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Fractured Hearts by cfmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2410]
Summary:

We've all turned the pages on the four blank months in New Moon. Edward left Bella in the woods and told her didn't want her anymore; his arrogance expected that she would just move on with her life. What he never expected was that she wouldn't be able to move on any more than he would. An angry Bella is something he couldn't fathom. What he didn't take into account is that Bella believes that true love is worth fighting for, and she's going to fight to keep Edward and her family. The Cullen abandonment hurt her deeply, but she's turned that pain into rage. What will happen when Bella decides to let them know she's not willing to let them walk away and leave her behind? How will they handle one mere human girl that's extremely pissed off, and willing to do whatever takes to bring them back? The saying "hell hath no fury like a woman scorned" has never rang more true. Bella's angry and on the warpath. Not even a clan of vampires will be able to stop her.

Fractured Hearts

"My heart may have fractured when he left me, but I adamantly refuse to let it shatter. I'm stronger than that, and I'm ready to get nasty. This is going to be a side your family has never seen out of me. I hope you're prepared, because when I'm done taking your stupid, arrogant brother down a few notches, I'm coming after you. Yes, you heard me correctly. You may be small, fast, and graceful, but I'm filled with enough rage at this point to go vampire on your pixie, ballerina ass!"  ~Bella - Chapter 2: Voicemails

Special Thanks to achelle131 for the amazing banner!


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Laurent, Quil, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: The Dirty, Horny Girls Chronicles
Chapters: 30 Completed: No Word count: 225614
[Report This] Published: April 16, 2009 Updated: October 25, 2010


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Reality Check

I TOTALLY LOVE THAT HE FELL OUT OF THE TREE!!!!!:) THIS CHAPTER IS JUST AMAZINGLY GOOD!!!!!!!!THE WAY YOU ARE IN EDWARD"S HEAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!AND I LOVE THAT HE IS GOING TO WOO AND COURT HER!!!!!!!AM TOTALLY READY FOR LOVE AND ROMANCE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hahaha - I'm thrilled you loved it so much. Actually, Edward's in my head - but he's pretty loud about how he feels - so thanks in feeling like I got his voice correct. The wooing and courting will be fantastic to watch (in my opinion) as I'm such a sap for good romance. Oh, he'll still make really stupid mistakes - but the wooing will be fantabulous.

I couldn't help but have him fall out of the tree. It was such a teenage boy thing to do. =) I'm glad you liked it.

Thanks for continuing to read and comment - I adore each one.

Much love,

~Lisa

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Moves and Countermoves

I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!!!!AND THE KISS WAS SWEET!!AND THEY ARE MAKING PROGRESS



Author's Response:

Hahaha - I'm so glad you loved it. Slow but sure progress is definitely happening. I'm still convinced that Edward will continue to make mistakes along the way that will be blast to watch. =)

As always, thanks for continuing to read and leave your thoughts on each chapter. I adore them.

Much love,

~Lisa

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Gunpowder and Lead

Damn!!!!!!!!I'm hoping Bella's date with Jacob went very badly!!!!!!Love what Bella did to Emmett and Rosalie!!!! And the "Bite This" underwear??? Priceless!!!!!!!!!!!! 



Author's Response:

Well, as Bella would say - it's not a date. ;) And I'm with you - Bella had me laughing my butt off during her little taunting of Rosalie and Emmett. I wonder if she really is wearing underwear like that or made it up just to tease Emmett?

Thanks for continuing to read and leave your thoughts. I look forward to them.

Much love,

~Lisa

 

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Too Much Testosterone

I really love your atory and this is a great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks Sheryl - I appreciate the fact that you never fail to drop me a note about what you think at the end of each chapter.

Much love,

~Lisa

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Blood Doesn't Make a Mom

Esme is just the sweetest!



Author's Response:

I know, isn't she? I want her to adopt me. hahaha Thanks for always reading and leaving a thought or two. You know I always look forward to them.

Much love,

~Lisa

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Invisibly Shaken

Mike certainly stood up to Edward...

I like this comment by Edward:"“In the spirit of honesty, I have to admit that I certainly don’t fall out of trees brilliantly. And in addition to that, I’m not brilliant at loving someone - as you accurately pointed out. I’ll admit I disagreed with you on that point when you first said it, but I listened to what you said. "



Author's Response:

Yeah, poor Mike, He gets such a bad rap most of the time. Really he's a decent guy, it's just he'll never be THAT guy for Bella. Gotta be hard for him. He's used to being the big man on campus, but I like that he's the one to point out some hard truths Bella needed to hear. I'm glad Edward is starting to be able to find the humor in his past mistakes and look to moving forward. Finally, maybe these kids can get it right. ;) Thanks for your continued dedication in not just reading my story, but also taking the time to leave me a review. I appreciate it.

~Lisa

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Turning Stone into Silly Putty

Edward certainly took his time.......finally an epiphany!!! but that is SO Edward!!!! Love it, and can't wait for him to actually see those panties!!!! 



Author's Response:

Yes, in a race of the tortoise and the hare - Edward is definitely the tortoise. He may take forever, but he does get there eventually. You have no idea how relieved I am that he finally seems to be getting it. Thanks for not only continuing to read, but also to leave a review. I deeply appreciate it.

~Lisa

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Guys and Dolls

“When I know how much it bothers you?” Emmett smirked. “Absolutely it’s necessary."  EMMETT JUST CRACKS ME UP.....

I LOVE how "frustrated" Edward is over Bella's underwear collection.



Author's Response:

Yes, Emmett is quite the cad isn't he? However, I can't help but love him for his efforts to really loosen Edward up. It's much needed. Besides, Rose's reactions are equally amusing to me. I love to see a man put in check by his woman. ;) I also agree that Edward's "frustration" over Bella's extensive underwear collection is an entertaining thing. As always, thank you so much for the read and review - I never fail to appreciate it.

