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Penname: VictoriaCullen [ Contact]
Real name: Vickie
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Member Since: March 14, 2009
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Nothin much to tell. Wife. Mom. Daughter. Teacher. Students. Closet Twilight fan fiction addict who might actually leave her husband if Carlisle were real and single--even though he's a bit old for me. I try not to date guys over 250, but for him I'd make an exception.
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Summary: It’s been months since Bella Swan showed up on the doorsteps of the Cullen home resembling little more than a broken doll. It’s taken her a long time to get to this point in her life; the point where she feels safe at night, where she feels loved and accepted. But her demons aren’t far beneath the surface. What will she do when life throws yet another challenge in her path and those demons come back to haunt her in the flesh? AH, AU, OOC.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: No
Word count: 87723
[Report This] Published: December 15, 2009 Updated: December 19, 2010
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Pudding Things
Love your story! I really like Jealousward.
One tiny thing: It's the B52s ;o) Author's Response: B52`s? As in the drink? I am confused. lol
I`m glad you`re liking it though!!! Let me know when you get caught up to the current chapter and I`ll give you the latest teaser...I don`t want to spoil anything for you though!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Opening Up
Such a sad chapter. The funeral scene brought me to tears.
Summary: 
One of the key events that creates the epic nature of the Edward/Bella love story is the moment that Bella’s scent first hits Edward, and Edward somehow resists.
But what if Edward’s self control had kicked in just a moment too late? What if his proximity to Bella once his conscience reawakened was just too much, and he couldn’t restrain himself. What if he bit her, and Bella had a new life forced on her, before she had any desire to live for an eternity?
Before she had experienced Forks High School, made friends, and re-connected with Jacob. Before she knew what Edward was. And most importantly, before they fell in love.
What would Twilight look like then?
This is the story of the seemingly insignificant moment that changed everything…
Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No
Word count: 74511
[Report This] Published: December 17, 2009 Updated: October 16, 2011
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 09, 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Phenomenon
Okay, I'm liking Edward a little bit more.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 09, 2011
Title: Chapter 8: Complications
Bella must be so conflicted by her feelings for Charlie as well as Edward. You're doing a great job with this story, and I'm not going to say anything about your update timeline. I'm just glad you're sharing your story. Author's Response: :-)
Thank you. Yes, Bella is very confused about her new life around Charlie. She wasn't really thinking clearly, having such an intimate coversation with James.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 09, 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Visitors
So, now James isn't just evil but is an evil pervert? Perfect! :o) Author's Response: Lol. Is it just me? In my head, James was evil in all possible ways.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 09, 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Confessions
Aww. Edward's so cute. I have to think the world would be a lot better off with a slightly larger dose of old-fashioned Edwardian values. Author's Response: I have to say I COMPLETELY agree with you.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 15, 2011
Title: Chapter 9: Interrogations
James is a creep and a pervert. You did a great job writing him that way. Author's Response: Yikes. I'm not sure if that was a compliment or not, lol, considering. But I agree that James is gross.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 26, 2011
Title: Chapter 14: The Hunt
Hmmm... Bella doesn't play. Exciting chapter.
Summary:
An outtake from ... Becomes the Swan. What would have happened had Bella read one final birthday card from Edward and acted? What would Edward do if Bella had just shown up at Med School and ended their separation? Well, here are your answers, wrapped in a blanket of lemony freshness.
Categories: AU-Human, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 11080
[Report This] Published: December 17, 2009 Updated: December 18, 2009
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: December 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
That was money VERY well spent--by Bella but definitely by Team Chubward! Man, I wish my husband was home about now. ;o) Author's Response: LOL! We hope your hubs reaped the benefits when he arrived!
Have a wonderful holiday!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Summary: Isabella Swan, chef/owner of the trendy Seattle restaurant La Bella, is the next target of a ruthless criminal known as "The Tracker." FBI Special Agent Edward Cullen is assigned to watch over her. As tensions run high between them, will they succumb to their deepest desires?
Rated for cheesy, citrusy goodness!
2nd Place Winner of the Bridal Style Anonymous Contest!
Thank you to Readergoof for the lovely banner!
Categories: AU-Human, Crackfic Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 4458
[Report This] Published: December 19, 2009 Updated: December 19, 2009
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: December 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot
That was FUNNY! I think you might have managed to get all the cliches in one chapter--well except for the apex of her thighs. I get tired of throbbing and pulsing and wet folds. I'd just as soon read touched her soggy hoo-hah.
