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Penname: twitina [ Contact]
Real name: Tina
Status: Member
Member Since: March 14, 2009
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Beta-reader: Yes
I am married and a mother of four.
You can follow me on twitter - Im thetinkk. I tweet about updates and additions to my tumblr (where I give teases and add pics from my story).
My Live Journal is up and running! Yay!!
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Summary: 
Edward leaves Bella, much like the beginning of 'New Moon', however, this time, they are all human and there is quite the twist. Why did Edward leave Bella? And what secret is Bella keeping when he leaves?
Can they make a nightmare turn into a dream?
THANKS TO EMERALD_ROSALIE FOR THE ABOVE BANNER AND ATHENALOVE FOR THE BELOW.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 61 Completed: Yes
Word count: 155064
[Report This] Published: April 14, 2009 Updated: August 05, 2010
Reviewer: twitina Signed
Date: September 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 39 - Happy Town
I love Jasper's straightforward shit!! Fantastic! I know we're getting close to her meeting with Edward. I'm starting to hold my breath! Author's Response: Jasper really does know how to get his point across! Yup, her meeting with Edward is only one short chapter away....
Thank you so much for your review!
Reviewer: twitina Signed
Date: September 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears
Well done again!! Alice had a lot to atone for - allowing Edward to run away. She's starting.
Gotta love Emmett. He always wears his heart on his sleeve!!
Ok...deep breath...next chapter is going to kill us all!! Author's Response: Alice does and it's NOT all better between them, but it's a start. As for Emmett... Bella can't help but just accept his apology and love him back.... He's just like that.
Thank you so much for reviewing. Please prepare the Xanax, tissue and vodka for the next chapter...
Reviewer: twitina Signed
Date: October 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
I finally have some reading time! Yay!
Honestly, this is the best chapter yet. So well written. You didn't need dialogue - their actions spoke so loudly. Breaks my heart that he left.
Very sweet moments with Edward and the baby and then Bella and Edward and the baby.
Can't wait for more! Author's Response: I am so glad you feel I did it justice!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: twitina Signed
Date: October 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith
Very nice! Esme is the greatest! And Angela is a wonderful friend. Aren't these two lucky they have so much support?
:D Author's Response: They are definitely lucky to have so many people who care and want to see this set right.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: twitina Signed
Date: January 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 53: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act
Reality, baby. Interruptions abound when you have kids! lol
Nice chapter! Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! I wanted to keep it real, even in the happy ending. Real can be happy too....
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Summary: Bella's elevator ride with a gorgeous stranger becomes charged when the lift breaks down. Things become more complicated when she discovers the stranger is her to-be boss, Edward Cullen.
Thanks to katmom for the great banner!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: Always Human
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes
Word count: 73337
[Report This] Published: April 16, 2009 Updated: January 01, 2010
Reviewer: twitina Signed
Date: April 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I like it! Author's Response: Yay, I'm glad you liked it! Stay tuned!
Reviewer: twitina Signed
Date: April 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I'm ready for more! Author's Response: Glad to hear it! I intend to have more out soon!
Reviewer: twitina Signed
Date: April 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Smokin' hot!! Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it.
Summary:  
Thanks to m81170 for the awesome banner! <3
Five looks at the relationship of Edward Cullen and Bella Swan, as seen through the eyes of five passersby.
Categories: New Moon, Post-Eclipse, Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Other Character
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 5075
[Report This] Published: April 19, 2009 Updated: April 28, 2009
Reviewer: twitina Signed
Date: April 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: One Shot
Nice fluff!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
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Summary: Edward's perspective of his wedding day (and maybe a little more) - all in-canon. Written for the "Support Stacie" author auction winner.
Thank you to Icrodriguez for the awesome banner!!
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Word count: 6455
[Report This] Published: April 28, 2009 Updated: April 28, 2009
Reviewer: twitina Signed
Date: April 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Loved it!! Author's Response: Thank you!
Summary: What did Edward, Bella and Rosalie do while Jacob was joy riding in the Vanquish? Edward certainly gained a new perspective on things.
"I was astounded and amazed that I was suddenly as in love with this budding life as Bella."
Here's their missing scene from Breaking Dawn. Edward's POV
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 1307
[Report This] Published: April 30, 2009 Updated: May 12, 2009
Reviewer: twitina Signed
Date: May 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Edward's Epiphany
Very sweet.
Author's Response: Thanks:)
Summary: Bella meets Edward at the annual Cullen Family Independence Day Picnic. Both are recovering from broken hearts, so what will happen when they feel an instant attraction? How will Edward deal with Bella's past coming back to haunt her?
