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Penname: lee723 [ Contact]
Real name: Lee
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Member Since: March 11, 2009
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Summary: 
Edward leaves Bella, much like the beginning of 'New Moon', however, this time, they are all human and there is quite the twist. Why did Edward leave Bella? And what secret is Bella keeping when he leaves?
Can they make a nightmare turn into a dream?
THANKS TO EMERALD_ROSALIE FOR THE ABOVE BANNER AND ATHENALOVE FOR THE BELOW.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 61 Completed: Yes
Word count: 155064
[Report This] Published: April 14, 2009 Updated: August 05, 2010
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: May 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story
EMMETT should be next to find out!!!!
I wanna see action man and his reaction!! hahahaha
Man was this angsty as ass :(
BUt I can't get enough and i really hate angst...BUT once there's a happy ending and a certain Cullen Boy at the end of that rainbow waiting with open arms I'M SO THERE!! Author's Response: OK, so there *will* be a happy ending fully of babies and sunshine and open arms.
However, hell has not even begun. These kids are about to get hit, HARD.
Lastly, I am so very glad you found my story, read it and reviewed. Thank you!
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: May 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
What's the wrinkle???!!!
Oh nooo *cry* not ANOTHER unseen problem :(
I liked this chap tho....Alice telling her dad and his reaction!...i was so entranced by it all. Esp the part about Emmett not murdering his brother lol.
Also him not being too sure about becoming a grandfather awww :). Edward wasn't the one he thought he had to be worried about haha.
Well carlisle...the deed was done cuz they were in love...lol
Ok I'm thinkin Emmett is next :D >D
They kinda gotta hurry cuz Bella is almost ready to pop! lol Author's Response: Bella has a good month of brewing up the new baby Cullen. They will make it. The wrinkle, however, is an unexpected turn of events that will ramp up the angst. Get ready! And thanks for the review.
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: May 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 - Strong Enough
Awww my Eddie left his prison for Alice :)
Oh Dear what is the wrinkle in the plan??? :O....Now I'm the one that is scared shitless.......support group time :(
Excited and yet scared for the next chapter :S Author's Response: I submitted last night, so it should be up soon! I am excited and scared for the response! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: May 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response
WHATTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!????!!!!????!!! omg omg omg omg omg NO!!!
Next chap plz :( Author's Response: The next chapter is already up!
Enjoy! And thank you for reviewing...
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: May 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
I will so not bullshit you but hell i got teary eyes there when Alice told the family about Bella and how strong she had to be.
Esp the ending where she had to get Edward ready to leave and he asked if it was bella :'(
OMG i am so nervous for the big reveal :S................i'm trying to steel myself for the reactions.....cuz they are gonna be tear worthy i can see it already. Author's Response: The big reveal is split into two chapters and there is a bit of a cliffie... but I update quickly!
Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: June 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
OMG I literally DIED!! *sigh* I practically held my breath for this chap!...Edward's pain was sooooo intense.
Brilliant Job!!
Everytime he thought...."Our baby"......carrying "MY" child.....it was so sad and depressing and amazing all at the same time...so bittersweet really.
I'm just in awe of it all. Author's Response: Wow! Thank you! I appreciate your review!
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: June 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix
I'm am soooo freaked about the reactions from Bella and Charlie :O *gah*
I'm nervous as hell for them esp edward! :S
Another great chap...it's always great to hear from big daddy C :) Author's Response: Got to love big Daddy C! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: June 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
OMG *tear*...That has prolly been the most that Edward has said during this entire fic *sigh* oh dear it was sooooo utterly heartfelt and intense...he wants a life with her and their baby awwwww* tear*
OMG ur killin me! lol
he asked if it was a boy or a girl :'(
awwwwww.....he has soooo accepted that baby already...I luv it...i just know that the reallyyyyyyyy hard stuff is still to come *sigh*
I'm stocking up on tissues already...oh and I hope You give us a HAPPY ENDING :) ....plz :) Author's Response: Edward hasn't even seen Bella but has fully accepted the child. It is just him. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: June 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
OMG! Carlisle CRIED!!!! :O*gasp*
The description of the the bruises and how Bella looked was whoa...very intense:(.
You're giving us a life preserver to help us in the next chap...But then you're gonna let us sink again in the following chap??? NO plz no :S *sigh*.....lookin forward to the next chap. Author's Response: Carlisle is NOT having an easy time. He feels a lot of guilt for his part in Edward's decision and that makes the consequences that much worse. Thanks for the review! Enjoy your life preserver!
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: June 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22 - Sound of Music
LOL @ Jasper's POV.
I liked how he wanted to bust outta the nuthouse and beat Edward to pulp then grab him by his junk and take him back to Forks! hahaha
LMAO @ Shooting him up with Estrogen!.....it was funny all the times he wanted to cry.
Good thinkin on Rose's part to buy tickets to take them to the fam :)
I'm dreading the next Chap....*sigh* Author's Response: I love Jasper. He was *so* much fun to write.
