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Penname: sherylb [Contact]
Real name: sheryl
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Member Since: March 17, 2009
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Reviews by sherylb
 
Summary:

When Charlie Swan’s daughter is threatened he will do anything and everything to protect her ... Even entrust her safety to a guild of assassins ...

 Assassins ... thieves ... murderers ... protectors? The Cullen family are many things with many faces but the introduction of this one innocent is about to change their world for good.

tgb 

 AH/AU.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 23499
[Report This] Published: April 17, 2009 Updated: May 10, 2011


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

EDWARD IS SO SWEET!!!!!!!!

 
Summary: Feature

AU version of the "New Moon" reunion scene. Bella is not quite as quick to accept Edward's explanation for his actions in leaving her.

 
Banner credit goes to addicttwilight2, who is the most awesome person on the planet!!


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 45075
[Report This] Published: April 18, 2009 Updated: June 30, 2009


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Alive

I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Belonging

VERY SWEET AND ROMANTIC!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

 
Timeline by martha8450 Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 294]
Summary:

Summary: On September 11, 2001, Edward was traveling on United Airlines Flight 175 from Boston to New York and Bella worked in the South Tower of the World Trade Center. Will they be able to survive our nation’s greatest tragedy?

WARNING!  THIS STORY IS NOT FOR EVERYONE.  IT CONTAINS SIMILIAR EVENTS AND GRAPHIC SCENES FROM 9/11.    

The characters are not true canon.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 45121
[Report This] Published: April 19, 2009 Updated: August 08, 2010


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

KEEP WRITING! LET'S SEE WHAT YOU'VE GOT!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

So sorry about your friend! Feel better.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  It's nice to know that my readers are very understanding.

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 Part I

This is scary..both Bella and Edward are in peril...as well as everyone else..

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 6 Part II

Bella saying goodbye to Charlie is so very sad....And Esme fearing she's lost Edward....heartbreaking.....



Author's Response:

I can only imagine what it was like to have those conversations. 

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 7

Does the invisible force have something to do with Bella?



Author's Response:

No it doesn't.  You will find out more about it later.

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 13

OMG!!!!!! Please update ASAP!



Author's Response:

I'm working on the next chapters.  :)

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 8

A strange word popped into my mind as I gazed down at her....Mine.

LOVE IT!

And Yeah, totally surprised that Bell is blind..

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 10

Wow! That was great!. The description of the destruction was realistic. I SO LOVE that Edward realizes the he is feeling love for her..love at first sight does happen......I wonder if he will have to change her to save her?



Author's Response:

thanks!  Hum...good question!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 11

LOVE THIS: "

Why didn’t she recoil from my hard, icy touch?  Surely her natural human instinct was to run from me.  

 

Why does this feel so right?

 

Her lovely sigh appeared to almost be a sign of encouragement. 

 

Dare I intertwine my fingers with hers?

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 14

Sorry about your hospitalization, but I'm guessing it helped?



Author's Response:

Yes, it did!  The pharmacy changed my mood stabilizer and it made me suicidal.  It was crazy!  So the hospital made som adjustments while I was there and I'm doing alot better now. Thanks for asking.

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 15

"Her eyes had a look of horror and disgust."...I am really hoping that he is misinterpreting what he is seeing. 

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 16

"What do you say to a vampire who saved you?  Thanks for not sucking the life out of me when you had the chance?  By the way…I’m in love with you?"....LOL! but true!

I'm glad he told her he loves her, but he has got to take some of her blood! 

 
The Tutor by itzmegan73 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1657]
Summary:

School is in session and there are lots of lessons to be learned. Bella Swan, the newest student at Forks High School, needs to amend her shy and introverted ways and her guidance counselor has just the thing: tutoring! Besides, newbie Bella is probably the only student naïve enough to tackle Edward Cullen, a juvenile delinquent in training. Edward’s main pastimes include avoiding school and hanging out with his lovelorn, best friend Jasper Hale. In Edward’s opinion, Jasper needs a tutoring session of own in order to get over his ex- Alice. However Alice is too busy trying to console her friend Rosalie –who is only interested in one lesson: how to win the affections of Edward Cullen.  


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Esme, Jasper, Jessica, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 162183
[Report This] Published: April 19, 2009 Updated: December 28, 2010


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Not Going to Happen

 I LOVE THIS!!!!!!! I HOPE EDWARD FINALLY HAS THE COURAGE TO ASK BELLA FOR AT DATE!!!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Assigned Seating

I think I might like bad boy Edward!!!!!!!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The Need for Education

PLEASE don't let bitch Rosalie get ANYWHERE with Edward. Bella is too sensitive and would be irreparably hurt!!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Aloof

More Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Functionally Illiterate

Poor Edward!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!No wonder he's so MEAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Playing the Field

I'm liking this...................You can understand why he acts out...............But, I would like to see him soften just a liitle bit around Bella!!!!!!!!!

More Please!!!!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Victory

I gotta say - I love the badly misspelled note - so maybe Bella gets a clue to what's going on. Edward really is a tough nut to crack. I just can't wait to see him show some more vulnerability.... And Bella's compassion when she realizes he is illiterate...........And, finally, can't wait to see the two of them hook up......hot sex.............Bad Boy with Sweet Girl............Mmmm.....

Oh, and please keep the bitch Rosalie away from Edward!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Girlfriends & Boyfriends

SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!DON"T WE ALL LOVE A STORY WHERE THE BAD, POPULAR BOY LOSES HIS HEART TO THE SMART, SWEET, GOOD GIRL???? 

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Girlfriends & Boyfriends

I'm hoping you'll have Edward plant a kiss on Bella soon....In private, of course!!!!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Kiss & Tell

Cute and Funny. Crap , he's gonna break her heart.............It would be nice if he fell for her, though!

 




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