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Penname: VictoriaCullen [Contact]
Real name: Vickie
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Member Since: March 14, 2009
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Nothin much to tell.  Wife.  Mom.  Daughter. Teacher. Students.  Closet Twilight fan fiction addict who might actually leave her husband if Carlisle were real and single--even though he's a bit old for me.  I try not to date guys over 250, but for him I'd make an exception.


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Reviews by VictoriaCullen
 
Summary:

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Bella Swan becomes Bella Black and leaves Forks with Jacob to find their own slice of Heaven.  After Jacob’s death, Bella resigns herself to the fact that she has already had her one shot at the ‘happily ever after’ fairytale.  She throws herself into her writing and avoids Forks at all costs until the day when their son asks her if he can spend the summer with Charlie and Billy.  What decision will Bella make when she is presented with the opportunity of a second chance at the love of her life?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: No Word count: 151208
[Report This] Published: January 14, 2010 Updated: December 10, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: August 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 - Diagnosis

I'm glad Bella finally got the news we all knew.  I particularly liked the range of emotions Bella felt; it was very realistic to be happy, worried, and a little afraid all at once.



Author's Response:

Thanks Victoria!  I hope I did okay with her emotions, I have never seen one set emotion from anyone after they find out they're expecting.  It always boggled my mind how so many things could come up at once but if you say I got it, then I got it.  Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review.

Mick

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: November 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23 - Thanks For Forgiving

The bedroom scene made me cry.  It's so sweet that Edward can understand all the levels of Bella's grief.



Author's Response:

Yeah, that part was difficult to write because I know Bella never got rid of the bed that Jacob died in and there's just no way I could make Edward sleep in there knowing that. That would be a bit...icky. Trust me, you'll love where they actually end up sleeping! See you next chapter? Right here on Twilighted!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: December 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25 - End Goal Of Happiness

Beautiful, sweet, and totally believable!



Author's Response:

Thanks Victoria! Please feel free to keep in touch and definately let me know if you write anything...I'd love to read it! This has been one heckuva year and I appreciate you coming along for the ride.

Mick

 
Summary:

Bella Swan is a quiet, reserved writer whose Saturday routine includes her favorite coffee, reading in the bookstore, and watching Edward Cullen. Over the tops of their books, they trade furtive glances, until Bella decides to risk it all and introduce herself. FGB O/S for Marijee.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 7294
[Report This] Published: January 15, 2010 Updated: January 15, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: BOOKWORMS (ONE-SHOT)

Wow!  Your story made me want to hang out at the local bookstore--and I'm happily married. :o)



Author's Response:

I'm sorry, Victoria. Actually, I'm not. ;) May as well be honest. Dude, I'm happily married, too, but that doesn't mean sometimes I don't want to bone my characters. Fuckhot Latteman is pretty high on my list. UNG. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Summary:

Bella is too busy to notice the life of her sister, Alice. At a group outing, Bella's findings rock her to the core and lead her to see her selfish ways. Will she be able to correct the wrongs or is it too late?

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 6322
[Report This] Published: January 18, 2010 Updated: February 10, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This story is GOOD!  I have a feeling I'm going to need tissues, but I'm eager to read more.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm hoping that you didn't need the aforementioned tissue. :)

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This story is like good chocolate--dark but satisfying.



Author's Response:

I'm very glad that you liked this. It's not exactly a popular(or fun for that matter) topic to write or read so I appreciate you. Thanks for reading.

 
Summary:

 

Bella and Edward have loved each other practically their whole lives.  But once tragedy strikes, can they heal their relationship?

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 55481
[Report This] Published: January 20, 2010 Updated: July 10, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: June 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I didn't expect THAT to happen, but I hope it means better times are ahead for Bella and Edward.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: April 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I can see the writing on the wall when Bella finds Tanya's number in Edward's phone--and she will. 

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: July 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Great chapter!  There was a very good balance of grief, happiness, and fear of the unknown. 

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I really enjoyed the party with the flashbacks to Bella's pregnancy and Lizzie's birth.  I look forward to more.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Sweet and sexy chapter.  Who couldn't love baby-making Edward?

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I thought she was only missing.  I didn't expect that.  I'm not sure I can read this, even though it's written so beautifully. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to read and review my story.  I completely understand if you can no longer continue with it.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I thik we all need a hug right about now.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: April 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh my.  I know it's fiction, but my heart is breaking.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review. *big hugs*

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: April 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I can't imagine the pain they're going through.  I think you're doing a very good, accurate job in portraying the way a mom and a dad would experience this differently.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

So sad for them.  You're writing a great story, even though it's heartbreaking.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I can't blame Bella or anyone else for thinking Edward and Tanya are having an affair. If it looks like a duck and quacks like a duck, most people think it's a duck. 

I hope they find their way back to each other, but I hope Edward has to do some begging.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: June 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Excellent emotional chapter!  Edward is such a man--totally oblivious.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: June 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Esme is so wise.  I don't know how you can write such emotional chapters so well. 

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: June 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

UH oh.  Doesn't Tanya do those meetings, or am I mistaken?

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: June 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

YAY!  A ginormous breakthrough!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: June 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Ah.  That was beautiful!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: July 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Oh my.  You should have put a tissue alert on this chapter.  I was so touched by the dream.  Excellent job!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: July 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Sweet ending! I know they'll always miss Lizzie, but they deserve a happy ending.

 
Some Life In Me by Pixiechick Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 530]
Summary:

He was a happy, successful family man, until a single instant changed everything and he lost everything he held dear. Unable to deal with his loss, he walked away from everything else.  She was the average small town girl, and in a staggering instant her life changed. Fate threw them together.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 146963
[Report This] Published: January 21, 2010 Updated: February 25, 2011


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: April 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Normal

Mmmmm, barbecue! I'm a Memphis girl, so I know true 'cue and always like seeing it (or Southern food in general) mentioned. I loved the description of the barbecue and the fair. I look forward to the next chapter with more of this day in it.

 




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