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Summary:

 

Bella Swan spent the first two years of her life in Forks developing a friendship with Jacob Black that finally turned into something more.  As she begins her senior year of high school, a new family moves to town and Bella slowly begins to question the path she thought her life would follow.  Sometimes there is a difference between what you think you need and what you never knew you wanted.  Takes place during the timeframe of New Moon and Eclipse.  J/B at first, but eventually E/B. 

 

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
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Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: No Word count: 170230
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2008 Updated: July 19, 2009


Reviewer: Mariposa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Relentless

I've just found and read this story over the past couple of days and I'm enjoying it immensely! I love your Bella and Edward and Jacob and Alice. I like what the difference of a few years has made. The angst is painfully delicious even if you have had a hard time writing it. It will make E&B getting together that much more sweet in the long run. Keep up the great work and I can't wait to read the next chapter :oD

 
Snowed In by eclipsedawn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5321]
Summary: Bella travels to Alaska to vacation in the cabin Alice loaned her. What happens when Bella finds out she is not the only person staying in the cabin?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Jasper
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Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 88293
[Report This] Published: November 28, 2008 Updated: January 01, 2010


Reviewer: Mariposa Signed
Date: March 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Tongue Tied

I joined Twilighted so I could keep reading this story!

 
Reviewer: Mariposa Signed
Date: March 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Punishments and Salads

OMG! Dom!Edward is SOOOOOOOOO HOT! *squee* Yum! Can I please have some more?

 
Summary:

We always want what we can't have, but their love for each other was so much more than just temptation. He was the eager young teacher, Bella's friend and her inspiration in a high school world where she didn't quite fit. She was the bright young woman who took Edward completely by surprise, his saving grace after years of closing himself off from life and love. When their days are turned upside down by their secret relationship, will they find a way to be together?

 

 

Rated for subject matter and sexually explicit material in later chapters. Huge thanks to Anne Cullen for the awesome new banner and to m81170 the beautiful fan art/banner below! You are both amazing!  

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya, Tyler
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Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 64999
[Report This] Published: December 04, 2008 Updated: May 07, 2010


Reviewer: Mariposa Signed
Date: October 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Together

Awesome story! I've been reading it while I've been sick with the flu and it's helped entertain me :oD I'll follow your rec and I'm adding this to my faves! Take as long as you need with RL. Good things come to those who wait patiently.

 
Taking Chances by Evenstar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1306]
Summary:

 

Amazing new banner by SoapyMayhem!!!! Thank you so much sweetie! You're fantastic!

 

Summary:

Robert has two more days in London before he has to return to his hectic life in LA. He has no intention of letting himself anywhere near emotional attachment. Despite this, he finds himself unable to resist the brave invite of a beautiful girl at a nightclub in Soho, thinking it would be a one night thing only.

 


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Categories: Other Characters: Other Character, Robert Pattinson
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Series: Taking Chances - Stories and outtakes
Chapters: 32 Completed: No Word count: 289305
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: May 05, 2011


Reviewer: Mariposa Signed
Date: October 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - The Plunge/ Email

Great story! I've just starting into the world of RP fanfiction and read this one first on someone's suggesttion. OMG so f-ing good! This chapter, this whole freaking story! I love that he's falls for an "ordinary girl" curves and all! Miranda is a wonderful original character that you've given a lot of substance to. And your Rob is so believeable! This story is maketable if you just changed Rob's name and occupation, I think you could sell this. I love it! I can't wait for more! I've gobbled up these first 20 chapters. The phone sex was hot! Very believable and accurate, I've done it before. It can be almost as good as being together, especially for the woman because sex for women is more psychological than physical and she had everything she needed, his scent and his voice to fulfill those needs. And he had that desperate longing to be with her that he needed. I loved that she thought she was safe drinking so much wine because he wasn't there but they ended up having sex anyways. I love their banter and dry British humor, it kills me! You've done a great job and I can't wait for more! 

 
Reviewer: Mariposa Signed
Date: October 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Standing Out

Damn i didn't even realize it was Shannon. Thanks for the heads up there. i had forgotten about her.Poor Miranda, I hope Rob doesn't screw it up.

 
Reviewer: Mariposa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Jealousy Intrudes

"I want you to spoon me."

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! So sweet! Great long chapter!

I'm really not liking Shannon but its more of a pity thing because she really is a sad person.

I'm happy to see our two lovebirds finally talking to each other and just sleeping together. I know, how wrong is that? They should be having more wild monkey sex! But I think I can guess that that is what's going to happen once they're well rested. I can't wait! 

