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Penname: VictoriaCullen [ Contact]
Real name: Vickie
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Member Since: March 14, 2009
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Nothin much to tell. Wife. Mom. Daughter. Teacher. Students. Closet Twilight fan fiction addict who might actually leave her husband if Carlisle were real and single--even though he's a bit old for me. I try not to date guys over 250, but for him I'd make an exception.
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Summary:
"His agony defines him. His memories destroy him.
But his hope is what sustains him, feeds him, encourages him. It's his purpose. And he doesn't deny it.
Offered the chance to leave all pain and misery behind, Edward knew that it was better to suffer his loss than to forget it. For in having it, Bella remains his and only his.
To forget would be the ultimate betrayal, abandoning her once again to a world of lonliness and despair. He had already done that once upon a time, and he did so spectacularly.
He'll find her. He has to.
HE HAS TO."
- icrodriguez (the most beautiful review I have ever received. THANK YOU for allowing me the honour of displaying it here. It sums up the tone of this story beautifully, hearts, Erin)
Left in the woods, an unfortunate run-in with Laurant and 45 years later - Bella finds herself facing everything she has ever wanted. Does it want her back? What will she discover about how Edward has been spending his time...
Rated for later chapters.
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No
Word count: 140624
[Report This] Published: May 06, 2009 Updated: September 22, 2012
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Hope
My button doesn't sparkle. :o( Maybe I should get the computer out in the sun.
I hope that Demetri turns from the Dark Side (sorry, mixing in a little Star Wars there) and helps Edward. Great chapter!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Ready
I think perhaps we can trust Demetri. Your story makes me want to find out. Excellent!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Set
Gather the searchers! Maybe I was distracted, but this chapter was a little hard to follow in relation to your others. Still, I love your story.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: No
Please don't torture Edward much longer. He can't take it and I can't either.
Summary: Belittled and verbally abused by Renee, Bella thinks poorly of herself. Heading back to Forks to live with her brother Emmett, will her friendship with Edward blossom into romance? Can he make Bella see that she’s worth so much more than she thinks?
Thanks to falconcranelove for the amazing banner!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No
Word count: 60539
[Report This] Published: May 07, 2009 Updated: December 14, 2009
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed 
Date: May 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I really like this story and look forward to reading more. It's definitely going on my favorites list!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: June 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Poor, poor Bella. This is killing me, but I can't stop reading. I hope she realizes soon that people love her--and Renee is a first-class b*tch.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: June 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Wonderfully written chapter. You really make it possible to feel Bella's pain and insecurity.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: July 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Oooh, I can't wait until their date!
You really express Bella's sense of inadequacy very well. Great chapter!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: July 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 (vjgm)
Couldn't Renee be eaten by wild dogs or something? Please? ;o)
I really enjoyed this chapter, particularly the piano scene. It was so sweet.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: August 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 (vjgm)
WOAH! Great chapter; I look forward to the next one. Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: September 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13(vjgm)
Poor Bella. Poor everyone else too.
I know this must have been a hard chapter to write, but it's really good.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: October 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 (vjgm)
This is a three-Kleenex chapter! You're doing an awesome job with this story.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: November 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17(vjgm)
Hang tough, girl--school's hard but worth it. This chapter was worth it too!
Summary: 
  
    
Everyone knows that Carlisle has never slipped...right? But whatever else he is, Carlisle is a vampire with all the instincts and temptations of his kind. Even he says, "The occasional... accident or lapse in control is a regrettable part of who we are."
What would push Carlisle to such a lapse? And what will happen when he finally has to face his own nature?
Thank you to Christag and Milla for my incredible banners!
       
Nominated for an Indie Award--Best Non-ExB Love Story!
Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Carlisle, Charles, Edward, Esme
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes
Word count: 19539
[Report This] Published: May 08, 2009 Updated: June 18, 2009
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Beautifully written. I didn't want the chapter to end. I love the emotions you give all three characters--but especially Carlisle. Author's Response: What a great compliment--thank you! I love Carlisle, so I'm so glad I'm writing his emotions well. Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: June 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Epilogue
Aw, I just love a happy ending. You were very true to the characters and wrote them so convincingly. I know Carlisle felt guilty about killing Evanson, but you made him so despicable that none of us care a bit Good story! Author's Response: Thank you! I tried to write Carlisle well, especially, and it's so good to know I did all right. I really appreciate you reading and reviewing!
