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Penname: sherylb [Contact]
Real name: sheryl
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Member Since: March 17, 2009
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Legal Briefs by blueheronpl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 168]
Summary: AU, all human. Edward and Emmett are attorneys in Carlisle's law firm, Cullen Law Offices, PSC. They have had really bad luck trying to find a paralegal to work with, and finally take matters into their own hands and call a temp agency. Alice and Rose run a temp to hire agency and recommend their friend Bella for the position when Emmett calls. Bella is a recent graduate and is having a hard time finding a position because of her lack of experience.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya
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Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 46395
[Report This] Published: May 30, 2008 Updated: May 21, 2009


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

IT'S HILARIOUS THAT THE BIG, DUMB DOG IS NAMED JAKE!!!!!!(CAN YOU GUESS I'M NOT A JAKE FAN?) 

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I GUESS YOU'RE NOT A JAKE FAN, EITHER.........NEUTERED??? I LOVE IT!!!!!!!
OH, AND I HATE TANYA, TOO!!!!!!!!!!!!SO ANYTHING BAD THAT HAPPENS TO HER PUTS A BIG SMILE ON MY FACE!!!!!!!!!

 
Summary:

What if Edward had gotten to Port Angeles too late and was faced with Bella begging him to do everything in his power to save her? She knows he has the power no one else does...what will he do? One night changes everything.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 38841
[Report This] Published: June 11, 2008 Updated: April 30, 2009


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Wanted

PLEASE MAKE THE EPILOGUE VERY HAPPY FOR EDWARD AND BELLA!!!!!!!!!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Epilogue

AWESOME........................Thank You!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 
Seducing Ms Swan by Rialle Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3032]
Summary:

 

AU Post-New Moon.

Bella never jumped, Alice never had her vision and Edward never came back. Six years later, Bella is struggling to make a new life for herself as a teacher in Rochester, New York. How will she fare when a very familiar student crops up in her classroom? Will she be able to remain professional, or will old ties get in the way?

Edward is convinced that getting Bella back is just a matter of 'persuasion', but Bella isn't prepared to be that cooperative. What's more, she's in the grip of a dark secret which threatens to prevent her from loving ever again.

Bella Swan is slipping under...

ALSO POSTED ON FANFICTION.NET


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 124383
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2008 Updated: July 25, 2010


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: An Ending

I have to say that I am really very sad. I know that you didn't promise a perfect happy ending, but I really was hoping that Edward and Bella would be together :(

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Lucky

Can you PLEASE just KILL OFF TANYA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She is a big HO!!!, is NO GOOD and needs to PAY for hurting Bella!!!!!!!!!!

I think Stephanie Meyer is punishing her,too, since Tanya is the only one in her coven without a mate by the end of Breaking Dawn.

 

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Leader

It is good, but not being a fan of Jacob, I really want Edward and Bella

 
Wishing Star by Mystic_Ice24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 4552]
Summary:

WRITTEN REWRITTEN REWRITTEN REWRITTEN

After her parents are killed in a plane crash, a young girl is rejected again & again by foster families for being too old. She wishes on a star nightly, but will she find what she seeks? Will the Cullens be that family?

NC-17 for later chapters. Warning" Violence, and sexual aggresion may be part of this story.

Winning Summary:

"I wish I may, I wish I might, have the wish I make tonight."  With that one hope Isabella Swan faces life as best as she can.  The tragedy of her parents' death, leaves her alone in a system where her age leaves her undesirable for adoption.  That is until one day two people come into her life offering her a chance at hope.  The Cullen family takes to Bella like a long lost sister.  What happens when Bella is taken from the Cullens by a lost relative?  Will Bella's hopes be destroyed?  What happens when fate steps in years later to reunite Bella with the one's she loved and who loved her so long ago?

Bella knew what she would say, "Don't you want to be my sister?"

 

 

Thanks to Mrs C for the above Banner and my beta readergoof for the below Banner!Wishing Star Banner Readergoof

Thanks to Sleforever for below banner!

Wishing Star Banner Sleforever


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 40 Completed: No Word count: 137752
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2008 Updated: April 12, 2011


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Reunion

I really hate Tanya- in every story, every incarnation of her-she represents the shallow, bitchy HO!

