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The List by Laura Cullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13645]
Summary:

Four weeks before her wedding to Edward, Bella is frustrated. She knows there's little-to-no chance of getting him to bend his rules and boundaries now, but there's no harm in fantasizing about what could happen later. So she begins compiling a list of things that she and Edward can do together once they're happily married. She's surprised to find she might be able to cross some things off earlier than she thought...

Story contains mature themes and is not intended for younger readers.

Thanks to Mandi, aka m81170, for the great banner!


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 187877
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2010


Reviewer: jamdowner Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

Brilliant!!!

 
Reviewer: jamdowner Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

Words fail me as your brilliance just leave me speechless!  Excellent chapter, wonderful story!  Congratulations and Thank You!!!

 
Summary:

What if Bella hadn't moved her junior year with her father.  Instead she moved with her mother to Florida.  Upon visting her father before leaving for college she encounters two members of the Cullen Family.  Alice's vision tells her that Bella would change their lives forever. 

Edward's first encounter with Bella is 30,000 feet in the air on the way to Darthmouth.  With no means of escape will he be able to resist the temptation of her blood?  Or will he bring the whole plane down for a taste?

 

 

Flight of the Phoenix

 

  ~Edward's POV: Chapter 2

 

I closed my eyes to listen to the tones of voices around me. I heard at least one hundred passengers. It would be a massacre. Could I really justify destroying all the lives of everyone on this plane just to taste her blood?

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 71150
[Report This] Published: February 17, 2009 Updated: May 15, 2010


Reviewer: jamdowner Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Instinct

Well done, this is such an original story.  I am really excited to see more.  I love how you've taken everything and put a whole new spin on it.  Great Job!!

 
Breaking Point by Chrysantemum Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 23]
Summary:

Being a working class girl in 1988 was something that Bella Swan hated. She wanted out of it and she got her wish when she is turned into a vampire. Going through time drinking blood was the normal for Bella until she stumbles across Edward Cullen and his family. They take her in and try to teach her the alternative to live. Bella is getting the hang of it and the hang of Edward Cullen. Everything seems to be going right in her life, until a person from her past comes back and threatens to destroy it.


Categories: Pre-Twilight, Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 5644
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: March 03, 2009


Reviewer: jamdowner Signed starstarstarstar
Date: September 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really hope you continue.  This was quite entertaining.

 
Reviewer: jamdowner Signed starstarstarstar
Date: September 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really hope you continue.  This was quite entertaining.

 
Summary:

Jasper is a university Professor of History. Alice is his new student. He has been alone for a long time, afraid to love. Can Alice teach Jasper that they could be something special? Can she give him a second chance at happiness?

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: Eternal Hope: The Alice and Jasper Archive
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 104075
[Report This] Published: June 01, 2009 Updated: October 17, 2009


Reviewer: jamdowner Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I am really enjoying this story.  Great job!

 
Reviewer: jamdowner Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Wonderful reunion, wonderful story!

 
Summary:

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Bella and her best friend Jasper are nomadic vampires. What happens when on their travels, they run into a family of vampires by the name of Cullen? Is it possible for them to settle down and finally find true happiness, or will someone from their past show up and take them away? OOC. Earns its rating for later lemons and strong language.

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jane, Jasper, Marcus, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 30429
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2009 Updated: December 04, 2009


Reviewer: jamdowner Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: And So It Begins

Great story so far, look forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

~Mia

 
Summary:

The story is built upon canon, going AU at the point of the battle with Victoria and the newborns. This time, the battle is not so simple, and Esme, Edward, Jacob, Leah, and Paul are killed.  

This is the story of how Bella and the Cullens pick up the pieces after the terrible tragedy and find a way to live again. It's quite emotional and slow-building, and I've done my best to keep it as realistic as possible (for the Twilight world, lol) and keep everyone in character.

Here's a preview:

"Bella, everything you heard in those letters was true. You are a Cullen, no matter what. We love you, and we want you to stay."

She looked up at me, her eyes brimming with tears. "How, Carlisle? How can you want me to stay?"

I took her face between my hands and looked directly into her eyes. "Because Bella, I can't make it if you don't. I need you now. You are the only one who can understand the pain I'm in, and I yours. We all need each other. This family will fall apart if we separate now. Please, Bella, say you'll stay with us."

 

"But since we lost Esme and Edward, I've felt his feelings toward her - he thinks of her as a friend. A best friend, perhaps. He has loved her in that way since the battle. And she feels for him in the same way. And I've noticed, especially in the last few months, that the connection they feel for each other seems stronger somehow. When they are not together, they both feel incomplete, but together, they both feel secure. They really rely quite heavily on each other." 

 

 

 

 

 

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Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Carlisle
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 45 Completed: Yes Word count: 140263
[Report This] Published: July 22, 2009 Updated: January 07, 2010


Reviewer: jamdowner Signed
Date: September 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Fly Away and Discover

Nice story, very well done.

 
Hidden by SirenSongx Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1160]
Summary:

There are more secrets to the ‘new girl in school’ than even a family of vampires could have foreseen. What could the irresistible Bella Swan be hiding? There is more to the golden eyed girl than anyone could have expected.

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Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 95376
[Report This] Published: August 12, 2009 Updated: January 28, 2011


Reviewer: jamdowner Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: 9: Good or Bad Sign?

I am thoroughly enjoying this.  Great story.

 
Meant to Be by juliebee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 611]
Summary:

A life-changing event drives teenage Bella from her home in Arizona to live with her father in Forks. Will she be ostracized for the choices that she has made, or will she find the love & acceptance that she craves for her and her new baby?

