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Penname: VictoriaCullen [ Contact]
Real name: Vickie
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Member Since: March 14, 2009
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Nothin much to tell. Wife. Mom. Daughter. Teacher. Students. Closet Twilight fan fiction addict who might actually leave her husband if Carlisle were real and single--even though he's a bit old for me. I try not to date guys over 250, but for him I'd make an exception.
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Summary: Tragedy and heartbreak have met Bella and Edward at every turn. Now madly in love and ready to start their lives, everything is looking up. Little do they know the worst is yet to come. A/H M B&E
Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 5809
[Report This] Published: December 29, 2010 Updated: January 05, 2011
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 29, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
SO sad but beautifully written.
Summary:
 Thank you Salix Caprea for the wonderful banner!
This is the sequel to How to Win Back the Love of Your Existence. It's been nearly two years since we last saw Bella and Edward. As you may remember, at that time, Bella had just accepted Edward's marriage proposal under the condition they would have a long engagement. The proverbial honeymoon period of their relationship is coming to an end and with that, some deep seated problems with their relationship are starting to surface. Edward has a hard time telling Bella no--even when he should. Throw in some of those other things that all couples have to get over, i.e. jealousy inducing admirers, differing tastes in music and politics, horny bisexual friends, and a fight for dominance in the bedroom, and you have the background in which Edward is going to have to figure out HOW TO GET YOUR BALLS BACK. And of course all of the Cullens will be there to help him find his way. EPOV.
Categories: AU Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes
Word count: 53351
[Report This] Published: January 01, 2011 Updated: June 26, 2011
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 27, 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - I'm Mad As Hell...
Many times I think Edward overreacts. This isn't one of them.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 06, 2011
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Trepidation
Edward was wise to protect his balls. LOL
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 24, 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Miami Vices
I don't blame Edward for being angry, and I'm glad you make your Bella and Edward a little less perfect.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 20, 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Brotherly Bonding
The Emmett? LOL However, I know a lot of girls who'd be all over that--literally and figuratively!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 22, 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - In Seach of Wisdom
Go on and send your drunken sis. I teach at a public school--nothing scares me. :o)
Funny, especially swearing Carlisle. There's something about a hot vampire doctor with a potty mouth that melts my butter. Mmmm...
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 28, 2011
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Edward Meets Miss Sweeney
Uh oh. Most girls really don't like walking in on their men doing that. I'm interested in seeing what they have to say about that.
Summary: 
Bella Swan moved to Forks, Washington, to teach at the small Quilleute Indian Reservation in La Push. Despite recovering from a broken heart, she enters into a turbulent and passionate relationship with the mysteriously artistic Jacob Black. Race relations between the towns, Jacob’s past, and Bella's former lover, Edward, complicate their relationship, but in the end is he exactly what she always needed?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges: Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 20 Completed: No
Word count: 84497
[Report This] Published: January 03, 2011 Updated: November 18, 2011
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 01, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Very enjoyable first chapter. You're laying a foundation for a good story. I look forward to more.
Summary: A one shot look into Rosalie's mind as she thinks about Nessie and Bella.
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 743
[Report This] Published: January 03, 2011 Updated: January 14, 2011
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 17, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Not Mine (One-shot Jenny Cullen)
There is a feeling of desperation associated with desiring something so basic and elemental as motherhood when you can't have it. I can relate to Rosalie's feelings and think you did a great job showing them.
Summary:
Every time the Cullen's move they must change their names and assume a new identity. This is Alice's view of who she really is, and who she will always be in her heart.
One- shot. Alice's POV. Alice/Jasper.
Validation Beta: nowforruin
Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Alice
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 1246
[Report This] Published: January 04, 2011 Updated: January 22, 2011
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 22, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: (One-shot)
I am a huge Alice fan, so I am grateful for the excellent character study on her.
Summary:
"Edward, it's nice. Where did it come from?" Emmett asked, ignoring its antique patina, rubbing the gold coin between his fingers.
"A sunken ship," I answered, shaking my head at his lack of appreciation for the age of the coin. I should have known better.
"How did you find a sunken ship?" he asked, suddenly interested.
"A dolphin led me to it," I answered reluctantly.
A strange story Edward told me one night when I couldn't sleep.
One shot story that refers to events in my book "What Others Cannot Do." In canon.
Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Edward, Emmett
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 6168
[Report This] Published: January 05, 2011 Updated: January 05, 2011
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 06, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Pirate Treasure
What a fun story! Please write more little treasures like this. Author's Response: I have a few in progress.
*smile*
Thanks
Summary: What happens when Emmett and Rosalie decide to take part in the school play?
Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Emmett, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 3831
[Report This] Published: January 08, 2011 Updated: January 21, 2011
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 21, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Kiss Me, Rose
I didn't expect Emmett to kill her. I guess she deserved it, but remind me not to make him mad. Great job!
