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Penname: VictoriaCullen [Contact]
Real name: Vickie
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Member Since: March 14, 2009
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Nothin much to tell.  Wife.  Mom.  Daughter. Teacher. Students.  Closet Twilight fan fiction addict who might actually leave her husband if Carlisle were real and single--even though he's a bit old for me.  I try not to date guys over 250, but for him I'd make an exception.


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Reviews by VictoriaCullen
 
Summary:

On Bella's first day of college, she's seated next to mirror image of her dead mother. In her quest to find out the truth behind the resemblance, she's drawn into a world she never knew existed

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Categories: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No Word count: 32168
[Report This] Published: January 11, 2011 Updated: May 13, 2014


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Wisely, and slowly. They stumble that run fast.

I wasn't sure what to expect, but I really like it.  It's different and very good.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I am going for different, and it is nice to hear that I am on a very good path...

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: The lady doth protest too much

I figured Edward wasn't Bella's father, but I still can't piece it all together.  I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter. 



Author's Response:

Next chapter is up, you will be able to read it soon, thanks for the feedback...

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Listen to many, speak to a few

I am very much looking forward to putting all the pieces together.  I'm still a little muddled: is Bella Edward's daughter or did he just happen to be there when she was born?  I can't wait to find out!



Author's Response:

I am very much looking forward to the feedback when it all comes together. What is muddy will become clear...

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: April 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: And oftentimes excusing of a fault doth make the fault the worse by the excuse.

No, no!  Don't let them take your computer!  I'm still a little muddled as to who's who, but I think that's me and not you.



Author's Response:

I am happy to say that my computer is still in my possesion, although very sick with a virus. Who are you muddled about, I'll be happy to answer if I can. Thanks for the feedback. I will be updating within 7 days. Let me know what you think...

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

What an interesting start!  I am eager to read more.



Author's Response:

Thanks. I just uploaded the next chapter, here is the first line.

 

Things became creepier when a man with dark copper brown hair came into the classroom and sat beside the statuesque flaxen female.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: 'Tis best to weigh The enemy more mighty than he seems

I knew who it was, of course, but I'm very interested in seeing exactly what happened. 



Author's Response:

Are you a mind reader, also. If so, I would love to have a conversation with you, thanks for the feedback...

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: July 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Pleasure and action make the hours seem short

I don't think Carlisle was too harse on Edward.  He's got to be responsible for how he treats Kate.



Author's Response:

You should get an email with a teaser; let me know if you don't. Thanks...

 
Summary:

 

To the outside world, it would seem as if Bella Black has everything. On what should have been a blissful evening, her life turns upside down and falls apart. As doctors race to find a way to fix the hole in her daughter's heart, can Edward Cullen fix the hole in Bella's?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 88368
[Report This] Published: January 12, 2011 Updated: November 12, 2011


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Where's My Sunshine?

I  love the interaction with all the Cullens.  Keep it up!



Author's Response:

Coming soon to a website near you...chapter 3 has plenty of interaction among the Cullen's. And a re-introduction (it's about damn time!) between Bella and Edward. Thanks so much for giving this story a chance Victoria, it's nice to see you again!

Mick

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Who's Hormonal?

Engaging first chapter.  I normally don't read fics where Edward or Bella are married to other people, but yours is worth a try.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much Victoria. Your words are very encouraging and I appreciate you giving my little story a try.

Mick

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Words of Omission

I wish Bella would open her eyes, but then it would be a really short story. :o) Oh, and Jake should be run over by a truck for deserting Bella and Tansy.



Author's Response:

Jake run over by a truck huh? That could be arranged...lol. We aren't through with poor Jacob yet. Thanks so much for staying with my stories Victoria! It means a lot to me that you spend the time to review!

Mick 

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: August 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 No Such Thing As A Black Swan

Your Jacob is such a tool.  You make him easy to hate.  The family interaction was sweet. :o)



Author's Response:

Hey Victoria! I can think of a few more, much more disgusting names to call him but I can't type them in good company. lol. Lots more family interaction to come. lots of drama too. But always a happily ever after. Thanks so much for taking the time to read and leave a review for me.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Bella Comes Clean

Renee is a piece of work; Bella was smart to tell her to take a hike.  She isn't so smart where Edward is concerned, but I figure she'll get smarter about that.



Author's Response:

Awww, Victoria, this review showed up almost immediately (okay 15 minutes, tops) after I got the email saying it was updated and I wish I could answer reviews from my iPhone. I am sure the men in my office wondered what the little squeal was coming from my closed door. I immediately hooked into my im service and told Lola we already got a review...What a fantastic way to a Friday at boring old work. This review just picked me right up and was the opening act for a great weekend. Thanks so much!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Let's Do Lunch

Oooh, Edward's such a smooth talker--not. I look forward to seeing how he digs his way out of that one.



