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Being Mrs. Black by akaibara Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 131]
Summary:

BMB

Edward/Bella, Implied Jacob/Bella.

Imagine that the Cullens were late in returning to Forks. Bella arrived on schedule, but her life proceeded normally. She and Jacob become the best of friends and with no vampires to awaken them, the wolves don't mature. When he turns 18, Jake and his friends enlist, going to look for adventure in Iraq. He proposes, and Bella can't imagine ever loving someone more than she does her best friend. They quickly marry and he leaves for war. Two months later she gets some news that will turn her life upside down. And on that same day, a beautiful, dangerous stranger appears. From the moment their eyes meet, Bella begins to question those solemn vows she made. Will Bella Black do the right thing?

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Disclaimer: Twilight and all associated characters and concepts are the property of Stephenie Meyer. I'm just borrowing them and wreaking mild havoc~


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No Word count: 37104
[Report This] Published: June 10, 2008 Updated: September 21, 2008


Reviewer: wmlaw Signed
Date: November 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 16: Rose Garden Grudge Match

*nudge nudge*  Please update!

 
Summary:

After college, best friends Bella, Rosalie and Alice have a run-in with their past. . .and maybe their future? A farcical, romantic comedy with a healthy dose of angst.  Nominated for Best Romance & Best Edward Characterization (Incomplete) at the Twilight Awards.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes Word count: 144638
[Report This] Published: June 20, 2008 Updated: December 29, 2008


Reviewer: wmlaw Signed
Date: October 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

This is fantabulous!  How have I missed it??

 
Reviewer: wmlaw Signed
Date: November 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

The personalized panties were hysterical.  My heart kinda breaks for Alice :(  Poor little unsure Alice :(

 
Summary:

Bella is a graduate student in Seattle when she runs into Edward, who teaches at the same college. What will she do when she hits it off with Edward, only to have a former love come back into her life? All-Human. Usual pairings. NC-17 for future chapters.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 46511
[Report This] Published: June 25, 2008 Updated: April 01, 2009


Reviewer: wmlaw Signed
Date: September 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12 - A Memorable Night

Well crap. That really sucks.  Poor everyone :(

 
Reviewer: wmlaw Signed
Date: September 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11 - Hanging Out

This is fab!!

 
Merger of Two Hearts by limona Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 330]
Summary:

Edward has made his name in the merger and acquisition business by using a key advantage: he can read people's minds. Reading people is a great talent to have, unless you can't turn it off. Then it is a lonely talent. What will Edward do when he meets a woman whose mind is closed to him? All the usual suspects will show up in this AH, AU fic, canon pairings.

--ON HIATUS UNTIL OCTOBER 2009--


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 54803
[Report This] Published: July 24, 2008 Updated: September 11, 2008


Reviewer: wmlaw Signed
Date: September 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Margaritas

Oh... that just doesn't sound good.  This story, however, is really damn good.  I'm loving it!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you're enjoying the story!

 
Reviewer: wmlaw Signed
Date: September 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Too Much

My comments?  Woe!  I'm depressed now.  Too much shite hitting the proverbial fan at once. :(

Author's Response: Don't be depressed. I promise it's not all crap hitting the fan.

 
Summary:

 

Did you ever wonder why Bella was so comfortable around vampires? After meeting someone she never expected in the clearing after Victoria's death, Bella hears a story and realizes her acceptance of all things supernatural may just....run in the family.

 *Attention - the story has been given a makeover! Chapters have been deleted and it is starting new and fresh and how I wanted it to go - but the idea is still the same, just a little different look.*

 

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jane, Jasper, Marcus, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 26708
[Report This] Published: July 27, 2008 Updated: January 12, 2009


Reviewer: wmlaw Signed
Date: September 03, 2008 Title: It Runs in the Family

This is really good!!!

 
Wishing Star by Mystic_Ice24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 4552]
Summary:

WRITTEN REWRITTEN REWRITTEN REWRITTEN

After her parents are killed in a plane crash, a young girl is rejected again & again by foster families for being too old. She wishes on a star nightly, but will she find what she seeks? Will the Cullens be that family?

NC-17 for later chapters. Warning" Violence, and sexual aggresion may be part of this story.