 
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Date: June 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Surprise

WELL, I'D SAY IT'S TIME FOR EDWARD TO DUMP TANYA!!!SHE CAN BE WITH JAMES!!!YEA!!!!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Family

Time to get rid of the EVIL BITCH TANYA!!!!!!!!!!!!Time for Edward to get his head out of his ass!!!!He thinks he's in love with Tanya??????Boy is insane! 

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Joys of the Season

Yes, apparently I was spending Christmas in a small, hick town jail, trespassing charges pressed against me and all..........YES!!!!!!!! AWESOME!!!!!!

DING DONG THE WITCH IS DEAD!!! (WELL GONE, AT LEAST)

 

 

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Say What?

Graphic sex scen of Edward with Tanya just grosse me out...Yukk. Sorry, I just can't read that stuff.

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Aftershock

I sure hope Edward remembers Tanya's comment about being loaded...come one, he can't continue to be so blind...and deaf...when it comes to her.....

Poor Bella!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: The End's Beginning

Pre-nup is a great idea, but not enough to get rid of Tanya...Please have Edward grow a set..maybe catch Tanya in a compromising situation with another man?  But, seriously, does he even need that? He's really got all the evidence he needs that she really is a bitch who only wants him for money and prestige...... 

And Rosalie is just awesome here...She gave Edward the verbal smack in the head that he needed!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Secrets

"No, but I’d happily find a gator to feed her to,” I responded, turning off the tape recorder and holding it up for my sisters to see....“All of it?” Alice breathed, standing still for once in her life.  I nodded, a sly smile on my face....“Every…last…word,” I told them.  “Now, to find the perfect time to get Edward to listen to it.”...“She’s going down!” Bella grinned, genuinely happy for the first time in a couple of weeks.

 YES!!!!This makes me VERY HAPPY!!!!!!!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Revelations

Well, they've realized they love one another, now if they can just tell each other!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Truths Revealed

How could I explain?  What could I tell him to explain why I was crying?  That I loved him and this was just too much?....poor Bella 

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Christmas

I don't know about the rest of the story at the moment-I'll have to go back and read, but my favorite line in this chapter is: "But, instead of shoving, I melted against him, my body wanting the connection, however fleeting, with the person it desired.  "

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Lives Altered

Well, I'm happy about Alice and Jasper!

Now, if only Edward and Bella could grow a set-figuratively in Bella's case; literally in Edward's- and express their feelings for one another. Since edward has been such a complete idiot, he needs the first one to say it, I think.

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Confrontations

I am SO HAPPY that Rose and Alice told Edward that Bella loves him, too!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: New Beginnings

SO happy that Edward and Bella kissed!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed
Date: February 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Wishes Fulfilled

OMG!!! SO HAPPY!

 

 
Summary:

Just a little pre-Breaking Dawn speculation on what Bella and Edward's wedding night and honeymoon would be like.  Mature themes.


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 6094
[Report This] Published: August 06, 2008 Updated: August 21, 2008


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Edward's Room

I like that you had them make love on their actual wedding night-like it should be- instead of sitting on a plane, like in the book!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 
Unknown by XShear Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 168]
Summary:

Bella was saved from a human death and given a new life by an unfamiliar creature. Adapting to her new lifestyle and family, Bella's unknown human past comes back to haunt her and her beloved Edward. What will happen when old memories, feelings, and loved ones collide with new ones? How will Edward handle things as well as Bella?

 

 

Thanks to Mrs.C for the fantastic banner, A/U. NC-17 for possible future chapters. Slight OOC may occur on all characters.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob, James, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 25179
[Report This] Published: August 07, 2008 Updated: April 06, 2009


Reviewer: sherylb Signed starstarstarstar
Date: April 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Edward's Insecurities and Bella's Goodbye

What????? No Edward an Bella as a couple??????? Come ON!!!!!

 
Reviewer: sherylb Signed star
Date: April 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Tanya's Revenge

I am no longer reading this. I hate Tanya and anything that puts her with Edward or ruins it for He and Bella just pisses me off too much!

 

BYE!



Author's Response:

Wow, I think that's all I can say. Just to let you know, that this IS an Edward/Bella story... they just need some major conflict to realize what they are to one another. I'm sorry you don't feel like giving this story a chance, that kind of makes me... sad. Oh well.

 




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