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Penname: VictoriaCullen [ Contact]
Real name: Vickie
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Member Since: March 14, 2009
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Nothin much to tell. Wife. Mom. Daughter. Teacher. Students. Closet Twilight fan fiction addict who might actually leave her husband if Carlisle were real and single--even though he's a bit old for me. I try not to date guys over 250, but for him I'd make an exception.
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Summary: Bella is a writer. Or at least she was until she let her fears consume her life. This is a story about fear, bravery and the ability to change.
*Agoraphobia- the phobia of social situations in which the sufferer feels they have little or no control.*
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 1364
[Report This] Published: January 16, 2011 Updated: January 30, 2011
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 31, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Agoraphobia
Nice little character study. I enjoyed reading it. Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! Im glad you enjoyed it! :)
Summary: Finally graduating with her Ph.D., Bella needed to shed her dull sneaker and flats image. She wanted heels. Roberto Cavalli heels. Stillettos. Would they be enough for even her friend Edward to notice? One-shot written for the PostSecret Prompt Contest. AH
(banner by JavaMasta)
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 6443
[Report This] Published: January 22, 2011 Updated: February 25, 2011
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 28, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: The Cavalli Connection
GREAT story! I really enjoyed reading. Sexy without being smutty. Author's Response: Thanks! I can't write smut anyway. Besides, personally I think it's better when the details are left to the imagination.
Summary:
Edward Cullen is Dr. Bella Swan's new patient. Despite being 107, he's still afraid of the dark. Can he be cured? Or will he be doomed to an eternity of sparkling balls? A comedic tale of getting over your fears.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 6015
[Report This] Published: January 22, 2011 Updated: January 22, 2011
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 22, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: one-shot
Ridiculous--hilariously ridiculous!
Summary: It's Spring 2008 and Emmett has stumbled across a shocking discovery. It seems that a women named Stephenie Meyer has been stalking Bella from the moment she arrived in Forks! Armed with a copy of 'Twilight', the Cullens hit the road in an attempt to discover the truth behind this strange new phenomenon...
Canon-ish crackfic. Set in Fandom 2008 / Post-Eclipse, pre-Breaking Dawn. Oneshot.
Categories: Post-Eclipse, Crackfic Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Kellan Lutz, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 4873
[Report This] Published: January 23, 2011 Updated: January 31, 2011
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 01, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Fiction, Fame and Fangirls
SO funny! "And half these girls can't even spell, let alone write a story about someone they've never met before!" I laughed out loud when I read that. Author's Response: Thanks! I just couldn't resist a few digs at the insanity of our beloved fandom. ;)
Summary: One of Esme's pet projects. And you thought all she did was decorate!
Warning: cavity causing sweetness, just like Esme herself!
Categories: Breaking Dawn, Pre-Twilight, Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse Characters: Esme
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 4577
[Report This] Published: January 24, 2011 Updated: February 03, 2011
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 03, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: One-shot
I can't think of any criticism. This is a sweet and touching story, true to Esme's character. I enjoyed it very much! Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Summary: 
It was just a bit of fun, a chance for an all-expenses paid vacation, and a favor for her bestie. Never in a billion years could Bella have imagined just how much meeting Edward Cullen would invert her world.
Thanks to Belindella for the beautiful banner.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 12572
[Report This] Published: January 25, 2011 Updated: January 26, 2011
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 26, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Billionaire
I love that they avoided the lunacy. Great story!
Summary: 
Bella finds herself in a position she'd never dreamed of - homeless and panhandling with her daughter on a street corner praying for a miracle on Christmas Eve. Will her prayer be answered? AU/AH, ExB. A little holiday gift to you all.
~ Beautiful banner by Robrator ~
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Renee
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 6011
[Report This] Published: January 27, 2011 Updated: January 28, 2011
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 29, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Lovely story. Author's Response: Thanks, VictoriaCullen. I'm happy you found it to be a lovely story.
I appreciate your review,
Mal
Summary: Eventide is a children's story set just after the events of Breaking Dawn. Nessie wants to explore her humanity a bit by attending school like other children. Bella thinks this is a good idea; Edward doesn't agree. They come to a compromise to allow Nessie to attend school for the duration of one school year. Nessie discovers that school isn't all it is cracked up to be and finds herself being alienated from the other children. She ends up befriending a child with autism, and their unlikely friendship is healing for both of them.