Summary: Anna Russo has received a new identity and is on the run from her abusive ex-boyfriend with her young son in tow. She ends up in Forks, where she is now known as Bella Swan, and meets Edward Cullen. While she can't deny the unexplainable pull she feels toward him, she also can't shake off the feeling that he is not quite normal and not quite...human. Does she dare explore a new relationship with Edward while in fear for her life? Will Edward be able to put her safety first and stay away from the family he's always dreamed of having? And what will Bella's jilted ex do when he finally does catch up with her?
Sometimes, humans are monsters, too.
A HUGE thanks to Rosalynn for the amazing banner and for all of the help getting it attached to my story!
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes
Word count: 75530
[Report This] Published: May 09, 2009 Updated: May 10, 2010
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Spotlight
Good twist on the canon story. I especially love that Rosalie suddenly softened up when she heard that it was Benjamin who was saved. She's a sucker for the babies.
I really enjoy this story and always look forward to updates.
Author's Response: Yes, she did a complete turnaround when she heard it was Ben that was in danger...that maternal instinct is still strong in her. Thank you so much for your feedback and I'm glad you are enjoying this. More to come soon!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: June 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Bring Me to Life
Great chapter! This story has really drawn me in, and I'm always excited when I get to read more.
Thank you for writing this. Author's Response: Thank you! I am having so much fun writing this story and it is so exciting to read that you are enjoying reading what my mind can cook up! Thank you for taking the time to let me know what you think! I greatly appreciate each and every review I get! They make my day!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: June 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Secret
Great cliffie! I really enjoy your story. Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you are enjoying it! More drama coming and we're getting into the nitty gritty now!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: June 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: You Don't Know Me
I think Eric fell out of the crazy tree and hit EVERY branch on the way down. He seriously needs to be put down like a rabid dog, and Edward's just the man to do it.
Another awesome chapter! Author's Response: Haha! Your analysis of Eric totally made my day! Hilarious! And oh so true! He is definately getting crazier by the day as he sits inside and obsesses over Bella/Anna....which is going to give Edward even more reason to put him out of everyone's misery. Oh, I can't wait!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: July 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Sugar, We're Goin' Down Swinging
I should have seen that coming, but I totally didn't. I know Edward will keep her safe, but I still am on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter. Author's Response: Well, the shit has hit the fan now!!! And of course, it's what we've all been waiting for! Some of it, at least. Next chapter is already done, I just have to submit it and I'm already working on the next one. We're really at the good stuff now! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: July 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Smooth Criminal
You ARE evil for leaving us hanging like this, but I hope you have a great vacation. :o)
Personally, I'd rather see Eric as somebody's girlfriend in prison. He deserves to suffer for a long time, and death would be too quick. The Cullen men should beat the crap out of him and then call Charlie to arrest him. Author's Response: Haha! What a wonderful idea! Although, if Edward decides to dispatch him to the great beyond, I'm sure he won't make it quick. Hmmm...Eric as someone's bitch, that would put his poor mother into fits!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: August 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: What Goes Around Comes Around
Ooooh, this is even better than I expected!!
I kind of hope Edward doesn't kill Eric, but I hope he makes him suffer for a very long time before he turns him over to Charlie. Then, after Charlie is done with him, Eric can be someone's "girlfriend" in jail for a very, very, very long time. Author's Response: Wow...thank you! I love it when I can pass someone's expectations, it's what I strive for with each chapter! We will find out in the next chapter what happens between Eric and Edward...but I love your idea! It would almost serve the little creep right! Haha!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: All Secrets Known
I've missed your story and am glad you're getting better. Author's Response: Thank you. I had not realized how much I missed working on the story until I got back into it. I'm already working on the next chapter, so it will be up soon. Thanks for being patient!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Eyes On Fire
I really, REALLY miss this story and hope you haven't decided not to finish it. It's so good. I'm so emotionally invested in the characters and the unique plot; I want to see them through.
I hope everything's okay in your life and that you'll be back soon. Author's Response: I am so sorry it has taken me so long to update. I have had some things going on lately (I added an update to my bio to explain a bit) but things are starting to settle down now and I'm feeling the urge to write. I am looking forward to finishing this story and I've actually started on the next chapter!!!! I appreciate you sticking with the story and for your interest. I have received so many wonderful emails and reviews from both this site and FanFiction.net asking about the story. You guys are all the best!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: April 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: My Immortal
I loved the part where Edward had to be the one to propose. That would be classic Edward behavior. Author's Response: Yes, I thought that Edward would flip if Bella was the one to actually pop the question. He is so set in his 1900's manners and ideas, I just couldn't resist! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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