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Penname: VictoriaCullen [ Contact]
Real name: Vickie
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Member Since: March 14, 2009
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Nothin much to tell. Wife. Mom. Daughter. Teacher. Students. Closet Twilight fan fiction addict who might actually leave her husband if Carlisle were real and single--even though he's a bit old for me. I try not to date guys over 250, but for him I'd make an exception.
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Summary: Bella takes a trip to Vegas with her roommates Alice and Rosalie. After one wild night, Bella's life is turned upside down. A marriage certificate, a pregnancy, and a best friend in ICU send Bella and her friends into a whirlwind of emotions. Canon pairings and future LEMONS!
Much thanks to readergoof and annamorphos (respectively) for the awesome banners! Also, to Project Team Beta for taking this story on! You all are the best!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: Always Human
Chapters: 32 Completed: No
Word count: 206944
[Report This] Published: June 12, 2009 Updated: December 01, 2011
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: November 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Honest
Dang it, I missed being the 1000th! I'm not ready for another lemon yet, because I don't think B & E are.
I squee and do the happy dance when I get an update. I had a great reason to do the happy dance with this chapter. It was awesome! Author's Response: Yeah, that 1000th came quick. I was already close. Sorry :(
I don't think they are ready for it either, but I'm not sure either one of them can stop it either. That connection is just too strong. We'll see.
So glad you liked the chapter.
Much love,
Jen
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: November 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Reveal
Don't taunt us, woman! Post!! I cannot wait for exuberant Grandma-to-be Esme. Author's Response: Sorry... It's written. Shouldn't be too long!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: December 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 I Want This
It's your birthday, and you gave US a present? That's all kinds of messed up. :o) I'm glad, though, because I loved this chapter. I love that you're breaking down the walls between Dadward and Bellamomma. Author's Response: Ah, but see the reward is for me. The reviews are my gift. I love them all!
So glad you love it and thanks so much for always reviewing!
**hugs**
Jen
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 31, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Soured Lemons
Hurry out of the storm shelter and write, girl! I love this story and missed it like crazy. Author's Response: I think I'll just write in the storm shelter. It's dangerous out here for someone who thought that cliffy was a good idea...
Really, you all are so supportive. Thank you, and I'll do my best to be quick!
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: August 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Busted
The first rule of sex if anybody else MIGHT be in the house is lock the door. See what happens when you don't? :o)
Funny, funny stuff!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: November 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 Welcome to New York
Great update. Short but sweet and definitely worth the wait!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 19, 2011
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Traditions
Loved Big Daddy C!
Summary: 
Lt. Edward Platt, a German soldier, has been assigned to the Auschwitz Prison Camp. He learns much more than the horrors of war and falls for a beautiful Jewish girl named Bella. Can Edward save Bella before they both become ashes in the sky?
Rated NC-17, AU/AU, Romance/Angst, Historical, OOC, ExB, HEA
ALL MUST READ:
This story has a backdrop of WWII and the Holocaust. It is a love story between a German soldier and a Jewish prisoner of war. I am Jewish so this setting is something that is a part of my family's history. I would never disrespect the Jewish culture and history nor my family's history.
There's no rape, coercion, etc, of any kind in this story. There is a scene with dominance, but not rape. Rape is a serious crime that should never, ever be confused with dominance. Never at any point in this story, does Edward use his position to force Bella to have sex with him. Bella gives her consent freely and truly wants to love Edward and have him love her in return. Again, it is a love story.
If anything about this story confuses or bothers anyone for any reason, please contact me or visit the thread: http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=4718. There is no need for harassment, insults or general bashing. I will not hide nor take down any stories solely because some people have chosen to make false accusations that are both hurtful and disrespectful to all those involved. This story is my gift to those who have been following my writing. I am leaving this story up for those who have read and appreciated it. If you don't like this story, then please simply don't read it.
Thank you very much for taking the time to read this note and thank you for reading Ashes in the Sky. I sincerely appreciate those who see the beauty I put into the story.
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 7932
[Report This] Published: June 15, 2009 Updated: June 20, 2009
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: July 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Ashes in the Sky
Beautifully written and heart-wrenching.
Summary: 
THIS STORY HAS BEEN PUT ON HIATUS. At least until september-october 2010. I am getting married in august and it's hard to plan a wedding and write at the same time. I applaud those who can do that. I am NOT giving up on this story and I WILL finish it. Eventually. Thanks for understanding.
After Edward left in New Moon, Bella changed. She changed everything about herself in hopes of forgetting him. She graduated and moved down to California. The one place she knew she would never see the Cullens. 4 years later, she is now known as Elle Swan, a successful interior designer. What happens when she is sent somewhere else for her job?
Thank you to heatherdawnc for the banner!
Favorite review so far:
Ahh... so good!! A perfect mix with fluff and reality, you're soo good at writing that I gets envious *envious sigh*.
Have I told you how good this story and idea really is. There are many different stories where Bella changes her personality drastically after Edward left. And of all those stories I have been reading I think you are the one that has captured Bella's personalty best. Many of the stories have changed Bella that much that if she wasn't namned Bella you shouldn't know it was her, but you, even if you see the big changes, you can find the Bella how she was shy, sweet and madly in love with Edward four years ago. With another words - I think you are the one that have captured Bellas character best.
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No
Word count: 69614
[Report This] Published: June 17, 2009 Updated: December 27, 2009
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: September 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Brave Bella! I love the way you write her.
BRAVA! Author's Response: Thank you! I love Elle too. So much more confident. Thanks for the review!
