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Penname: kristyn926 [Contact]
Real name: kristyn
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For Eternity by MonksMama Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1118]
Summary:

150 years after Edward leaves and 149 years after Bella's death, Jasper stumbles into a newly published fiction that isn't fiction at all. Who is Eve? Who are the Guardians? What are the concequences?

"May 17, 2153

Dearest Reader,

Come, pull up a chair and sit by me. Locked in these pages you will find my story, my memory, my secrets, my heart, my life, my death, some things that came after and everything in between.

Can I trust you with it?

It is truly fantastic and not for the faint-hearted. Not for the realist, not for the cynic, no never for the cynic, only the pure hearted will find purchase here. Lend me your ear, your open mind and heart and I will pull you to a myth you dare not dream of, a myth you unknowingly live every day.

Tell me dearest, do you believe in Angels? Not as Dogma, not as testament to whichever religion bears your faith, not fairies with wings and halos. Can you believe in the beings of light, of strength and power that govern here on earth, the beings that hold all things in order, beings that guard your humanity?

Perhaps Angels is the wrong word, a word they would see with distaste. So we shall call them what they are in essence, the guardians. Do you believe?  Can you believe in the mythical? If you cannot, this is no place for you. I’ll give you a moment to ponder this. Please do not tread lightly upon my  request.

As I have learned all too harshly, prepared or not, one can never go back. " 

 Told in varying POV, with excerpts from the book Storm.

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 92469
[Report This] Published: December 26, 2008 Updated: November 14, 2011


Reviewer: kristyn926 Signed
Date: February 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Loyalty

oh my goodness, excellent chapter, i really love the story cannot wait for more!

 
Reviewer: kristyn926 Signed
Date: February 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Storm: Stolen

i really love this story, its incredibly unique, and i cannot wait to read more you really have a talent with words

 
Reviewer: kristyn926 Signed
Date: February 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Storm: Proposition

wow, this was a really great chapter, it really just keeps getting better and better

 
Reviewer: kristyn926 Signed
Date: February 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Storm: Burn

i loved how descriptive this chapter was!

 
Reviewer: kristyn926 Signed
Date: February 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Complicated

love it, i love garrett i get a kick out of him

 
Reviewer: kristyn926 Signed
Date: February 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Honesty

this is my favorite chapter, because i love emmett. and he always comes out and points to the elephant in the room, and calls it out, and is not afraid to do so.

 
Reviewer: kristyn926 Signed
Date: March 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Torch

happy birthday. really incredible chapter. of course i cried a hell of a lot. and thanks for emmett the comic relief! if edward had never come back in new moon, this is the story i would have wanted to read.

 
Reviewer: kristyn926 Signed
Date: March 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Anticipation

excellent chapter.i love this story the more i read it.

 
Summary: Feature

 

"The following September, she lies nearly still in the hospital bed next to him. He listens to her breathing slow, and feels her hand press something cold into his. Her eyes are wet and tired, and it takes all of her strength to speak.

'Your whole heart, Edward.'”

Edward Cullen's Christmases past, beginning in 1918.

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5414
[Report This] Published: December 30, 2008 Updated: January 08, 2009


Reviewer: kristyn926 Signed
Date: January 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

that was beautiful

 
Summary:

Edward is a lonely vampire who has been waiting for over eighty years to find his soul mate.  His sister Alice has never been able to see his true love, but for good reason--she hadn't been born yet.  When Alice finally sees her, plans are made to finally make Edward's dream come true.

This is a different version of Twilight, and it's told from Edward's point of view.

A little lemony, but not too graphic.  Rated NC-17 for mature themes and language, and possibly for violence in later chapters. 

 Thanks to Evilangel6714 for the awesome banner!


Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Laurent, Mike, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes Word count: 157222
[Report This] Published: January 06, 2009 Updated: May 21, 2009


Reviewer: kristyn926 Signed
Date: January 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Thwarting Mike

excellent!



Author's Response:

Thank you.

 
Summary:

"So, this is my life, a childish game. Ruled by God, damned by fate. A game of love and lost.”


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 16752
[Report This] Published: January 12, 2009 Updated: February 11, 2009


Reviewer: kristyn926 Signed
Date: February 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

i am incredibly jealous of your quick wit and biting sarcasm. your just that cool.  great chapter, another great story

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen is an Army brat, who has his entire life planned out perfectly, and can't wait to get out of this utterly dull town of Forks, WA. But then a whirlwind in the form of Bella Swan enters his life and before long, he can't imagine his life without her. Will he sacrifice his chance at what could be a beautiful life with her? And is Bella willing to make that same sacrifice... AU/AH, possibly some OOC

Rated for situations and lemons later on...

 

©2009 kyla713. All rights reserved worldwide.

ABC

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 121063
[Report This] Published: January 17, 2009 Updated: September 10, 2009


Reviewer: kristyn926 Signed
Date: January 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Welcome Back

he should just spit it out! hell she should too!

