! Hum...good question!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: January 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 11
LOVE THIS: "
Why didn’t she recoil from my hard, icy touch? Surely her natural human instinct was to run from me.
Why does this feel so right?
Her lovely sigh appeared to almost be a sign of encouragement.
Dare I intertwine my fingers with hers?
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: August 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 14
Sorry about your hospitalization, but I'm guessing it helped? Author's Response: Yes, it did! The pharmacy changed my mood stabilizer and it made me suicidal. It was crazy! So the hospital made som adjustments while I was there and I'm doing alot better now. Thanks for asking.
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: August 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 15
"Her eyes had a look of horror and disgust."...I am really hoping that he is misinterpreting what he is seeing.
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: August 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 16
"What do you say to a vampire who saved you? Thanks for not sucking the life out of me when you had the chance? By the way…I’m in love with you?"....LOL! but true!
I'm glad he told her he loves her, but he has got to take some of her blood!
Summary: School is in session and there are lots of lessons to be learned. Bella Swan, the newest student at Forks High School, needs to amend her shy and introverted ways and her guidance counselor has just the thing: tutoring! Besides, newbie Bella is probably the only student naïve enough to tackle Edward Cullen, a juvenile delinquent in training. Edward’s main pastimes include avoiding school and hanging out with his lovelorn, best friend Jasper Hale. In Edward’s opinion, Jasper needs a tutoring session of own in order to get over his ex- Alice. However Alice is too busy trying to console her friend Rosalie –who is only interested in one lesson: how to win the affections of Edward Cullen.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Esme, Jasper, Jessica, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes
Word count: 162183
[Report This] Published: April 18, 2009 Updated: December 28, 2010
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: May 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Not Going to Happen
I LOVE THIS!!!!!!! I HOPE EDWARD FINALLY HAS THE COURAGE TO ASK BELLA FOR AT DATE!!!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: April 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Assigned Seating
I think I might like bad boy Edward!!!!!!!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: April 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The Need for Education
PLEASE don't let bitch Rosalie get ANYWHERE with Edward. Bella is too sensitive and would be irreparably hurt!!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: April 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Aloof
More Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: April 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Functionally Illiterate
Poor Edward!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!No wonder he's so MEAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: April 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Playing the Field
I'm liking this...................You can understand why he acts out...............But, I would like to see him soften just a liitle bit around Bella!!!!!!!!!
More Please!!!!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: April 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Victory
I gotta say - I love the badly misspelled note - so maybe Bella gets a clue to what's going on. Edward really is a tough nut to crack. I just can't wait to see him show some more vulnerability.... And Bella's compassion when she realizes he is illiterate...........And, finally, can't wait to see the two of them hook up......hot sex.............Bad Boy with Sweet Girl............Mmmm.....
Oh, and please keep the bitch Rosalie away from Edward!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: May 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Girlfriends & Boyfriends
SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!DON"T WE ALL LOVE A STORY WHERE THE BAD, POPULAR BOY LOSES HIS HEART TO THE SMART, SWEET, GOOD GIRL????
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: May 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Girlfriends & Boyfriends
I'm hoping you'll have Edward plant a kiss on Bella soon....In private, of course!!!!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: May 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Kiss & Tell
Cute and Funny. Crap , he's gonna break her heart.............It would be nice if he fell for her, though!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: May 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Questions & Answers
SO CUTE........OK.......WE AT LEAST NEED SOME KISSING!!!!!!!!!!!! Author's Response: I agree! I wonder what I could do about that...
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: May 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Questions & Answers
One request---PLEASE don't let Bella fall for Rosalie's ruse!!!!!!!!Bella may be naive, but she isn't stupid, and I don't think her character would fall for it----besides, Rosalie needs to be shot down 100%!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: May 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Learning to Inhale
Charlie is beign such a DICK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!He says he wants her to mingle, and the he gives Bella (and Edward) the third degree..........ASS........and ruins their chance for a real kiss in a very private setting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!CRAP!!!!!!!!
Thanks for updating so fast!!! Can't wait for the next chapter....LOVE this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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