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Penname: VictoriaCullen [Contact]
Real name: Vickie
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Member Since: March 14, 2009
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Nothin much to tell.  Wife.  Mom.  Daughter. Teacher. Students.  Closet Twilight fan fiction addict who might actually leave her husband if Carlisle were real and single--even though he's a bit old for me.  I try not to date guys over 250, but for him I'd make an exception.


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Surrogate Love by shwriteme Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 237]
Summary:

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Bella is a sexual therapist with unusual methods that get results, but when she goes on sabbatical to write a book, Dr. Hale calls in a favor and sends her a new patient. When Edward, a shy, eclectic scientist and inventor who has social problems comes for counseling, Bella must put aside her training and follow her gut instincts to help him overcome his difficulties. But will she be able to maintain her professionalism and continue in her career in the face of her intense attraction.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 50901
[Report This] Published: March 12, 2009 Updated: February 01, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: August 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I hope Edward gets a peek at Bella's ensemble. ;o)  This is a very engaging story!

 
Prey by Eun Hye Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1201]
Summary:

Summary: AU. A powerful group of humans know of the existence of vampires and werewolves and strict rules are in place for the uneasy coexistence between the three kinds. Transforming humans without tacit permission is banned and all violators and victims are ordered destroyed. Bella was attacked when she was eight years old but miraculously survived. She returns to Forks during her junior year in high school and encounters the Olympic Coven. Against her will, she is drawn to Edward Cullen and into the dangerous world of shifting loyalties and deadly intrigue.

 

 

 

Thanks to JO (Cullenitis) for the AWESOME banner!

Thanks to another JO (sleepyjo at ffnet) for reading and editing the first 13(!) chapters.

Please direct your thanks to her for saving you from the whiplash that is born from my confused tenses and wonky grammar.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: AU Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 73297
[Report This] Published: March 15, 2009 Updated: January 10, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: April 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: I see you

Really cool story so far!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: April 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: I know what you are

Wow! Really intriguing story line. I can't wait for more.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: April 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Alice and Bella

Oooh, this is getting good. I look forward to reading more.

 
Summary:

Bella is a twenty five year old woman with her own thoughts, opinions, and history.  She meets a mysterious pale stranger in the library, and chemistry brings the two together.  But with a murderer in the streets on Seattle, nothing can come easily.  Alternate reality.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 24698
[Report This] Published: March 15, 2009 Updated: July 24, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: June 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Ooh, to have a man talk like that in real life....  <sigh>



Author's Response:

Heaven, huh?  :)

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: June 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Rosalie really is a b*tch, isn't she?

I'm enjoying your story and anxiously awaiting the connection with the serial killer. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  :)  Keep reading and you'll learn more as I churn 'em out!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: June 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I love that you've written Edward not quite as angst-filled as canon.  Wonderful chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  :)

 
Summary: Feature

Seeking to escape a dangerous memory from her past, Bella moves to Forks her junior year with every intention of getting a fresh start.  With a little self-assurance and a whole lot of attitude, she shakes things up at Forks High without even intending to.  When a mysterious new student turns her world upside down, will Bella have the strength to resist him, or is she destined to repeat her old mistakes?  Will he be able to save her when the past catches up with her?

Rated NC-17 for criminally hot cars, graphic sex, and language...

 

 


Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 82359
[Report This] Published: March 15, 2009 Updated: July 23, 2009


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - The Fall

I've been reading all along, but the purple crayon got to me. Good story!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - The Bitch is Back

I thought Renee and Phil were in Florida where he was a Marlin. Other than that little glitch (and I'm sure you can get around that) this is another great chapter.

Author's Response:

Good eye!  Renee and Phil actually keep a house in both places, and they happened to be in Phoenix.  I think I mention it briefly in Ch. 17, but I suppose I should have said something earlier.  Very astute of you!!  :D

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Breakable

Okay, so they need to get over it already and let the walls down.
Excellent writing.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Get Some

What a tease for stopping there! I look forward to the next chapter.

 
On Our Way by Alverdine Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 437]
Summary:

A long and tiresome journey and a wrongly booked ticket later, Bella Swan finds herself sitting next to renowned actor Edward Cullen and learns that whether flying coach or first class, karma gets her way.

Exerpt:

“Well… that’s embarrassing.” I looked up in the direction of the male voice that was responsible for the comment and nearly died. Nearly. Instead, I shrieked and flung my glass of champagne right in the lap of the owner. I was clearly hallucinating, because the man sitting next to me could not possibly be… I closed my eyes and opened them again. But he was still there a slightly uncomfortable look on his beautiful face as he retrieved my glass from his lap and inspected the damage to his trousers.

“This is a new reaction,” he mumbled all the while I gaped at him and glanced at the magazine checking whether he had jumped out of it. But Edward Cullen was still gazing at me from the page, his eyes hypnotising and in addition the exact - slightly displeased - replica (with perhaps a bit more facial hair, and clothes) was undeniably sitting in the chair next to me.

“I’m so sorry!” I finally managed to croak out when I remembered how to speak. Before I could thoroughly think it through I grabbed a napkin from my backpack and dove to dab his pants. He was not the only one who jumped up as my hand came into contact with his crotch.

