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Penname: VictoriaCullen [Contact]
Real name: Vickie
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Member Since: March 14, 2009
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Nothin much to tell.  Wife.  Mom.  Daughter. Teacher. Students.  Closet Twilight fan fiction addict who might actually leave her husband if Carlisle were real and single--even though he's a bit old for me.  I try not to date guys over 250, but for him I'd make an exception.


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Reviews by VictoriaCullen
 
Summary:

Anna Russo has received a new identity and is on the run from her abusive ex-boyfriend with her young son in tow. She ends up in Forks, where she is now known as Bella Swan, and meets Edward Cullen. While she can't deny the unexplainable pull she feels toward him, she also can't shake off the feeling that he is not quite normal and not quite...human. Does she dare explore a new relationship with Edward while in fear for her life? Will Edward be able to put her safety first and stay away from the family he's always dreamed of having? And what will Bella's jilted ex do when he finally does catch up with her?

Sometimes, humans are monsters, too.

 

A HUGE thanks to Rosalynn for the amazing banner and for all of the help getting it attached to my story!

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 75530
[Report This] Published: May 09, 2009 Updated: May 10, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Epilogue

I totally agree with not dragging a story out forever.  I read so many where I think they should have ended it fifteen chapters before they did.  Having said that, I could imagine a sequel to this story that encompasses Bella's transformation and Ben's growing up years.  I have enjoyed this story so much that I'm sure I'd enjoy that too.



Author's Response:

Yes, I've read stories where the end actually should have occurred way before it did and the remaining chapters were either a totally seperate story or were just fluff. Usually, those types of stories lose my interest very quickly and I stop reading, so I did not want to do that with this story. But the characters are telling me that they have more to tell, so if Bella, Edward, and I can get it together enough, we might have a sequel in the works soon! Thanks so much for reading along with my story and for all of your kind words. I'm glad you've enjoyed it.

 
Summary:

Edward's POV during Bella's change when he introduces his daughter to the Cullens.

“Meet Renesmee, your granddaughter,” I said to her and Carlisle. They were both awestruck as Esme held her gently in her arms, and Carlisle wrapped his arms around the both of them.

 

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Based on the glimpse of memory Ness shows Bella.

This story makes reference 'Edward's Epiphany' but they stand alone.  

 


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3933
[Report This] Published: May 13, 2009 Updated: May 25, 2009


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Introducing Renesmee

Very nice.  I can identify with Rosalie in a lot of ways (NOT the gorgeous part though I wish!) so I really appreciate your portraying her softer side. 



Author's Response:

Thanks:)  Rose I think is one of the most misunderstood characters within Twilight.  She deserves a break sometimes:)

 

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Broken by Wendyann Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1084]
Summary:

How does someone survive a trauma that changes everything? How does she find the will to live? Edward was too late to save Bella in Port Angeles. Can she save herself?

*Note: This story deals with the aftermath of rape. If you are sensitive to this topic, please do not read.*

Thank you so much to Loushane for the amazing banner!


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: No Word count: 104063
[Report This] Published: May 15, 2009 Updated: June 28, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Messages in Flowers

I love the meanings behind the flowers and have googled some of them.  Your adding the flowers from Edward was so sweet and so classically Edward.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: November 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Revealing

I know writing this would be hard, but writing it after your own experience has to be devastating.  You did justice to those who have suffered through such a terrible experience.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: November 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Ruh-roh

I can't tell you how much I love your Rosalie. 

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: October 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Panic

I just read from the beginning to now.  WOW!  So intense and very well-written.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: October 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Panic

I just read from the beginning to now.  WOW!  So intense and very well-written.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: October 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Panic

I just read from the beginning to now.  WOW!  So intense and very well-written.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: October 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Aftermath

Intense!  Good for Bella--having a breakthrough, especially the one with Edward. 