Summary: AU/AH- Edward joins his friends for a weekend of fun at the Woodstock Festival before he leaves for the army. What he finds will change his world forever. 1969 Edward. My entry for the Age of Edward contest.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 11575
[Report This] Published: June 18, 2009 Updated: June 27, 2009
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: July 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: One Shot
I wasn't sure what to expect from this story. I read a lot of fan fiction, but I rarely cry. This one touched me so much that I cried. Beautiful! Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind review. I'm glad you were touched by Draftward's story. Thanks for taking the time to read. I cried a little while writing it. :)
Summary: The struggle Edward faces when he first sees Isabella Swan, from another perspective. One shot.
Categories: Twilight Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 1533
[Report This] Published: June 19, 2009 Updated: July 02, 2009
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: July 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Always Watching
Really interesting perspective I hadn't considered before. I enjoyed reading this very much. Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it (:
Summary:  Note from Admin: The blue ribbon awarded to this story means that it is a "featured" piece, recognized for excellence in content. It is one of the most culturally relevant, seriously deep, moving, unique, and important pieces of fanfiction that I have ever read. -Roo, Validation Beta
Bella Swan is homeless in one of the worst winters Seattle has ever seen. When trouble arises, she is saved by a knight in shining armor.
In his endeavor to help her, will he simplify her life, or complicate it beyond anything she could have ever foreseen.
Pairings are all part of the mystery . . .
Categories: AU, AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No
Word count: 61244
[Report This] Published: June 23, 2009 Updated: March 16, 2010
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: August 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: A Strange New friend
This story is AMAZING! I usually go for escapist fluff, but I can't tear myself away. Author's Response: Thank You :)
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: September 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Time Changes Nothing
I'm sad about Julia, but I could see it coming. Very well-written story; I look forward to more. Author's Response: Thank you very much. It was difficult to write and I was a little worried about the emotions emitted by Bella.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: November 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Confessions and Bonfires
I was wondering when the rest of the crew would be introduced. I love your story and always look forward to updates. Author's Response: Thank you :)
Summary:
Edward Cullen has many stories to tell, but not everyone can tell them for him. Here are three women who can: Elizabeth Masen, Esme Platt and Isabella Swan. Why? They see things through a mother’s eyes.
The progression of Edward's character, told through the eyes of the mothers in his life - Elizabeth, Esme and finally, Bella.
Categories: Pre-Twilight, Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward, Elizabeth Masen, Esme
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 4426
[Report This] Published: June 24, 2009 Updated: July 11, 2009
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed 
Date: July 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Fighter
Sweet and beautiful story. Thank you for creating it. Author's Response: Thank you. Maturnal love is a strong ongoing theme throughout the saga, and I loved getting the chance to explore that love through Elizabeth, Esme and Bella. x
Summary: Dr. Edward Masen is a single father of two, a recent widower, and in desperate need of a nanny. Bella Swan just graduated from Penn State University with degrees to become a teacher. With dreams temporarily on hold, she is literally knocked off her feet by a certain Masen boy, or perhaps two. After much public begging from them, Bella accepts the job. Hey, it's not teaching, but a job's a job, and a job means money. What could possibly go wrong?
Thank you Lou for the fabulous banner! I absolutely LOVE it!
Categories: AU, AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No
Word count: 47494
[Report This] Published: June 27, 2009 Updated: January 04, 2010
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Coffeeshop Soundtrack
Oooh, Bella got the Mom Seal of Approval. I can't blame Elizabeth for being protective. I've got a boy of my own, and I'd tear a girl apart for hurting him.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: December 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Go Girl
Great chapter--funny and sexy too. Daddyward kisses are hot!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: I Want a Mom
No sparkle peens, but more of the real kind would be okay. Did I really type that? Bad me! ;o)
Summary: Alice and Bella want what any couple wants, a baby. Bella asks her best friend Edward to contribute to the cause. He agrees but on one condition. B/A and B/E pairing. NC-17 for lemons and content.
Thank you christine30974 for this new banner!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No
Word count: 49873
[Report This] Published: June 29, 2009 Updated: February 02, 2010
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: August 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Protection
More complications are coming--I can feel it. I'm seriously addicted to this compelling story.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: October 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: All Over Me
Uh oh.
I feel so sorry for Alice right now, but I'm counting on a HEA for her too.
Great story!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: November 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Fight or Flight
That was hard to read, so I know it must've been very hard for you to write. You did an awesome job of telling everyone's heartbreak.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Fight or Flight
I really, REALLY miss this story and hope you haven't decided not to finish it. It's so good.
Summary: They were the best of friends, "The Sovereign Six" as they were most notably called. After being apart for eleven years, they are all brought back together by a tragedy. Is their friendships strong enough to overcome the time they've missed together?
Here is the link for my thread over on the forums! Come and check it out!
http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=5213
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: No
Word count: 135161
[Report This] Published: July 03, 2009 Updated: May 27, 2010
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25- New Orleans Lady
I'm not into the crawfish, but I could eat me some jambalaya right this minute. Loved the bar scene--you must be a grownup if you know Sweet Caroline. Author's Response: yum, you're making me hungry. A grown up huh? I guess, I mean, I'm turning 30 this year so I guess that makes me a grown up. lol It's a staple though. You hear Sweet Caroline, you sing the extra parts. lol
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: July 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3- Feeling Good
Never broke up? hmmmmm..... I think I like where this is heading. Author's Response: Thanks ma'am!!!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: September 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10- I Run to You
Poor Bella. This chapter really did bring me to tears. I enjoy your writing style, even if I cry over it. Author's Response: Awe!! Thank you! It's not over yet, expect more tears and of course, a few jeers ;)
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