~Lisa

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Payback

So glad Jasper talked some sense into Edward.. And I LOVE Bella's panties!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Bella's panties crack me up too. I'm actually encountering pairs in her collection that I don't actually own myself now. I'm going to have to hunt them down. haha I appreciate your continued dedication to this story and to always leaving me a review. :)

~Lisa

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Strawberries and Cream

"As long as you keep your eyes on me, I won’t stop until I know what every inch of your body tastes like.”   Love this line.

The love scene was just completely erotic, but also very beautiful, and tender.......Wonderful! and so worth the wait...can't wait for them to go further.

And, I am so happy that Edward is finally coming around to the idea of turning her.

AWESOME CHAPTER!



Author's Response:

Haha - yes, that was one of my favorite lines as well. There's something completely erotic about watching your partner touch you like that. Whew *fans self* Just thinking about it can make my naughty parts tingle. ;) I'm thrilled you felt the love scene and intimacy was well handled. It was important to me to not make it too over the top. Thank you so much for your continued reading and reviewing of my story. I appreciate it. It's like a fantastic calorie free treat that I can enjoy without worrying about it going straight to my hips. :)

~Lisa

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Teasing, Tasting, and a Trip

 “What I’ll be hungry for will be at camp. I won’t be venturing anywhere.” ...LOL!

Eat Organic? I want those panties!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it. Check out this site and you can buy the Eat Organic panties for yourself. http://eatorganicpanties.com/buy.php

Thanks for reading and reviewing - you know I always appreciate it. :)

~Lisa

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Mistletoe and Message Panty Payback

Totally love Alice's cookie decorating...and the fact that Rose and Alice have their own message panties now!



Author's Response:

Hahaha - yes, Alice decorating the cookies was just begging for naughty fun. I couldn't help it. ;) I also thought it was time that the girls had their own pairs of underwear for the family to discuss. I mean Bella shouldn't have to be the only one that suffers that teasing. :) As always, thank you so much for your continued reading and reviews. I look forward to them and always appreciate them. I hope that you had a fabulous holiday season.

~Lisa

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: A Trek, A Tree, and Titty Hard Ons

Thanks for the chapter.. i'm glad they are getting closer and talking more.

Hope thinga are better on the home front for you..



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review as always. I think now that we've had the funeral things are slowly getting better. Thank you for your well wishes. I deeply appreciate it.

~Lisa

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Blindsided

LOVE his boxers!

I HATE Jacob!....He is so damn selfish..He wouldn't even stop to think of Bella's feelings for Edward.....He just wants him out of the way......Maybe Jacob will be the one to die instead..



Author's Response:

Hey Sheryl: I'm glad you enjoyed Edward's boxers. ;) I'll admit I'm quite surprised by the outpouring of anger towards Jacob from this chapter. The next chapter will be super intense with so much testosterone in one place that I don't know if even Carlisle can keep the fists and fur from flying. Not to mention I'm not sure the readers want the fight to be avoided. I totally appreciate you sticking by me on this story, and consistently reviewing. I love hearing what my readers think and feel as it moves along. =)

~Lisa

 
Summary:

When Charlie Swan’s daughter is threatened he will do anything and everything to protect her ... Even entrust her safety to a guild of assassins ...

 Assassins ... thieves ... murderers ... protectors? The Cullen family are many things with many faces but the introduction of this one innocent is about to change their world for good.

tgb 

 AH/AU.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 23499
[Report This] Published: April 17, 2009 Updated: May 10, 2011


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

EDWARD IS SO SWEET!!!!!!!!

 
Summary: Feature

AU version of the "New Moon" reunion scene. Bella is not quite as quick to accept Edward's explanation for his actions in leaving her.

 
Banner credit goes to addicttwilight2, who is the most awesome person on the planet!!


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 45075
[Report This] Published: April 18, 2009 Updated: June 30, 2009


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Alive

I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Belonging

VERY SWEET AND ROMANTIC!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

 
Timeline by martha8450 Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 294]
Summary:

Summary: On September 11, 2001, Edward was traveling on United Airlines Flight 175 from Boston to New York and Bella worked in the South Tower of the World Trade Center. Will they be able to survive our nation’s greatest tragedy?

WARNING!  THIS STORY IS NOT FOR EVERYONE.  IT CONTAINS SIMILIAR EVENTS AND GRAPHIC SCENES FROM 9/11.    

The characters are not true canon.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 45407
[Report This] Published: April 18, 2009 Updated: August 08, 2010


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

KEEP WRITING! LET'S SEE WHAT YOU'VE GOT!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

So sorry about your friend! Feel better.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  It's nice to know that my readers are very understanding.

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 Part I

This is scary..both Bella and Edward are in peril...as well as everyone else..

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 6 Part II

Bella saying goodbye to Charlie is so very sad....And Esme fearing she's lost Edward....heartbreaking.....



Author's Response:

I can only imagine what it was like to have those conversations. 

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 7

Does the invisible force have something to do with Bella?



Author's Response:

No it doesn't.  You will find out more about it later.

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 13

OMG!!!!!! Please update ASAP!



Author's Response:

I'm working on the next chapters.  :)

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 8

A strange word popped into my mind as I gazed down at her....Mine.

LOVE IT!

And Yeah, totally surprised that Bell is blind..

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 10

Wow! That was great!. The description of the destruction was realistic. I SO LOVE that Edward realizes the he is feeling love for her..love at first sight does happen......I wonder if he will have to change her to save her?



Author's Response:

thanks!  Hum...good question!

 




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