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Penname: VictoriaCullen [Contact]
Real name: Vickie
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Member Since: March 14, 2009
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Nothin much to tell.  Wife.  Mom.  Daughter. Teacher. Students.  Closet Twilight fan fiction addict who might actually leave her husband if Carlisle were real and single--even though he's a bit old for me.  I try not to date guys over 250, but for him I'd make an exception.


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Reviews by VictoriaCullen
 
Summary:

Edward and Bella turn their hatred and anger against each other after suffering a tragic loss.  Can they recover?  Follow their story; the story of three hearts.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 11923
[Report This] Published: October 26, 2010 Updated: December 05, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: December 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Strength of the...

That was beautiful.  I don't know how anyone can get past the loss of a child, but you did you characters justice.



Author's Response:

One of the things my mother-in-law told me was that the hardest obstacles to overcome within a marriage is 1)loss of a child or 2) taking care of a sick spouse.

Either of these can make or break a marriage.  And a lot of times it has nothing to do with whether or not you love that person, it's all about how you can adjust with that person being a constant reminder of what you are struggling with or struggled with. 

Thank you for saying I did them justice.  I was worried because I haven't experienced this kind of loss.  Your review means so much to me, so thanks!

 
Reawaken My Soul by ep043148 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

The sadness Bella feels over her husband's despondent attitude as of late is killing her... and then she learns of Carlisle's terminal illness. Can she and Edward fulfill his last dying hope of a grandchild before it's too late? Or have Bella and Edward grown too far apart to reignite the flame that flickered once upon a time ago.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 8852
[Report This] Published: October 27, 2010 Updated: December 03, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: November 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great first chapter!  I'm dying to know what's eating Edward.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: December 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

OH my goodness--there's so much pain between them, but there's obviously so much love deep down.

 
Summary:

break

 

Bella Swan has been crushing on a geeky but very hot Edward Masen. Prom is coming soon. Will Bella's dream come true? Will Edward get the courage to ask Bella? What happens when Edward overhears a very embarrassing conversation about getting laid? AU-AH. One-Shot. Pure fluff.

Update(10-28-10): Yes it is complete, but I am in the process of adding another chapter.


Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1818
[Report This] Published: October 29, 2010 Updated: December 08, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: December 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Break Me Out

I love nerds, and Nerdy Edward is even better.  Cute little story!

 
Summary:

Seattle's Most Banner

 

Bella swan is working as a reporter for the Seattle Tribune when an assignment comes across her desk she doesn't want. However, she gets stuck writing Seattle's Most Eligible Bachelor's What happens when she crosses paths with the elusive Edward Cullen.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 311
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2010 Updated: January 15, 2012


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 06, 2011 Title: Seattle's Most

A guy who'll take care of you when you've been throwing up is one in a million.  So's your story!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 14, 2011 Title: Seattle's Most

I know Edward and Bella will end up together because, duh, this is Twilight fan fiction.  However, I'm enjoying their journey very much.  You've done a great job with characterization.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: April 10, 2011 Title: Seattle's Most

I know why I'd be late if I had Edward in my life, and I hope that's the case for Bella. ;o)

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 14, 2011 Title: Seattle's Most

Sometimes a story starts off really great but dies around the fourth or fifth chapter. I'm glad that's not the case with yours!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 14, 2011 Title: Seattle's Most

I'm getting out my checkbook and can't wait to see if Emmett's news is more than just the auction. ;o)

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 14, 2011 Title: Seattle's Most

I think I love it already.  I never fall in love this easily....

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 28, 2011 Title: Seattle's Most

I'm snickering at my monitor--and therefore earning odd sidelong glances from the hubby. 

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen is more than shocked when, five years after he left Forks, Bella Swan calls - warning of Victoria’s intended attack on the Cullen coven – and insisting that the vampires need her help.

 

bright star banner

 

A tale of love, revenge, forgiveness and forever. 