 
Reviewer: kristyn926 Signed
Date: January 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Moody and a Little Emotional

james knowing bella is on the pill, ihave a feeling that isnt a good thing

 
Reviewer: kristyn926 Signed
Date: January 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Bella's B-day Part 1

excellent, touching james sickens her, i couldnt ask for more in a chapter!

 
Reviewer: kristyn926 Signed
Date: February 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Decisions

yeah i pretty much figured that had something to do with it. excellent chapter!

 
Psycho by kfm Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 202]
Summary:

newest psycho banner

Being a teenage pariah is never easy, but for Edward Cullen it's especially difficult. Then again, anyone would find being a mind-reader at the age of seventeen a little more than challenging.

Once a simple high school burn-out, Edward had given up on love after a painful break up. He attempts to drown his pain in extensive drug use which eventually triggers his ability to hear the thoughts of others. Once Carlisle is made aware of Edward's hidden talent, he sends his son to a psyche ward where he is diagnosed with type 2 Bipolar disorder. During his stay, he befriends Alice Brandon and finds himself oddly drawn to her best friend Bella (who has a damaging secret of her own).

AU-Human/OOC/Canon Couples

Rated NC-17 for underage drinking, drug use, explicit language and sexual content.


Categories: AU, AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 56548
[Report This] Published: February 05, 2009 Updated: April 10, 2009


Reviewer: kristyn926 Signed
Date: March 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Psychos

so i was really debating reading this story. but i can really identify w/ alice. at 15 i was put in a psych ward. and i have never felt more out of place in my life. i was stuck there with a guy that thought he was lucille ball, a 60 pound 11 year old boy who tried to choke a kid with a chain, a crack addict, a girl who heard voices, and a huge girl, who had a violent streak. needless to say, i followed orders to a T and got out after a week of good behavior diagnosed with bipolar 2. so congrats on getting incredibly facts staight.  if you want something fun to add...no shoelaces, belts, and you can absolutely not handle DVD's on movie night because the emo girl might cut herself with them. Excellent job

 
Incubus by EJ Santry Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 430]
Summary:

Incubus

Edward has been filling his thirst for blood with an insatiable appetite for flesh for the last 80 years. A new girl arrives at Forks High School that baffles him, and just might turn his world upside down and break him of his rapacious behavior.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jane, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 39573
[Report This] Published: February 06, 2009 Updated: March 19, 2009


Reviewer: kristyn926 Signed
Date: February 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Revelations

that was so perfect!



Author's Response:

That moment had to be just right.

 
Reviewer: kristyn926 Signed
Date: March 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Not Who I Was Expecting

uh oh, hmm aro actually leaving volterra...odd



Author's Response:

I thought that would be an interesting twist.  Now does he make another stop before heading back?

 
Summary:

Edward Masen has just moved to the rainy town of Forks, thinking that his life is over...that is until he meets the incredible, yet troubled Bella Swan and her friends. A story about finding yourself and the ones you grow to love where you never thought you could. Some OOCness...

 

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 26805
[Report This] Published: February 16, 2009 Updated: November 08, 2009


Reviewer: kristyn926 Signed
Date: February 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

oh edward, you would be surprised...excellent first chapter

 
Summary: Feature

 

Edward Cullen needs to pass Statistics. Bella Swan is his tutor. She thinks he's a flighty, arrogant--albeit sexy--asshole, and he thinks she's Bipolar, but tries to win her over, anyway.

Can he change her mind, or do first impressions really last?

 Thanks to my baby momma, Maximista, for the banner! <3


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Ben, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 34 Completed: No Word count: 258464
[Report This] Published: February 20, 2009 Updated: January 14, 2011


Reviewer: kristyn926 Signed
Date: March 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Attempted Murder & DDR

oy vey. i can feel the hate radiating out of the computer lol..great story

 

 
Summary:

Edward is adopted by the Cullens after living a nightmare.  He meets Bella, and she tries to fight his inner monster.  AH


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 104014
[Report This] Published: February 23, 2009 Updated: April 06, 2009


Reviewer: kristyn926 Signed
Date: March 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

yeah if i was in his position and saw the stereo and cd's i would have passed out from the exhiliration

 
Reviewer: kristyn926 Signed
Date: March 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

haha, i live in a house full of cubs fan, and im a sox fan. i told my cousins husband last weekend who is die hard for the cubs  "the cubs are like herpes, they are bad, and they just wont go away" lol



Author's Response:

LOL, I am an A's fan!  But the saga that is the Cubs is so funny.

 
Reviewer: kristyn926 Signed
Date: March 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

yay! some success!

 
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Date: March 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

excellent chapter. i feel so bad that he feels so helpless.

 
Reviewer: kristyn926 Signed
Date: March 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

omg what a bastard, i cant believe that..wait...yes i can, and it makes it worse. excellent chapter

 




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