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Penname: lee723 [ Contact]
Real name: Lee
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Summary: 
Edward leaves Bella, much like the beginning of 'New Moon', however, this time, they are all human and there is quite the twist. Why did Edward leave Bella? And what secret is Bella keeping when he leaves?
Can they make a nightmare turn into a dream?
THANKS TO EMERALD_ROSALIE FOR THE ABOVE BANNER AND ATHENALOVE FOR THE BELOW.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 61 Completed: Yes
Word count: 155064
[Report This] Published: April 14, 2009 Updated: August 05, 2010
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: September 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36 - Throw the Truth
First Off Carlisle must have been STARVING if he ate a veggie burger! Just saying lol. That's nasty hahah.
Anywho, Poor DaddyWard felt a little bad that his Bella didn't want to see him first *pout*
he understands though, he's sweet like that :D:D:D
That's why I love him lol.
Angela is The BESTEST friend ever, put your fucking two cents in girl!
She has to make a decision about seeing Edward, which I agree with.
Little Love's hair seems to be a fun topic for everyone lol.
I love picturing Edward all smiling and gaga over his baby girl.
Decisions decisions, what will Bella do?
I'm anxious to find out.
Cullen man of my choice eh?? ;)
I just want Edward, We can make our own movie with him as the leading man and myself as his leading girl lol.
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: September 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 37 - Don't Give Up
*tears* Yes Poor Edward!
I cried, couldn't help, he was so broken, the way he crumbled in carlisle's arms. The way he watched his Little Love with her uncle and funny antics.
I am done for lol.
as for what I wanna see in the epi, I just want them back together.
Probably living out bella's dream of them living together, and Edward holding Elizabeth, while Bella got ready for class. Him freshly showered and only in his jeans, shirtless and oh so handsome while holding his baby girl and the three of them embracing *sigh*
though year from now, Elizabeth would smiling and giggling, would she be trying to say her first word yet?? Possibly Dadda? lol.
I'm such a sucker for daddyWard :P Author's Response: LOL! Daddyward is so amazing. I love me some Daddyward!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: September 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 38 - Band Aid
A tear Jerker that one :(
And yet really sweet. lol @ immaculate conception HA!
But then again, with Edward I'm sure all he had to do was LOOK at ya and you'd be pregnant! lol.
I LOVED how Charlie kept talking up Edward, with how well he's looking after his little love and all that :D:D Awww. DaddyWard *sigh* I can't WAIT til they talk.
I'm sorry I didn't see this sooner!! But Happy Birthday and My Cullen of choice for you is the one and ONLY EDWARD!!! :D:D:D:D
Oh and he'll come bearing fruit, but not to throw at you :P
Ooh and some Whip Cream ;) LOL. ENJOY BB!! Author's Response: I am so glad you liked the Charlie chapter. It is such an important chapter to the story. I liked the Immaculate Conception part too:)
Charlie is doing what he thinks is right, even if he doesn't necessarily like it. Easing her into Edward is part of that...
Thanks so much for reviewing and for the AWESOME virtual birthday present!
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: September 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 39 - Happy Town
Awww Esme is so sweet.
NOW for PMJ! I fucking LOVE LOVE LOVE him!!!
He's such a cute, adorable, dirty mouth son of a bitch and I just love his views on everything. He doesn't bullshit, he told Bella like it is.
Loved all his nicknames for her also, Esp Mama bear LOL.
and also LOL @ Looney Tunes! Ha even Charlie has a sense of humor!
Awesome chap bb :)
The talk is next right???...I'm skerred :S
But I want me some EmoWard/FuckWard lol.
Or my fav nick out of all Sweet DaddyWard :D:D:D:D Author's Response: Esme is the mom I hope I'll be to my son:)
PMJ - I so love him. He just knows how to cut to the chase and get his point across, but still manages to be compassionate.
Next chapter is actually Alice, but, after that, you'll get the first time Bella sees... Sweet Daddyward. That's all I'm saying...
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: October 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
Shirtless DaddyWard FTW!!!!! *THUD* *DEAD*
ok I teared up a bit, aw my boy cried!!!! :'(
and The locked eyes wit heach other!! And they held hands and he wiped away her tears and she thought he was beautiful and and and he kissed her forehead!!! Awwww BB! SweetDaddyWard!!! and his Little Love who just wanted to be held!
LOVED IT! LOVED IT!!!! Author's Response: Shirtless Daddyward definitely is a sight to behold. He gets me all aflutter...
Thanks so much for all you support!
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: October 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith
technically bb...he came out of B's room with his shirt still undone, so we had a peak of the chest still LOL!
