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Real name: Vickie
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Member Since: March 14, 2009
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Nothin much to tell.  Wife.  Mom.  Daughter. Teacher. Students.  Closet Twilight fan fiction addict who might actually leave her husband if Carlisle were real and single--even though he's a bit old for me.  I try not to date guys over 250, but for him I'd make an exception.


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Masquerade by sweek539 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

Eight years ago, Bella was the pudgy, geeky girl in high school who had a crush on her best friend's older brother. A few brief moments spent with Edward in the rare, Forks' sunlight sent Bella's hopes and dreams tumbling down.

Now, she must come face to face with the man who damaged her young and innocent heart so long ago. But, Bella is no longer that shy girl; she's beautiful. She's cunning. And, she's out for revenge.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6522
[Report This] Published: January 04, 2010 Updated: January 04, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Masquerade

Excellent story!  Definitely sexy but not smutty.

 
Summary:

When an old friend of Rose's, Jasper's sister, returns to their lives a night of celebration and fun is due. But what happens when something other than the drinks is stirred? A one-shot for the For The Love of Jasper Contest.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 8490
[Report This] Published: January 04, 2010 Updated: January 15, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot (Phoenix Rising)

Oooh, I'd love to have me a Texas boy.  Oh, wait.  I do!  :o)

Great beginning. I'm normally 1000% Team Edward, but it seems you have created a possible Bella/Jasper thing I could get behind.

 
Summary:

Not everyone’s Christmas is full of twinkling lights and blissful happiness, but sometimes the season does bring out the extraordinary kindness in people. AH. Judge's Choice Winner for the "Broken Holiday Record Contest".


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3580
[Report This] Published: January 05, 2010 Updated: January 15, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh my goodness.  I almost stopped reading because I lost my sister on Christmas Day a few years back, and Christmas really is exactly as you wrote, "My only logical solution as to why I’m having such a hard time right now is that Christmas is a season, not just a day.  It starts the day after its holiday predecessor and lasts until the New Year.  There’s not just one day to get through.  So it’s not just one day of the pitiful looks to endure.  It’s not just one day of family avoiding topics that might set off the water works.  It is days.  It is weeks.  And it is hard."  It still is hard.  However, you had Bella and the Cullens make the most of a terrible situation by giving of themselves to someone they might have chosen to hate.  That was a great reminder of how we all should be, how my sister would have me remember her on Christmas:  not with tears but with good works.

Excellent heartbreaking story.



Author's Response:

I'm so sorry for your loss.  I hope that reading this didn't dredge up too many painful memories.  Thanks for reading it and for your kind words.  : )

 
Crystal Hearts by madisonli Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

A heartbroken medical intern takes a vacation with his father. When he returns, his life changes, thanks to a group of rambunctious friends and a love he never expected.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 1640
[Report This] Published: January 05, 2010 Updated: March 05, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Wild

Starting out with Carlisle having lost his wife (Esme, I presume) is risky since we all love them both, but I'm willing to go along for the ride.  Your first chapter is very descriptive; it's easy to imagine where they are.  I'll look forward to seeing where this goes.



Author's Response:

So I'm actually going to be strange here and play with it - Esme's still coming. Maybe that gives you a little hope. I won't lie, most of the story is going to revolve around Edward/Bella, but Carlisle and Esme will be an important part, promise. Thanks for your words!

 
Legendary by nomdeplume Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 284]
Summary:

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Edward Cullen used to be invisible. But all of a sudden, after summer break, he's back and unrecognizable- gorgeous, confident and irresistable to any woman he looks at. As Bella Swan delves into what exactly changed Edward so drastically and investigates his power over the females of Forks, she begins to realize... she might not like the answers she gets.   A fun, naughty little quasi-mystery.

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Categories: AU, AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 44004
[Report This] Published: January 06, 2010 Updated: June 09, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: June 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Epilogue: And On.

Great, really, truly enjoyable story!



Author's Response:

THank you so much, I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

 
Summary:

Widowed mom Bella knows she needs to get some fun back in her life.  With the help of her best friends, she embarks on a plan to change.  What happens when the man she loved and lost 15 years ago becomes the object of that plan?  It may be Bella's second chance at love with Edward.  Human/AU


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: No Word count: 157187
[Report This] Published: January 06, 2010 Updated: October 08, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: October 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Nobody But You

Go, loud Esme!  I laughed out loud at that.  However, if I were married to Carlisle, I'm sure I'd be planty loud too. ;o)

 
Summary:

Bella saves science nerd, Edward, from Mike Newton, the school bully. Edward later rescues Bella from much bigger problems at home. Can these two troubled teens escape their problems and find love while riding in Edward’s fast car? AU/AH OOC.

