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Penname: VictoriaCullen [ Contact]
Real name: Vickie
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Member Since: March 14, 2009
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Nothin much to tell. Wife. Mom. Daughter. Teacher. Students. Closet Twilight fan fiction addict who might actually leave her husband if Carlisle were real and single--even though he's a bit old for me. I try not to date guys over 250, but for him I'd make an exception.
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Summary: 
Bella Swan had big dreams. You know what they say, the bigger they are the harder they fall. When her life takes a sad turn she is forced to do whatever she can just to keep her head above water. Edward Cullen's life is perfect. Well, almost. Perhaps these two can help each other out in an unorthodox way.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 54 Completed: No
Word count: 326924
[Report This] Published: July 07, 2009 Updated: May 24, 2011
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Let's Get it Started
Don't beg--I'm reviewing!
Your story is original and very well-written. I like it a lot! Author's Response: I bet. A lot. I'm needy that way. You'll see!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: On Your Mark
Bella and Mrs. Cope are so sneaky setting Ben and Angela up for lunch together.
What a fun chapter. Author's Response: I try to put a little fun into each chapter -- well, until you start getting into the late teens. Less fun, more wanting to kick someone's butt, but you'll understand why when you're there!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Get Set
Oh, to be treated like a princess! I love the glamour Bella gets to experience in her otherwise ordinary, totally like mine, existence.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Go
I love the First title you gave Emmett and Edward's grandpa. SO original and cute.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Workin' 9 to 5
I'm glad Edward's starting to really see Bella and she him. I can tell delicious times are coming up. YAY! Author's Response: You are so right!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Dinner for Five
EW! Jenks is just vile.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: The Gala
You had Bella and Edward doing absolutely nothing naughty or inappropriate, but somehow I feel like I need a cold shower. <le sigh>
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Riley & Angela
This isn't strictly about your story, but I'm in lust with the blue ballet flat! So adorable!! The story's fabulous, of course, but I just had to comment on the shoes.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 26, 2011
Title: Chapter 48: Viva Las Vegas
LOL on the Donny and Marie reference! I love them! I also love the sneaky-smart way Emmett and Rosalie are getting Bella and Edward together.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 26: Thank you for Tonight
Bella handled that like a champ! Great chapter. Author's Response: Right? Go Bella! :)
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: August 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 37: Advent and Events
LOVED Alice and Jasper's wedding! It was perfect for them.
Is it hateful of me to say JJ got what he deserved?
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 27: The Highest Highs and the Lowest Lows
What happened with Jessica? I'm dying to know!
You're doing a great job with this story!! Author's Response: You will find out soon!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: April 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 28: What Jessica Did
LOL at the grammar PSA! I'm a bit of a grammar geek myself, so I agree totally.
Poor, stupid Edward. Author's Response: :) The grammar PSA was a huge hit. I'll let Lisa know you agree.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: April 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 29: Killer
Go Bella! I hope she and Drunkandhornyward settle their differences soon. Author's Response: I note you have no beef with Drunkandhornyward, you just hope they're all happy happy soon. :) Me, too!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 32: It Doesn't Mean Anything
Great chapter! Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 08, 2011
Title: Chapter 46: Interlude
I need a Riley! Author's Response: me too!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: June 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 33: Giving Thanks
I love how EVERYBODY can see the way they really feel about each other but them. Author's Response: Yeah, that won't be changing for awhile, but everybody is going to become more vocal about it. Soon.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: June 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 34: Moving Day
Edward's getting it, but Bella still seems oblivious. Great chapter! Author's Response: Bella's obliviousness is coming to an end.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: July 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 35: Exposed
Great chapter! I didn't want it to end. Update soon, please--I can't wait.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: August 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 36: Dinner Plans
I loved the dinner with Rose and Emmett! I always do a happy dance when I see an update. :o)
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: October 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 40: Spring Celebrations
Yay Angela for letting Edward have it! 'Bout time somebody did.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: December 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 42: Down to Business
I'd share my cookies with Edward any day. ;o)
Love this story!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: December 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 43: Plans
I'm always excited to get an alert for a new chapter, and this one certainly didn't disappoint. I'm pretty sure it's about to hit the fan on Friday.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: December 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 44: The Smelly Brown Stuff Meets the Whirling Blades
Oooh, and it hit big time, didn't it? Awesome chapter!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 25, 2011
Title: Chapter 47: Vegas, Baby!
I was starting to think Rosalie'd put her bitch hat on before she left for Vegas. Now I understand. Clever!
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