Shirtless daddyWard *EPIC SIGH*
I can see it all now :P
OK so THAT was seriously sad :(
But I do believe that things will work out, who knows Bella may surprise us after all. We already know that they both still love each other completely.
Once that love is still there, omg this just gives me chills.
Poor daddyward I wanted to give him a hug while he was sad :'(
I'm gonna go cry a bit now. And wait patiently for the next chapter bb :)
xoxo Lee Author's Response: You're right! Shirtless Daddyward did make an appearance! YAY for technicalities!
I am so glad you liked the chapter. We're moving now, though!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: October 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 43 - The Highway
OMG *TEARS*
Big FAT Crocodile TEARS!!
I can't believe she was strong enough to say that....and sweet shirtless daddyward my heart ACHES for him....omg this is so hard to write cause my eyes are all blurry....he loves her, she still HAS ALL of him even if she's too afraid right now to admit that she still wants him.
He WILL still love her even after this. No matter what, he won't push her but he won't stop loving her :'(
beautiful and tragic. Author's Response: *hugs you*
It will be okay. Promise!
Thank you so much for all of your support!
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: November 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 44 - Fight
Awww My shirtless DaddyWard is heartbroken!!
But Hell he was able to tell her he loved her and he will FIGHT for her and his little Love!! *squee*
but then he ran, he was so broken and at that moment I was like that is SO how Bella felt in NM.
I love how you gave him a taste of his own medicaine even though he's so terribly broken and downtrodden and it's hard to see but that makes the story so much better.
I LOVE LOVE LOVE Em tackling E, and Jaz saying that Em didn't have to do that cause he's like an 8th of E's weight LOL!
and Then PMJ going all animal planet on E, and LOL @ "rugrat" i really loved that *giggle*
And Carlisle's amusement and horror and how Jaz so "eloquently" laid it all out for Edward to finally understand Bella's reaction.
Awesome Job Ell :D
It will be interesting to see what happens next :P
xoxo
Lee Author's Response: I think his reaction was understandable. The functional equivalent of Bella’s collapse in the woods. But his family helped him pull it together and now he’s ready for the fight. Carlisle's reaction to Jasper's wisdom is pretty amusing, no?
Yes, Daddyward needs some mad cuddles.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: December 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
Oh Ellie :') *happy tears*
You said to keep the faith and you didn't let down..omg I am totally freaking out here and smiling like a big idiot and how sweet this chap was!
Gosh I love Esme, and the way she cares for Edward and Bella :D
OMFG Sweet Daddyward leaning into the SUV to buckle in his little love *DEAD ON FLOOR* that must have been a NICE view ;)
and the way he lifted bella into the seat, and how she unconsiously wound her fingers into his amazing hair (i put in the amazing bit lol)
and AGAIN he got to hold her! and she snuggled into his chest! and she DOESN'T want Edward to go! W00t w00t!! Loves it!!
LMAO @ Emmett and his farting issues :P
Bella will certainly never be bored or alone in that house hahah.
Loved it bb :D
Lee <3 Author's Response: Aw, I missed you! Welcome back!
Daddyward makes me tingly. He's so sweet and loving and there are LOTS more scenes with Elizabeth to come. I know there is not much left, but I needed to bring him back a bit:)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: December 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See
Of Course we HAD to hear from big daddy C!
That right there is a given lol.
I LOVED Daddyward's reaction! *nods head in COMPLETE agreement*
I think I may have died a little at that little interaction and it was something that only certain eyes should see.
The way Daddyward shielded her *thud*XD
ProtectorWard lol, he's an amazing dad and if given the chance again, an amzing husband *happy tear*
Also when he lifted her up, jeez, Daddyward's sweetness and fierceness in protecting his girls, leave me all warm and tingly :D
LOL @ The stinky diaper, props to the man there XD XD
and also for getting his little love into a princess dress! loved it!
Aw he's trying to teach her to read?..such cuteness!
Loved it bb :D
Lee <3 Author's Response: You gotta give mad props to a guy who will not only change a rancid diaper but wriggle an infant into a princess dress. Not an easy task:)
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: December 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49 - The Vase
Wow!...I gotta say I love the whole Broken vase analogy in regards to Bella's heart. It's amazing, the imagery that it creates, and the feeling of little pieces of her heart being fixed into place again over simple things that Edward does.
now I'm all weepy :') Good weepy, cause this is almost over, and because, things are getting back on track :)
Slowly but surely.
