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Penname: VictoriaCullen [Contact]
Real name: Vickie
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Member Since: March 14, 2009
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Nothin much to tell.  Wife.  Mom.  Daughter. Teacher. Students.  Closet Twilight fan fiction addict who might actually leave her husband if Carlisle were real and single--even though he's a bit old for me.  I try not to date guys over 250, but for him I'd make an exception.


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Reviews by VictoriaCullen
 
Summary:

Bella Swan has always been good at solving other people's problems, until she met Edward Cullen. One chance encounter and a tipsy bargain later lands Bella with an unfixable relationship on her plate and the prideful relationship counselor only has thirty days to make it work...or die trying.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 21031
[Report This] Published: March 31, 2010 Updated: July 15, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Day Four: Men Actually Believe We Have A Hook

Why is it that Jacob almost always rubs me the wrong way?  Edward would rube me the right way--if I could just convince him to do it. :o)

Fun story!



Author's Response:

That made me laugh so hard, I had to make up an excuse in class! Yes, now, how to convince him. HA ha.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: July 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Day Six: Plan B!

Fun chapter!  I never thought I'd see the day that Alice was outshopped.  I'm looking forward to more Bella and Edward interaction.



Author's Response:

Someone saw the irony! HA ha. As I am ahead in writing the story, hopefully, I'll be able to get more up soon!

 
Summary:

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Black Balloon O/S contest entry. The honeymoon didn't go as planned, and Bella is bitter and resentful. For Edward, there is only one means of escape. But even if he takes it, will he ever be free from the spectre of his past? Angst. Post-Eclipse AU/canon

 


Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 9868
[Report This] Published: April 01, 2010 Updated: April 08, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: April 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Spectre of the Past

I wasn't sure I was going to like this, but your ending more than made up for any trauma.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I know... it was a dark one, so I did my best to give them a HEA of sorts...

 
Summary:

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Edward Cullen had just moved into his own apartment and was working to finish medical school. One night, his world is changed when he finds a woman beaten and broken outside of his apartment. What happened to her? Will she be able to trust him? Will she find shelter 'In His Arms'?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 3587
[Report This] Published: April 01, 2010 Updated: April 30, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: April 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Pretty intense beginning.  I'm ready for more.

 
Summary:

Jasper has been arrested for a robbery that he didn't commit, and yet he can't say where he was to prove his innocence. Why? Where was Jasper that night, what was he doing, and why won't he tell?

 

Songfic of Over the Hills and Far Away by Nightwish

 

Ignores Alice. Edward and Bella are married in this story, but there is no Nessie.

 

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1308
[Report This] Published: April 01, 2010 Updated: April 08, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: April 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

Sad but sweet. Devotion goes a long way with me, despite the obvious cheating angle.

Author's Response:

Well I'm glad you liked it :) Thanks for reading and reviewing.

 
Summary:

Edward and Bella meet over opposite sides of the political fence.  A quick and sweet AH little one shot.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1212
[Report This] Published: April 03, 2010 Updated: April 16, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: April 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: A Contemporary Cowboy

Your story was more than I expected.  Very concise use of words.

This was a tiny little tresure, full of possibilities.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Victoria. I'm glad you appreciate my brevity; I'm trying to be less wordy!  This was fun to write. 

And thank you for leaving a review.

 

 
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Summary:


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Alice doesn’t come back to check on Bella after the cliff diving incident. She comes back to collect her for college. The trials and tribulations of Bella going through the motions of school, missing Edward, and finding herself in spite of everything...


Categories: New Moon, Eclipse, Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 28966
[Report This] Published: April 04, 2010 Updated: October 29, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: What You Threw Away

What an original concept for a story!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: The Britney Syndrome

Intense and satisfying--literary dark chocolate.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: There's a light in your eyes, did you leave that light burning for me?

You're definitely doing something VERY right!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Tease me, by holding out your hand

The tattoo coordinates are driving me crazy.  This story is sooo good.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: The race is on, and the winner loses all

Dr. Stanley is disgusting; perhaps a human-eating vampire should find him and finish him off. ;o)

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Water for Elephants

The gifts were perfect!  Truly fabulous story.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: We all need the clowns to help us smile...

Great chapter.  LOL on the "job" story!  Priceless!!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: These trash can dreams come true

This story is funny and intense and cool all at once.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Dialing Six Numbers Just to Hang up the Phone

I'm sad about Sue and worried about Bella and Edward.  You do a great job making people care about your story.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Is it getting any better? Is it still the same?

Wow.  That came out of left field.  I'm surprised but not unhappy.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Just To See What You Will Throw My Way

Perfect wedding for your Bella and Edward.  I have no idea what's going on with Bella--perhaps a weird spontaneous vampire change?  Beats me.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: The Frames Won't Break and the Letters Won't Burn

I think the whole story is great, but I can't read the next-to-last chapter.  It's invisible or something.  I was sad. 



Author's Response: Ah, I was waiting for the review. I have no idea what happened to chapter 12, is it, but it disappeared months ago. I have emailes the powers that be, but have not received a response. I am a dumb ass and didn back up any of my chapters, so I am afraid it is gone. I am so very sorry, but from what I can recall, B has Lou Gherig, Edward has a breakdown, Alice sets Bella straight, they both have epiphanies and Edward bites bella.

 
Summary:

I should be happy. It was finally over, that which had shook the world. Still I couldn't bring myself to enjoy it. There was only one reason for that. Edward Cullen.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3324
[Report This] Published: April 04, 2010 Updated: April 06, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: April 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: ONE-SHOT

I really liked how you took a real event and put our favorite characters there in a very believable way.  The emotions were intense and well-written.

 
Summary:

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Edward struggles to come to grips with his new life in Forks and a father he’s just met for the first time. He's unfamiliar with the easy going lifestyle he's been thrust into with the sudden death of his mom and step-father. Gone are the strict rules filled with harsh discipline and constant demands for perfection on the piano.

He finds a reason to fight his past demons when he meets a dark haired beauty that captures his heart. But then, his whole world is in jeopardy when a stalker threatens Bella and tries to destroy everything Edward now holds dear. LEMONS


"Our being is subject to all the chances of life." Katherine Anne Porter


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 54930
[Report This] Published: April 09, 2010 Updated: December 29, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: June 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I just love the part where Carlisle was trying to give Edward the talk.  He could give me the talk any time he wanted. ;o)

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I loved the whole chapter, but the part when Carlisle started to cry broke my heart.  You're doing a great job with this story!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm reading, and my heart is breaking for poor Edward.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I think most parents can relate to Carlisle.  I don't consider him abusive--just sad and frustrated.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'm no good at banners, but your story deserves one. 

My heart breaks for Edward--and for Esme and Carlisle too.  This is a well-written story; I'm enjoying reading.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Edward's life has been so sad.  I love the way Bella sees through him--and I loved LOVED the golden onion and the heart-shaped rock. 

 




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