Again brilliant chapter!

 
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While hunting one afternoon, Emmett, Jasper and Carlisle stumble upon what appears to be a corpse.  When they learn it's a severely broken vampire, they take him home to do what they can to help.  But of course, fate has plans for this man.  Canon Couples.  AU.  DARK Themes.


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes Word count: 158872
[Report This] Published: February 26, 2009 Updated: October 31, 2011


Reviewer: Mariposa Signed
Date: March 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: The Next Day

It worked so well. I'm here because of a rec by angstgoddess003 on LJ.

This story is so amazingly heartbreaking! This poor broken and wounded vampire is so sad but the story is very compelling. I can't wait to see how things turn out next. I really want to know how he got this way, how he is different and why Bella is so attached to him so quickly. Keep up the good work!

 
Reviewer: Mariposa Signed
Date: March 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: The Venom

Great chapter! I can't wait for more!

 
Reviewer: Mariposa Signed
Date: April 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: The Bath

Review, review, review! I like that you want our reviews as much as we want another chapter ;o) Great chapter! I'm excited he's getting better and I can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

I do! I'm obsessed with them ;) And let me just say - you guys are doing fracking amazing this chapter! I'm closing in on.. 600! AHH! *passes out*

I'm glad you enjoyed this one, THANK YOU FOR REVIEW!! :D

 
Reviewer: Mariposa Signed
Date: April 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: The Balcony

Great chapter! I can't wait to see what happened to Edward and who had him.

 
Summary:

      

A chance encounter leads to an odd attraction that develops into an addiction.

 There are so many things about this woman that fascinate me.  She's beautiful.  Classically beautiful at that.  Intelligent.  Articulate.  Witty.  She's everything any man could ever dream of or want.  Except I don't even know her name.

Warnings:  Lemons.  Lots of lemons.  Actually, more like Mike's Hard Lemonade.  Mild D/s.

 

 


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: The Anonymous Series
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 44658
[Report This] Published: March 18, 2009 Updated: June 10, 2010


Reviewer: Mariposa Signed
Date: October 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Don't Say A Word

OMG that was so dirty hot! I think I love you!



Author's Response:

I love you right back sweetie.  Dirt = hot in my book ;)  I'm glad you are enjoying this and took the time to leave your thoughts!

 
The One by m244robp Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 763]
Summary:

 

Rebecca Russell is a pretty, simple girl who owns a small bookshop in New York City.  Her best friend and knight-in-shining armor is Nick Frenkel, who has looked out for her and taken care of her whenever she found herself in trouble ever since their college days.  At one time in their lives, Nick -- who we all know manages Twilight star, Robert Pattinson -- promised to find Rebecca, THE ONE. 

Nick introduces Robert to Rebecca on a visit to New York City.  Nick thinks Robert is The One?  Rebecca is not so sure.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 

Please join me over at the forum thread for this story. I'll be using it to update any of you who are interested, answer some of your questions, and post some occassional advanced blurbs of future chapters as well.

You'll need to sign up separately, if you're not already using the forums.   

 I'd love to hear from you!

 


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 141759
[Report This] Published: June 29, 2009 Updated: July 15, 2010


Reviewer: Mariposa Signed
Date: October 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

OMG! RPF.com! I'm registering right after I finish this chapter! I'm so hooked Thanks for reccing!

Oh my, that chapter was heartbreaking! Poor Rebecca! And Poor Robert! That nightmare was horrible! And poor Nick. I can't wait to see where everyone goes from here. How they'll get through this, their reactions, will Nick fight Robert to stay more in Rebecca's life or has he really let her go. I don't think he should because it's like he's her brother and Robert needs to get over pushing Nick away and Nick should probably give up protecting her a little but shouldn't let Rob push him out of the picture. Nick had every right to stay at the hospital. I can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Welcome to The One.  I am always excited to hear a new voice in the reviews.   I really appreciate your comments on Nick.  I often wonder how everybody feels about him and his role in this story.  He is an important part of the story of Rob and Rebecca.  And even if I am the author of this story, I agree with you, Rob shouldn't have pushed him out of the picture.

 

 
Reviewer: Mariposa Signed
Date: October 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I had no clue! That is wierd. I'd be freaking out if I was Rob. Nice surprise, at least it is for me. I like the unexpected twist. Also when Tom and Sam showed up while they were making out, LOL! Great chapter!