 


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Nessie, Quil, Renesmee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 11344
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2010 Updated: December 30, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: December 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Hell

The part about Charlie broke my heart!  I've always hated Victoria, but now I hate her far more.



Author's Response:

Thanks soooo much for reading and reviewing Bright Star, Victoria Cullen :) yes, Victoria's a byotch. I hope you continue to enjoy this lil' fic o' mine!

:) Little Miss Mionie

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: December 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Scars

I'm not sure which one is better at self-flagellation--Edward or Bella--but you do a great job writing them.



Author's Response:

Haha, very wise words ;) Thanks so much for commenting on my writing style! I'm very glad that you are enjoying Bright Star, Victoria Cullen!

 

xox

Little Miss Mionie

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: December 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Reconcile

Bella gave in a little too quickly for my taste, but I can see why.  I'm enjoying this story very much.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you are enjoying it, VictoriaCullen :) Cute penname, btw!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: December 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Fight

GREAT ENDING!



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!!!!!

 

xox

 
Summary:

Best All Human - Gem Awards

Edward knows just what his uptight pre-med brother Carlisle needs: a night out with a smart, sexy co-ed! What happens when Edward and his BFF Alice set Carlisle up on a blind date? The alcohol flows, sexual tension mounts, and lemons fly!

Originally written for the Will You Marry Me? writing challenge.  Winner of Best All Human - Gem Awards


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Esme
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5014
[Report This] Published: October 31, 2010 Updated: November 29, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: November 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love Carlisle stories, and hot virgin Carlisle stories are to die for!

If Esme won't marry him--I will!



Author's Response:

Hey, wait -- me first!!  I love Dr. Daddy -- virgin or not!  Thanks for the review and the giggle!

 
Summary:

Edwards conscious life came to an end in September 1918 and returned after three days of unrelenting pain.  How did he meet Carlisle, why did he seem so familiar.  Why did Carlisle chose Edward to be the one after all his years of being alone.  Edward might be talented but why and how did that influence Carlisle's decision. 

With Carlisle’s emotions opened by Edward and their new family, a new challenge arises when he finds Esme now a woman, dying.  Buried emotions flare and he takes another chance.

In canon and historically accurate.


Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Carlisle, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, Esme
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 90952
[Report This] Published: November 03, 2010 Updated: January 07, 2011


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: December 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Returning Home

It was sad to think of Edward going through his parents' things, but I loved that he took the time to see that the housekeepers were taken care of. 

I enjoy this story so much.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Old Friends

Robin,

Please ask Carlisle and Edward nicely and tell them Victoria said please. :o)



Author's Response:

We are looking, I found one I had totally forgotten about.  Maybe..!

 

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Old Friends

No, Cullens, don't go!  I will miss you too much.  :o)

Seriously, this story is one of the best I've read, and believe me I've read far too many to admit to.  It fits perfectly with canon, it's so well-written, and the grammar is correct (yay for good grammar!!)  I want it to go on and on.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much

I'll see what Edward and Carlisle will come up with.  We have little story snippets here and there in spiral notebooks under the bed we might pull out and get into. 

If I ask nicely.  Who knows what they might tell me!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: December 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Do Not Breathe

Great chapter!  There was humor and sadness (Edward hearing about his dad's feelings for him brought tears to my eyes), and the characterization made Edward and Carlisle so real.

This is a hidden gem!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: December 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Influenza

Well-written and true to canon.  I look forward to reading more. 

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: December 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Dr. Cullen

Great Carlisle POV.  I'm particulary fond of him, and I think you did him justice.



Author's Response:

I love Carlisle too, he is so complex.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: December 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Edward

Of course I knew what was coming, but your depiction of Edward's parents dying made me cry.  Very emotive!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: December 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Decision

It's interesting to think that perhaps Elizabeth did have some sort of gift to know what Carlisle is.  Excellent story that deserves to be read by many more people.  A hidden treasure!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: December 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Second Life

What dynamic descriptions!  I could see exactly what Edward was experiencing.

 




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