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Penname: VictoriaCullen [ Contact]
Real name: Vickie
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Member Since: March 14, 2009
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Nothin much to tell. Wife. Mom. Daughter. Teacher. Students. Closet Twilight fan fiction addict who might actually leave her husband if Carlisle were real and single--even though he's a bit old for me. I try not to date guys over 250, but for him I'd make an exception.
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Summary:  Bella is carrying a baby that isn't hers. Edward has more trust issues than you can shake a rotten stick at. Can a heart that has never loved and a heart that was broken heal each other? Or will misunderstandings and miscommunication end them before even they start?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes
Word count: 116942
[Report This] Published: January 02, 2010 Updated: September 09, 2010
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: I Fell Asleep Amid the Flowers
It wasn't too mushy at all. I loved this chapter!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: June 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: It's How Long?
Bella and Edward's interaction during the photo shoot was so sweet! Author's Response: hey, sorry for the delay in getting baack you your review. I have been slipping lately but jetlag and RL are kicking me down. I am so glad that you liked the photoshot in PT. 'It's How Long?' was meant to be aa filler chapter but the idea of Edward in the photoshoot came to me after aa pregnant friends updated profile picture on her facebook profile...its takes all kinds for inspriation!
Hope you continue to read and let me know your thoughts and esp. what you are still enjoying about PT.
Nutty
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: July 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 19: At the Bottom of a Johnnie Walker Bottle
I'm glad they made up--and the making up was pretty awesome. ;o) Author's Response: Thank you so much for the reassurance on the olde front! They make me nervous and seem to play with my writers block. I think it will probably be the last one for PT given there is only five chapters until the end!
Catch you next time
Nutty
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: July 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: Ballroom Dancing Boyfriends
Loved, loved, loved the Esme and Carlisle visit. I can't blame Bella for saying Carlisle's hot. We all know it's true.
I really enjoy every chapter!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: August 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 21: This Wasn't In the Books!
Great birth scene. The state troopers sound ominous. I hope it's not as bad as it sounds. Please, no dead Alice and Jasper.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: August 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 22: Silence In Grief
So sad but beautifully written.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: September 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 23: Even Shattered Glass Becomes Art
I was just thinking about my sister today and missing her. When I read that Bella was "numb to the reality that she would have to say her final goodbye to a sister she had loved so dearly" I could understand perfectly. That was exactly how I felt. You're not supposed to lose a sister in the prime of her life. It shouldn't be that way.
I'm sorry you had bad news, and I hope things look up for you soon. Author's Response: Hi,
Firstly, thank you so much for your review. I was beautiful. I was really worried about this chapter as so many people told mee, in the last chapter, that they too had lost loved ones. I have too, i lost my fiance but we were well prepared for his death and funeral so the grief was different. I am glad i reflected how someone does feel at sudden lost and that no one so far has found it an injustice.
I hope you read the final chapter and the epi which ar e coming soon.
Thank you again.
Nutty
Summary: 
Laurent is struggling with his new diet after moving in with the Denali Clan. Irina tries using the art of seduction to make vegetarianism more appealing to him. They soon embark on a ravenous journey of hunger and lust.
Categories: New Moon Characters: Irina, Laurent
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 3271
[Report This] Published: January 02, 2010 Updated: January 10, 2010
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
All the biting was a little disconcerting, but I see where it fits with the story. I haven't ever thought much about Laurent and Irina, but you did them proud. Hot story! Author's Response: I felt like the biting fit with their physical intensity level but I understand that it isn't for everyone. I am glad that you enjoyed the story nonetheless. Thank you for the review.
Summary: Bella Swan moved to Forks, Washington after being brutally attacked and turned into a vampire in Phoenix. She's desperately trying to put her life back together when she finds out that she's not the only vampire in Forks. Will the Cullen Family and Edward in particular be able to show there that being a vampire isn't so bad after all?
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Edward's family wouldn't care if we took off together. He wasn't a child. He was old enough to be Charlie's grandfather and well knew how to handle himself even if I was simply a seventeen-year-old girl. Edward also had more money at hand than I was even aware of; I always tried not to think about just how rich the Cullens were.
