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Penname: VictoriaCullen [Contact]
Real name: Vickie
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Member Since: March 14, 2009
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Nothin much to tell.  Wife.  Mom.  Daughter. Teacher. Students.  Closet Twilight fan fiction addict who might actually leave her husband if Carlisle were real and single--even though he's a bit old for me.  I try not to date guys over 250, but for him I'd make an exception.


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Reviews by VictoriaCullen
 
Summary:

Sequel to Deliver Me From Evil. After Bella's ex-boyfriend is dealt with by Edward, she must now face the difficult decision of becoming a vampire. And complicating her decision even more is her three-year old son, Ben. Also, Bella is having some doubts about this decision, so how will she know what she truly wants? And is what she desires what is best for her and her son?

A huge thanks to Edward143Bella for the fantastic banner!


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 35803
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2010 Updated: April 25, 2011


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: A Change Will Do You Good

Your chapter was very true to canon but not just a paraphrasing.  I can't wait to see how much control she shows.  Loved it!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I worked really hard on the conversion scene, but did not read the book so that I wouldn't copy it. I was a bit disappointed in the book in that she had perfect control, and so I did change that part to make it more realistic (as realistic as a vampire conversion could be, haha!). I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter, it was one of my favorites! Thanks so much for reading and always reviewing. You're awesome!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Trouble

Poor little Ben!  I can't blame Bella for her choice, but it's hard.  Great job!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Yes, poor Ben is not adjusting well to his mom being gone. The poor kid's been through so much already! But they will be reunited soon, and we'll see how they both adjust to each other. THanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: April 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Home Sweet Home

Great chapter!  I had a terrible, horrible, no good, very bad day today, but your story made me feel a whole lot better.  Thank you for that.



Author's Response:

Well, thank you! I also had a bad day and your review brightened mine as well! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter with their reunion. We'll see what happens next very soon! Thanks so much for reading!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Boulevard of Broken Dreams

I loved Deliver Me From Evil and am excited about this story.  Thank for writing!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! The inspiration for the sequel has hit me, so updates should be regular. Thank you so much for sticking with me and taking the time to read and review! It is much appreciated! :)

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: I Want You To Want Me

Love Emmett!  He's hilarious. 

I'm glad your Bella is a little reticent about changing.  It's huge--especially with a child. 



Author's Response:

I love Emmett, too. He's one of my favorite characters. And yes, Bella is having a hard decision regarding her change with Ben thrown into the mix. As a parent, many times we forgo what we want for our kids, but her feelings for Edward are something she's never experienced before, which is causing her to really struggle with the decision.

Thanks so much for your kind review and for taking the time to read and review! It's much appreciated!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: White Wedding

Lovely wedding. :o) Your writing is very descriptive and has a wonderful balance of canon and original.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I really enjoyed writing the wedding scene and I hope you enjoy the honeymoon scene just a much ;) Thank you so much for reading and for your wonderful review! I really do appreciate it!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Good Vibrations

I like the Bahamas idea, and I think having Bella be nervous is very realistic.  Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you! They have been to Isle Esme so much, I decided to send them someplace else! And I tried to keep it realistic, so I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Just posted another update!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: River of Dreams

I didn't expect Eric's mother to show up, but it's very logical that she would.  Surprising twist in an excellent chapter!



Author's Response:

Yes, she's kind of a wild card, but she's going to wonder where her darling baby has gone to! Thanks so much for your awesome review and for taking the time to read and leave me a note! Next chapter will be up soon!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: I Love, You Love

Christmas was what I would expect from the Cullens--a little too much, a little over the top.  The red satin nightgown and the portrait were perfect.  Can I admit I'm a little scared about Bella's transformation? 



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed the satin nightgown. I'm sure Alice picked it out, LOL! I think Bella is a little nervous about it too, although she doesn't want to admit it. And I'm glad you enjoyed Christmas at the Cullen house! I thought we needed a bit of a lighter mood before we get into the meat and potatoes of the story. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! It is much appreciated! :)

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Stuck in a Hard Place

I couldn't imagine leaving my child, but I guess Bella will be with him forever.



Author's Response:

Personally, I couldn't either. But Bella is blinded by Edward and that is all she can think about. I hope you will find Ben's reaction to her absence as believable because he is not the perfect child, as you will find out. There will be prices paid for her decision. Thank you so much for reading and reviewig!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: I Just Want to Make Love to You

I'm torn.  I want Bella and Edward together forever, and I wouldn't want to be much older--but I wouldn't want to leave my child either. 



Author's Response:

Personally I feel the same as you do, and it has been a challenge for me to write this, because I want to smack Bella upside the head. But, to stay true to what I think she would do, I am soldiering on with the plot, and I am finding it interesting getting in her head with her being a mother. She hasn't taken this decision lightly, but she hasn't chosen what I think we would have all decided, either. Then again, if I were faced with Edward... LOL. Nah, I couldn't leave my kids for anything. Thanks so much for your thoughts on this! I always enjoy reading your reviews! :)

 
Arranged Vows by ange de l aube Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 71]
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Edward's father, the Duke of Devonshire, dies leaving very specific conditions on his will. In order to take possession of his inheritance Edward must marry a woman with a title.