Summary: On Bella's first day of college, she's seated next to mirror image of her dead mother. In her quest to find out the truth behind the resemblance, she's drawn into a world she never knew existed
Categories: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: No
Word count: 28116
[Report This] Published: January 11, 2011 Updated: January 28, 2013
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 03, 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Wisely, and slowly. They stumble that run fast.
I wasn't sure what to expect, but I really like it. It's different and very good. Author's Response: Thanks, I am going for different, and it is nice to hear that I am on a very good path...
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 26, 2011
Title: Chapter 5: The lady doth protest too much
I figured Edward wasn't Bella's father, but I still can't piece it all together. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Author's Response: Next chapter is up, you will be able to read it soon, thanks for the feedback...
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 14, 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Listen to many, speak to a few
I am very much looking forward to putting all the pieces together. I'm still a little muddled: is Bella Edward's daughter or did he just happen to be there when she was born? I can't wait to find out! Author's Response: I am very much looking forward to the feedback when it all comes together. What is muddy will become clear...
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: April 15, 2011
Title: Chapter 6: And oftentimes excusing of a fault doth make the fault the worse by the excuse.
No, no! Don't let them take your computer! I'm still a little muddled as to who's who, but I think that's me and not you. Author's Response: I am happy to say that my computer is still in my possesion, although very sick with a virus. Who are you muddled about, I'll be happy to answer if I can. Thanks for the feedback. I will be updating within 7 days. Let me know what you think...
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 22, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
What an interesting start! I am eager to read more. Author's Response: Thanks. I just uploaded the next chapter, here is the first line.
Things became creepier when a man with dark copper brown hair came into the classroom and sat beside the statuesque flaxen female.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 25, 2011
Title: Chapter 3: 'Tis best to weigh The enemy more mighty than he seems
I knew who it was, of course, but I'm very interested in seeing exactly what happened. Author's Response: Are you a mind reader, also. If so, I would love to have a conversation with you, thanks for the feedback...
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: July 20, 2011
Title: Chapter 8: Pleasure and action make the hours seem short
I don't think Carlisle was too harse on Edward. He's got to be responsible for how he treats Kate. Author's Response:
You should get an email with a teaser; let me know if you don't. Thanks...
Summary: 
To the outside world, it would seem as if Bella Black has everything. On what should have been a blissful evening, her life turns upside down and falls apart. As doctors race to find a way to fix the hole in her daughter's heart, can Edward Cullen fix the hole in Bella's?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No
Word count: 88368
[Report This] Published: January 11, 2011 Updated: November 11, 2011
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 29, 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Where's My Sunshine?
I love the interaction with all the Cullens. Keep it up! Author's Response: Coming soon to a website near you...chapter 3 has plenty of interaction among the Cullen's. And a re-introduction (it's about damn time!) between Bella and Edward. Thanks so much for giving this story a chance Victoria, it's nice to see you again!
Mick
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 29, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Who's Hormonal?
Engaging first chapter. I normally don't read fics where Edward or Bella are married to other people, but yours is worth a try. Author's Response: Thanks so much Victoria. Your words are very encouraging and I appreciate you giving my little story a try.
Mick
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 26, 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Words of Omission
I wish Bella would open her eyes, but then it would be a really short story. :o) Oh, and Jake should be run over by a truck for deserting Bella and Tansy. Author's Response: Jake run over by a truck huh? That could be arranged...lol. We aren't through with poor Jacob yet. Thanks so much for staying with my stories Victoria! It means a lot to me that you spend the time to review!
Mick
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: August 13, 2011
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 No Such Thing As A Black Swan
Your Jacob is such a tool. You make him easy to hate. The family interaction was sweet. :o) Author's Response: Hey Victoria! I can think of a few more, much more disgusting names to call him but I can't type them in good company. lol. Lots more family interaction to come. lots of drama too. But always a happily ever after. Thanks so much for taking the time to read and leave a review for me.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 06, 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Bella Comes Clean
Renee is a piece of work; Bella was smart to tell her to take a hike. She isn't so smart where Edward is concerned, but I figure she'll get smarter about that. Author's Response: Awww, Victoria, this review showed up almost immediately (okay 15 minutes, tops) after I got the email saying it was updated and I wish I could answer reviews from my iPhone. I am sure the men in my office wondered what the little squeal was coming from my closed door. I immediately hooked into my im service and told Lola we already got a review...What a fantastic way to a Friday at boring old work. This review just picked me right up and was the opening act for a great weekend. Thanks so much!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 07, 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Let's Do Lunch
Oooh, Edward's such a smooth talker--not. I look forward to seeing how he digs his way out of that one. Author's Response: Heya Victoria! I almost felt bad for writing him that awkward, it was painful to type it! He'll soon become the Edward we all know and love. Thanks so much for sharing your review with me! I love hearing from you!
Mick
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