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Penname: VictoriaCullen [Contact]
Real name: Vickie
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Member Since: March 14, 2009
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Nothin much to tell.  Wife.  Mom.  Daughter. Teacher. Students.  Closet Twilight fan fiction addict who might actually leave her husband if Carlisle were real and single--even though he's a bit old for me.  I try not to date guys over 250, but for him I'd make an exception.


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Reviews by VictoriaCullen
 
Summary:

 

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Abandoned by her father in a less than perfect psychiatric institution, Bella is barely hanging on. Spurred on by Alice's vision of the girl they're meant to help, the Cullen family begins to permeate Bella's life. Can they undo the damage and find what is lost?

 

Eventually ExB.  Dark.

 

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 18877
[Report This] Published: January 13, 2010 Updated: July 03, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I'm surprised at the intensity of this story and look forward to reading more. 

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh my goodness!  The imagery of the filthy glass in the recreation room is one of the most powerful I've read in a very long time.  Excellent writing!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Ah, Esme--the mother Bella always needed but never had.  Your story is so beautifully written that I can feel Bella's emotions.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I was looking at recently updated stories and found yours.  I am far too addicted to fan fiction for my own good, but I wanted something to read.  I was hesitant to begin because your summary stated that the story was dark, and I tend to go for more lighthearted ones.  However, I'm so glad I took that chance.  Your story is one of the best written ones I've found on any fan fiction site in my year+ of borderline obsessive reading. 

 
The Doll (one shot) by Bbuttis Rated: NC-17 starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

With their wedding date quickly approaching, Bella and Edward have been testing their boundaries. Despite all the progress they have made, Edward is still worried. Emmett, sensing his brother’s apprehension has presented a solution to help ease some of Edward’s “tension”.

How far is Edward willing to go to ensure that he’s ready for the main event?

The Bella-Doll

Thanks to WorldInMyEyes for the awesome banner!

 

WARNING: This story contains adult themes including lemons and nudity. There might also be some bustle between a certain sentient creature and an inanimate object.


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3008
[Report This] Published: January 14, 2010 Updated: January 24, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Doll

Well, well.  Isn't Bella the creative one? I totally did not see the red panties thing coming.

Fun story!  Sexy and unique



Author's Response:

I must admit that WorldInMyEyes is responsible for both the warm lube and the moist panties... her idea bank is soooo vast :D

I'm happy that you liked the story, thanks for the review :)

 
Summary:

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Bella Swan becomes Bella Black and leaves Forks with Jacob to find their own slice of Heaven.  After Jacob’s death, Bella resigns herself to the fact that she has already had her one shot at the ‘happily ever after’ fairytale.  She throws herself into her writing and avoids Forks at all costs until the day when their son asks her if he can spend the summer with Charlie and Billy.  What decision will Bella make when she is presented with the opportunity of a second chance at the love of her life?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: No Word count: 151208
[Report This] Published: January 14, 2010 Updated: December 09, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - Bandages and Blue Jeans

I apologize for not stopping reading long enough to review, but I've been enjoying the story way too much even to pause for a second.  I'm very interesting in more background on what happened between Bella and Edward and where Edward is now.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and especially for the review.  I am glad that you are enjoying my little story.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: March 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 - Beauty Sleeps

I really love your strong, independent Bella!  It's just not logical that an adult Bella would fall right back into Edward's arms the second she laid eyes on him.  I mean, I'd fall right into his arms, but that's another story. ;o)



Author's Response:

Ok, here's a hint on the next chapter...Bella doesn't fall into Edward's arms...she kinda slowly scoots back into them...confused?  Good, now you will read the next chapter when it posts!  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. 

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: April 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 - Intertwined

Sleeping on the deck with Edward? Sweet!



Author's Response:

I loved writing this chapter and the next couple.  I have this horribly vicious sweet tooth that somehow manages to sneak it's way into the story.  Thanks so much for reading and for the review. 

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: November 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24 - First Love the Second Time Around

The wedding was perfect for this Bella and Edward--so sweet I got a little teary-eyed.



Author's Response:

Thanks Victoria! I had to write a simple wedding, full of meaning for Edward and understated for Bella. Only Alice would throw a huge bash for them but I told her no (lol). It just wasn't something I saw them having at this point in their lives. And thanks for reading my other stories too, I loved seeing your name come up under the reviews!

Mick

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 - Room Service

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and leaving me a review Victoria.  I appreciate it very much.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: May 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 - Out In The Open

I love the interaction between Jason and Edward.  It would be so easy for you to write them with animosity; this is more original and definitely more fun to read.



Author's Response:

lol, Thanks Victoria, I appreciate the fact that you like it and really like that you said fun...I try to make it a lighthearted easy to read fic...a happy little story.  Thanks again!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: October 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 - Strange Medicine

Twins!  How exciting!  I think Jason's reaction is very realistic. I know my son would have a jumping jerking fit if he found out I was pregnant--and I'm married to his dad.



