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Penname: wmlaw [Contact]
Real name: Amy
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Summary:

Edward is a lonely homesteading cowboy in northern Nevada, Bella is a mail order bride full of secrets.   What happens when Edward discovers her lies?  Can he forgive her? Can she measure up?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Tanya, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 85364
[Report This] Published: November 01, 2008 Updated: December 09, 2008


Reviewer: wmlaw Signed
Date: November 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting start!  I had to laugh when I saw you made Rose a cow and Jasper and Alice horses... and Emmett the prize winning bull!  ;)

Author's Response: That's the gang!  It just seemed right.  Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: wmlaw Signed
Date: November 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Is She Here Yet?/Am I There YET?

I like it!  This is a really unique fic!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I'm glad you are enjoying it!

 
Reviewer: wmlaw Signed
Date: November 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Meet the Family

I really like this story!  It's so unique!

Author's Response: Thank you!

 
Reviewer: wmlaw Signed
Date: November 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Going Visiting

Aaaw, Esme's so adorable!  I'm glad you didn't make her into a farm animal too ;)

Author's Response: Naw, there needed to be a "maw" and "paw" close by.  I'm glad you liked it.  Thank you!

 
Reviewer: wmlaw Signed
Date: November 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Aftermath

Whoooo- glad to know she didn't get shot or whatnot!  And yay to more C&E!

Author's Response: Thank you!

 
Reviewer: wmlaw Signed
Date: November 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Projects

Ooh, what could be the foreshadowing??  This story is just so cute.  My aunt makes that poundcake and boy is it good but boy is it bad for you!  But I guess if you were on the Frontier, you don't really care about calories!

Author's Response: I know, pound of eggs, pound of butter...definitely not heart healthy.  Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: wmlaw Signed
Date: November 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: More than a Gift

Aaaaaw!!!

Author's Response: Thank you!

 
Reviewer: wmlaw Signed
Date: November 14, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: A Day with Friends

Emmett and Rose... hahaha!  And Jake the wolf, it had to happen.  More drama?  Oh no!

Author's Response: Yes yes, of course more drama! Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: wmlaw Signed
Date: November 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Visitors and Lessons

Your Edward and Bella are so sweet :)  Glad that Angela is there for her too now.

Author's Response: Thank you!

 
Reviewer: wmlaw Signed
Date: November 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: Happy Trails

Oh please don't let him shoot her by accident, or shoot Emmett, Rose, Alice or Jasper!  And did she really fall or faint? 

Author's Response:

Ok, Edwards not that bad of a shot to be aiming at Jake and then shoot Bella, that would just be all kinds of crazy.  As for if Bella really fell, if you're meaning at the beginning of the chapter, we'll find out about that later. :)  Thanks

 

 
Reviewer: wmlaw Signed
Date: November 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 15: When It All Falls Down

ACK!!!

Author's Response: Thank you!

 
Reviewer: wmlaw Signed
Date: December 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 24: Here We Go

Fantastic chapter :) Yay! the baby's here.  Bella will be so disappointed it's a girl (not really but she was so sure!)

Author's Response: I know, it was probably a little obvious it was going to be a girl because Bella was so sure.  Anyhow, thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: wmlaw Signed
Date: December 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 26: Celebrations and Surprises

Lovely!  I'm glad you're not going to throw unnecessary drama Esme's way!  And I love the name Evelyn Grace.  Very pretty!!

Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you like it!

 
Reviewer: wmlaw Signed
Date: December 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue

So sweet, yet so sad :(

Author's Response: It was only a little bit sad, they really did live a long a fulfilled happy life.  Thanks for the review!

 
Summary: At the end of New Moon, Charlie and Bella have a little chat about Bella's activities during the three days she was saving Edward's life in Italy. What does this conversation look and sound like to the vampire hiding in the closet?
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Charlie, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3547
[Report This] Published: November 11, 2008 Updated: November 19, 2008


Reviewer: wmlaw Signed
Date: November 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Closet Thoughts

That was lovely.

 
Summary: Edward chooses a life of danger over one of gentrified comfort. Did Bella, the beautiful innkeepers daughter influence his decision? Can he bring the two sides of his life together or is he destined to lose everything? Inspired by 'The Highwayman'.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 48839
[Report This] Published: November 13, 2008 Updated: June 29, 2009


Reviewer: wmlaw Signed
Date: November 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

This is bloody fantabulous!  Love it- and I'm conflicted as to whether the highway man is Jasper or Emmett....  *hmmm*

 
Summary:

A fluffy, one-shot featuring our favorite vampire family. Post Breaking Dawn. Possible Spoilers. ExB


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1330
[Report This] Published: November 15, 2008 Updated: November 18, 2008


Reviewer: wmlaw Signed
Date: November 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aaaaw!  Very very nice- wish we had gotten some daddy-daughter moments in BD!

 
Still by crazyevildru Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]
Summary: Jasper and Alice in their room after Bella's birthday in New Moon. Alice wants to comfort him.
Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1107
[Report This] Published: November 21, 2008 Updated: November 25, 2008


Reviewer: wmlaw Signed starstarstarstar
Date: November 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Still

That was absolutely gorgeous.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading!

 
Summary:

Bella has never truly enjoyed the Christmas Season...until now.


 



Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jasper, Renesmee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 4443
[Report This] Published: December 02, 2008 Updated: December 09, 2008


Reviewer: wmlaw Signed starstarstarstar
Date: December 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was lovely!  I really liked it.  You should write more like this with all the Cullens being happy and together!

 
Home Safe by schweinsty Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 23]
Summary: Esme watches over Bella while she sleeps. Post New Moon.
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Esme, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1334
[Report This] Published: December 02, 2008 Updated: December 03, 2008


Reviewer: wmlaw Signed
Date: December 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very nice Esme POV!

Author's Response: Thanks!

 
A Mother's Love by LaBruja Rated: PG starstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary: The evening after Nessie is born, Esme sings and contemplates what it means to feel a mother's love, as a human and now. 
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Nessie, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1194
[Report This] Published: December 04, 2008 Updated: December 06, 2008


Reviewer: wmlaw Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was absolutely lovely!!

Author's Response: Thank you!

 




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