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Penname: VictoriaCullen [Contact]
Real name: Vickie
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Member Since: March 14, 2009
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Nothin much to tell.  Wife.  Mom.  Daughter. Teacher. Students.  Closet Twilight fan fiction addict who might actually leave her husband if Carlisle were real and single--even though he's a bit old for me.  I try not to date guys over 250, but for him I'd make an exception.


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Reviews by VictoriaCullen
 
Summary:

One shot.  Edward never came back in NM.  Bella has, against her deepest desires, continued to grow up and has found a way to move on with her life.  Now, five years later, she’s spending her summer traveling abroad with a college friend when she sees something familiar in a club.  Submitted for the Hot Summer Nights challenge at PTB.


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4568
[Report This] Published: September 19, 2010 Updated: October 01, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: October 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Hopelessly Devoted (Oneshot)

Beautiful story.  I appreciate that you were able to tell a romantic and erotic story without being smutty.  Awesome!

 
Summary:

High-schooler Bella and grad-student Edward share an instant, explosive attraction but are forced to separate because of a hideous occurrence.  Seven years later, they unexpectedly meet again and must fight through their almost destructive mutual hunger to discover if their past can be overcome.

What Happened to You

Thanks to the amazing Rosalynn for my truly stunning banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 55349
[Report This] Published: September 19, 2010 Updated: November 19, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: September 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Boy, you really don't waste any time, do you?  I seriously intended to read this one chapter then blow the story off like I do so many others.  Now I can't.  It's too good to stop.



Author's Response:

Thanks, VictoriaCullen!  So glad I pulled you in - I tried for a really pulse-pounding start to whet the appetite - I do so hope you stay with me!  Thanks for the review.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: November 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

This story was sad and intense and horrific at times.  I don't know how you could have told so well it without those emotions.  I love that Bella and Edward got to be together, and I totally agree with your fantasy for the characters.

Excellent story!



Author's Response:

Thanks very much for the validation you gave in this review.  So glad you enjoyed it, despite the intensity and horror, and I'm gratified that you are satisfied with the ending.  Take care!

 
Wolfnapped! by asthacullen Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

Set six years after BD. Jake is gone one morning. But did he leave himself? Or do the Volturi have something to do with the disappearance? What will they do if they found out that Renesmee wants babies-another new species?


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Jacob, Renesmee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 8032
[Report This] Published: September 22, 2010 Updated: December 15, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: October 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Gone

Enjoyable.  I'd like to see more.



Author's Response:

Thanks so very much Victoria. You are my first reviewer on this site. THANKS a LOT!!!!!!!!

 
Spain by nowforruin Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Love Lost Contest Entry - Three years ago, Edward was supposed to board a flight to Forks. He went to Spain instead. When he asks Bella to coffee out of the blue, what could he possibly have to say to her after all this time?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 7331
[Report This] Published: September 25, 2010 Updated: September 25, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: September 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

Practically perfect!  I loved this story.

 
Longevity by Kimmydonn Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

 

Rosalie chose to accept the gift given her and live her second life. Was it the wrong choice all along?


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5142
[Report This] Published: September 26, 2010 Updated: October 08, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: October 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

Sweet but sad--kind of like life itself can be.

 
Summary:

Alice has forced Bella from one disaster date to the next.  Will the worst disaster of all lead to the right guy?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3613
[Report This] Published: September 28, 2010 Updated: October 24, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: October 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I remember blind dates.  Horrible.  Just horrible.  Who thought up that particular brand of torture anyway?

Fun story!



Author's Response:

I tried it once, after a lot of begging from my BFFL.  NEVER AGAIN!!

Thanks for reading! Glad you liked it :)

 
Summary:

Bella is Alice's adoptive mother. Edward is her science teacher. What happens when Edward notices something strange about Alice's doodling and calls Bella into a meeting to discuss it? Rated for future chapters and language.



Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 36020
[Report This] Published: October 01, 2010 Updated: April 11, 2013


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3- Suspicions and Memories

I didn't pick up on Alice's gift before, but I get it now.  Great chapter!



Author's Response:

glad u like it. and that it made sense. lol. 

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: December 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- A Start

Interesting combination of characters, having Bella be Alice's mom.  I like it though.

I look forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

glad ur enjoying it- next chapter shouldn't be long

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: December 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- A Meeting

I can't figure out what Alice was drawing that made Edward concerned, but I'm looking forward to finding out.

Great story!



Author's Response:

glad ur enjoying it- u'll find ur answer in the next chapter- which should be up soon.

 
Summary:

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*Banner by time_lights over at Livejournal*

 

 

 

Life doesn’t always go as planned, especially in Georgian London, a world of arranged marriages and strict social hierarchy. Written for The Age of Edward 2010 contest.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3508
[Report This] Published: October 02, 2010 Updated: October 03, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: October 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Alternative Arrangements (Oneshot)

Lovely story.  I didn't want it to end.