Happy belated birthday, although you're the one giving us the present. :o)

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: October 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Thanksgiving

Poor Charlie.  The Charlie/Bella interaction made me cry.  It's terrible to be a parent, knowing your child needs something but not being able to be the one to give it to them.  You really brought that angst to life.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: November 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Journals

Another great chapter!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: December 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Traditions

I really enjoy reading your story despite the sad subject matter.  I love the way you're bringing hope into the plot.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: December 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Musical Therapy

Totally intense and gut-wrenching but beautifully written. 

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: New Year

I've loved your whole story, but this chapter is special.  It's lovely to see Bella healing and reconnecting with Charlie.  Fabulous writing!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: June 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Final Freedom

Great ending! I didn't mind that Esme was the one; it's fitting for a mother to help her be reborn.

 
Seduction by blondie Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 87]
Summary:

Chapter 20 from Eclipse (Compromise) from Edward's POV.

Bella was intent on seducing Edward, but somehow he managed to get a ring on her finger.  His side of the story may surprise you - or maybe it won't!

Go get him, Bella!

Written for JAustenlover - she was the winning bidder for my services in the SupportStacie auction.  Be sure and send her some love for requesting this piece, and for her generosity.  Love ya, JAl!

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Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Totality
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 10184
[Report This] Published: May 18, 2009 Updated: May 18, 2009


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Seduction

Very nice perspective. I really enjoyed it.

 
Loss and Gain by Halawia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 545]
Summary:

Death is one of the hardest things to go through. Bella and the Cullen's have had to say goodbye to people they loved and are trying to find refuge through the pain. Will they find that there is something to gain through their loss?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 45 Completed: Yes Word count: 348072
[Report This] Published: May 19, 2009 Updated: July 23, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 34: When the truth dawns on you (V)

All his fault????  I'm dying to know what Alice meant by THAT.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: December 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: The fine line of family (V)

I could relate to Bella's feelings about not wanting to go to funerals after Jake.  I felt that way for a long time after my sister's funeral.  You did a great job of making that real.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! It's always nice to know I can do stuff realistically. And that people understand and enjoy it. I appreciate your review :)

xx

Hal

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 35: The ticking time bomb just exploded.

I didn't see it coming.  Thanks for the tissue warning; it was needed.  Please update quickly and don't leave us suffering.



Author's Response:

Yeah, not seeing it coming was sort of the point lol. Sorry I made ya cry... but it was definitely needed for the effect of this chapter. Next chapter should be up within the week. maybe sooner... don't know, really. Sorry's :(

Anywho, thank you for the review. It means a lot to me whenver I get them. And I also see that you're still semi- new. I thank you for giving the story a chance.

xx

Hal

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 36: one step forward... two steps back. (v)

Ouch!  That's hitting below the belt--literally AND figuratively.

Great drama!!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Into the lions den (v)

The scene with Edward in the cemetery broke my heart.  Excellent chapter!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 41: It's all about to change

Nothing like a ginormous cliffy to get us revved up. I can't wait to see what happens now.



Author's Response:

yeah, I figured we were over due for a cliffy lol. Thank you for the review. as always, I appreciate it.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 42: It's gonna be a riot! (V)

Poor Carlisle.  I know he's not the good guy in this story, but I can't blame him for freaking out.  The rude adoption remarks were over the top, but I'll forgive him that one.  I hope the terrible thing Bella's feeling will happen isn't real.

I'm eagerly waiting for more.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: July 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 45: The time has come to move on (V)

Great ending.  Thanks for sharing this story!

 
Serendipity by FanpireMama Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1215]
Summary:

Bella's life is turned upside down when her best friend's family moves away and her parents are killed in a car accident. What happens when Bella's life is again intertwined with the Cullen's?

 

Thanks to LoisBlue for the AMAZING banner!

Nominated for an Indie TwiFic Award in the category of: Most Romantic Moment !!!!

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Phil, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 85507
[Report This] Published: May 20, 2009 Updated: August 15, 2009


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: July 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Loss

I did need tissues. You wrote that so believably; it really toucned my heart.

 




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