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 68831
[Report This] Published: August 26, 2009 Updated: January 18, 2010


Reviewer: jamdowner Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Feelings

I am really enjoying this, sappy is a good thing!

 
All of Me by flibbins Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3592]
Summary:

Bella lives to serve her Master. It can be tedious at times, titillating at others, but always, her world revolves around his. Come take a peek at the trials and triumphs in the life of a 24/7 consensual slave and find what happens when outside forces threaten to expose her lifestyle.

 

All of Me

 

Please note that this story contains graphic language, graphic sexual situations and is only intended for a mature audience. The BDSM relationship described herein is entirely consensual, but may be offensive to some readers. Read with caution. OOC, AU/AH


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: All of Me: The Series
Chapters: 25 Completed: No Word count: 109463
[Report This] Published: September 01, 2009 Updated: June 29, 2010


Reviewer: jamdowner Signed
Date: September 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very interesting so far.  Hope to hear more from you soon.

 
Tangled Web by m7707 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 643]
Summary:

 

Edward, Jacob, Demetri, and Felix are members of the Volturi Elite Guard. Their team tracks beings that have either violated the Volturi Code Of Silence or have knowledge of the existence of mythical beings. When the team is assigned to investigate the human Isabella Swan, Edward's unalterable world is altered.

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 110683
[Report This] Published: September 10, 2009 Updated: January 26, 2010


Reviewer: jamdowner Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19: Within His Little Parlour

Wow, that was really powerful.  Best reaction to the singer's blood I ever read!  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Wow - thank you so much! I can't say how validating it is to hear readers enjoy not only the story in general, but those scenes that are so challenging to get just right.

 
Aegis by mothlights Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 669]
Summary:

NOW COMPLETE

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Edward returns to Forks to find that Bella is stronger than he is. Their relationship must be redefined, but first he'll have
to catch sight of her. He's not the only one to track her down; Aro threatens the whole family when he uses Alice to get
to Bella and her troubled friend, Britt. EXB NM AU, MULTIPLE POV.

 

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Additional banner by Rianeau!


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Corin, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jane, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie, Santiago
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 77742
[Report This] Published: September 20, 2009 Updated: March 29, 2010


Reviewer: jamdowner Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: I'm not sure I should be here

Excellent job so far, can't believe this is your first fanfic!  I am only sad that there are only 2 chapters.  I eagerly await others.  I am excited to hear more about Brit and Bella's life together as vampires.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the rating and review!! I just finished ch 5. (I like to keep them around for a little while so I can let them sit and go back and revise) but the next ch will be submitted to my beta in a day or two. Mostly Edward's POV in ch 3.

 
Reviewer: jamdowner Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Be brave enough to try

Short but sweet.  I am enjoying your story.



Author's Response:

Thank you. More coming soon. Next chapter is written already. Just doing a little touch up. Thanks for the rating too!

 
Reviewer: jamdowner Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: She's family to me

Can't say enough how much I am enjoying this story.  Glad you brought Brit back into the fold, she is a wonderful charachter, with so much potential.  I hope she shares her secrets with at least Bella soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and rating. Britt's past will eventually come out. The Cullens are going to need her with the fight coming their way. Glad you're still with me this far! 

 
Say When by wicked Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 27]
Summary:

Edward and Bella take a journey of sexual exploration, pushing one another to the limit. How far is too far? And will their seven year marriage survive? *Warning: Strong sexual situations, strong language, some same-sex experimentation.*

 

second bannerCanon couples, all human, heavy NC-17/MA Very OOC E/B


Categories: AU, AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 12304
[Report This] Published: October 31, 2009 Updated: December 04, 2009


Reviewer: jamdowner Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Human Nature

Wow, that put a spark in my day!



Author's Response:

Happy to help!  Update coming up.  Thanks for the review!!!

 
Summary:

A Twilight Book Outtake... what would have happened had Edward taken
a little longer to get to the ballet studio? James DOESN'T bite Bella, but her
injuries were too severe. She's dying, and Edward must change her then. 

Bella POV


Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 3160
[Report This] Published: November 22, 2009 Updated: November 27, 2009


Reviewer: jamdowner Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Is This What Death Feels Like?

Good job. I dont know if you have any plans to continue, but this could be interesting.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I have decided that I will continue it here soon! I want to get ahead on my other story, The Bachelorette, before writing anything else...

 I am shooting around ideas for this story...so hopefully it will work out as a story on it's own...

Thanks for reviewing!

 
Summary:

Bella is a tattoo artist is Seattle, she has a addiction to all things sex. Edward just moved to Seattle with his sisters and is into the tattoo scene even though his body is bare. Rated M for language, lemons/sexual references, etc.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 3673
[Report This] Published: November 25, 2009 Updated: November 25, 2009


Reviewer: jamdowner Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good writing and an interesting start.  I am interested to see how you develop the charachters and where their interactions take them.

 
Mine by jarielynn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 24]
Summary:

This was my submission for the Darkward contest- I didn't win, but I was in the top 10.

Edward sees Bella one night on the WU campus. He is automatically drawn to her. Everything about her draws him in. He wants to make her his, and he will eliminate anything that gets in his way. Bella cn't help but be attracted to him as well. Will she discover his true nature? Will she choose to be with him regardless?

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 8227
[Report This] Published: December 30, 2009 Updated: January 08, 2010


Reviewer: jamdowner Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Pretty damn good!





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