AU, AH, Some OOC. Rated NC17 for language and possible future lemony goodness!
Lots of thanks to Anne Cullen for the fabulous banner!!!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: No
Word count: 113916
[Report This] Published: May 06, 2009 Updated: September 22, 2010
Reviewer: twitina Signed
Date: July 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: One Wild Night
I'm so happy your update posted today!!
I see some serious stuff coming. Bella really needs to talk to Edward about the Mike situation!!
I'll be watching for the next update.
Reviewer: twitina Signed
Date: August 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Revelations - qjmom
Awesome chapter! I loved the lemon! Great job!
So, about the DVD's...mine are alphabetized. So are my CD's and my old cassette tapes. Yes - I'm a bit OCD - now you know I'm nuts!! lol
I loved the time Bella spent with Esme!
Mike deserved a lot more than he got! At least Edward didn't find out from Lauren. He got to see Mike in action. And, he told her he had just gotten out of a bad relationship.
And now she's his girlfriend. Yay!!
Sweet chapter! Author's Response: Lol, my dvd's are aphabetized, too. You aren't nuts! Thanks for the great review!
Reviewer: twitina Signed
Date: August 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Dr. Feelgood
Yay!! Twilighted came back up and I finally have time to read!!
I loved the chapter! I feel bad for Jessica. Mike was a jerk to both of them - she suffered, too.
As always, I'll look forward to more! Author's Response: Thank you honey! It's a great feeling to have fellow authors review and like my story. Looking forward to more from you, too!
Reviewer: twitina Signed
Date: October 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Are you strong enough?
I forgot to review!!!
So, Tanya just likes to make everyone miserable, doesn't she? Yep...we need a Tanya hater's club!!
Forgiveness - and a lemon to boot!! Good stuff, bb!
Great job!! Author's Response: SQUEE!! You were my 400th review! Thank you! Did you see my pity cry on Twitter, lol?
I say we start the Tanya hater's club. Betcha we'd get a lot of members. Thanks for the review!
Summary: Companion story to Breathe Again, written as a side to Chapters 33 & 34: Mischief.
What kind of friend would Embry be if he just stood by and let Lauren come in between Jake and Bella? (One-shot)
~If you asked me, Jake was lucky Bella even bothered to come to him about it instead of just dumping him. And now he was too scared of stirring up trouble and upsetting Bella to do anything about it.~
~The pack was lucky, too, because dealing with Jake when he and Bella were on the outs was no picnic. But a call to Leah and a trip to Forks High would solve everything.~
Categories: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Embry, Jacob, Jessica, Lauren, Leah, Mike, Quil
Challenges: Series: A Blazing Sun
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 2590
[Report This] Published: May 07, 2009 Updated: May 14, 2009
Reviewer: twitina Signed
Date: May 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Loyalty
I'm really loving Embry!! Author's Response: Thank you!
Summary: Edward's POV during Bella's change when he introduces his daughter to the Cullens.
“Meet Renesmee, your granddaughter,” I said to her and Carlisle. They were both awestruck as Esme held her gently in her arms, and Carlisle wrapped his arms around the both of them.
Based on the glimpse of memory Ness shows Bella.
This story makes reference 'Edward's Epiphany' but they stand alone.
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 3933
[Report This] Published: May 13, 2009 Updated: May 25, 2009
Reviewer: twitina Signed
Date: May 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Introducing Renesmee
I love your missing piece! Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed it so much:) I have other works on ff as well, some of which I will be posting here as well.
Thanks again!
ebhg
Summary: Death is one of the hardest things to go through. Bella and the Cullen's have had to say goodbye to people they loved and are trying to find refuge through the pain. Will they find that there is something to gain through their loss?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 45 Completed: Yes
Word count: 348072
[Report This] Published: May 19, 2009 Updated: July 23, 2010
Reviewer: twitina Signed
Date: June 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Biology and Blushes
I am enjoying your story. It is very emotional and interesting. I'll be looking for it.
Hope you don't mind if I point something out. You've been using the word coarse when it should be course. Sorry, it's my internal editor...doesn't shut up! I know you have a beta, but they have apparently missed this. Just trying to help make your story better!! Author's Response: Thanks for the tip :P I appreciate it, I always get those two pesky thingies mixed up lol. I appreciate your review though, makes me happy inside :)
Summary: Edward, Nessie and Jacob are at home one morning while everyone else is out. Four year old Nessie wants a piano lesson, and Jacob wonders how Edward learned to cope with his gift.