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Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4209
[Report This] Published: January 13, 2010 Updated: January 24, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Fast Car--One Shot

Excellent story!  Not every one-shot can get into emotions, but yours did.  I was really touched.



Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. I tried to make this story complete in one chaoter. I like emotionallly charged stories, so that is what I tried to write. I am so glad that you enjoyed it.

 
Summary:

AU/AH Jacob kisses Bella, and she punches him for it.  This is how the aftermath might have gone down in an all-human world.  Maybe.  Or not, but it was fun regardless.

Edward/Bella pairing always.  But I actually tried to be nice to the pup.  Unfortunately, I failed.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Charlie, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2359
[Report This] Published: January 13, 2010 Updated: January 13, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Fight - One Shot

Good story!  I really liked how you too canon and made it human but still very believeable.  Carlisle and his comment about throwing some cold water on the boys reminded me of my husband and how he'd act if our son were in a fight--it made me smile.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  It was originally going to be canon - vamps, wolves, and humans, oh my, but then it morphed into AH.  I particularly enjoyed hearing Carlisle's and Charlie's voices in this story.  They surprised me, but in the best way.

I very much appreciate you taking the time to read and comment! :D

 
Summary:

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Esme Platt Evenson chose to end her own life after losing her son. Now stuck in what she believes to be Hell (what else would explain the fire?), she reflects on the loss of her son and an earlier loss as well.

But when she wakes to find an angel, she realises that maybe this isn't Hell after all.

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Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Carlisle, Edward, Esme
Challenges:
Series: The Stories Behind The Story
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1703
[Report This] Published: January 13, 2010 Updated: January 15, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Heaven or Hell?

I love Esme and Esme stories.  Yours was very believable, well-written, and true to canon.  I enjoyed it very much.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

 
Summary:

 

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Thanks to the talented falconcranelove for the amazing banner.

Abandoned by her father in a less than perfect psychiatric institution, Bella is barely hanging on. Spurred on by Alice's vision of the girl they're meant to help, the Cullen family begins to permeate Bella's life. Can they undo the damage and find what is lost?

 

Eventually ExB.  Dark.

 

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 18877
[Report This] Published: January 14, 2010 Updated: July 03, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I'm surprised at the intensity of this story and look forward to reading more. 

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh my goodness!  The imagery of the filthy glass in the recreation room is one of the most powerful I've read in a very long time.  Excellent writing!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Ah, Esme--the mother Bella always needed but never had.  Your story is so beautifully written that I can feel Bella's emotions.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I was looking at recently updated stories and found yours.  I am far too addicted to fan fiction for my own good, but I wanted something to read.  I was hesitant to begin because your summary stated that the story was dark, and I tend to go for more lighthearted ones.  However, I'm so glad I took that chance.  Your story is one of the best written ones I've found on any fan fiction site in my year+ of borderline obsessive reading. 

 
The Doll (one shot) by Bbuttis Rated: NC-17 starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

With their wedding date quickly approaching, Bella and Edward have been testing their boundaries. Despite all the progress they have made, Edward is still worried. Emmett, sensing his brother’s apprehension has presented a solution to help ease some of Edward’s “tension”.

How far is Edward willing to go to ensure that he’s ready for the main event?

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WARNING: This story contains adult themes including lemons and nudity. There might also be some bustle between a certain sentient creature and an inanimate object.


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3008
[Report This] Published: January 14, 2010 Updated: January 24, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Doll

Well, well.  Isn't Bella the creative one? I totally did not see the red panties thing coming.

