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Penname: VictoriaCullen [Contact]
Real name: Vickie
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Nothin much to tell.  Wife.  Mom.  Daughter. Teacher. Students.  Closet Twilight fan fiction addict who might actually leave her husband if Carlisle were real and single--even though he's a bit old for me.  I try not to date guys over 250, but for him I'd make an exception.


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Two Weeks by JanaOnWheels Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 408]
Summary:

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Waylon Forge was dead, my parents were leaving town to tend to the funeral, and I was being shipped off to stay with the Cullens for two weeks. Residing with the most reclusive family on the west coast was bound to be an experience I'd never forget.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes Word count: 146924
[Report This] Published: June 24, 2010 Updated: October 14, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: September 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I think your story's awesome!  I'm so eager for more that I'm searching it out on FF.net.



Author's Response:

Excellent. I hope you continue to enjoy it!

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY

Jana~

 
Summary:

Why do you talk without knowing what you are talking about? Where were you when I created the earth? Tell me, since you know so much... Do you presume to tell me what I am doing? ... Like an open book, I watched you grow from conception to birth; all the stages of your life were spread out before me. The days of your life were all prepared before you'd even lived one day.  Now what do you have to say for yourself? Are you going to haul me, the Mighty One, into court and press charges? Excerpted from Job and Psalms. Warning- Contains references to child abuse. Written for PTB Challenge The Life and Times of Bree Tanner


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bree
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6943
[Report This] Published: June 24, 2010 Updated: June 24, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: June 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

Thanks!  After reading the novella, I really wish Stephenie had ended Eclipse differently, and now I'm glad I got a chance to see Bree get a happy ending.



Author's Response:

That's how I felt too. I really started to like Bree's character, and I wanted her to have a chance to redeem herself. I'm planning to do a multi-chapter story that would further explore this alternative universe. Thank you for the review!

 
Summary:

Edward was diagnosed with Cystic Fibrosis when he was six years old. Now, at twenty-two, he's trying to be a normal college student. The only thing is, he had to agree to share an apartment with his sister, Alice, who helps take care of him. When Alice gets accepted into a fashion school three hours away, they have to rely on a family friend, Bella, to live with Edward. Totally against having any help from anyone, Edward has to learn that you can't get through life alone.

***This story is not a happy-go-lucky love story. It is a drama and involves the issue of the illness CF. If anyone is sensitive to this subject, I suggest you don't read on.

In My Mother's Arms

Thanks to annamorphos for the lovely banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 53670
[Report This] Published: June 26, 2010 Updated: July 28, 2011


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Practically My Job

I know you're trying to scare me into reviewing, but I teach third grade--nothing scares me! LOL

However, I thought I'd drop a line to say that I really enjoy your story.  I've read all the chapters that you've submitted in one day. I'm very much looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Haha. Well it seams I did something right. It's good to hear from you! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Thank you so much for taking the time to let me know what you think =]

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Six Months

Oh my!  I had a sinking feeling when I saw the name of the chapter, but I didn't want it to be true.  Really good emotional chapter. 



Author's Response:

Aww, sorry to make it so sad! But I'm glad you liked it! Thanks so much for the wonderful review! <3

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: June 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Surreal

So sad!  I'm holding out hope for a happy ending. 



Author's Response:

I love your optimism. =] Thanks for the review! It means so much to have your support!

 
Summary:

 

After a five year relationship with James, Bella is left a broken and abandoned single mother. With the help of his and her best friend, Edward, she finds her way towards happiness. When Edward and Bella's long kept hidden feelings come to a head, things take an awful turn. Through heartbreak and tragedy, will Bella still prevail by breaking even?

**I own nothing. This story contains adult situations, scenarios of physical abuse and is rated NC-17 for lemons in later chapters**


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: No Word count: 184294
[Report This] Published: July 13, 2010 Updated: January 11, 2012


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: September 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Intense!  I can't wait to see where this goes.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: October 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Edward could come out of the bathroom in just a towel any day as far as I'm concerned.  There would be no need to apologize.  ;o)

I hope James becomes some big guy's girlfriend in jail.  He deserves it.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: September 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm glad Edward didn't kill him.  He's too pretty for jail.  And besides, James deserves to suffer more. 

