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Real name: Meli
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Thanks Roo, for the amazing banner!
And more keep coming in! Thanks to m81170 for this lovely piece of art:
Here's another amazing pic that fits in with Dark Side of the Moon perfectly -thank you to JohannaL for ID'ing the author: http://smirks-works.livejournal.com/ check out her (I assume) other manips - she's a genius!
Updated November, 2009
This story is now COMPLETE!
Dark Side of the Moon is my version of New Moon from Edward’s point of view. Witness how Edward agonized over leaving Bella, hunted for Victoria, faced the Volturi, and came to realize that with Bella was where he was meant to be.
This tormented story has been a part of my life for about a year and a half – and what a ride it’s been! Meant to be canon and in character, I hope you enjoy angsty Edward and his suffering during New Moon. As unhappy as Bella was during this time, Edward suffered so much more (I think). So be sure and crack open a fresh box of tissues before reading!
Thank you to everyone for all the reviews, especially to those of you who reviewed each and every chapter! Your support and loyalty have been the driving force to me getting this project finished – and I hope it’s lived up to all of your expectations.
Love you all,
blondieakarobin
PS. As one last thank you, I’ve posted a formatted, printable copy of Dark Side of the Moon at http://bit.ly/2vLHMi, as will also post as an electronic version suitable for viewing on a kindle or MobiReader. I’m also posting a ‘Director’s Cut’ that includes citations of all of Bella’s quotes from Twilight, research notes, and even funny comments from my betas in this version in the same directory.
blondie
Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
Use of the dialog from the series is just for clarity - Stephenie Meyer owns all things twilight! I'm making absolutely nothing from this work.
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes
Word count: 163080
[Report This] Published: May 09, 2008 Updated: February 26, 2010
Reviewer: flowerpower45 Signed 
Date: September 20, 2008
Title: Chapter 5: Decision
tear :( that was painfuly beautiful Author's Response: 8-) thanks! This chapter definitely deserves a hit of chocolate after reading... blondie
Reviewer: flowerpower45 Signed
Date: September 04, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Preface
I love that your doing New Moon in Edwards voice, I cant wait to read more :) your writing is FANTASTIC!!! Author's Response: Thank you so much - I'm glad you're enjoying it! It only gets sad from here on ouy... 8-) thanks for the review blondie
Reviewer: flowerpower45 Signed
Date: September 09, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Preface
your writing is phenomenal!!! I enjoy it so much... i cant wait to read the next, though it is going to be devastating Author's Response: Get some tissues now... it's a long ride from here... 8-) thanks for reading and reviewing! blondie
Reviewer: flowerpower45 Signed
Date: September 13, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Preface
wow, that last line killed me...please update soon :)
Author's Response: I'm assuming your talking about the last line of 'Stitches'... the next chapter is in progress. The spiral continues downward... thanks for reading!
blondie
Reviewer: flowerpower45 Signed
Date: October 08, 2008
Title: Chapter 7: Domestic Disturbance
The last two lines...knife in my heart :( Like always, i love your portrayal of Edward. cant wait for "The End" Author's Response: 'The End' is coming this weekend... so glad you're enjoying our torture! blondie
Summary: Rosalie doesn't like change. A one-shot, 1000 words on Edward and Bella's relationship through Rosalie's eyes. Takes place during one of the cafeteria scenes of Twilight.
Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Edward, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: A delve into the mind of...
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 984
[Report This] Published: May 21, 2008 Updated: May 21, 2008
Reviewer: flowerpower45 Signed
Date: September 01, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Change
you def. did Rosalie justice... i never hated her, after reading Eclipse and hearing her story, i understood where she was coming from, but that all went away when i read BD ;) like always...i love your writing Author's Response: Yeah, same. I really loved her during the first three books, because I really felt her pain... and then she went all kill-Bella-to-steal-baby on us. =) Thanks. x
[Report This] Published: May 28, 2008 Updated: May 28, 2008
Reviewer: flowerpower45 Signed 
Date: September 01, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Thunder
I Love that you didnt make Emmett seem like a moron lol :)... he is just chill i love your writing! Author's Response: Thanks. Fanfics in which Emmett is portrayed as a moron always really annoy me.
