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Penname: VictoriaCullen [ Contact]
Real name: Vickie
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Member Since: March 14, 2009
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Nothin much to tell. Wife. Mom. Daughter. Teacher. Students. Closet Twilight fan fiction addict who might actually leave her husband if Carlisle were real and single--even though he's a bit old for me. I try not to date guys over 250, but for him I'd make an exception.
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Summary: 
Bella is a family attorney & Edward seeks her help. Friendship abounds, maybe more? AH, AU, OOC,
Rated M for later, they are adults & will do adult things!
Canon Couples
My BFF is Twitter: Mrs_Robward
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character
Challenges: Series: Always Human
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes
Word count: 92216
[Report This] Published: October 31, 2009 Updated: December 27, 2010
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 31, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15, Peepholes
I think the way you've portrayed Edward's recovery--it feels real. I love your story and will miss it when it's finished.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: April 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16, Happily Ever Now
I'm crying here. I have loved every word of this story!
Summary:
Banner by RachelxMichelle!
A winner in the Sort of Beautiful Challenge, this is a story about unconditional love.
Jacob and Bella have been married for forty years when the Cullens ask to visit for what is possibly the last time.
A warning: I've been told that this one-shot should come with a "bring your own Kleenex (tm) tissues" note.
Official Disclaimer: All trademarked characters and situations, familiar quotes and lamentations are the intellectual property of Stephenie Meyer. I have just enjoyed obsessing...
Categories: AU Characters: Jacob
Challenges: Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 5102
[Report This] Published: November 02, 2009 Updated: November 03, 2009
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: November 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Do you remember?
That really was Kleenex-worthy, but it was very beautifully written. Author's Response: Greetings, VictoriaCullen ~
Thank you! I'm glad I put the warning on this time. *wry smile* I feel everyone was warned.
Thank you for reading and reviewing this. I appreciate it!
~LJ
Summary:
***BANNER BY MsTwiSwe***
****NOW COMPLETE****
Bella Swan is a second year law school student. She goes on an interview that she feels pressured into by her law school advisor, Carlisle Cullen. Who she meets at the interview throws her perfectly orchestrated world completely off balance.
What happens when you think you know exactly what you want and life throws you a curve ball??
AH/AU, OOC, Canon Couples. Lots of Lemons and a description of violence. Nothing too dark, though. The real world is hard enough!!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
Word count: 148187
[Report This] Published: November 09, 2009 Updated: May 03, 2010
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Sunday Morning
I knew Mike drugged Bella! Slimeball. I think the pro bono work is a great idea.
Your story rocks!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 17, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Worlds Collide
I'm glad you didn't let this die. I should (note the word should) be writing an analysis of situation-specific schema and education, but reading your story is much more fun! After you finished Gateway to the Heart, I had to look for more of your stories. My GPA may suffer, but I'm having a fabulous time!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Worlds Collide
Please don't die! I can't say I'm in love--I don't know your story that well quite yet--but I'm definitely in like. :o)
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Obsession
Poor, tortured Edward--not exactly thinking with the big head, is he? ;o)
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Getting to Know You
Great twist on canon pairings. I'm really enjoying your story and dare say I might just be falling in love. :o)
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Crazy for You
YAY that Edward decided to man up to Angela! I like your style of writing--the chapters flow so well that they seem short, even though they're not.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 -- I'm Yours
Mike is a disease too, but Edward's a prince. Sort of a reformed-man-whore prince, but a prince just the same.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Fix You
I love the direction you're going and look forward to reading more. One thing though--maybe I'm old, but do women these days just talk about their sexual experience with a guy they haven't even kissed?
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - They Bring Me To You
YAY for Rachel for doing the right thing, even if she's not crazy about Bella. I loved that you wrote it that way. When I read that another summer was going to be there, I was afraid it was Rachel and that she'd say something to defame Bella. I'm happy she was adult about it.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Hanging by a Moment
Biting Edward's tushy...now that's a mental picture I'll keep with me the rest of the night.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - No Air
I think Edward needs to change the locks--just in case!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Please Don't Leave Me
Whew! That was big. Bravo to Bella for standing up to the heifers.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Here Without You
Rosalie had some great insights on the rough sex. Angry sex is okay if everybody's on board with it, but if it's just one of them taking it out on the other, it's not so cool.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Empire State of Mind
I gotta buy me a trench coat!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - You and Me
Yay for Edward! I really appreciated the whatever-it's-called agreement that allows Bella and Edward to be open about their relationship.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Afternoon Delight (born2speakmirth)
I'd rather have Edward wash MY car--wet and slick and shiny. Ahhhh
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: April 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - All I Want for Christmas is You
Fun reveal chapter. I can't imagine that my inlaws would have been as gracious and happy as Carlisle and Esme, but they aren't as hot as Carlisle and Esme either. :o)
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Make This Go On Forever
Tidy, happy ending. I like those.
Summary: 
Bella has spent her life abused and betrayed. Now she feels nothing. When she meets the new boy in school she starts to feel again. But is the pain worth the possibility of something better? NC-17 for violence, language, possible lemons in later chapters.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Jessica, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: No
Word count: 99840
[Report This] Published: November 10, 2009 Updated: March 25, 2013
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: December 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
I don't know anyone so I don't do the forum thing, but I wanted to tell you I'm loving your story. Jessica's POV was so tender and sweet. I've always liked canon Jessica despite her shallowness, but your Jessica was what a true friend should be. She can't interfere for fear that Bella's life will be worse, but she does all she can. Author's Response: It's ok, no one else seems to do the forum thing either, at least not for this story. Oh, well, I'll just keep putting out chapters instead! Thanks so much for the review.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: April 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Boy, that was hard. The Cullens will figure it out soon--won't they? Author's Response: Oh yeah, it's coming. Thanks.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: June 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
I think you chose correctly when you had Carlisle step in with Charlie. He had the justification as a doctor as well as the motivation as a father. Besides, Carlisle is hot, and protective dad Carlisle is even hotter. Author's Response: Don't I know it. I think something must be wrong with me, but I never found him hotter than when I pictured him staring down Charlie. Thanks for the review.
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