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Penname: VictoriaCullen [ Contact]
Real name: Vickie
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Member Since: March 14, 2009
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Nothin much to tell. Wife. Mom. Daughter. Teacher. Students. Closet Twilight fan fiction addict who might actually leave her husband if Carlisle were real and single--even though he's a bit old for me. I try not to date guys over 250, but for him I'd make an exception.
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Summary: 
Edward leaves Bella, much like the beginning of 'New Moon', however, this time, they are all human and there is quite the twist. Why did Edward leave Bella? And what secret is Bella keeping when he leaves?
Can they make a nightmare turn into a dream?
THANKS TO EMERALD_ROSALIE FOR THE ABOVE BANNER AND ATHENALOVE FOR THE BELOW.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 61 Completed: Yes
Word count: 155064
[Report This] Published: April 14, 2009 Updated: August 05, 2010
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: October 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 43 - The Highway
Oh, no you don't. You don't get Shirtless Daddyward after you left us hanging!
It's because you write this so well that we're all invested in it. Update soon so we don't have to haul out the big guns. Please. Author's Response:
I do believe in happy endings! I promise! I am so glad folks are invested in the story. It's a difficult story but I hope it will be worth it!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: November 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 44 - Fight
Jasper is wise for a mental case potty mouth dude. Author's Response: Jasper knows how to get his point across like nobody’s business! He is very wise, if a little batty!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: December 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See
"...picked up the copper-penny angel against his chest..." What a fantastic description! Author's Response: Aw! You liked the copper-penny angel, hunh?
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: December 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49 - The Vase
I could use some Daddyward cuddles too!
The way you explained fixing their relationship--like a broken vase--was excellent! Author's Response: I am glad you thought the vase analogy worked!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: December 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50 - My Forever
Sniff
That was a perfect, sweet and gentle ending to a beautifully written story. Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Have a wonderful holiday!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 52: Epilogue the First - Pink Tutus and Blue Velvet
Sweet but not coma-inducing as my man Emmett would have you think. Author's Response: I’m glad you enjoyed it! I know it was a little fluffy, but I think it was needed.
Did you check out the chapter that went up Tuesday night? It confused a lot of folks because the *newest* chapter is actually the Prologue, chapter *one*! When you click on the story, it is listed now as chapter one, Pretty and The Starlet. Enjoy!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 53: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act
Oh, how I remember those days (and nights.) With a toddler around, it's a wonder parents ever get time to make another baby. :o)
I love this chapter! It's sweet and sexy and very real. Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! I did try to stick with the "real" theme that was part of the whole story.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always
The wedding was perfect! It was totally Bella and Edward. I loved hearing Emmett's POV. Now, we've just got to get him to grow a pair and ask Rosalie.
I love every chapter a tiny bit more than the one before. Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! I think Emmett found his nerve by the end of the chapter...
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 57: Epilogue the Sixth - World of Magic
I wanna play with Daddyward!
Fun chapter--I can relate to the interaction between Carlisle, Esme and the grandbabies. It reminds me of my in-laws and all their grands. Author's Response: I think we all would like to play with Daddyward a bit:)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 27, 2010
Title: Chapter 59: Epilogue the Final - Full Circle
Perfect ending to a lovely story! Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Summary: 
AU. Bella Swan, hasn't spoke in over six years now - not since the day of the accident. She has since sunk into a depression & has grew tired with living. She trust no one. As a last resort, her Mother sends her, to live with her Dad, Charlie in the small town of Forks. Bella is considered a freak & an outcast, by all apart from the mysterious Edward Cullen. Could he actually be the one to change Bella? And could they together unlock the mystery, that is her forgotten past.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Other Character, Renee
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No
Word count: 12462
[Report This] Published: April 15, 2009 Updated: October 28, 2009
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: October 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
I really like your story. It's interesting and unique. I'm looking forward to reading more.
One tiny thing--you really use way too many commas. This sentence, "The journey, was tediously boring" is an example. You don't need to put a comma between the subject and the verb. It's just a detail, but it can be distracting.
Please don't hate me. I'm an English teacher, so I'm picky. :o)
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 (vjgm)
I really, REALLY miss this story and hope you haven't decided not to finish it. It's so good and totally unique.