“I got it,” he said louder than I had heard him speak so far. For a moment he cast me an exasperated look and I almost felt the need to ensure him I was not trying to feel him up. He held up his hand as a stop sign and snatched the napkin from my hand, still hovering over him. I wasn’t sure whether he was mad or embarrassed. I was too busy trying to sink through my chair in shame.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 82552
[Report This] Published: March 16, 2009 Updated: January 30, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: April 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: A Bundle of Lilies

Wow! I love this story. I'm so wrapped-up in it already--I can't wait for more.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: The Turning Tide

Ah..... I loved this chapter! I'm impatient and want them together righ this minute, but waiting will only make it sweeter when it happens. You're weaving an excellent story. :o)

Author's Response:

Thanks so much! Patience will be rewarded! ;)

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: October 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Breaking Dawn

I have missed your story!  Excellent chapter--as always.



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: December 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Double Bind

I missed this story! Thanks for the great chapter and for not making Edward a manwhore who'd jump into bed with Heidi just because she was there and willing.  I can't wait to see what kind of mischief Jane gets into.



Author's Response:

No manwhore Edward in this story...it would simply not fit! I'm trying to keep him true to character in this one

I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

Happy holidays!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Inferno

I've missed this wonderful story and am thrilled to get an update for my birthday! Yeah, yeah.  I know.  You wrote it just for me. ;o)

I'm interested to see what the bad blood is between Edward and Jasper. 



Author's Response:

Happy happy  happy  happy  happy  happy  happy  happy  happy Birthday!!!! *insert cupcake with birthday candle here* Glad you enjoyed it :)

Have a lovely day!

 

Eva

 
Summary:

Bella Swan, a young registered pharmacist from New Jersey, takes a job in the Forks, WA Regional Hospital, determined to start her life over.  She meets the handsome, brooding Edward Cullen, who also works in the hospital's pharmacy...but on the night shift, of course.

Will Edward be able to control his agonizing thirst for Bella's blood? How will the emotionally wounded Bella react to her increasing attraction to him? Can Jacob be effective as a minor, if consequential, character? And most important, can Serendipitous refrain from the gratuitous use of hokey questions to attract readers?

 

    Huge thanks to the talented and generous Anne Cullen for the banner!

 

 Canon pairings; the Cullens are still vampires.  Edward's and Bella's ages are advanced to their early-mid 20s, to give them more adult sensibilities.  Other than that, the story parallels "Twilight," with some new adventures in line with the characters' ages and situations.  The chapters alternate between Edward's and Bella's POV. While it's not a *funny* version of "Twilight," there are definite sparks of humor in it.

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 206646
[Report This] Published: March 16, 2009 Updated: December 01, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: November 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Bella, Chapter 10

I'm glad you let their relationship move forward, and I can't wait to see where you go next.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Victoria!  (Lovely name...no, really, I mean that.  I was kind of sorry that one of the cruelest characters in "Twilighted" has such a pretty name.).  I'm glad you enjoy it.  They're going to the East Coast next, actually, lol....

 

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: December 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Edward, Chapter 13

What a sweet and satisfying chapter!  <sigh<

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: October 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Bella, Chapter 9

Couldn't Edward bring the brownies after my shopping trip with Alice?  Please?  :o)

I thought your balance in the declaration was just right--sweet but not sappy.



Author's Response:

LOL...you want both, huh?  Smart woman! Doesn't hurt to ask.

Thank you for your kind words, and for reading and reviewing.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: October 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Edward, Chapter 9

Great lemony scene--no thrusting or heaving or anything wonton since those words are used to death--just sweet and sensual.  I enjoyed reading without feeling like I needed a shower afterwards.



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you, Victoria.  I'm so happy you could see exactly what I was trying to go for with that scene.  It doesn't have to be graphic to be sexual, and I personally believe that Edward and Bella are better served by sweet and sensual, as you so perfectly put it.

Thank you again for reading, and for reviewing.  

 

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Edward, Chapter 10

I love the dimension you give your characters.  I don't feel like they're two-dimensional cardboard cutouts; they seem like real people. 



Author's Response:

 

Thank you, Victoria!  That is a wonderful compliment -- to know that I've been able to bring the characters I've "borrowed" to life in a different way.  I've made them a little older so they have more experience, and hopefully, more maturity. 

Thank you for reading, and for taking the time to review.

 

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Edward, Chapter 10

I love the dimension you give your characters.  I don't feel like they're two-dimensional cardboard cutouts; they seem like real people. 

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Bella, Chapter 11

Fabulous chapter!  I loved Bella's take on the meeting with her family and friends, and I especially appreciated the bookstore visit.  It was great how you let each character's personality shine through their selections.



Author's Response:

Hello Victoria...Thank you for your review!  The bookstore visit seems to have gone over well, but I'm not surprised.  We have a lot of fantastic readers here.  I'm glad you liked it, too.  I wanted to give Bella more interactions with other Cullens.  Sometimes that's easier when you're in a new environment, you know?  She learned a little about Edward's family that day.  

Thanks also for reading.  I hope you come back for more.

 

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Edward, Chapter 11

I always look forward to updates, and I find I really enjoy Edward's POV--even more than I expected I would.



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much!  I'm finding him easier to write with every chapter.  

I'm very glad you like the story.  Thank you for reviewing!

 

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: April 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Bella, Chapter 12

YAY that they found Bella!  I had to LOL when Bella threw up on James's foot.  You go, girl!



Author's Response:

Hi Victoria...So glad you liked it!  I was a little worried it would gross people out.

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

 

 




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