Summary: Jacob Black has been bribed into attenting Isabella Swan's school prom. He has some important messages from his father to relay to her. But what does he think of the situation? A 1000 word look at the twilight prom from Jacob's perspective.
Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges: Series: A delve into the mind of...
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 1000
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2008 Updated: June 16, 2008
Reviewer: flowerpower45 Signed
Date: September 04, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Awkward
Jacob thought it was Bella's perfume that was burning his nose...haha if only he knew ;) great way to add that in there Author's Response: Thanks. I just had to include that- I love dropping little hints of what's to come. =)
Summary:
Bella Swan spent the first two years of her life in Forks developing a friendship with Jacob Black that finally turned into something more. As she begins her senior year of high school, a new family moves to town and Bella slowly begins to question the path she thought her life would follow. Sometimes there is a difference between what you think you need and what you never knew you wanted. Takes place during the timeframe of New Moon and Eclipse. J/B at first, but eventually E/B.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: No
Word count: 170230
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2008 Updated: July 19, 2009
Reviewer: flowerpower45 Signed
Date: August 26, 2008
Title: Chapter 16: Acquaintances
I just read your whole story today, and i am loving it :)
Summary: Edward has exiled himself from Forks. The only way he can make it through the day is to remember Bella's love and delude himself into believing that she is better off without him. Takes place during New Moon. Edward point of view angst.
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 1505
[Report This] Published: July 30, 2008 Updated: July 31, 2008
Reviewer: flowerpower45 Signed
Date: September 01, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: The Angel Illusion
his trusting lamb... this broke my heart Edward...he was miserable sad to read, but still very good :) Author's Response: It broke my heart to write it. That's why this was written in third person- it was a futile attempt to distance myself from Edward's pain. I'm glad you liked it. It's my favourite. =)
Summary: I felt my face seize up, panic twisting then freezing my mouth, my eyes, my forehead. Unable to help it, I turned towards the hallway, to where Bella had gone, to where I knew she was. The thought of letting her go scalded my insides and brought my basest instincts crashing to the fore again. The urge to go to her, to where she lay in the bath, lay so quiet, so dull, so gone. It took everything I had not to make that first step and a low growl trembled from my throat with the effort. Edward comes back for Bella after leaving her in New Moon, but winning her back is not so easy. Or is it...?
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Word count: 16623
[Report This] Published: August 14, 2008 Updated: December 06, 2008
Reviewer: flowerpower45 Signed
Date: August 27, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
im hooked,cant wait for more :)
Summary: It's been seven years. Seven years since Nessie's birth changed Jacob forever. And now she's doing it again.
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Jacob, Nessie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No
Word count: 25326
[Report This] Published: August 17, 2008 Updated: October 29, 2008
Reviewer: flowerpower45 Signed
Date: August 27, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I cant wait for more :)
Author's Response: It's coming, if not just before the weekend it'll be right after ;)
Summary: "By the way," he murmured. "Happy anniversary." One year on, Edward has a surprise planned for Bella. Edward/Bella fluff, part of my Anniversaries series.
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Renesmee
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes
Word count: 8934
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2008 Updated: September 02, 2008
Reviewer: flowerpower45 Signed
Date: August 24, 2008
Title: Chapter 2: Celebration
im new to this page and i've read a couple but yours has been my favorite so far! you completely catch the essence of Bella and Edward please write more :) Author's Response: Wow, thanks. This kind of feedback always inspires me to keep writing. =)
Reviewer: flowerpower45 Signed
Date: August 31, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Purchase
i cant wait for more...please update soon :)
Author's Response: Don't worry, it's nearly finished. =)
Reviewer: flowerpower45 Signed
Date: September 01, 2008
Title: Chapter 5: Clues
the meadow!!! please update soon :) Author's Response: Yep! The sixth (and last) chapter should be up soon. x
Reviewer: flowerpower45 Signed
Date: September 02, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Purchase
That was PERFECT! so sad that it ended...please write a sequel :) Author's Response: Thank you. =D I'm half-way through working out a plan for the sequel... when I'm finished I'll get started on the first chapter.