Summary: Bella's elevator ride with a gorgeous stranger becomes charged when the lift breaks down. Things become more complicated when she discovers the stranger is her to-be boss, Edward Cullen.
Thanks to katmom for the great banner!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: Always Human
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes
Word count: 73337
[Report This] Published: April 16, 2009 Updated: January 01, 2010
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Ooh, I love Protectward!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Great story with a perfect mix of romance and action. Thanks for sharing it with us.
Summary: She once lived the life of luxury with her husband, James, until he becomes abusive. With the help of an unlikely friend, she fakes her own death, escapes James' abuse, becomes Bella Swan, and starts fresh in a new town. She meets a handsome young man named Edward who will help her heal, but will she ever fully get over the abuse she suffered?
When James gets wind that his wife isn't dead, what lengths will he go to take back what he feels is his?
Rated for future lemons, some scenes of violence, and cursing.
(loosely based on Sleeping with the Enemy, but with large differences, and a Twilight twist)
(thanks to CrimsonIceGoddess for the wicked new banner!!)
Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Jacob, Renee
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: No
Word count: 167140
[Report This] Published: April 20, 2009 Updated: November 04, 2011
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: December 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 23: On the Move
I SO caught the "van down by the river" reference and laughed out loud when I did. I loved that character on SNL. Author's Response: Awesome! I'm not so old after all!! ;) Trust me, I laughed when my fingers typed that out. I looked at it, saying, "uh, where did that come from?!" but then I decided to keep it in there. It just fit ;)
Thanks for reading and for all your reviews. Always appreciated!
~Fatima
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: A Loss
What an intense beginning! I'm hooked already. Author's Response: wow, I just found this review!! Soooo sorry about the delay, but thanks for your praise!! I do hope you're still reading!! It's getting even more intense now!!
~Fatima
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: A New Friend
They really thought of everything, and so did you. Interesting twists and turns in your story. Author's Response: omg just found ANOTHER one of your reviews!! SOOO sorry that they slipped through the cracks as they did! :(
Thanks for saying that. I try...I think that's why it takes me so very long to get some chapters up: I don't want them out there and then I think of something to add, and I can't... :)
Thanks for reading and always reviewing when you can. I truly appreciate it!!!
~Fatima
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Welcome to Forks
I'm glad Bella's getting a life again and I look forward to seeing who's behind her.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: The 4th of July BBQ
I knew Esme'd been in an abusive marriage, even though she would have been awfully young. Your Edward's an angel--so sweet and understanding.
I'm really enjoying your story! Author's Response: he definitely is an angel! And yes, she didn't really display any signs of abuse, but that was because Carlisle had heled her so much... :)
~Fatima
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Promise of Things to Come
Belated congratulations on your marriage. :o)
I love your Edward! He's a lot more playful than canon. Author's Response: I love my Edward, too. I found canon Eddie to be too high strung and worrisome.
And thanks! It's been an adjustment, but we're loving it! :)
~Fatima
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Dinner at Edward's
I knew that song was going to come back to haunt her. You write with so much emotion that it's very hard to stop reading. Author's Response: you should listen to it...it's really really creepy!! Thanks for your praise!! I try *blush*
~Fatima
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Talking About The Past
What an amazing tale you're creating! Author's Response: thank you!! I can see that you're enjoying the story! Thanks for all your reviews!
~Fatima
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: The Big Reveal
Great chapter! I knew there would be an upheaval when Bella discovered who Edward was, but I didn't expect her to get so angry. I can understand why though. Author's Response: yeah, her reaction was not necessarily typical, but made sense for her situation...
~Fatima
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Similarities
This was a three-tissue chapter! Author's Response: awww I know. Esme's story is a sad one, but it made her the woman she is! :)
~Fatima
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Family Ties
James killed his parents, didn't he? It just clicked with me that it wasn't an unsolved home invasion.
Excellent chapter--again! Author's Response: hmmmmm....you caught onto that, huh? hmmmm.....well, perhaps. I must say, I haven't had anyone ask that before. I'm glad you did!
Thanks for all your reviews! I'm happy that you found my humble story!!
~Fatima
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