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 (therunaway)

Oh my word.  The buildup is killing me!  He loves her.  She loves him.  He knows she loves him. Fess up, people!  LOL

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: December 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Edward's so sweet!  Everyone should have a guy like that in her life.

 
First Year by Shannon R Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

Carlisle made the difficult decision to change 13 year-old Sunny into a vampire before her cancer could kill her. This is Sunny's first year as a Cullen and a vampire.

 


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 9891
[Report This] Published: July 13, 2010 Updated: October 10, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: October 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Alice and the Tantrum

Sunny's emotions are giving me whiplash.  It's got to be confusing to be a new vampire with such a powerful gift.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: September 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Preface

I loved reading Sunny and am excited to see how this story develops. 

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: September 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Awakening

Oh, she's special!  I love that you made her intuitive and able to see people's histories.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: September 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: First Hunt

I'm hooked on this story already and can't wait for more.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: September 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Specter

I look forward to seeing how the meeting with Sunny's mom goes.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: September 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Closure

I love that Sunny got to talk to her mom again.  Great!

 
Safe Harbor by daisy_belle Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

 

SafeHarbor

 

January 1942, the United States and Bella Cullen are still left searching for understanding and answers about Pearl Harbor from a less than helpful government. In order to distract herself and honor her missing husband's memory, she enlists with the Combat Nurses Corp only to be sent overseas to London. Will London hold the answers she has been searching for and the US government has tried to hide?

 

Banner credit: Frozen_Soldier


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 4166
[Report This] Published: July 15, 2010 Updated: September 13, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: September 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Routine

Great beginning!  Your story is original and well-written.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: September 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I knew he wasn't dead, but I couldn't figure out what you'd done with him. :o) I can't wait to see how Edward and Bella meet up.  I have my theories, but I want to see what you have in mind.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your kind words. They keep me writing when I am bored on lunch break. :) But I hope you continue to read to see if your theories pan out. I will leave you with a hint if you will, just remember - everything works out --- in theory.

 
Summary:

Woulda, Coulda, Shoulda

AU set in the New Moon time frame. Edward has his reasons for leaving after the birthday incident.

He expects the family to start packing, but Alice stands up to him and says: NO.

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 15557
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2010 Updated: August 06, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: September 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Your twist on canon is amazing.  I really think maybe this is how it should have gone down in the first place. :o)



Author's Response:

I love seeing my inbox filled with all of your wonderful reviews, VictoriaCullen! Thank you!

I agree...this may have been the way it should have gone!

Kathie

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: September 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Go Bella!  I love the room trashing!!  It's just stuff, but Bella letting loose on it is great.



Author's Response:

LOL...glad you liked the bit of mayhem that Bella caused...she didn't go NUTS, but she did need a bit of venting...

I was "taken to task" by one reviewer for allowing this violence...ah well, guess I didn't write it for her...

Thanks for reading, VC!

Kathie

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: September 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Thinking of Alice decorating for a school dance makes me smile.  I love your story and am glad Nikki Pattinson rec'd it.



Author's Response:

I love Nikki! The best beta I've had here at Twilighted...

Where did she rec it at?  I've got to thank her!

Don't you know that Alice would have made it look lovely?  And NOT tacky...lol

Kathie

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: September 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Exciting chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Kathie

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: September 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I love your Rosalie!  She's still tough, but she has a soft side too.



Author's Response:

Ah...I agree...sometimes I think that Rose gets a bad rep...she is still tough...but there IS a softer side...

Thanks for reading and reviewing, VictoriaCullen!

Kathie

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: September 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Yay!  Edward's back. 



Author's Response:

FINALLY...lol...at least that's how I felt when writing him...lol

It's about TIME...

Kathie

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: September 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Woulda, Coulda, Shoulda

Great ending!  I agree with you--Alice would not have left Bella without a huge fuss.



Author's Response:

Thank you, VC!  I just couldn't see her leaving...everyone was so SHOCKED in BD when she left...but not here?  No, I don't think so!

I'm co-hosting a contest...take a scene and write it the way YOU think it should go...just like I did here...it's anonymous...and you should enter!

http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2528727/

Thanks, so much, for all the lovely reviews today!  I do appreciate them!

Kathie

 




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