Will they ever find the person who pushed her down the steps? If the pap was following her and taking tons of pictures, is there a picture of her assailant?



Author's Response:

Thank you my dear Madame Butterfly.  I am glad you are enjoying the twist in this story.  I particularly enjoyed slipping in their being caught by Tom and Sam.  As for the person who pushed her, we may never know really.  As for the pap, I am still unsure if we will ever hear from him again.  Your comment however, has given me something to think about.  Thank you again.

 
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Snarky Film Critic, Alexa Owens, has always had an uncomplicated life which she liked to believe was based in reality. She had never gone looking for a fairy-tale ending, because, simply, she didn't believe that they existed.

When a sexy British stranger sends her a text-message meant for a friend, she assumes that after their short conversation she'll never hear from him again. Little does she know that her life has suddenly gone down a path that she might not be quite ready for.


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes Word count: 79841
[Report This] Published: September 06, 2009 Updated: July 01, 2010


Reviewer: Mariposa Signed
Date: October 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Just read this today. I love how it's progressing! Rob is being kind of creepy in the way he's hiding who is is and knowing he's going to see her at the concert even though she doesn't know. It looks like it will make a really great awkward!Rob kind of situation. I can't wait for more, adding to faves!



Author's Response:

Thanks, Marisposa! I'm glad that you're liking it.

It's funny that you think Rob is being creepy. I've never gotten that point of view before, but I see where it can come from. Alexa is also kind of hiding who she is, too, though, isn't she? She never said that she was 'Lexie' right? Haha. Something to ponder, I guess.

 
Need to Escape by lostluggage Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5723]
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When Robert Pattinson needs to escape the crazy life of stardom- he finds an unlikely ally to see him to safety- a quiet bookshop owner who is secretly infatuated with Twilight, and a certain young British actor.


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 97 Completed: Yes Word count: 829399
[Report This] Published: September 07, 2009 Updated: September 07, 2012


Reviewer: Mariposa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13- Say It, Out Loud

Sweet! (short on words lately)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and rating!

 

 
Reviewer: Mariposa Signed
Date: October 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2-Introductions

Awesome, awesome, awesome! I love how you threw them together! Her reaction is so genuine! This is so cute! I can't wait to see more!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! i am glad you are liking it so far.

Hopefully you'll see chapter 3 post in a couple of days. 

Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: Mariposa Signed
Date: October 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3- Preparations

I'd like to see you jump up and down ;o) This chapter was hilarious! I loved the Mr. Magoo reference, I could just see Mr.J clear as day! And a the whole Rob infused computer was brilliant! I wish mine was that way *sigh* alas I have a husband and kids i need to keep pretenses up for. I loved the whole Leroy thing too and I really love your OC and the secret code thing and and and this story is just brilliant and i can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

Jumping up and down and squeeling, "OMG!" 

Thanks so much for the review!

Blushing and just sigh that you are liking it!

My computer is fairly well saturated- the hub and child have learned to accept my twilight obsession.(much rolling of the eyes and sighing involved- but i just ignore it- hahaha)

Thanks for reading- and more very soon as promised!

 
Reviewer: Mariposa Signed
Date: October 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4-Escape

*squee* OMG that was so great! I love all the UST! I can't wait till it explodes!

Author's Response:

thanks so much!

get ready...it's coming...haha!

 
Reviewer: Mariposa Signed
Date: October 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5- The Arrival

AHHHH! An evil cliffy! Please say it's her ex please, please, please!

OMG this chapter was hot! but you made us wait while they slept together!!! But it was perfect really and for a first timer your smut was awesome! I'm so excited I can't use grammar properly! I can't wait for more! *squee*

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

yes, i'm sorry about the cliffy- but i'll be quick to turn around- i hate to leave ya'll hangin!

about the husband- you'll have to wait and see! evil smirk...

glad you liked the smut! makes me all warm and fuzzy!

 
Reviewer: Mariposa Signed
Date: October 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6-Confessions

OMG Jen's story was so heartbreaking! But the sweet shower loving afterwards made up for it!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Yes, Jen has had a pretty hard few years, but Rob is certainly helping her cope!

Glad you liked the shower scene!

 
Reviewer: Mariposa Signed
Date: October 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7-Questions

Lovely long chapter! This one was squee-a-licious! The music scene, the STOLI SHIRT,  the sex, the movie! I think that would be a perfect day with Rob. I really squealed loud when she put on THE SHIRT! Anf then the Office update at the end! She was so careful and she was still busted! How did he know? Is it confession time next? I can't wait.