Fun story!  Sexy and unique



Author's Response:

I must admit that WorldInMyEyes is responsible for both the warm lube and the moist panties... her idea bank is soooo vast :D

I'm happy that you liked the story, thanks for the review :)

 
Summary:

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Bella Swan becomes Bella Black and leaves Forks with Jacob to find their own slice of Heaven.  After Jacob’s death, Bella resigns herself to the fact that she has already had her one shot at the ‘happily ever after’ fairytale.  She throws herself into her writing and avoids Forks at all costs until the day when their son asks her if he can spend the summer with Charlie and Billy.  What decision will Bella make when she is presented with the opportunity of a second chance at the love of her life?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: No Word count: 151208
[Report This] Published: January 14, 2010 Updated: December 10, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - Bandages and Blue Jeans

I apologize for not stopping reading long enough to review, but I've been enjoying the story way too much even to pause for a second.  I'm very interesting in more background on what happened between Bella and Edward and where Edward is now.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and especially for the review.  I am glad that you are enjoying my little story.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 - Beauty Sleeps

I really love your strong, independent Bella!  It's just not logical that an adult Bella would fall right back into Edward's arms the second she laid eyes on him.  I mean, I'd fall right into his arms, but that's another story. ;o)



Author's Response:

Ok, here's a hint on the next chapter...Bella doesn't fall into Edward's arms...she kinda slowly scoots back into them...confused?  Good, now you will read the next chapter when it posts!  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. 

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: April 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 - Intertwined

Sleeping on the deck with Edward? Sweet!



Author's Response:

I loved writing this chapter and the next couple.  I have this horribly vicious sweet tooth that somehow manages to sneak it's way into the story.  Thanks so much for reading and for the review. 

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: November 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24 - First Love the Second Time Around

The wedding was perfect for this Bella and Edward--so sweet I got a little teary-eyed.



Author's Response:

Thanks Victoria! I had to write a simple wedding, full of meaning for Edward and understated for Bella. Only Alice would throw a huge bash for them but I told her no (lol). It just wasn't something I saw them having at this point in their lives. And thanks for reading my other stories too, I loved seeing your name come up under the reviews!

Mick

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 - Room Service

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and leaving me a review Victoria.  I appreciate it very much.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 - Out In The Open

I love the interaction between Jason and Edward.  It would be so easy for you to write them with animosity; this is more original and definitely more fun to read.



Author's Response:

lol, Thanks Victoria, I appreciate the fact that you like it and really like that you said fun...I try to make it a lighthearted easy to read fic...a happy little story.  Thanks again!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: October 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 - Strange Medicine

Twins!  How exciting!  I think Jason's reaction is very realistic. I know my son would have a jumping jerking fit if he found out I was pregnant--and I'm married to his dad.



Author's Response:

LMAO, thanks Victoria! I appreciate your faithful reviewing more than you think. But where are your name suggestions? i need names girl!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: June 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 - Homecoming

Playing the game based on Bella's books at the party was genius, and the, ahem, games in Edward's room were even more fun!



Author's Response:

Now I am blushing more than Bella would.  I just wanted something light...I honestly think Carlisle and Esme need more 'airtime'.  Their characters are often overlooked so I tend to write their reactions into the story more than I probably should.  But thanks so much for reading and leaving me a review - I appreciate it.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: October 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22 - Thanks For Giving

That chapter should have come with a tissue warning.  Grown men crying make me cry too!  I love that Bella and Billy made amends.



Author's Response:

I had three reviews tell me that they cried! I think that's a good thing...as twisted as that sounds. I did tear up when I was writing about Billy's reaction to losing Jacob and how Bella...well, I dont' want to ruin it for anyone else so I'll stop but thanks so much for reading and reviewing for me Victoria.

Mick

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: August 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18 - Decisions and Concessions

Tired all the time? Sex, but only once?  Could it be that Bella's got a bun in the oven? 

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Let's ask Lola shall we?  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: August 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 - Imprint

The whole imprint/impregnate thing was flippin' hilarious!

Are they all so clueless that they haven't figured out that Bella's stomach trouble isn't nerves?



Author's Response:

LMAO!  Sometimes these characters just dance around in my head (Emmett in particular does some pretty funky stuff).  I am sooo thrilled that someone picked up on the fun in that scene.  He can be so absent sometimes but he does make the scene seem more real for me.  I love the sarcasm between him and Bella.  I REALLY enjoyed writing that scene in particular and think abou tit quite a bit because I literally had it play out in my head as I was typing it out...I love when that happens.  GREAT BIG BESOS TO YOU!!!!  Thanks Victoria.  p.s. they'll figure out Bella's trouble soon enough, they are just all soo happy to be together that they are overlooking the obvious!

Mick

 




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