Winning Summary:

"I wish I may, I wish I might, have the wish I make tonight."  With that one hope Isabella Swan faces life as best as she can.  The tragedy of her parents' death, leaves her alone in a system where her age leaves her undesirable for adoption.  That is until one day two people come into her life offering her a chance at hope.  The Cullen family takes to Bella like a long lost sister.  What happens when Bella is taken from the Cullens by a lost relative?  Will Bella's hopes be destroyed?  What happens when fate steps in years later to reunite Bella with the one's she loved and who loved her so long ago?

Bella knew what she would say, "Don't you want to be my sister?"

 

 

Thanks to Mrs C for the above Banner and my beta readergoof for the below Banner!Wishing Star Banner Readergoof

Thanks to Sleforever for below banner!

Wishing Star Banner Sleforever


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 40 Completed: No Word count: 137752
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2008 Updated: April 12, 2011


Reviewer: wmlaw Signed
Date: August 24, 2008 Title: Wishing Star

Aaaaw at the gifts.  Emmett's not the brightest bulb but his heart is *always* in the right place!

 
Reviewer: wmlaw Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 25, 2008 Title: Wishing Star

Eeeee!!!  I'm on the edge of my seat...what will be the result??

 
Reviewer: wmlaw Signed
Date: August 27, 2008 Title: Wishing Star

Hmmm....so no real answer as to the big P.  But Edward is home...yay!

 
Reviewer: wmlaw Signed
Date: September 03, 2008 Title: Wishing Star

Poor Bella.  She does need therapy.  I loved Esme's reaction to the pregnancy, though sometimes I wonder what they're thinking that their six kids wound up paired off like they did...

 
Summary:

The effect of the imprinting compulsion on both Jacob and Edward.

 


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1311
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2008 Updated: August 18, 2008


Reviewer: wmlaw Signed
Date: August 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very nice, although I must say my favorite part was when Edward knocked Jake out.  Bwah!

 
Summary:

When Jasper Whitlock and Alice Masen tied the knot, they hoped their own siblings would have the same happy ending. Jasper's sister, Isabella, was at the peak of her career, leaving very little time for love. Alice's brother, Edward, was in the process of moving thousands of miles in the name of business.

What happens when Jasper and Alice insist on accompanying Edward to Seattle while he finds his new base of operation, all while staying in Isabella's penthouse?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Lauren, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes Word count: 77087
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2008 Updated: July 04, 2009


Reviewer: wmlaw Signed
Date: September 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Dazed and Confused

WOE!!! :(

 
Reviewer: wmlaw Signed
Date: August 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Jasper

I just read all of this.  It's really good!!

 
Reviewer: wmlaw Signed
Date: August 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Christmas Morning

I liked it :)  But... 

What did Edward and Bell get each other??

 

 

 
Reviewer: wmlaw Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Merry Christmas?

I love to hate Jake.  And your Jake is pretty damn bad.  So I love it!  And I love their gifts to each other :)

 
Reviewer: wmlaw Signed
Date: August 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Surprise

Aaaw, this chapter was good! I love Jasper & Alice.  But who was that on the phone?  *ponders*

 
Reviewer: wmlaw Signed
Date: September 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Happy New Year

Why do I have this feeling that this was the calm before the storm?  *cue ominous music*

 
Reviewer: wmlaw Signed
Date: September 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Fearless

Dude.... this situation is not good!

 
Reviewer: wmlaw Signed
Date: September 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Run Like Hell

Ooh I'm glad that the police got there in time!

 
Reviewer: wmlaw Signed
Date: October 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: The End

Yay! You updated!  I'm so glad.  Now my review: Bella's an idiot.

 
Reviewer: wmlaw Signed
Date: November 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Aftermath

I'm sorry but what the frig was that??

 
Summary:

Bella knew Edward was paranoid when it came to her safety, she just didn't know how paranoid he could be. 

"Missile. Proof. Glass," I repeated slowly, my hands still on my hips as I glared up at him.  "Honestly, Edward, what kind of trouble do you think I can get in to?"

 


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 776
[Report This] Published: August 07, 2008 Updated: August 18, 2008


Reviewer: wmlaw Signed
Date: August 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aaaw, this was cute!  You wrote Edward very well!

 
Summary:

Breaking Dawn spoilers!

A missing moment from Breaking Dawn - Rosalie's thoughts as she holds the baby while Bella lies dying upstairs, fits in P.354.

 


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1639
[Report This] Published: August 12, 2008 Updated: August 18, 2008


Reviewer: wmlaw Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Butterfly Kiss

Heartbreakingly fantastic!

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! xxx :)

 




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