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Penname: VictoriaCullen [Contact]
Real name: Vickie
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Member Since: March 14, 2009
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Nothin much to tell.  Wife.  Mom.  Daughter. Teacher. Students.  Closet Twilight fan fiction addict who might actually leave her husband if Carlisle were real and single--even though he's a bit old for me.  I try not to date guys over 250, but for him I'd make an exception.


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Some Life In Me by Pixiechick Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 530]
Summary:

He was a happy, successful family man, until a single instant changed everything and he lost everything he held dear. Unable to deal with his loss, he walked away from everything else.  She was the average small town girl, and in a staggering instant her life changed. Fate threw them together.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 146963
[Report This] Published: January 21, 2010 Updated: February 25, 2011


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: April 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Heartbreaking but beautifully written.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: April 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Superhero

I knew I shouldn't have started reading this story.  I'm totally hooked and should be working on a paper instead.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: April 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Purpose

Go, Edward!  I love the way you've started to let him have his life back.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: April 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Lifeline

I love Emmett!  You've written him so well.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: April 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Homecoming

Poor Edward.  Great story.  I just know James is going go crawl out from under a rock somewhere.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Liberty

Brava to you for writing to benefit my fellow Tennesseans!  We appreciate you

I really enjoyed this chapter.  It shows that well-written romantic scenes are every bit as erotic as sex.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: Plans

I keep expecting James to show up at every turn.  I know he's got to be lurking in the figurative shadows.

 
His Angel by EllaB Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

Angie is enduring a vacation with her abusive husband when she meets a mysterious stranger. Demetri is stunned when this seemingly ordinary woman changes everything he’s ever known in his 300-year existence.  Canon/AU  Demetri/OC

Reader's Choice WINNER for the "I Get Off in Volterra" contest.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alec, Aro, Caius, Demetri, Felix, Jane, Marcus
Challenges:
Series: The Volturi Series
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 9711
[Report This] Published: January 22, 2010 Updated: January 23, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Tasty!  There's just no better word.  You did Demetri proud.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I wanted people to see a different side of our favorite metrosexual tracker...

 
Summary:

It was one of those days when Forks was sunny.  Bella was at school and Edward was stuck at home. This is how they keep in touch.


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward, Mike
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 808
[Report This] Published: January 22, 2010 Updated: January 31, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Cute!  Don't you just love texting--especially like that?



Author's Response:

YES I love texting like that, it's what gave me the idea!!

 
Summary:


A first kiss, a first dance, a first curse word shared between best friends.

This is the tale of a boring young geek and the social pariah who thought the world of him.

A tale of growing up.

A tale of a Non-Romantic Romance.

Swirl and Daisy Banner

Winner of The Little Indie that Could! Award at the Indie Twific Awards!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 97341
[Report This] Published: January 22, 2010 Updated: August 10, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: The First Time She Noticed a Problem

I love the lines you work into the story and the tiny bit of snark you add to their tone.  It makes me laugh. 

Poor adorable but deceitful Edward.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The First Time She Met Him

What a great start!  I see why you got an Indie.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: The First Time They Danced

The way Bella feels reminds me so much of my students.  When they're happy, they're the happiest person on earth; when they're sad, they're the most miserable person who ever lived.  You've got that pegged!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: The First Time He Called Her His Best Friend

“Anyway,” I continued, hoping to alleviate the awkwardness, “what other talents does the great Edward Cullen possess? Does he read minds? Can he sparkle? Inquiring minds want to know.”  --This is so funny.  Everything is so well-written.  Oh, and the MyT-spot part made me LOL.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: The First Time They Went On a Date

I love the first date! 

Oh, and I forgot to answer your question last chapter--please bring in some HP.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: The First Time He Kissed Her

"stains on your bed sheets..."  Oh my HECK! Way to kill a teenage boy.  I can't tell you when I've laughed so much.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: An Interlude: The Introduction of Swirl

I can deal with your not answering my reviews. Please write! 

Alice is evil, at least for now.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: June 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: The First Time They Broke Up

Awww.  I remember having my heart broken for the first time.  It sucked gutter water.  Apparently, it still does.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: July 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: The First Time She Told Him She Loved Him

Awww.  Just Awww.  I'm sitting here grinning like *I* am the one in love.  Such an adorable, sweet chapter!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: August 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Outtake: The Reaffirmation of Edward and Bella as Seen by Carlisle Cullen

I love me some Carlisle--and yours is especially delectable.  Great job!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: August 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: The First Time She Said the A-word

All I can say is

ROTFLMBO

 
Summary:

A look into the thoughts of two fathers as they dance at their daughters' weddings...

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Charlie, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2494
[Report This] Published: January 23, 2010 Updated: February 07, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well, that made me cry.  This is a very sweet and touching little story.  Great job!



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

 
Seeking Asylum by crazy1 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 415]
Summary:

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Bella Swan never thought she would return to Forks after leaving in 9th grade when her parents divorced. She remained in Arizona for college, medical school and residency, pushing herself towards an unknown goal. When she heard that Jacob had died in a motorcycle accident, Bella returned to Forks and to a world of old ties and new opportunities. The Cullen Retreat was recruiting for a new psychiatrist and Bella found herself accepting the job. Perhaps returning to her roots would be just the asylum Bella needed to find herself. But the founders of this mental health respite were quite a mystery to Bella and the people of Forks. The most intriguing part of the job was not the opportunity itself, but the benefactor’s youngest son Edward.  He seemed to ensnare Bella’s thoughts and decisions from the moment she arrived....


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes Word count: 110127
[Report This] Published: January 24, 2010 Updated: January 27, 2011


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Insecurities and Intrusion

Yikes!  I knew it had to be Tanya, but I didn't expect the whole duct tape and gun thing. Oh please don't let him sit there for a long time.  This story is too good!



Author's Response:

I just sent in ch 30 to the queu....hang in there VicC, I hope you dont kill me after the next chapter, I promise to update fast!

 

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Epilogue

I loved every word.  Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us!



Author's Response:

VictoriaC

Thank YOU for all the wonderful feedback. It's amazing to hear from people you'll never meet, but who mean so much!

:)

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: October 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Family and Football

With Edward as the quarterback, even I would consider playing football.  DEE-licious!



Author's Response:

IKR?

Anything involving Edward, contact, and sweating...IM IN!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Tangles and Tips

I didn't see the whole Tanya thing playing out like that, but I like it.  Good plot twist! 



Author's Response:

Thanks VicC!

There are a few more surprises to come....

 




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