Summary: 
For True Edward Fans. An in-depth, accurate portrayal of the heart, mind, and soul of the beloved Edward Cullen as he deals with the complex themes and events taking place during Eclipse. RATED T FOR TEEN, ALTHOUGH CHAPTER 8 CONTAINS SENSUALITY. CANON. EPOV.
Categories: Eclipse Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Word count: 64609
[Report This] Published: August 24, 2008 Updated: November 07, 2008
Reviewer: flowerpower45 Signed
Date: August 26, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Theme from Chapter 1 - Ultimatum
you totally capture Edward! its great!!! I love your writing, cant wait for more :)
Reviewer: flowerpower45 Signed
Date: September 08, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Theme from Chapter 1 - Ultimatum
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this :) Excellent Writing! BRAVO!!!
Summary: A day/night in each of the seasons: fall, winter, spring, summer featuring mainly Edward/Bella…with a hint or so of other pairings.
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes
Word count: 5061
[Report This] Published: August 30, 2008 Updated: September 05, 2008
Reviewer: flowerpower45 Signed
Date: September 04, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Fall
I really like this...the whole concept with the seasons, plus Edward and Bella's relationship through other peoples eyes...i especially liked Jasper's POV cant wait to read more i dont know why but i laughed really hard when i read what you wrote If I owned the Twilight series then Edward Cullen would be mine -glares at the rest of the female population- lol Author's Response: Thanks for your review....really you laughed? well I mean so many authors out there say that they would give the readers Edward Cullen if they reviewed and I thought it was strange that they were offering up THE Edward Cullen....I'm just weird like that :) glad you liked the story and hope you like the next installment
Reviewer: flowerpower45 Signed
Date: September 06, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Fall
That was really GREAT!!! cant wait to read more of your stuff:) Author's Response: Would you really read more of my Twilight stuff when I am an avid hater of BD? Thanks for the review...but you might want to double check if you are alright with that because I know basically everyone who writes on this site is ok with BD and doesn't like the BD haters...
Summary: Alice finds a way around Bella’s “no presents” 18th birthday rule. She sees herself and Edward giving Bella her birthday CD, and enlists Edward’s help to make it. Slight Midnight Sun spoilers, but there’s nothing that can’t be derived from reading between the lines in Twilight. An Alice and Edward friendship fanfic, focusing on their love for Bella. Set post-Twilight, pre-New Moon.
Categories: Twilight, New Moon Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 1674
[Report This] Published: September 03, 2008 Updated: September 04, 2008
Reviewer: flowerpower45 Signed
Date: September 04, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: An Eternal Gift
OMG i just LOVE your writing...you capture each character perfectly! Especially that part where he is playing the last tune on the piano and thinking how he doesnt want to "damn" her and take her life away. It was just spot on. cant wait for the sequel to Paper Carnations :) good luck in school...(wow this is like the longest review i've ever written lol) Author's Response: Thanks. I really loved Midnight Sun, so I felt I just had to write a scene with Edward and Alice in it. I'm really glad you think I wrote the characters properly. That's the best compliment anyone could ever give me. Thanks for the luck. =)
Summary: On the nineteenth of January, 2006, Angela notices something which gives her some hope. A short one-shot to show my appreciation of Angela Weber- my favourite human. Angela’s point of view, during Chapter 6 (Friends) of New Moon. Fanfic of the week on the Twilighters Anonymous podcast.
Categories: New Moon Characters: Angela, Bella, Jessica, Lauren, Mike
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 2345
[Report This] Published: September 14, 2008 Updated: September 15, 2008
Reviewer: flowerpower45 Signed
Date: September 16, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Optimism
aww, i love it....i havent read many Angela POV's...there arent many, :) holy cow i read your profile and your 16!!! im 16 too and i cant write like you lol... your amazing beyond your years :) super talented Author's Response: Thanks. =) *Super blush* I know, people are always shocked when they find out I'm sixteen. Quite a lot of my stories were actually written when I was fifteen- mainly my Harry Potter stories. But ever since I was little I've been writing, and my dad has started writing a series of his own, which really inspired me to start my own stories. So, people giving me positive reviews has always meant the world to me. x
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