Author's Response:

Squee-a-licious! love it! thanks so much!

sigh, any day would be a perfect day with Rob... 

And the Office- oh, we'll find out a whole lot in the next chapter. promise!

 
Reviewer: Mariposa Signed
Date: October 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8- Answers

OMG another squee-a-licious chapter! But it's late so that's about all you'll get out of me. i have to go to bed but i just had to read your update! now I'll go to bed dreaming of Rob!  I love the supplimental materials, brilliant idea, brilliant chapter!



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks so much for staying up to read and review!

Glad you liked it! and the supplemental materials- thanks! they are a hoot to play around with! I'll  (I mean JEN) will be blogging alot.

thanks again! 

 
Reviewer: Mariposa Signed
Date: November 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9-Excursions

I loved how she woke up thinking it was a dream. That little detail was awesome. Then she had to wake up, I hate when that happens on a normal day but it must be 10 times more frustrating when your bed is full of gorgeous, tall, naked, British Sex God!

Mmmmmm! Kinky bad boy Rob was so hot! I hope she can bring that out of him again! I guess he's not used to older confident women who can take a spanking!

I love their relaxed boat trip out. I love to see her opening up. She's really a great character.The #1, ST:TNG reference made me LOL! And the condom buying scene made me ROTFLMAO! I love that granny gave her a wink! And i love how protective she is of him and can come up with a cover story at the drop of a hat.

Thanks for the beer education. I doubt they sell any of those here in TX but I'll try to keep an eye out for them. I know my husband would pick it up in a hurry if it had the words panty peeler in it!!!

I can so totally see this would be his reaction to tabloids and gossip rags and asking her, someone he knows he can trust and is detached from all the Hollywood BS, why. I loved her answer and that she's falling for him. Poor girl's got it bad. I don't want to see him leave her!

I hate the gossip rags and even feel guilty looking at the pictures where he doesn't look happy and he just doesn't want all the BS. It makes my heart break for him.

I love him, not just because he's handsome with a lovely accent, but because he's genuine, real, a normal person in extrodianary circumstances. He's emmensely talented and we're lucky he is able to share that talent with us. i hope he is able to record an album because i just love his voice. It's so emmotive and touches a part of your being that not many can. He's also so humble and I think authentically grateful for this opportunity that you can tell that's what helps him keep it together. Also, seeing him go out, obviously just throwing the first thing he finds on makes him seem more attractive because he's not into this whole celeb image thing, he speaks his mind and I think that takes a lot of guts to do and I respect him a lot for doing that. He's got principles and he's not going to sell his soul to Hollywood. I wouldn't be surprised to see him take a break out of the public eye for a long time as soon as he wraps up the Twilight Saga. He might do one or two movies he just doesn't want to turn down while he's "hot" but I think he will try to dissapear for a bit. And I think it will just make me respect him more for it.

Now that you've made me reflect on Rob and pontificate about him, I have to say I loved this chapter. It was all over the place in a good way, sexy, funny, thought provoking, sweet. Brilliant work! I think this is the best chapter yet. I had to read it two times. I can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

WOW!

my first ever really long review!

 i loved it! 

what to say? 

yes. no. to get to the other side?

no. no.

I love everything you said! we are so lucky to have someone as incredible as Rob to occupy our time and to reflect upon- seriously- i have wasted 4 hours this morning looking at pictures and wondering how this is going to affect him! that and a lot of drooling...

so glad you loved the chapter! Bad boy WILL make a come back at some point. not to worry!

thanks for the extra special review! it's inspiring me to go finish chapter 15!

 
Reviewer: Mariposa Signed
Date: November 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10-Realizations

I totally thought that was Jen in the beginning! You totally pwned me! And then she was his first bareback! OMG that was awesome! I just read another one that posted a similar scene at the same time! Weird @_@ I also read an interview yesterday I think, where he said someone sent him a fan fiction where he and Edward were two separate characters in the story and that's where it started but he doesn't have much time for it anymore. I guess since it was so good without, the Trojans are just pretty packets of foil now ;o) Awesome chapter I'm on to the next right now.

Author's Response:

OMG I just spit drink out my nose! Bareback! Bwahahaha!

And yes, those Trojans will make fine balloon animals maybe!

it would be interesting if Rob actually HAD read some fan fic- but I am definitely sure he is far too busy...

thanks for the review!

 




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