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Penname: bailey31909 [Contact]
Real name: Cindy Bailey
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Member Since: March 17, 2009
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Dying By Degrees by Reamhar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 664]
Summary:

Banner for Dying By Degrees

 

What if Bella’s thoughts on the plane flying back to Seattle from Italy take her in a different direction from the plot in New Moon? Just where could a little twist of fate take the characters? An indepth look at Bella's thoughts and feeling at the end of New Moon and into an AU Eclipse.

Canon couples, and rated NC17 just to be safe. I am Bella and Edward all the way, so if you like Bella and Jacob, then I am afraid this is not the story for you.

Dying By Degrees on discussion forum.  http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=19&t=9136

 


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 106997
[Report This] Published: January 03, 2009 Updated: June 19, 2010


Reviewer: bailey31909 Signed
Date: October 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I must say that this is one of the best fanfiction entries I have read.  I recently lost my husband and before he died he went through the guilt emotions and over protectiveness of me as Edward is doing with Bella here.  And my mind reacted very much like the Bella character here, and seeing those thoughts and emotions actually put into words is great therapy.

I hope you continue to write as I feel you are a gifted story teller.  Thank you for sharing your talent and words with me.

 

 
Reviewer: bailey31909 Signed
Date: October 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Okay, I know you are busy but please continue asap.  I am hanging on with hopeful thoughts.  And as always, you capture my emotions and put them into the words I have sought for during many an endless night of pain and memories.  Again, thank you.

An author who can touch the soul of the person reading is a gift to the reader.  As my gift back, I will read everything you write.

I don't have enough knowledge of literature or writing skills to give any competent critique, but as an avid reader I can say that you have captured my attention so much that I would never even skip over one single word.

 



Author's Response:

I'll do my best :0)

 
Unscripted by Max_and_Marley Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 448]
Summary:

Thanks to MsTwiSwe for the banner!

 

This is the tale of Robsten...from the beginning. 


Categories: Other Characters: Kristen Stewart, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 66553
[Report This] Published: October 08, 2009 Updated: February 26, 2011


Reviewer: bailey31909 Signed
Date: July 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: School Daze

I have been waiting on more of this story - is more to come?  thanks.



Author's Response:

I'll be uploading a new chapter this Wednesday, so check back for it sometime after that!  :) I'm so excited to get back to Unscripted!

 
Summary:

 

A father. A daughter. An incurable disease.

 

When life hands you an impossible path, what can you do other than follow and live through it?

 

A story about the cruelty of terminal illness, determination and will, and ultimately triumph and inspiration.

 

Told from Bella's POV.

 

Thanks to SusanAshlea for my beyootiful new banner!  I LOVEEEEEE.

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: No Word count: 132111
[Report This] Published: February 01, 2010 Updated: December 07, 2010


Reviewer: bailey31909 Signed
Date: August 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Okay, this is so awesome.  Your words describing the drive home, the shower and the funeral home are exactly right.  I am sorry you had to go through something like this.  But I have too gone through this choppy sea of emotions.   And the tears sprang to my eyes before I even knew it.  That is a gift you have with words my friend.  And I am happy you are sharing.  Thank you.

I can't wait for the next chapter, so.....hurry up! lol



Author's Response:

I appreciate you sharing your relateable experience, truly.  I figured if I put things out there how I honestly felt them going through it, I would come across as authentic, but you never know.  Thank you for assuring me of that.

Update should be up very soon!

 





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