We could literally disappear for months or years on end, checking in with the rest of the Cullen's periodically and they wouldn't think anything of it other than that they might miss us. We could, quite literally, travel the world.
Forum: http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=33&t=8798
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes
Word count: 97975
[Report This] Published: January 03, 2010 Updated: May 20, 2010
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Pixie Interference
I couldn't tell you what marks a great story in fan fiction land. I've read some with a zillion glowing reviews and a zillion more readers that I thought were terrible. I've also read some stories with just a few readers/reviewers that burned their way into my heart. I think sometimes good stories get overlooked, and sometimes mass hysteria takes over. Some stories with a ton of readers and reviewers really deserve the praise. Having said that, I hope your story ends up in the last category--tons of readers. Your writing is very good; you tell a captivating story. I have read a bunch of Twifics, but I've not read one like this. I love the premise and think your writing style is wonderful. :o) Author's Response: I have seen some like this, but I haven't read any that tried to keep the characters of Bella and Edward and the others as they are -- to truly tell the story as it stands, only with Bella as a vampire from the beginning. That is why I wrote this, I wanted to read something like this, and I couldn't find it -- so I wrote it. I am quite glad that not only is the plotline something that you enjoy, but that you find it easy and enjoyable to read as far as the writing. It is very hard to write something that flows and reads smoothly and I am delighted that you think I have succeeded.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Kidnapped
I love your Esme! I'm a slightly--for lack of a better word--more mature Twifan, so I relate to Esme. Human or vampire, a mom is a mom. Excellent character development. Author's Response: I'm of a less young bent and a mother myself, so I know what you mean. Thank you. Esme is one of my favorites just because she loves everyone.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Bella's Story
I could tell you put a lot of thought into this chapter. You were very consistent, believable, and detailed. I could feel what Bella was experiencing. Author's Response: That's horrible! Bella went though some really awful stuff here. But I am glad that you related so closely to my poor, lonely Bella. She's so sad, alone and confused at this point.Author's Response: That's horrible! Bella went though some really awful stuff here. But I am glad that you related so closely to my poor, lonely Bella. She's so sad, alone and confused at this point.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Babysitter
Alice is such a clever girl! I'm really enjoying your story. Author's Response: You almost want to be mad at Alice for manipulating everything, but as Bella puts later: She's so adorable, and she's always got the best things for her family in mind, so you can't be too mad at her.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - The First Night
I love the interaction between Bella and Edward, but I would love more with the rest of the Cullens--particularly some Daddy C! Author's Response: There will be more Cullens. I might have to write more in as I go, but more is coming.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Center of Attention
I just love the twist you've put on canon! It's very inventive but still true to the characters. Author's Response: I wanted to stay true to the world of SM and the characters while making it enough different that it would still be interesting. I'm glad that you think I'm doing fairly well. Thank you!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - The Treaty
Interesting twist. I'm assuming none of the Quileutes have phased yet, have they? Author's Response: Hmm, we'll have to see.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Not Just Tribal Elders
I'm sorry you didn't make it to the finals. It's definitely not that your story isn't good enough; my theory on a lot of these awards is that they're political and based on who has the most buddies. Your story is so well-written and original while still being in character. More people should discover it!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: April 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Sunny Days and Arm Wrestling
Loved the arm wrestling!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Interrupted
I always love it when Carlisle gets to be the dad. Really good chapter. Great reading!
Summary: Charlie Swan had seen so much loss in his lifetime. Now, as he mourns Billy Black’s death, a visit from his friend’s daughter makes Charlie realize things in Forks might not be what they appear. Maybe they never were.
Canon through Eclipse and diverges from that point.
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 4521
[Report This] Published: January 04, 2010 Updated: January 13, 2010
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 One Shot
Boy, that was GOOD! You never know what you're going to get with a fan fic, but this one is very well-written and definitely left me longing for more. I would love to see this develop into a longer story, perhaps with Charlie being reunited with Bella. Author's Response: Thank you! Fanfic quality can vary greatly, especially for Twilight. I'm so glad you found this one enjoyable.
