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Penname: VictoriaCullen [ Contact]
Real name: Vickie
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Member Since: March 14, 2009
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Nothin much to tell. Wife. Mom. Daughter. Teacher. Students. Closet Twilight fan fiction addict who might actually leave her husband if Carlisle were real and single--even though he's a bit old for me. I try not to date guys over 250, but for him I'd make an exception.
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Summary: Overnight, irresponsible Edward goes from bachelor to father of a 5 yr old boy. Meanwhile responsible, prepared Bella begins her first job as Kindergarten teacher at Forks Elementary. When irresponsible meets the epitome of responsible, sparks will fly!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 41 Completed: Yes
Word count: 250550
[Report This] Published: February 11, 2010 Updated: August 31, 2011
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Man in the Mirror
I can't WAIT to see what goes down with the Esme conversation.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - It's the End of the World As We Know It
What a sad chapter, but it explains a lot. Excellent writing.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Master of Puppets
I'm always thrilled to see that this story has been updated. I'm eager to read the chapter, and I'm never disappointed.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: June 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Leave Me Alone
Great chapter! I'm not nearly as good with words as you, but I wanted to tell you I really, really enjoy your stories.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: July 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Break Out
Excellent chapter! I really like that you weave the threads of the story together. The substories fit together so well and are equally interesting.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: July 31, 2010
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Life During Wartime
Poor kid. It must be a terrible thing for him to have to go through. You're doing a great job bringing this story to life.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: November 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Time After Time
Esme and Carlisle are so sad. I'm total Team Carlisle, so this just breaks my heart. I hope they get a little piece of HEA somehow.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: December 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - With This Ring
What a cute, sweet chapter!
I love your story, but one thing I really appreciate is that you let the main characters be the focus. You have everyone we love in the story, but it's an Edward and Bella story. Some writers try to give everyone a major plot line, and it doesn't work. You put the spotlight where it should be.
Summary: 
New. Tall boy. Dimples. Scary blond.
New girl Bella meets mysterious, sweet Edward and some of the other usual suspects of Forks and has seventeen conversations that change her and her life. Some people are all talk. E/B, one-shot, romance/humor.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 6774
[Report This] Published: February 11, 2010 Updated: February 25, 2010
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 27, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Really, really excellent story! It wasn't at all what I expected, but I don't know exactly what I did expect. It's definitely worth reading!! Author's Response: Why thank you! I think that when people see "17 conversations" they have an idea in their head, but I'm glad to see the story surprised you. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Summary: An old, dilapidated hospital residing in the outskirts of Forks, Washington, sits untouched - other than being the occasional setting of a teenage party. Everyone knows the rumors, and it's because of those rumors rebellious teens are lured there. They want to be the first to spy the young man who supposedly lives inside its walls, the man who's either a ghost or crazed maniac that murders those courageous enough to enter the building.
No one has ever seen him, or at least no one that's ever lived to tell the tale. But it's all just rumors, right? Well, Bella Swan is about to find out.
Rated for subject matter and content. OOC. Canon pairings.
Gif made by the amazing RoseArcadia
Warning: There is mention of physical abuse in this story.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Jessica, Marcus, Mike, Rosalie, Tyler
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No
Word count: 89825
[Report This] Published: February 13, 2010 Updated: July 12, 2010
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Meet the Parent
Still questions--like everyone else--but I am enjoying the progress of the story.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Hide and Seek
I thought it might be silly at first, but I think this story is going to be really enjoyable. I look forward to more.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Enigma
I'm not a very prolific or talented reviewer, but I am a very good reader--when the story's good. And your is VERY good. I was thinking silly slasher-movie stuff, but I get the feeling this is going to get a lot deeper than that.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Home Again
This story is addictive!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Puzzle Piece
Man, this story is intriguing! I can't figure out what happened to Edward and if he'll ever be able to overcome whatever it is that he's been through.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: A Slight Progression
Great chapter--again! I'm intrigued with what happened with Edward and whether or not Marcus is as good as he'd like Bella to think. Is he Edward's savior or his captor?
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: The Plan
Yes, yes, YES! I'm dying here, trying to figure out what happened to Edward that was so horrible that he doesn't even know where he is.
You're spinning a great yarn!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Labyrinth
I am SO ready for more info! I love it, so I want to understand more. Author's Response: I know you are, bb, and it's coming. I promise. ;)
Summary: Overweight and underappreciated, Bella has stalled at life at 22. When the chance arises to compete for a spot on a weight loss game show, will she take the opportunity to change her life? AH/OOC *One-Shot written for the Indie First Time Writers' Challenge*
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 13652
[Report This] Published: February 14, 2010 Updated: February 25, 2010
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: One Shot
Great! I look forward to the multi-chapter story Author's Response: Thank you! Chapter one is in the validation queue playV2('en/US/df/dfsjssdystdohr');playV2('en/UK/df/dfsjssdystdohr')
and should be up within the next few weeks.
Summary: Edward the Father? Of a baby - okay. About to give away his daughter - definitely not okay!
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 932
[Report This] Published: February 15, 2010 Updated: February 25, 2010
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Fathers
Sweet little story about fathers and their daughters. I really enjoyed it! Author's Response: Great) Thank you!
Summary: Written for Age of Edward contest. "A good wife always knows her place" Bella's always been the perfect housewife. Who ever said Edward wanted obedience?
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 4575
[Report This] Published: February 15, 2010 Updated: February 27, 2010
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 27, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: One
Wow. Not at all smutty but oh so hot!
Summary: After the Cullens leave Forks, a twist of fate lands Bella in Chicago in 1918. She thinks it's her second chance... a chance to build a life with a human Edward. But when she finds him, he's not quite what she expected... and Bella has some hurdles to overcome to create the future she's hoping for.
 
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes
Word count: 286468
[Report This] Published: February 17, 2010 Updated: June 05, 2011
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: October 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose
I'm not mad at Bella. I think I would have done the same thing.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: October 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31: Of Saying Goodbye and Saving a Life
I've already voted. This is the story that I stop everything to read.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: July 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: Of Carousels and Cracker Jacks
I keep looking for the flu to hit sooner than she expects. This story has its hooks in me soooo deep! Author's Response: Well, the flu is matter of public record. She can't really affect when it hits Chicago, so I wouldn't worry about an early start to the epidemic. :-)
Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: August 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24: Of Wishes and Watches
I loved the chapter until we got to the cemetery dream. THat just can't happen! Author's Response: Yeah, it was kind of disturbing, wasn't it? Bella's out to make sure it doesn't become reality.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: November 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
I wondered how you were going to tie this all together. Great job with that!
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