Lady Isabella Swan, daughter of the Earl of Bridgewater is facing serious monetary problems after her father's death. All she has to her name is her title and the house she and her mother inhabit. She's desperate to find a solution to her problems which comes in the form of Edward's marriage proposal. Set in England, 1850.

Banner made by me :)

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 28776
[Report This] Published: December 29, 2010 Updated: January 04, 2013


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: An Arranged Life

I'm very much looking forward to more!

 
Summary:

Tragedy and heartbreak have met Bella and Edward at every turn. Now madly in love and ready to start their lives, everything is looking up. Little do they know the worst is yet to come. A/H M B&E


Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5809
[Report This] Published: December 29, 2010 Updated: January 05, 2011


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

SO sad but beautifully written.

 
Summary:

 

  Thank  you Salix Caprea for the wonderful banner!

This is the sequel to How to Win Back the Love of Your Existence. It's been nearly two years since we last saw Bella and Edward.  As you may remember, at that time, Bella had just accepted Edward's marriage proposal under the condition they would have a long engagement.  The proverbial honeymoon period of their relationship is coming to an end and with that, some deep seated problems with their relationship are starting to surface. Edward has a hard time telling Bella no--even when he should. Throw in some of those other things that all couples have to get over, i.e. jealousy inducing admirers, differing tastes in music and politics, horny bisexual friends, and a fight for dominance in the bedroom, and you have the background in which Edward is going to have to figure out HOW TO GET YOUR BALLS BACK. And of course all of the Cullens will be there to help him find his way.  EPOV.


Categories: AU Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 53351
[Report This] Published: January 01, 2011 Updated: June 26, 2011


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - I'm Mad As Hell...

Many times I think Edward overreacts.  This isn't one of them. 

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Trepidation

Edward was wise to protect his balls. LOL

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Miami Vices

I don't blame Edward for being angry, and I'm glad you make your Bella and Edward a little less perfect.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Brotherly Bonding

The Emmett?  LOL  However, I know a lot of girls who'd be all over that--literally and figuratively!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - In Seach of Wisdom

Go on and send your drunken sis.  I teach at a public school--nothing scares me. :o)

Funny, especially swearing Carlisle.  There's something about a hot vampire doctor with a potty mouth that melts my butter. Mmmm...

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Edward Meets Miss Sweeney

Uh oh.  Most girls really don't like walking in on their men doing that.  I'm interested in seeing what they have to say about that.

 
Summary:

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Bella Swan moved to Forks, Washington, to teach at the small Quilleute Indian Reservation in La Push.  Despite recovering from a broken heart, she enters into a turbulent and passionate relationship with the mysteriously artistic Jacob Black.  Race relations between the towns, Jacob’s past, and Bella's former lover, Edward, complicate their relationship, but in the end is he exactly what she always needed?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 84497
[Report This] Published: January 03, 2011 Updated: November 18, 2011


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very enjoyable first chapter.  You're laying a foundation for a good story.  I look forward to more.

 
Not Mine by LizzySwan1022 Rated: PG [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

A one shot look into Rosalie's mind as she thinks about Nessie and Bella.


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 743
[Report This] Published: January 03, 2011 Updated: January 14, 2011


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Not Mine (One-shot Jenny Cullen)

There is a feeling of desperation associated with desiring something so basic and elemental as motherhood when you can't have it. I can relate to Rosalie's feelings and think you did a great job showing them.

 
Summary:

 

Every time the Cullen's move they must change their names and assume a new identity. This is Alice's view of who she really is, and who she will always be in her heart.

 One- shot. Alice's POV. Alice/Jasper.

 

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Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Alice
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1246
[Report This] Published: January 04, 2011 Updated: January 22, 2011


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: (One-shot)

I am a huge Alice fan, so I am grateful for the excellent character study on her.

 
Summary:

What happens when Emmett and Rosalie decide to take part in the school play?

 


Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Emmett, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3831
[Report This] Published: January 08, 2011 Updated: January 21, 2011


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Kiss Me, Rose

I didn't expect Emmett to kill her.  I guess she deserved it, but remind me not to make him mad. Great job!

 
Summary:

On Bella's first day of college, she's seated next to mirror image of her dead mother. In her quest to find out the truth behind the resemblance, she's drawn into a world she never knew existed

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Categories: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No Word count: 32168
[Report This] Published: January 11, 2011 Updated: May 13, 2014


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Wisely, and slowly. They stumble that run fast.

I wasn't sure what to expect, but I really like it.  It's different and very good.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I am going for different, and it is nice to hear that I am on a very good path...

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: The lady doth protest too much

I figured Edward wasn't Bella's father, but I still can't piece it all together.  I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter. 



Author's Response:

Next chapter is up, you will be able to read it soon, thanks for the feedback...

 




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