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

 
The Meeting by Looby Luscious Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Photobucket

One cold, winter night, a barman witnesses two strangers meeting in the bar and wonders at their story.

As usual, my deepest thanks go to frozensoldier for the fabulous banner.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Carlisle, Esme
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1348
[Report This] Published: October 05, 2010 Updated: October 19, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Meeting (One shot)

I love it!  The young guys might have all the same stuff, but a grown man knows what to do with it. ;o)



Author's Response:

I love the way you think!!! Thank you for taking the time to review; I really appreciate it.

 
Summary:

 

 

When Edward & Bella's son, Nathan, goes missing it turns their lives upside down. This is the journey they take to find him, & in the process realize everything isn't what it seems. M for language, themes, & future lemons EPOV E/B Eventually NO CHEATING!

 

Banners by ange_de_l'aube


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes Word count: 152943
[Report This] Published: October 10, 2010 Updated: April 12, 2011


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: November 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I guess I see where Esme got her personality or lack thereof.



Author's Response:

Wow! You all are truly amazing! I’ve never had such an immediate response to a chapter before, so thank you for that! Even though my review replies may seem standard I swear I read every single word and answer or clarify anything I can at the time. When I first started writing BI I thought 100 reviews would be cool and I’m now over 1,400 which is absolutely amazing!

I won’t bore you with announcements so I’ll make this quick! Blind Intentions is being votes on in the Rare Gem Awards and Avant Garde Awards. Links to both are in the bottom a/n of the update. Also, there is a link for a contest I’m co-hosting. Voting opens up Wednesday, so please take a peak and vote! Lots of amazing wintery stories to choose from!

A piece near and dear to my heart that I actually love more than BI---I know gasp, is Breaking Faith. Public voting begins Dec 5th for the Cherry Exchange so check it out and vote!

Enough of that, onto what you really want! The teaser for Chapter 15:

“McDonalds?” He looked so angelic and innocent, I just wanted to save the image in my head forever. I nodded and the cutest grin played on his lips.

“Now it may be a little cold,” I warned as I pushed the bed’s tray table over him as he sat up to eat.

“Don’t care...” he took a bite. “Must eat....” and another. “So...so good.” He devoured french fry after french fry while alternating with his cheeseburger.

The doctor in me screamed to tell him to slow down, but the dad told the doctor to shut the hell up.

Bella started picking at her salad while I made work of my own meal.

I’d hoped this would be the first of many family meals to come in the future.

Love to you all!
Kelly (SLM)

PS. You can find me on twitter at @SammieLynnsMom or hop into the BI Twilighted Thread to share your thoughts, opinions, theories...etc. Remember, in the month of December I’ll be selecting 2 people at random, via the thread, to star in a one-shot I’m writing where Esme gets hit by a train! http://www(dot)twilighted(dot)net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=12545

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: November 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Another excellent chapter!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: November 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I know Esme's a crazy bitch, but I hate that Carlisle's divorcing her. 

Why did I have to find your excellent story when I should be studying?

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: November 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

This just keeps getting better and better!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading, revieiwing, and your support of Blind Intentions!

BI is currently being voted on as Best Angst for a Rare Gem Award! Check it out & vote! http://thesparkleteerawards.blogspot.com/p/voting.html

Here is the promised outtake, it is un-beta'd so please excuse any mistakes!

Outtake from Chapter 10:
I continued to pick at the sandwich I’d gotten to eat when Edward excused himself to grab a drink to bring upstairs.

If you had told me a month ago that my life would literally been flipped over I would have grabbed Nathan and ran for the hills. As a mom nothing can prepare you for the day your child goes missing. Nor could it prepare me for the day when I’d found out it was the hands of someone close to us.

I was never a fan of Tanya’s, but not for the reason most people would think. After Nathan was born any romantic feelings I had towards Edward had died. I realized then that, at one time I thought he had a lot of the characteristics that I wanted, but in the end it was nothing more than wanting a “happily ever after” ending. I blamed the hormones.

Edward was kind and considerate, but his family almost made me run for the hills on several occasions. I was sure Esme had her reasons for hating me, as deranged as they probably were, but it didn’t matter. I saw Edward for who he was, a man who would never step up against his mother. It was that realization that caused me to break everything off. I was not willing to become “second rate” to anyone for the rest of my life. If that meant being alone then at least I’d come first to me.

When I met Tanya I didn’t really have an opinion of her. She seemed nice although she seemed fake. I monitored her interactions with Nathan for a while, but he seemed to be okay with her and Edward seemed to fall in love with her. It meant “family” functions became less awkward because Esme was too busy kissing Tanya’s ass then telling me I was a gold digger. Funny thing is I had a job, and Tanya didn’t, but I was the gold digger. I internally shrugged. I obviously hadn’t been a good judge of character, but I refused to let that happen again.

