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Penname: VictoriaCullen [ Contact]
Real name: Vickie
Status: Member
Member Since: March 14, 2009
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Nothin much to tell. Wife. Mom. Daughter. Teacher. Students. Closet Twilight fan fiction addict who might actually leave her husband if Carlisle were real and single--even though he's a bit old for me. I try not to date guys over 250, but for him I'd make an exception.
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Summary: Edward Masen is a former NFL football player who was injured and could not return to playing. After taking some time off to figure out what he wanted to do with his life, since playing football was out of the question, he decided to go with coaching high school football. He leads a simple, quiet life with his friends in Forks until he meets the woman that will change his life forever. Bella Swan decides to move back home with her younger brother when she gets a teaching position at her old school in Forks. AH/Canon Couples/alternating between Edward and Bella POV. Rated M ;)
Huge thanks to Jessica1971 for being my beta once again. I could not do this without her. :)
Disclaimer: SM owns Twilight.
Thank you to Heatherdawnc for making another terrific banner for me. =)
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie, Seth
Challenges: Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes
Word count: 170353
[Report This] Published: August 09, 2009 Updated: March 02, 2010
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: December 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 29: Broken
Excellent chapter--great twists but still in character.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: September 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Scary Movies and A Jealous Teenager
Wow! Fabulous chapter
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: October 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: The Skank and the Biker Babe
Sexual tension much? It's killing me!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: October 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Dancing, Drinking and Decisions
Oh, my! I think I love Drunkward.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: October 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Hangover Kiss and Another Sleepover
I just love your Sweetward! I have to admit I'm a little impatient for them to confess their feelings for each other, but I can wait. :o)
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed 
Date: October 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: A Rainy Kiss
ARGH! They need to grow a set and get on with it!
Excellent writing--boring stories don't get me this riled up. :o)
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: December 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 30: Moving On
I'm glad to see things coming together for Bella and Edward, and I love Bella's interaction with Esme and Liz. Great job!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 33: A Lot of Snow and a Pretty Ring
SO sweet! I love the proposal "written" in the snow.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 34: Another Big Step
Perfect idea for a wedding!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 35: Texas Sunsets
Sweetly emotional. I admit to being a little teary-eyed while reading, and I am not an easy weeper. The wedding was perfect for your Bella and Edward. The only bad thing is that I'm craving wedding cake at 7:30 in the morning. :o)
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 36: Going Home
Perfect ending! I've enjoyed the whole story. Every plot turn advanced the story without going off on a tangeant. Well-crafted and heartwarming!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 37: Epilogue
I think the ending was perfect--sweet but not syrupy. I'm so glad I found your story.
Summary:  A story about love, about death, about keeping secrets, and dealing with the consequences. Bella and Edward meet at a hospital when she is diagnosed with a life threatening disease and he is recovering from knee surgery. She confides her fears to him; he changes his life because of her. This is a story about their journey through the confusion, awkwardness, pain, and beauty of first love.
Excerpt from Chapter 2:
“What are you most afraid of?” Edward asks one last question.
“I'm not afraid of dying,” I answer truthfully.
“You're not afraid of dying?” he repeats, incredulous.
“No. There's so much more. I'm afraid of losing my hair but that's not my biggest fear. I'm afraid of leaving my mom and dad all alone. I'm afraid that if I survive, I'll never have children of my own.” I yawn again. Edward is quiet and I think for a moment that he's fallen asleep. “Edward,” I whisper, in case he is asleep, “What are you most afraid of?”
“I'm afraid I'm falling for you,” he whispers back so softly that I'm unsure if I've heard him correctly.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes
Word count: 82940
[Report This] Published: August 09, 2009 Updated: October 03, 2011
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 31, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Matters of the Heart
Good luck with the new baby!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Somewhere Over the Rainbow
I do believe in Heaven. I know there's a God; He wouldn't let us love one another so much for this to be the end. When my sister passed away, I could feel her spirit near me, and I know she'll be waiting for me when I die.
Beautiful, heartbreaking chapter.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: September 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Time Passes
Beautiful, heartfelt chapter. Your story is so moving. Author's Response: Thank you, and thank you for reviewing! I was hoping that the somber and melancholy feelings would seep through.
-Melanie
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Falling Snow
Oh, I hope Jasper's okay. I've missed your story and was very excited to see an update. Hope all is well with you. Author's Response: Thanks for sticking with me despite the update delays! Jasper's side story will come up more in later chapters.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Illumination
I don't know why he wouldn't tell her. Silly boy.
Great chapter!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: September 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Luminescence
Congratulations on the new baby--and the fabulous chapter. You've been missed. :o) Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words. I'm very happy to be back! The next chapter's almost done.
-melanie
Summary:  ATO for short. This is an alternate New Moon. Edward and the Cullens are gone. A vindictive Victoria takes away all that Bella has left, including her humanity. Bella must leave Forks, but where can she go when she has no one left? All vampire. EdwardxBella
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Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: No
Word count: 134491
[Report This] Published: August 10, 2009 Updated: January 08, 2011
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: September 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue & Chp 1: The Beginning of the End
You're wrong--it already IS good! I can't wait for more.
Summary: 
Because of him she understands emotions and because of her he knows joy. Alice and Jasper, one-shot.
Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Alice, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 1869
[Report This] Published: August 11, 2009 Updated: September 05, 2009
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: September 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Great story! I loved the bond you described between Alice and Jasper. So sweet.
Summary: A tragic accident and failed relationships. An absent father and overbearing parents. The desperate need to move on and a new beginning. Can they put each other back together or will they destroy themselves trying?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No
Word count: 100930
[Report This] Published: August 11, 2009 Updated: October 05, 2009
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: September 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9
I should have reviewed eariler chapters, but I couldn't stop reading long enough to do it. I'm still trying to figure out what happened to Bella to make her like this, but I think it has something to do with Mike Newton. I can't wait to find out.
Great story!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: September 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10
I can't wait for the big reveal! Your story is awesome.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: September 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11
Poor Edward. Great chapter, as always.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: September 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12
I enjoyed the growing connection between Bella and Edward. Great chapter!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: September 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14
I just love Dr. Sweetward. You write him and Bella so well.
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