Fear not - this was only the beginning of Charlie's journey. A sequel is already in the works. I can't get into too much detail, but I hope it lives up to your expectations. Thank you so much for reviewing!!
Summary:
Jasper doesn't belong. He isn't like the others. He is a monster with no self-control. Or at least that's what he believes. He wants to leave to make an existence of his own, but a certain pixie-like vampire won't let him leave alone, if at all. A x J, One-Shot.
Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Alice, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 2553
[Report This] Published: January 04, 2010 Updated: January 13, 2010
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Inseparable, One Shot
Sweet! I love how Alice adores Jasper and sees past his struggles. That really is how true love works--we see the diamond instead of the lump of coal.
Summary: Eight years ago, Bella was the pudgy, geeky girl in high school who had a crush on her best friend's older brother. A few brief moments spent with Edward in the rare, Forks' sunlight sent Bella's hopes and dreams tumbling down.
Now, she must come face to face with the man who damaged her young and innocent heart so long ago. But, Bella is no longer that shy girl; she's beautiful. She's cunning. And, she's out for revenge.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 6522
[Report This] Published: January 04, 2010 Updated: January 04, 2010
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Masquerade
Excellent story! Definitely sexy but not smutty.
Summary: When an old friend of Rose's, Jasper's sister, returns to their lives a night of celebration and fun is due. But what happens when something other than the drinks is stirred? A one-shot for the For The Love of Jasper Contest.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 8490
[Report This] Published: January 04, 2010 Updated: January 14, 2010
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot (Phoenix Rising)
Oooh, I'd love to have me a Texas boy. Oh, wait. I do! :o)
Great beginning. I'm normally 1000% Team Edward, but it seems you have created a possible Bella/Jasper thing I could get behind.
Summary: Not everyone’s Christmas is full of twinkling lights and blissful happiness, but sometimes the season does bring out the extraordinary kindness in people. AH. Judge's Choice Winner for the "Broken Holiday Record Contest".
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 3580
[Report This] Published: January 04, 2010 Updated: January 14, 2010
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Date: January 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Oh my goodness. I almost stopped reading because I lost my sister on Christmas Day a few years back, and Christmas really is exactly as you wrote, "My only logical solution as to why I’m having such a hard time right now is that Christmas is a season, not just a day. It starts the day after its holiday predecessor and lasts until the New Year. There’s not just one day to get through. So it’s not just one day of the pitiful looks to endure. It’s not just one day of family avoiding topics that might set off the water works. It is days. It is weeks. And it is hard." It still is hard. However, you had Bella and the Cullens make the most of a terrible situation by giving of themselves to someone they might have chosen to hate. That was a great reminder of how we all should be, how my sister would have me remember her on Christmas: not with tears but with good works.
Excellent heartbreaking story. Author's Response: I'm so sorry for your loss. I hope that reading this didn't dredge up too many painful memories. Thanks for reading it and for your kind words. : )
Summary: A heartbroken medical intern takes a vacation with his father. When he returns, his life changes, thanks to a group of rambunctious friends and a love he never expected.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Word count: 1640
[Report This] Published: January 05, 2010 Updated: March 05, 2010
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: The Wild
Starting out with Carlisle having lost his wife (Esme, I presume) is risky since we all love them both, but I'm willing to go along for the ride. Your first chapter is very descriptive; it's easy to imagine where they are. I'll look forward to seeing where this goes. Author's Response: So I'm actually going to be strange here and play with it - Esme's still coming. Maybe that gives you a little hope. I won't lie, most of the story is going to revolve around Edward/Bella, but Carlisle and Esme will be an important part, promise. Thanks for your words!
Summary: 
Edward Cullen used to be invisible. But all of a sudden, after summer break, he's back and unrecognizable- gorgeous, confident and irresistable to any woman he looks at. As Bella Swan delves into what exactly changed Edward so drastically and investigates his power over the females of Forks, she begins to realize... she might not like the answers she gets. A fun, naughty little quasi-mystery.
Categories: AU, AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes
Word count: 44004
[Report This] Published: January 06, 2010 Updated: June 08, 2010
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: June 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Epilogue: And On.
Great, really, truly enjoyable story! Author's Response: THank you so much, I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
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