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Penname: sherylb [ Contact]
Real name: sheryl
Status: Member
Member Since: March 17, 2009
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Summary: 
Edward leaves Bella, much like the beginning of 'New Moon', however, this time, they are all human and there is quite the twist. Why did Edward leave Bella? And what secret is Bella keeping when he leaves?
Can they make a nightmare turn into a dream?
THANKS TO EMERALD_ROSALIE FOR THE ABOVE BANNER AND ATHENALOVE FOR THE BELOW.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 61 Completed: Yes
Word count: 155064
[Report This] Published: April 14, 2009 Updated: August 05, 2010
Reviewer: sherylb Signed 
Date: August 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus
That is one hell of an incentive, dear!!!!!!!!! Shirtless Edward... Just add an earring and you've got the genie of my dreams!!!!
Love getting Bella's POV, and am so glad she is waking up!!!! Author's Response: I am so glad it made sense and that you enjoyed it!
Yup, our girl is coming back....
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: August 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34 - Deals
I'm glad they're making progress and that Edward and Jasper are OK..
" The incentive this week is... having full access to the lockeroom shower where poor, distraught Edward tries to rectify his not-so-fresh scent!" --that is some truly awesome, tempting incentive!!!
Author's Response: Great Incentive, no?
I'm so glad you enjoyed!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: August 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing
She knows her daughter has Edward's hair...............Awwwww.......Thanks for this...
I wonder when she WILL be ready to see Edward?
Song "Shake Your Body" by Michael Jackson; danced by Edward!!!
Author's Response: The hair :::sigh:: it will be a little bit before she works her way up to Edward, but it is coming. Fun Cullen/song combo! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: September 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36 - Throw the Truth
Movie: "Last of the Mohicans" with Edward(its always Edward for me) in the Daniel Day Lewis role
Love the chapter and am happy that Bella isn't angry with Angela Author's Response: Good movie choice! So glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: September 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 38 - Band Aid
SO SWEET!!!!!!
HOW ABOUT A DATE WITH EDWARD FOR YOUR BIRTHDAY??? Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed the chapter. Charlie is a good guy who’s going to do the right thing, even if he doesn’t particularly like it.
OOOOH! A date with Edward. Hmm... do I get to keep him all night? LOL!
Thank you for the birthday wishes and your review!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: September 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 39 - Happy Town
You're right...Jasper is the best.....He was in the psych ward, but cuts to the heart of it all!
Ok...La Perla corset, thong, stockings for Edward..who, of course, only has eyes for me! Isn't it obvious what I want? A weekend long, hot sex session!! Author's Response: Jasper really does know how to get his point across! He's also the most perceptive and can simple just about anything up...
Thank you so much for your review!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: September 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears
Yes!!!!!! I love this chapter!!!!!!
I want to see Edward and Bella either: in her bed, witrh their arms around each other..crying ...or if Bella is strong enough, I want to see Edward with his arms around Bella, holding her up, so she can see their daughter..again, with both of them crying... Author's Response: Aw! So romantic!
I'm not sure if it will be that satisfying, but I will definitely try!
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: March 27, 2010
Title: Chapter 59: Epilogue the Final - Full Circle
Just perfect!. Beautiful, poignant, filled with so much love....Wonderful...Thanks so much , sweetie! Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! *hugs* I'm so grateful for your support these many months!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: October 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
so beautiful! Author's Response: I am so glad you feel I did it justice. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: October 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith
So so sad....so much hearbreak.. I do hope that,Bella will take Esme's advice.... Author's Response: Esme definitely gave her some things to think about! Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: November 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 43 - The Highway
NO! I can't take it!!!! Author's Response: Hang in there! I’m not done with these two yet!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: November 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 44 - Fight
"I’m damn sure she told you she couldn’t deal with your shit. She told you she couldn’t take you back. But you’re a fucking jackass if you believe that this is it. This is your godamned penance you pussy."...You just gotta love Jasper!
“You’ve came a long way, Pussyward."...LOL!
“You can’t let one defeat cripple you. You keep going despite any and all humiliation or rejection. Keep believing. Keep being a good man. And in the end, it will work out as it should.” ...“And how is that?”...I depends how hard you fight, bro,” .......Great advice, from Carlisle and Jasper! Author's Response: Jasper knows how to get his point across like nobody’s business! I think Carlisle was fairly certain he couldn't have done any better, although he would have phrased it differently. LOL!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: December 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See
Edward is just so sweet with Bella and Elizabeth.......Bella willl have to let down her guard - how can she resist?
Author's Response: Daddyward. *sigh* How indeed?
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: December 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49 - The Vase
Oh, that was so sweet, and I'm so happy for their seriously good progress! Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: December 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50 - My Forever
LOVE IT!!!! Just beautiful, and perfect...the three of them are together, happy, like they should be..with the promise of even better things to come..Thanks so much!!!!!!!!! Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Have a wonderful holiday!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: December 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 52: Epilogue the First - Pink Tutus and Blue Velvet
OMG!!!! So sweet! 'I'm crying happy tears! Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Happy New Year!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: January 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue - Pretty and the Starlet
I am so happy that their first time was so beautiful Author's Response: I wish that we all could have such pleasant first experiences....
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: January 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 53: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act
Her little arms opened, one wrapping around Edward’s neck, the other around mine. I closed my eyes, smelling her baby scent and his clean, showered, woodsy smell. .......This is so sweet...
The interruption? We used to call it "baby radar" when our son was little Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! The family time is definitely worth it, despite the Coitus Interruptus.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: January 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always
That was perfect!
Emmett is absolutely hilarious. Author's Response: Emmett is a hoot, isn't he?
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: February 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 55: Epilogue the Fourth - From Paris to Milan
That was sweet! Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: February 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 56: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
“I called the chief resident and explained my pregnant wife had a fainting spell and we couldn’t make it. Granted, I left out the part about fucking her into said fainting spell.”....LOL!
Author's Response: Oh, Daddyward....
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: March 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 58: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s
It is a bit upsetting that Elizabeth's friend's say those kinds of things to her face about her dad and grandpa...a bit creepy...
I love that Edward and Bella are giving tongue in public, even after being together for a long time...awesome! Author's Response: LOL! Elizabeth's friends, although they do think that her dad is "hot", are only saying those things to get under her skin. They're taunting, but they love her and are only trying to distract her by pushing every button she has.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Summary: 
AU. Bella Swan, hasn't spoke in over six years now - not since the day of the accident. She has since sunk into a depression & has grew tired with living. She trust no one. As a last resort, her Mother sends her, to live with her Dad, Charlie in the small town of Forks. Bella is considered a freak & an outcast, by all apart from the mysterious Edward Cullen. Could he actually be the one to change Bella? And could they together unlock the mystery, that is her forgotten past.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Other Character, Renee
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No
Word count: 12462
[Report This] Published: April 15, 2009 Updated: October 28, 2009
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: April 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Saturday January 1st 2005 - 12:35am (V)
I'll continue reading....................Are you going to let Edward read Bella's mind in this story?????????????? That would fit well.
Reviewer: sherylb Signed 
Date: April 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Saturday 1st January 2005 - 6:37pm
Keep going! And a chapter a day is really fast-That's Good!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: April 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Sunday 2nd January 2005 - 11:50pm
More Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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