Author's Response:

LMAO, thanks Victoria! I appreciate your faithful reviewing more than you think. But where are your name suggestions? i need names girl!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: June 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 - Homecoming

Playing the game based on Bella's books at the party was genius, and the, ahem, games in Edward's room were even more fun!



Author's Response:

Now I am blushing more than Bella would.  I just wanted something light...I honestly think Carlisle and Esme need more 'airtime'.  Their characters are often overlooked so I tend to write their reactions into the story more than I probably should.  But thanks so much for reading and leaving me a review - I appreciate it.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: October 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22 - Thanks For Giving

That chapter should have come with a tissue warning.  Grown men crying make me cry too!  I love that Bella and Billy made amends.



Author's Response:

I had three reviews tell me that they cried! I think that's a good thing...as twisted as that sounds. I did tear up when I was writing about Billy's reaction to losing Jacob and how Bella...well, I dont' want to ruin it for anyone else so I'll stop but thanks so much for reading and reviewing for me Victoria.

Mick

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: August 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18 - Decisions and Concessions

Tired all the time? Sex, but only once?  Could it be that Bella's got a bun in the oven? 

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Let's ask Lola shall we?  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: August 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 - Imprint

The whole imprint/impregnate thing was flippin' hilarious!

Are they all so clueless that they haven't figured out that Bella's stomach trouble isn't nerves?



Author's Response:

LMAO!  Sometimes these characters just dance around in my head (Emmett in particular does some pretty funky stuff).  I am sooo thrilled that someone picked up on the fun in that scene.  He can be so absent sometimes but he does make the scene seem more real for me.  I love the sarcasm between him and Bella.  I REALLY enjoyed writing that scene in particular and think abou tit quite a bit because I literally had it play out in my head as I was typing it out...I love when that happens.  GREAT BIG BESOS TO YOU!!!!  Thanks Victoria.  p.s. they'll figure out Bella's trouble soon enough, they are just all soo happy to be together that they are overlooking the obvious!

Mick

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: August 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 - Diagnosis

I'm glad Bella finally got the news we all knew.  I particularly liked the range of emotions Bella felt; it was very realistic to be happy, worried, and a little afraid all at once.



Author's Response:

Thanks Victoria!  I hope I did okay with her emotions, I have never seen one set emotion from anyone after they find out they're expecting.  It always boggled my mind how so many things could come up at once but if you say I got it, then I got it.  Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review.

Mick

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: November 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23 - Thanks For Forgiving

The bedroom scene made me cry.  It's so sweet that Edward can understand all the levels of Bella's grief.



Author's Response:

Yeah, that part was difficult to write because I know Bella never got rid of the bed that Jacob died in and there's just no way I could make Edward sleep in there knowing that. That would be a bit...icky. Trust me, you'll love where they actually end up sleeping! See you next chapter? Right here on Twilighted!

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: December 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25 - End Goal Of Happiness

Beautiful, sweet, and totally believable!



Author's Response:

Thanks Victoria! Please feel free to keep in touch and definately let me know if you write anything...I'd love to read it! This has been one heckuva year and I appreciate you coming along for the ride.

Mick

 
Summary:

Bella Swan is a quiet, reserved writer whose Saturday routine includes her favorite coffee, reading in the bookstore, and watching Edward Cullen. Over the tops of their books, they trade furtive glances, until Bella decides to risk it all and introduce herself. FGB O/S for Marijee.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 7294
[Report This] Published: January 15, 2010 Updated: January 15, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: January 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: BOOKWORMS (ONE-SHOT)

Wow!  Your story made me want to hang out at the local bookstore--and I'm happily married. :o)



Author's Response:

I'm sorry, Victoria. Actually, I'm not. ;) May as well be honest. Dude, I'm happily married, too, but that doesn't mean sometimes I don't want to bone my characters. Fuckhot Latteman is pretty high on my list. UNG. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Summary:

Bella is too busy to notice the life of her sister, Alice. At a group outing, Bella's findings rock her to the core and lead her to see her selfish ways. Will she be able to correct the wrongs or is it too late?

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 6322
[Report This] Published: January 17, 2010 Updated: February 10, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This story is GOOD!  I have a feeling I'm going to need tissues, but I'm eager to read more.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm hoping that you didn't need the aforementioned tissue. :)

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: February 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This story is like good chocolate--dark but satisfying.



Author's Response:

I'm very glad that you liked this. It's not exactly a popular(or fun for that matter) topic to write or read so I appreciate you. Thanks for reading.

 
Summary:

 

Bella and Edward have loved each other practically their whole lives.  But once tragedy strikes, can they heal their relationship?

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 55481
[Report This] Published: January 20, 2010 Updated: July 10, 2010


Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: June 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I didn't expect THAT to happen, but I hope it means better times are ahead for Bella and Edward.

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: April 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I can see the writing on the wall when Bella finds Tanya's number in Edward's phone--and she will. 

 
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen Signed
Date: July 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Great chapter!  There was a very good balance of grief, happiness, and fear of the unknown. 

 




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