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Penname: VictoriaCullen [ Contact]
Real name: Vickie
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Member Since: March 14, 2009
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Nothin much to tell. Wife. Mom. Daughter. Teacher. Students. Closet Twilight fan fiction addict who might actually leave her husband if Carlisle were real and single--even though he's a bit old for me. I try not to date guys over 250, but for him I'd make an exception.
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Summary: This is the sequel to Can’t Let Go. Emmett just opened up Emmett’s Daily Grind, a coffee shop/cereal bar, and Rosalie and Emmett just had their first kid, Emmett Junior aka EmJ. Bella and Edward are now married and are trying to start a family. Original characters carry over, Hal, Coley, Eli. Humor/Fluff/Lemons
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
Word count: 113022
[Report This] Published: March 29, 2009 Updated: August 02, 2009
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Shiver Me Timbers!
Waltzing Edward.....GAH!
I'm so glad you gave the spit-take warning. I needed it.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: All I Want for Christmas...
WOO HOO! Jalice are adopting a baby boy!! Since my no-longer-little boy Adam (hint, hint on a GREAT name for the baby) is adopted, I love Alice and Jasper even more now. Please don't let anything go wrong with their adoption like it did with our almost-first baby. It broke my heart, and I know it would break Alice's too.
I always do the happy dance when I get an update because your story is fun and well-written. I feel like the characters are all my friends.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: You're Gonna Love My Nuts!
I love your nuts! I had to go watch the slap chop thing-too freakin' hilarious.
Seriously, Irina and Laurent SO got what they deserve! I don't know where you came up with that, but it was inspired.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: STIFLAN
THANK YOU!! I literally started crying when I read the baby's name. I had to stop reading (and crying) and go hug my great big Adam. He just looked at me like I was a lunatic, but what's new about that? I'm so happy Alice and Jasper got their baby Adam!
I'm pretty happy Bellward are having a girl too. Good call and excellent chapter as usual.
Happy Mother's Day to you too!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: A Beautiful Mind
You made me cry. It's a good cry, but I cried anyway. Poor Bella for feeling that way in high school, and poor Edward for having to see it through her eyes. Very well-written.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Paying Homage
I wouldn't have thought of the name, but I like it! It fits with EmJ and AJ, and it's got a lot of possibilities.
I missed reading you and am SO glad to get another wonderful chapter!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Child's Play
“Emmett, log off of Ebay and step away from the computer slowly,” That was flippin' hilarious! I loved everything about this chapter except part of the end notes. "we are nearing the end of the story" No. Just no. I feel like my friends will be moving away and leaving me. <sob, sob>
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Pillow Talk
HAPPY BIRTHDAY! I wish for you your very own Edward, plus a Slap Chop AND a Snoozer. I hope you've had the best birthday ever.
Thanks for a present from you to us on your birthday. I love this chapter. Oh heck, I love them all!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: June 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 23: Cleaning Out the Closet
EEEEK! I'd scream too if I found Chucky in my closet. Funny chapter.
I'm glad you had a nice birthday--you deserve it. :o)
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: June 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: What A F'kin Shock!
You always make me laugh. Why can't my husband's brothers be more Emmett and less a pain in the you-know-what?
Great chapter, as usual. :o)
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: June 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 26: June 20th, It's Go Time!
Welcome, Baby CJ! Cute birth chapter. Your story always makes me smile, but I'm sad to see the end of the chapters.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: August 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 28: Bonus: Poop 'n Freeze 'n Vote
YAY! An update!!! Too funny. I'm headed to your profile to vote, vote, vote.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: August 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: A Sense of Purpose
I just saw this on TV and thought you NEEDED to know about it. It's the Slap Chop Rap
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lKDs8dTnMg8&feature=PlayList&p=D0B3961DE33056F4&index=2
That's how much your story affected me; I see TV and think of TDG.
Summary: 
Nominated for Best Supernatural in The Silent Tear Awards!
Voting ends June 20.
Please check out the other stories and vote for your favorites;
http://silent-tear-awards.webs.com/vote.htm
~Nominated for Best AU in the Shimmers Snowflake Quarter 2010.~
Nine years has passed since Edward left her cold and alone on the forest floor. She has become familiar with the darkness and has relied upon Jacob to be her warmth and light. After nearly a decade of living in the shadows of others, a crushed and broken Bella wanders off into the forest in search of the place where everything had gone wrong.
She's known the cold bite of Ice. She runs from Fire's all consuming intensity. What she finds on her jilted journey will change the way she remembers both forever.
~summary by the fabulous Spaniard, talented author of Purgatory and North Star Rising.
Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes
Word count: 101571
[Report This] Published: March 31, 2009 Updated: May 27, 2010
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: April 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Great beginning. Really captivating. My only suggestion is to watch its (the posssessive)
and it's (the conjuction.) "it's ghostly path" and "it's existence" should both be its. Sorry to be so picky about that, but I teach grammar and it's a pet peeve. It's really easy to confuse and easier for most people to overlook.
Excellent story!
Author's Response: I am REALLY BAD at the 's /s thing. Thank you so very very much for pointing that out. I've just acquired a technical Beta so, the upcoming chapters should be less grammatically offensive! Don't be sorry for being picky! This is first and formost a learning experience for me! I have the writing bug and I want to do it right.
Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed  
Date: April 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Wow! I'm hooked. I want more, more, more.
Author's Response: I've got more more more...I'm just waiting for beta work and validating..Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
I don't think your lemons are cheesy at all. They're well-written and don't make me feel icky for reading them. :o)
Author's Response: YAY! I figured I didn't feel icky writing them, so they were safe. :) So happy you enjoyed it. Thanks for reviewing!
Summary: A lemony one shot originally written for a Steamy Movie Crossover contest. Bella is working her way through her Master's degree by waitressing and a local theme restaurant. When Edward sits in her section the afternoon they share makes the copy machine blush. A very loose crossover with Office Space. AH.
Categories: AU-Human, Crossover Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 5228
[Report This] Published: April 05, 2009 Updated: April 08, 2009
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: April 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: If Copy Machines Could Talk
OME Your FIRST lemon? Girl, you write like a pro. I think I need a shower or my man or both at the same time.
Summary: Multi-millionaire Edward Cullen makes a proposal that Jacob Black can’t resist.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Word count: 10924
[Report This] Published: April 06, 2009 Updated: August 31, 2009
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: August 31, 2009
Title: It Started With Indecency
I often hesitate about reading lemony stories because it's so often just about sex with no plot, but this one is so riveting and well-written that I couldn't stop reading. I can't wait for more.
Summary: Copward and Officer Bella go undercover to solve a case.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes
Word count: 35183
[Report This] Published: April 06, 2009 Updated: May 04, 2009
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: April 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11
Poor Hurtward! I hope you let him get better and let Emmett find Bella soon.
Author's Response: I think there's a bit of a line up, but you would make Edward feel better if you gave him a naughty spongebath ;)
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: April 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10
Oh hurry, PLEASE! I can't stand wounded Edward. Kudos on a great story.
Author's Response: Next chapter is on it's way. Would you like to give Woundward a sponge bath? Thanks for the lovely review.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12
YAY that they declared their love for each other. Good job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm glad you liked it :)
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Epilogue
Aawww. I love a happy ending, and I LOVE the name. Oh, and I LOVE Dadward. soooo sweet. Great story
Author's Response: Thanks. Dadward is pretty sweet...imagine how caveward he'll be with a little girl ;)
Summary: Alice's birthday party. The family is there - including Bella, with her new beau, Jacob.
Edward's reflects on their relationship as he sees his love in the arms of hers.
Although Jacob and Bella's embrace is not as it first appears, for it is not Jacob's name that is sighed by his partner.
Angst, smut.
Thank you to Caitlincullen1995 for the beautiful banner, and to shabbyapple the Great, for helping me with my dialogue.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes
Word count: 13774
[Report This] Published: April 06, 2009 Updated: August 31, 2009
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: April 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Painful Reflections
Woah, baby. That was intense. More, please!!
Summary: Bella and Edward have happily been together for decades but Bella craves something new and exciting in their sex life. Jasper steps up to the plate to fill the void in Bella. Where do they go from here and who else will help them along the way? One-shot turned into a lemony story.
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No
Word count: 18995
[Report This] Published: April 06, 2009 Updated: July 16, 2010
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: July 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Great lemony story, but Edward needs to man up and give Bella what she really wants. ;o) Author's Response: I agree with you, but does he even know what that is? Thanks for reviewing.
Summary:
Edward left Bella, forcing his family to stay away from her. Six years onwards, the Cullens are a mess without Bella and Emmett decides to get away from his angry, angst ridden family and let loose. What he finds in the meanest biker bar in Seatle will send shockwaves through his entire family.
All canon couples!
Categories: New Moon Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes
Word count: 112765
[Report This] Published: April 07, 2009 Updated: December 04, 2009
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: November 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37:The Lost are now Found
I'm sorry to see this story drawing to a close, but I understand about RL and babies.
Congratulations on your new little one.
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