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Penname: VictoriaCullen [ Contact]
Real name: Vickie
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Member Since: March 14, 2009
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Nothin much to tell. Wife. Mom. Daughter. Teacher. Students. Closet Twilight fan fiction addict who might actually leave her husband if Carlisle were real and single--even though he's a bit old for me. I try not to date guys over 250, but for him I'd make an exception.
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Summary: Bella meets Edward in the ER. One funny internal monologue later and she's reduced to a bumbling baboon who's panties are drenched. Her life turns for the better, but can a random chance turn it gruesomely wrong?
(AU-AH, OOC for Bella’s vocabulary)
Rated NC-17 for language, mature sexual content, and later violence.
On temporary hiatus. 12/19/11
  Thanks to Sarah_Elizabeth for the artwork!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, James, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No
Word count: 100289
[Report This] Published: September 24, 2009 Updated: January 19, 2011
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: October 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: A Day In The Life Of...
I'm really enjoying the story so far and can't wait to get into the action more. Author's Response: Thanks! It means so much to me that you're liking this! Things will start to happen more frequently, I promise! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: October 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Concentration
What a lovely coincidence that Alice is moving in right across the way. ;o) Cute story. It's a tiny bit slow with the work part, but maybe that's because I know there's got to be an "Edward" part coming up! Author's Response: I hated writing the work part, but I had to show Bella and how miserable she is there. That way she can make the necessary changes to her life and realize how much better it is! And believe me, Edward's on the way! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Teasers for chapter 5 are up on the thread!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: In Which We Meet the Devil (She Has Sparkly Shoes)
Can't Tanya just get in her car and keep on driving? Please.
I'm looking forward to more! Author's Response: Lol! She may not know how to drive an actual car. More is on the way, thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Oh, No He Di'int!
Happy Birthday! Mine's Saturday, so I'm hoping for lots of happy birthday times for both of us. :o)
Fun chapter! I think TipsyBella's funny. Author's Response: Happy Birthday to you too!! I hope you have a fun time on Saturday. I love writing TipsyBella, her verbal filtar almost goes straight out the window. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Let Go, I've Had Enough
Poor Sadward.
Great twists in the story. I look forward to more. Author's Response: Yes, poor Sadward indeed! I'm so glad you liked it! More is on the way! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Sexual Attraction
The saltine thing was FUN-NEE! Poor frustrated Bella. Author's Response: Lol, that's how it happens though! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Lost and Found
I think quicker updates are better than longer chapters. It's like eating five little meals a day rather than two huge feasts. Just my humble opinion. :o)
I'm so glad Edward came back! Author's Response: Thanks for your input! I will definitely keep that in mind ;) Yay for Edward!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: A Kink In The Plans
I hope Bella's excellent birthday goes on for a very long time! Author's Response: Lol! In all actuality, Bella's birthday was only supposed to be one chapter. I didn't know it was going to be so freaking long! Thanks for reading and reviewing, sweets!
Summary: Written for the Darkward Contest. Set in the early 1920’s. Edward
is a young vampire trying to find his purpose. In an attempt to find his way,
he joins Chicago's most notorious gang: The Chicago Outfit. Rated M for
Violence and Lemon's
Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 16213
[Report This] Published: September 25, 2009 Updated: October 15, 2009
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: October 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Rebirth
Fabulous story! It kept true to the characters but was truly original. I enjoyed it immensely. Author's Response: Thank you so much~ :) I'm glad you enjoyed it! xoxo!
Summary: 
Bella Swan's family is not your everyday Brady Bunch, they are quite the opposite.
When her life begins to spiral out of control, Bella begins to confide in things that will make her pain disappear, if only for a little while.
Who will she turn to for help?
Who will save her, from not only the ones who harm her, but from herself.
She is about to have the fight of her life.
THIS STORY CONTAINS PHYSICAL AND EMOTIONAL ABUSE. ALSO, DRUGS AND UNDERAGE DRINKING. IF YOU ARE SENSITIVE TO ANY OF THESE THINGS, PLEASE DO NOT READ THIS STORY!!!!!!
AU-Human, OOC, canon pairings. Rated for everything stated above.
Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No
Word count: 26098
[Report This] Published: October 02, 2009 Updated: February 06, 2010
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Breaking
Poor Bella. This is kind of hard to read because it's so sad, but I'm holding on because I'm hoping it gets happier.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Ring Ring. Who is it?
Renee? WTH?
I don't normally read bad-Charlie stories because I love me some Charlie, but yours is very good.
Summary: 
Rosalie learns the fate of her parents' estate & decides to visit her childhood home. To her displeasure, Bella follows. Bella learns about Rose's past, but what does Rose take back from this journey? My one-shot attempt to understand what makes Roselie 'tick' and winner of the RosaBella challenge.
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 3572
[Report This] Published: October 02, 2009 Updated: October 25, 2009
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: October 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Home
I love the opportunity to get a clearer picture of Rosalie. I think she's misunderstood. Wonderfully written and truly touching. Author's Response: Thank you so much -- your time and comment are appreciated!!
Summary: A peak into Sue Clearwater's mind during the events of Breaking Dawn, and how she ended up with Charlie instead of Billy. Written for Ninapolitan's D.I.L.F. contest. Canon. Sue/Billy, Sue/Charlie.
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Billy, Charlie, Seth
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 6758
[Report This] Published: October 02, 2009 Updated: October 03, 2009
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: October 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
That Sue gets around, doesn't she? LOL
Actually, I found myself enjoying your story of intensely humans drawn against their will into a bizarre supernatual world. Keep it up! Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Hehe. Sue, like Billy and Charlie, had a lot to deal with. I thought i'd give her some sweet loving! Besides, I do adore Charlie. Thank you again.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: October 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Love this! I'm closer to Charlie's age than Edward's, and I really like that you made Sue and Charlie (and Billy too) sensual people.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: October 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Love this! I'm closer to Charlie's age than Edward's, and I really like that you made Sue and Charlie (and Billy too) sensual people. Author's Response: Why thank you. :) Yea, I don't figure that you lose your sense of senxuality and pleasure when you get older (I plan on keeping it all my life!). And Charlie in particular seemed to always have a very sensual nature. I mean, you figure he had to have a soft spot to have married Renee so young, right?
Summary: 
Bella is a successful airline pilot with a handsome boyfriend. Things aren’t always as great as they appear. A mysterious stranger and a flight that goes awry changes everything. Will she live to reclaim her once stable life or will she lose everything in the process?
Eventual canon pairings.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: No
Word count: 138138
[Report This] Published: October 03, 2009 Updated: June 08, 2011
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: September 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
I just discovered your story and read the whole thing in one sitting. Great plot twists--and I love fiesty Bella. I'm looking forward to more. Author's Response: Welcome aboard. Hope you continue to enjoy my story.
Summary: AU/AH. What would have happened if there had been no supernatural forces at work in Forks? Bella Swan moves to the tiny Washington town to live with her father. There she meets Edward Cullen and they fall in love. Their relationship is cut short when Edward moves from Forks, but he is leaving behind more than he knows... Will they ever see each other again?
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes
Word count: 167647
[Report This] Published: October 04, 2009 Updated: March 22, 2010
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: 11 - Falling Stars
I knew it was coming, but I didn't want it to. Please update soon so I can stop chewing my nails.
Well-written, realistic chapter.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: 12 - Broken
I know it's for the story, but Edward not telling her was a jerky thing to do. Great chapter!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: 13 - Nightmares and Tests
I love Charlie. I've always loved Charlie, but I love your Charlie even more for being there for Bella. Great chapter.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: 15 - Gossip and Butterflies
I love the interaction with Renee, Charlie, and Bella. They're supprtive even though I'm sure they're disappointed.
High school kids can be so awful. Perhaps Jessica could get hit in the nose with a volleyball. I'd appreciate that. :o)
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: 16 - Pink or Blue
I think Lily's a great name. Renesmee's just too weird.
I like the character development in your story and the friendship between Angela and Bella. Great chapter!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: 18 - New Beginnings
Bella's interaction with Lily is so sweet.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 19: 19 - New Experienced and Old Friends
I figured they'd meet up again, but I didn't expect Alice to be Lily's teacher. Great twist.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: 20 - Confrontations and Explanations
Oooh, boy! I can't wait until Saturday!!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 21: 21 - Revelations
Wrong move, Edward! He seriously deserves to get the sh*t slapped out of him--shocked or not.
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