Truth be told I was terrified to live with Edward. We had no problem being civil, even friendly, towards each other but really I didn’t know him anymore. I suppose I could use this time to get to know him again, but I didn’t know if he was worth the effort. I’d watched him go up against his family twice in the past twenty four hours, but I didn’t know when the other shoe would fall. He claimed that things were over with Tanya when she wanted to go on vacation, yet I still walk in on....I shook my head. I did not need to visualize that again!

I heard my name being called which broke me from the fog overtaking my thoughts. I looked up to see a woman standing before me. Dark shoulder length hair with a slight girl, way too much make-up, and a strapless silk dress. She was NOT a local for sure.

“Excuse me, are you Bella Swan?” She asked. Her voice was polite, but I didn’t know her.

“Can I help you?”

“I’m Kate Winston, I was wondering if I could talk to you for a few minutes.”

“I’m sorry I don’t talk to the media.”

“Oh I’m not a reporter.”

“Then who are you?”

“I’m Garrett’s wife, Garret Randall.”

My blood ran cold. I knew that name and it belonged to the man I wished death upon. How his wife had the nerve to want to speak to me shocked me. Kate took my silence as a green light to begin talking.

She explained how amazing Garrett was and they had two children together, that it was all Tanya’s fault when they started having an affair he went crazy, and she was pleading with me to lessen the charges. I continued to listen to this woman, who was out of her mind until I found my voice back.

I stood up, my fists white knuckling the table in an attempt not to swing at her.

“You want me to what?!” I screeched whispered.

“They say he’ll go away for twenty years, by then our kids will be in college. As a mother you have to understand how important it is to be there for your children, I’m just asking that you make them let him out after a few years. I don’t want to be a single parent.”

“Your husband,” I spat. “Took my seven year old little boy, stuffed him into a bag, and threw him off a cliff! And you want to talk to me about being a single parent? I almost lost him and you....”

“He’s alive though now, he’s not dead,” She rushed.

Edward chose that moment to walk up. I could tell he was taking accounting of our conversation and immediately took a defense stance in front of me.

I wasn’t sure how I felt about that, but in the moment, I was only thankful I would go to jail for killing her. The nerve of this woman.

I was so wrapped up in my own thoughts I completely missed my dad showing up and escorting Kate away.

When Edward still hadn’t let go of me in the elevator I wanted to push away, but he was the only thing keeping me from hunting this Kate Winston down.

When we entered Nathan’s room I was reminded of why I was here. My baby was laying in that bed and I needed to get a grip for when he woke up.

The moment I chose to sit down and grab his hand his eyes flew open.

Relieve spread through me as I told him hi.

When he leaned up towards me to tell me his first recount of his abduction I went numb.

Up until that point it was all speculation, strong speculation, but still speculation.

Now we knew without a doubt it was Tanya.

And I knew, without a doubt, I would kill her the next time I saw her.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: November 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Ooooh, moving in together for Nathan's sake.  I'm sure it'll be good for more than just Nathan. :o)

I should be working on classwork in preparation for finals, but I can't stop reading.



Author's Response:

Here is the promised letter:

Edward~

First let me start by saying I miss you. Being apart from you is making my
heart break everyday, but I have to stay away, at least until the truth is
out. I know the cops came looking for
me, but I swear to you I didn't do this. I don't know who has set me up, but I
swear it wasn't me. Honestly, if I had to guess, I'd say Bella is behind all
of this. She's so starved for attention she'd kill her own child to get it,
maybe you could refer to someone for that. You shouldn't listen to anything
Garrett has to say, first he confesses and now says it's my fault. It wasn't
me!

I've been away getting more evidence together and once I can prove my
innocence we can be together again. We can start that family you always wanted
to have together.

I love you Edward and I hope you're missing me as much as I'm missing you!

Yours forever, until death do us part, wait for me Edward,
Tanya

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: November 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Go Bella!  I normally love Esme, but your Esme deserved the verbal bitchslap.

 

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: November 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Poor Edward.  I guess he deserves some hate from Bella, but I feel terrible for him.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: November 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I loved the Bella/Tanya smackdown--I only wish Bella'd gotten in a few more blows before they pulled her off.

YAY that they found Nathan!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: November 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I knew it!  I knew Tanya was involved.  That b*tch.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: November 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I'm thrilled that I found this story.  It's addictive!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: November 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I love Esme, but not now. 

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: November 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm trusting that this is an E/B story.  It's off to a great start, and I'm excited to read more.

 
Wild as the West by lfcpam Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 172]
Summary:

New BannerWild as West Banner

Bella and James Swan move out west after their parents death. Moving to Wyoming, they both come to work on the ranch of Edward Cullen. See what happens when your life and love are as wild as the west.

Thanks to Ange de l'aube for the great banner


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 55235
[Report This] Published: October 11, 2010 Updated: May 11, 2011


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I just happened upon this story today, and I am excited to read it. 

 




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