"She looked up into my eyes, her soft brown orbs so like my Bella’s used to be. I couldn’t help pressing a quick, light kiss to her forehead and giving her shoulders a squeeze. I knew that she would start to pull away from my fatherly affections within the next couple of years, and I yearned for time to slow down."
Post Breaking Dawn; Edward bonds with Jake/Nessie.
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Edward, Jacob, Nessie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes
Word count: 5021
[Report This] Published: May 26, 2009 Updated: June 27, 2009
Reviewer: twitina Signed
Date: June 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Bonding with Daddy
Very sweet. I enjoyed it! Author's Response: Thanks:)
ebhg:)
Summary: Her greatest passion is not music or dance or literature. Her heart sings instead for revenge. For justice to be delivered.
Oneshot. Gianna/Felix. Written for SulpiciaDoesn'tApprove's Volturi fanfic contest. Warning: implied child abuse.
Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Felix, Gianna
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 1392
[Report This] Published: May 30, 2009 Updated: June 04, 2009
Reviewer: twitina Signed
Date: June 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Proibito
I love the Volturi! They have provided me with a fantastic source for my story.
I haven't had time to write for this contest - don't know if it's still going on...I'll look into it.
I love your story for Gianna. It works, explaining why someone would turn to the Volturi and hope for the darkness.
Author's Response: I keep meaning to read your story - there are so little Volturi-centric fanfics out there,a dn very few of them are multi-chaptered, so it's always good to find a new one.
Last time I spoke to the girl running the contest, she told me that she was still waiting for a few entries from people who told her they were entering... so as far as I know, it's still going on. I'm glad you liked my interpretation of Gianna. I wrote a small piece on her as a side-character in my EPOV New Moon fic and she really intrigued me. x
Reviewer: twitina Signed
Date: June 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Proibito
I hope you find time to read my story. Let me know what you think. Really, the Volturi are great, there's not a lot of canon about them, so you can be really creative with them!
Maybe I'll contact the girl in charge of the contest, and take a day to write a little. I've thought about it already. Just need some serious writing time.
Thanks again!
Summary: 
Fate and Death are intricately interwoven. The thread of all our lives are held delicately by these two shadowed figures. What happens when Isabella Swan and Edward Masen's threads take centre stage in Fate's gnarled hands? Will their thread weave a beautiful story or will they fall to her jaggered shears?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Word count: 11394
[Report This] Published: May 30, 2009 Updated: April 07, 2010
Reviewer: twitina Signed
Date: May 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Introducing Death
i had to read this because I love your other story.
This far surpasses Dirty Dancing. This is sooooo good. I can't wait to read more. Fantastic, visual, really interesting.
More.....please! Author's Response: Wow that is quite a compliment. I know people love DDwtDH and this is completely different. I love it and think it is some of my best writing so far.
Thank you!
Reviewer: twitina Signed
Date: June 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: A Stitch In Time...
Fascinating! I have always loved mythology, and this rolls right into my favorite things!
It's clear and well written!!
Reviewer: twitina Signed
Date: June 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3:Knit Once,Loop Twice
I really think this story gets stronger with each chapter! Death is so real, so present. Watching over us, waiting to take the threads that fate hands her. So visual.
I can't wait to see what fate has in store for Edward and Bella!
I love Izzy - but mythology always wins in my book!! lol Author's Response: Shucks twitina I love when you review! I wanted it to seem that this could actaully be happening...that this is how our lives actually revolve and Death is not a dark enigma afterall! I'm suprised actually at how well this is weaving out...I am infintly proud of it and so happy I can share this with people!
Thanks!
Summary: Companion story to Breathe Again Post #s 37 & 38: Questions. Charlie receives a call from one meddling Mrs. Newton, and Jacob's reaction leaves his head spinning. One-shot.
~ Well…crap. Bella had told me that I didn’t need to worry about…that. And Miranda Newton was certainly not the best source for unembellished facts, but half-dressed and making out in a parking lot? I was in my car and headed to La Push within seconds. ~
Categories: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Billy, Charlie, Other Character
Challenges: Series: A Blazing Sun
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 1471
[Report This] Published: May 31, 2009 Updated: May 31, 2009
Reviewer: twitina Signed
Date: June 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Confrontation (One-Shot)
Poor Charlie. What do you do in this situation?
I have teens. Believe me, I worry every day - hoping they make good choices. Of course, I talk to them a little more than Charlie talks to Bella...
Love the insight! Author's Response: Charlie definitely has his hands full now. I mean, sure, he wants the boy to love and respect his daughter, but when faced with that level of seriousness, he's probably wishing she'd just casually date someone.
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