I LOVE how Edward is with Elizabeth :D
and the way he automatically responded to Esme's qt about coffee to bells! The Dude wasn't even paying attention, he was engrossed in another convo and it just came out like it was the most natural thing ever. *huge Grin*
And he cut up her pancake for her *swoon* My heart is full lol.
LMAO @ Jasper! he SO can't not go without cursing for even a minute much less 10 *rofl*
They walked , they talked and Bella is letting him in :D
She's giving him a chance, and I like that you put it in her POV, I wanna see her be made whole again, and Edward :)
Loved it BB :)
You're almost at the end *hugs*
Lee <3 Author's Response: I am glad you liked the vase analogy. It just felt right.
I cannot believe that we are almost done with this tale. It's almost surreal to me.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: March 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always
OH EM GEE! I loved it!
They got hitched! Lovely wedding, and I loved hearing from Emmett.
He's too much, you just can't help but love the big guy.
The way he talked with Elizabeth was TOO adorable!
Great job Ellie!
Lee Author's Response: Even tiny Elizabeth had his junk in a vice! Poor guy....
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: March 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 55: Epilogue the Fourth - From Paris to Milan
Awwww Potty mouth Jasper is a DADDY!
I so enjoyed that and the fact that Alice was messing with his ass about the names!
SO good bb!
Lee Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! Alice definitely pulled a 9 month mind freak on PMJ!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: March 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 56: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
Jeebus! that...was...OMFG!!
When he spanked her..*THUD*
Wow El, I didn't think you could write a lemon like THAT!
I.AM.DIED.
Fuuuuuuuck! WOW. I am surprised by this, it was, WOW. LOL!
You have me here babbling like a fool LMAO!
Fucking FANTASTIC!!
LOVED IT!
Lee Author's Response: LMAO! WHo'd a thunk Daddyward liked spanking and tit-tay play?
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: lee723 Signed 
Date: March 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 57: Epilogue the Sixth - World of Magic
GAh, Ellie I LOVE EET!
Little Love is growing up *sniff* and she's SO smart and such a great negotiator ;) or con artist as Daddy C said :P
Wow, I love how over protective DaddyWard is lol. He's too adorable and don't even let me START on his clone, the one and only little Masen ;)
Another future heartbreaker, I presume? ;)
The cullen fam make me incredibly happy in this chap, I literally threw my head back laughing. So free and relaxed and sweet.
Awesome job E <3
Lee Author's Response: I wish I had more time to develop Masen. I'm so in love with him. Totally hot geek in the future:)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Summary: Bella and Edward have been married for a few months. Every Thursday night, Edward and the Cullen boys go out for dinner and a meeting about business. But when Edward wears one of Bella's favorite clothing accessories, will she be able to resist him? And will Edward catch on to Bella's secret fetish? FIND OUT! LEMONS!
^ That was the summary for the one-shot (first chapter) before I developed the story.
Bella and Edward have been married for a few months. The sex is great, but what happens when Bella is suddenly trapped in her own mind? Will Edward be able to bring her out of it? Lemons.
I know it's not the best, but it was never meant to be a story. Once Suspenders in over, I plan on writing a story that I've been thinking about for a while. Keep your eyes open! I think I'm naming it "Dear Edward" or "Parallel Universe"
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No
Word count: 37770
[Report This] Published: April 15, 2009 Updated: September 01, 2009
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: June 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
WOW :O
Summary: Bella's elevator ride with a gorgeous stranger becomes charged when the lift breaks down. Things become more complicated when she discovers the stranger is her to-be boss, Edward Cullen.
Thanks to katmom for the great banner!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: Always Human
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes
Word count: 73337
[Report This] Published: April 16, 2009 Updated: January 01, 2010
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: May 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
embarassingggg LOL! :O
But so Bella haha. Author's Response: That's what I thought. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: May 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Edward to the Rescue!!!!! Yippee! haha
Carlisle is such a party pooper!! :( Author's Response: Carlisle is looking out for his son. :)
I like Rescue!Edward myself. Thanks for reviewing!
Summary:
Bella is soul-searching at a quiet lodge in Forks and she meets the secretive, tormented Edward Masen. Just as their relationship transcends friendship, Edward’s past comes back to haunt him in the most brutal way. B&E are human, but oh…there will be vampires. AU.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 36 Completed: No
Word count: 291742
[Report This] Published: April 16, 2009 Updated: April 21, 2011
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: May 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Ghost in the Wall
LOL @ banging-psychotic-ghost-moaning-panting-neighbour!! Author's Response: Haha :) Glad you appreciated it!
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: May 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Toast Triangles and Mental Turmoil
LOL @ Is it Jessica or Stanley?? that was so blinking funny!