Author's Response:

Heya Victoria! I almost felt bad for writing him that awkward, it was painful to type it! He'll soon become the Edward we all know and love. Thanks so much for sharing your review with me! I love hearing from you!

Mick

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Words Of Admission

Aw, cute--embarrassed Edward is adorable. 



Author's Response:

Thanks Victoria! I love Edward in this story...kinda awkward, and just a little bit socially inept. He's so sweet though, I overlook his faults. I appreciate you sticking by me with yet another story. Thanks so much!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 What Are We Doing?

Poor Edward--he must be pretty insecure to be so jealous. 

I enjoyed this chapter and am always glad to see an update. :o)



Author's Response:

Thanks Victoria. You are always quick to respond when I update and I appreciate your loyalty to my little story. Lmao - you are always glad for an update and I am always glad for the review. Thanks so much for sticking with me. I know I have said it in the past, but it's worth repeating. Y'all ROCK!

Mick

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: June 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Edward Cullen - Baby Whisperer

Jacob is a loser who doesn't deserve to have Tansy in his life. 



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Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: July 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Grounded

Bella's speech about Renee was really good.  I enjoy your story, even if I'm not always the best reviewer.



Author's Response:

Um, not the best reviewer? What. The. Hell. Lol, have I not made it clear that I like all my reviews? It can be as simple as two words (i.e. 'good chapter' or 'bad chapter'), or it can be lengthy. I love ALL my reviews. They all make me smile and more than the review itself is the fact that you took time out of your day for me...no matter how long it took. You review, I appreciate it. Period. Thanks so much!

 
Summary:

Dawn inherits a family estate in Texas. She goes through the attic and finds a trunk of family treasures that lead her to discover that her great-great…uncle is still walking the Earth as a vampire.

 

I know crossovers aren't the most popular around here, but I'm hoping you will give this one a chance.  I'm all about healing Jasper's emotional wounds and I think he needs some family to help him do that.


Categories: Crossover Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Charlotte, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Peter, Rosalie, Sam, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 21364
[Report This] Published: January 12, 2011 Updated: July 04, 2012


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Surprise!

I'm not a Buffy fan by any means, but that doesn't mean I can't enjoy your story.  It took me a minute to get my bearings, but once I did I really liked the ride. :o)

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Meet & Greet

I think I'd understand more if I knew more about Buffy, but I like it a lot.

 
Summary:

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Alice married out of obligation years ago, and now realizes that friendship and loyalty aren’t enough to make a marriage work.

 

After discovering her husband is developing feelings for someone else, she decides to set him free and along the way realizes she deserves happiness, too.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 13848
[Report This] Published: January 12, 2011 Updated: February 16, 2011


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Alice's Story

It was easy to figure out where the story was headed, but I really loved the trip.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it.  :)

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Edward's Story ~ Arizona Hale

I loved both points of view.  Really cute little story!!



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you like it!

 
Summary:

Edward and Bella meet under horrible circumstances. Will both be able to make it out alive? Entry for Nightmare Before Christmas Contest. OS ExB


Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 9192
[Report This] Published: January 12, 2011 Updated: January 13, 2011


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So, so sad.  I figure Bella's with her family now, but it doesn't make all the pain go away.  Poor Bella.  Poor Edward.  Poor everybody.  You did a great job on the story, though, no matter how sad.



Author's Response: Thanks for the review....even more thanks for seeing the emotion behind it all.

 
Ricochet by Jenndur Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 85]
Summary:

"It's like I'm the bullet in a gun.  One pull of the trigger and it could mean the end of someone's life..." Can Edward help save Isabella from her self-destructive behaviors or will he just push her closer to the edge?

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This story contains adult subject matter, strong language, controversial topics, drug and underage alcohol use, mentions of rape, consensual sexual content, and self-injury.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 93789
[Report This] Published: January 16, 2011 Updated: January 09, 2012


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: One Of Those Days

What's up with Edward?



Author's Response:

I know, I know.  Edward is coming off like a total jerk, but his behavior will be explained in a few chapters.  I hope you'll continue to read.  Thanks for the review! : )

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Glimpse Into Hell

Okay, I can understand some of Bella's anger.  She feels neglected by her father and she's molested by her loser step-father.  That would be enough to screw up any kid.



Author's Response:

Yeah, she is definitely screwed up at the moment.  I'm glad that I've been able to portray her anger in a way that was understandable.  Thanks for the review! : )

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I'm interested to see what's happened to Bella to make her feel this way. 



Author's Response:

Hey there!  Thanks so much for taking the time to review!  I'm glad you've found this interesting and hope that you'll continue to read my story.  : )

 




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