Thanks! Author's Response: Your review made me laugh out loud! :-) Aww, I missed "apex?" I guess I got lost in my sea of cliches, haha. And even worse than "wet folds?" "Slick folds." Like Bella's some kind of slip 'n slide, lol! Thanks for the awesome review.
xoxo Sarah
Summary: From Midnight Sun- "Rosalie and I had never had an easy relationship- I'd offended her from the very first time she heard me speak, and it was downhill from there..." pg 117
After all the years of animosity between Edward and Rosalie, Bella finally breaks down and asks what caused the original dislike between the two, remembering that Edward had once mentioned how he had "insulted her from the first words she'd heard him say." Carlisle, seeing that neither Rosalie nor Edward are willing to respond, decides to let Renesmee, Bella, and everyone else in the family hear the story of the day Edward and Rosalie first met. The words which caused their first disagreement are perhaps not the words one might expect.
Categories: Pre-Twilight, Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Nessie, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 2061
[Report This] Published: December 20, 2009 Updated: December 28, 2009
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: December 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - ONESHOT
Too funny! Only a man would think there's nothing wrong with saying "you look terrible."
Summary: Childhood pipe-dreams & promises... When Bella's Mother relocates them away from her best friend, her heart is left hanging by a thread. 16 Years later when fate steps in, will the world famous, Teddy Masen remember where his heart belongs?
A romantic love story, with a few laughs and zesty lemons thrown in for good measure!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No
Word count: 57825
[Report This] Published: December 22, 2009 Updated: March 23, 2010
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1
Awwww, they ARE sweet--at least now. Looking forward to more. :o)
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3
I was wondering how Bella would react--passing out is very much in character. Cute chapter!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE
Sweet beginning. I look forward to more.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2
Poor Bella having to leave like that. I can't wait to see what happens when "Teddy" meets Bella.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Aw, Edward's so sweet. I look forward to the dinner!!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5
I'm thinking Tanya should get hit by a bus--or a limo.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 31, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
I never would have thought about her dropping her ribbon/rag and Edward finding it.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
"Teddy's" note to "Kate" was so sweet. Looking forward to them reconnecting..
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Very sentimental chapter. I love the way they're reconnecting.
Summary:
Edward and Bella are recently married, and it's time for him to live up to his promise and change her. However, what would happen if his venom had a slightly different effect on her? How will Edward handle Bella in the throes of the most powerful aphrodisiac in the world? (EPOV, Written for The Fandom Gives Back Auction)
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 12674
[Report This] Published: December 23, 2009 Updated: December 23, 2009
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: December 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: (One Shot)
She DEFINITELY got her money's worth! I think I need to get off the computer and go find my husband. ;o) Author's Response: Yay! I'm always happy to inspire husband attacks!
Summary: 
Won second place in the Novel Novice Twilight November-December Fanfiction Challenge!
Loosely modeled after O. Henry's story "The Gift of the Magi." Four years later, and with a four-hour drive between the families, Bella and Edward have to decide where to spend Christmas. But right and wrong aren't always black and white, and sometimes the most foolish mistakes are made by those too caught up in doing the right thing. Oneshot.
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Charlie, Edward, Jacob, Renesmee
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 5121
[Report This] Published: December 23, 2009 Updated: December 28, 2009
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: December 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: The Wise of These Days
Sweet story! I saw the ending coming, of course, but it didn't take away from the story one bit. Author's Response: Many a story/show episode/play has taken a leaf from O. Henry. :o) What I could never understand about that story was that while Della's hair would grow back, Jim's watch was gone forever. So it wasn't exactly an even sacrifice. Ah, well. I'm happy to hear you enjoyed some Christmas fluff; thanks for reviewing!
Summary: Shy researcher Bella Swan is coerced by her best friend Jacob Black to spend a night in a gay bar checking out the new piano player, Edward Cullen. Can Bella find the way to Edward's heart by bringing him a tasty apple pie?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Athenodora, Didyme, Jackson Rathbone
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 10965
[Report This] Published: December 24, 2009 Updated: December 27, 2009
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: December 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: PIANO MAN
Oh my! I think I need to get up and make an apple pie. Right. Now. Delicious story. Author's Response: Thank you, Victoria! I hope you have an Edward to feed your apple pie to! So glad you felt it was a fun story!!
Summary: 
Entry for the Bridal Style smut-shot contest. Bella wants to spice up her sex life. When one of her fantasies is fulfilled, will it be all that she imagined or more than she bargained for? AU/AH, OOC. Rated NC-17 for language/lemons.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 4875
[Report This] Published: December 25, 2009 Updated: January 02, 2010
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Illicit Behavior
Dh will thank you later--he just won't know why. ;o) Author's Response: LOL... Thanks! Yeah, my hubby has no real reason for my...aggression... lately either. LOL :)
Summary: While enjoying a family bonfire, Bella treats Edward to a leather wrapped surprise. A one-shot written for my awesome beta for the Support Stacie Auction. I do not own Twilight.
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Renesmee
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 4728
[Report This] Published: December 26, 2009 Updated: January 06, 2010
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I wanna buy a motorcycle!
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