Also when Bella blurted out that she thought Edward was screwing Doris!! hahahahh Author's Response: :D Yeah, I got a kick out of writing that stuff. I'm a stickler for the humor. I'm glad you like it! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: May 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Green Eggs of Jealousy
Awesome! Bella thinking about Edward in the shower was niice ;)
LOL @ Doris telling Bella to keep up whatever it was she was doing to Edward to make Edward look so well rested.
Edward Actually spoke more in this chap and WTF he Laughed! :O *gasp* perish the thought. I LOVED it!
Jessica is a skank whore :D....and I WISH bella DID throw the apple at her head! That would have been HILARIOUS!.........then again we MUST thank dear Whoring Jess for spitting in B's eggs cuz then Edward Prolly wouldn't have taken her out to breakfast *smirk* HAHA Loved that...payback is a bitch :D :D :D Author's Response: Yeah, it was interesting to try to write how I would imagine a gorgeous guy in the shower...ta da. ;) Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!
It was important to me to show that Edward's laid back side comes out around Bella; I try to stay in both of their heads and let's just say that he doesn't let his guard down easily...and when Bella starts to bring that out in him, he's surprised, but not afraid of it for once. I will eventually do this in Edward's POV, which I'll eventually bring up in an A/N, and then it will be so much clearer! ;)
Yes. Jessica is a skanky ho, isn't she? She's so fun to write like that. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: June 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Double Vision
OMG! I LOVE that your chaps are always so long and i always find myself so engrossed in them.
I Like how Edward was so chivalrous and gentleman like with him taking her to breakfast and lunch (altho they skipped that) and Dinner and of course the cards as well..that was cute.
OMG when she was looking at his fine ass that was good enough to bite *growl* that was hot and also when he jogged into the rain and she was thinking run sexy pant run! hahaha, you just gotta luv how Bella's mind always churns out these naughty thoughts about brooding hottie Edward :P
even when she was thinking about other ways to pay him back for all the money he spent on her....money is the only order of payment *smirk*...an all body massage amongst other niice things haha.
and eating choco mousse off of edward's stomach sounds heavenly...who knew heaven was so kinky :D
TWO Edward's!!!!! WOWWWWW...That must have FELT like Heaven to Bella *swoon*
so we uncover more about Bella...Phil..Ick...disgusting.
AND NOW we NEED to find out what happened that left Edward bleeding (slightly). Did he defend B's honor? *sigh*....SWEET!
and Leave it to Bella to be thinking about whether she had any underwear left in her room on the floor or something that Edward could see....and if she did it had BETTER be cute ones and not he penguin ones HAHAHAHAH!
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: June 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Memories, Mitigation, and Morphine
Everything was awesome!....my brain is so full from all that happened in this chap, it's unbelievable and yeh i read this in 1 sitting :D
I love a worried and over-protective Edward...even his brooding weird ways lol.
He went from touching her shoulders to hand on the nape of her nech and fingers on cheek tellin her he was becoming attached to her...and then grinning at her for saving her postcards to snapping her head off for going to pick up the black case the fell out the glove compartment *sigh*.
You still gotta love him.
I LOVED the way he told her come here before he picked her up and carried her up the stairs :)
LOL @ Bella waiting a min to build an elevator haha.
question is now WTF was in that case??????.............and was it me or did Carlisle seem odd when he patted Edward on the shoulder and told him to watch over Bella??????
I cannot wait for more!!!
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: July 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Pillow Talk
I Just wanna give your Edward The Biggest Hug EVER!!!
He is so breaking my heart with his sadness :(
Though i must say that Bella and her sarcastica and funny ass ways help balance out the sadness, which i like.
The painting thing was a bit eerie, im quite interested in wha that's about.
LOL @ bella swaying after having such a NIIICE daydream about Edward, Infront of Edward haha.
Aw i love how overprotective he is of her.
HA! Score! Atleast she finally got him to take a nap with her on her bed :D
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: July 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Crabby Dinner, Goodnights, and Jupiter
LOL @ Crab in the Snatch!!
OMG that was hella funny.
I mean even Edward laughed :D
so you know you're good if you made him smile or laugh.
LMAO @ he was busy having a stroke over this and he patted his back pocket and Bella thought to herself yeah she was going crazy over his ass too :D
ROFL!!
*sigh* he KISSED her, maybe not the ultimate kiss we were hoping for BUT an amazing kiss nonetheless, it required him actually having to TOUCH her :D
Plus he put his hand in her hair :) *sigh*
I wish he would open to her a bit more and stop being so hard on himself.
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