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes
Word count: 12190
[Report This] Published: January 27, 2011 Updated: September 08, 2011
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 21, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Nessie
What a great concept for a story!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 21, 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2-The Mall
I really like the theme of isolation in your story and think it's logical and realistic for Renesmee to want a friend. I always thought it was sad that she only had adults to interact with.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 21, 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3-Proposal
If they're still in Forks, aren't folks going to wonder how Edward and Bella suddenly have a school-age child? I'm interested in seeing how you write this :o)
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 21, 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4-Meeting
The aunt and uncle explanation stays in canon. I feel silly for not thinking of that. Good chapter!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 21, 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5-School
Good touch having Renesmee be nervous.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 21, 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6-Katie
The kids' reactions are very believable.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 21, 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7-Braeden and Autism
Clever Renesmee. I love the realistic touches you put into your story. It's clear you're knowledgeable about kids with special needs; it shows in your desciptions. Author's Response: Thank you for all your kind words. It means alot to me.
Summary: 
Millionaire Edward Cullen fell quickly for small town Bella, and their dreamy romance soon led to wedding bells. But their relationship’s foundation is anything but sturdy.
When their new marriage is about to fall apart, Bella inexplicably goes missing. Edward is determined to search for her, but does Bella want to be found?
~*~
A time-jumping romance filled with love, heartache and intrigue. Rated for language and some sexuality.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: No
Word count: 44664
[Report This] Published: January 28, 2011 Updated: May 13, 2012
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 08, 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I'm so curious to see what happens next.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 28, 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Poor Edward. You're right; it was sad, but it was also very good.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 22, 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 / Outtake
That's the kind of thing I'd LOVE to do to controlling, nitpicky people like Mike. I, of course, could never get away with it. Still, it's in intriguing thought.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 24, 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Edward could leave me a few hundred dollars for a tip, or anything else he had in mind. ;o)
Your story is smart and well-written. I look forward to more!
Summary: “It was just a year or two, and then the girl would disappear. She would go on with her life—she would have a life to go on with. She’d go to college somewhere, get older, start a career, perhaps marry someone.” –Edward Cullen, Midnight Sun
Imagine a new Twilight in which Edward leaves that second time, after his and Bella's first conversation in the biology classroom. Bella is left to carve out a new future for herself, and her whole world begins to change. A car accident, a frightening encounter in the woods, and plenty of new things will have Bella questioning the world as she knows it.
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Word count: 4559
[Report This] Published: January 29, 2011 Updated: February 23, 2011
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: And Gone
I'm intrigued by your twist on canon and look forward to reading more.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Stories
I like how you've worked plot points in from the original and still made it your own.
Summary: If you faced losing everything…
Would you trade your mortality to keep just a part of what you have? Count the cost before you decide.
One year after BD and all is not well. Bella's newborn year was way too easy. The newest Cullens are much harder to handle-both of them. Jasper has a tough year ahead dealing with these two! Flashes of human memories add to the tension and mystery.
Once the venom courses through your veins it’s too late to change your mind.
New banner by Sunray16!!!
Carlisle Cullen considers himself a doctor first and a vampire second. His focus is to protect life. What he finds at a fatal crash seen causes him to break the treaty his family has honored for over 80 years. The entire Cullen family will face the consequences of his last minute decision. Now the wolves are pissed and the Volturi are getting nervous.
Scott and Diane started out on a family vacation they would never finish. After losing their lives and children through the fires of transformation, can they still hang on to each other? Diane's human memories, once thought lost, are slowly breaking through in the strangest of ways. Why does she recognize the vampire in one of Esme's treasured albums? By the time the Cullens figure out what's going on, all they can do is prepare for the inevitable.
This is a story of love, loss, and picking up the pieces. Even for immortals time only moves forward. There really is no way back.
Aug. 2011 Nominated in the best Angst/Drama Category
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Other Character, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes
Word count: 162730
[Report This] Published: February 02, 2011 Updated: February 08, 2012
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 06, 2011
Title: Chapter 3: 3-Hunting Is Not Just A Guy Thing
Ah, the children. Leaving my child behind would break my heart. Author's Response: Yes... I actually teared up writing that part. Having children myself I related to them at that moment.
Thank you for your review!
~Midnight Ariel~
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 06, 2011
Title: Chapter 2: 2-Awakening
I loved their fear that they would starve because he was a lousy hunter as a human. That was a funny moment in a dramatic chapter. Author's Response: Thank you for your review. Comedy is a good tension breaker.
~MA
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 06, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: 1-The Road Less Traveled
Great start! I'm looking forward to more. Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to review.
~MA
Summary: Bella Black has it all. The house. The job. The husband and soon the baby. But, suddenly Bella's world is thrown into disarray when a blast from the past gets way too close.
Soon, Bella's whole world is slipping through her fingers. Will she ever get it back? And does it really matter anyway with the arrival of the green-eyed lawyer?
One things for sure - there's a fever in the courts and nobody's immune...
Thank you to Readergoof for my amazing banner! :D
Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No
Word count: 28023
[Report This] Published: February 05, 2011 Updated: November 23, 2011
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 09, 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Raging Hormones
The reunion was funny. I wonder if everybody feels that way--awkward and hesitant--when they go, or if it's just us normal people.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Birth
Sweet!
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