I'm glad you enjoyed. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: June 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
*tears* *Bawl*
OMG...when Edward's hand flew to his mouth when he walked into Bella's room for the fist time...it was so unbearably sad :'(
he keeps calling her "my Love" *sigh* This is so heartbreaking...his hand entwined with hers moving unconsciously to her belly *awww*...and him telling her he wants this :)
CRY**** Edward crying like a baby is soooooo sad....i've been waiting for this chap for so long...you did not let us down *sigh*
Author's Response: I am so very glad I did this justice. It was a pivotal chapter, and a difficult chapter, to write. That it turned out well is so encouraging to me.
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: June 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind
Phew* NO guns and night sticks in the presence of Eddie :O
You really gotta love Emmett and his chivalrous ways :D Author's Response: They all have manners, even if Emmett and Jasper have potty mouths! Em is such a teddy bear. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: June 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25 - Hang On
Hell I STARTED to tear up from Alice's POV and her trying to be strong and more Specifically when she started talking to Bella while brushing her hair and then hearing the voice in the back of her mind saying the hurtful things about what Did happen instead of what she wanted to have happen....
Then to know that Bella could HEAR Edward *tear* and all the comforting and loving things *sigh*
his forehead leaning on hers and holding her hand...wow...Awesome ;D Author's Response: It's sad and heart wrenching and somehow... hopeful. There's so much hope to be had. We just have to hold on and believe.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: November 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45 - Here's to Hoping
I'll cuddle HIM!!!
Maybe he should take off his shirt ass well, it can't be clean after he fell on the road and all that ;)
I'll also kiss his booboo, poor thing hurt his knee *tut tut tut* :p *
I really like Carlisle's idea!
I just don't know if Edward is gonna like being apart from his little love, although with what his dad has in mind isn't so bad.
at least B will be closeby right?
I'm looking forward to seeing what Bella has to say about this,
I think she may be reluctant at first but then she'll realize that she
Will need a lot of help that Charlie can't personally provide, and what would be in the best interest of Elizabeth.
dude I KNOW Lizzie isn't real, but hell if I don't want to hear a bit about her, see how she's doing lol.
Great chap bb :D
Lee Author's Response: Well, no decision has been made yet. Edward has not been banished to the guest cottage and Bella hasn’t accepted the offer to stay…. Lizzie is forthcoming, don't you worry. And Charlie is the bomb!
*sending Daddyward for a snuggle*
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: July 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands
*CRY* Don't Shout at Edward!!!!!!
Charlie made Edward CRY!!! *bawl*
I get the rage and everything BUT he HAD to understand that bella NEEDED Edward there, he helped to keep her stabilized.
Thank goodness Emmett got him to leave his weapons at home!!
*sigh* I just need to say how sweet it is that Edward and bella's hands are were on her stomach *aww* Author's Response: Charlie's reaction was completely knee-jerk and I think the majority of dad's would have reacted that way upon stumbling in on *that* particular scene. He'll come round and surprise you.
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: July 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27 - No
OMG!!!!!!! OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!
no words :'(
I think i felt a little tug on my heart in this chap...Code RED indeed!
OMG when she started bleeding and EDWARD!
OH my GOSH! When he was screaming and then when he got away from Em and jaz to run! NO NO NONONONONONO!!! Ahhhh!* gah* Gasp*
Im crazy right now after this :( Author's Response: Trust me, I felt crazy writing it. Painful painful stuff.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: July 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
Oh my gosh I thought Esme's Pov was hard when she had cleaned away the blood and her sobs just had her scrubbing and scrubbing.
BUT Rosalie! WTF! Her description of what happened when Bella started to bleed again and how she viewed Edward was....heartbreaking!!!! :'(
I cried i have to admit it, the dead eyed stare and just little phrases was all he did AFTER that life changing Wailing sound he was making.
You did an awesome job with this chap, shit i was even tryin to imagine that sound coming from Edward :S
Hard core stuff. Author's Response: I could *hear* it in my head when I wrote it. Seriously, these last two chapters were incredibly hard to write. Getting into the heads of the characters in this situation was definitely as task. But it flowed once I got in there.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: July 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
*BAWL* *CRY* :'( :') yeh i got both kinds of sad as well.
The damage that bella sustained were pretty gruesome and was heartbreaking to read. And of course i loed JPOV, he was strong for alice and Bella and Edward as well by giving blood :) aw jaz
Poor Em as well, big guy is a BIG softie.
She's HERE! OMG Edward is a daddy :D:D
It's just sad that poor Bella is still out of it :(
when Edward asked "a little Girl?" I died! that was unbelievable*sigh* he's a daddy! :) Author's Response: Yes, Bella is in some bad shape at the moment. It's so hard for all of them to hear. But there is now this bright, shiny ray of hope that will infect the story from here on out.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: July 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
*tears* OMG :'(
Edward - completely lost and completely found in that moment, that my dear was just profound.
His Little Love :')
His hair, Bella's eyes, his love for Bella, his love for his little girl :)
She looked at him *tear* and the yawn, broke my heart when he hugged the incubator and cried. dear goodness, that was prolly THE hardest and saddest or maybe i should say bittersweet moment EVER.
and Charlie *sigh*
he was very generous to give Edward the opportunity he rightly deserved by seeing his daughter first :)
I'm just so overwhelmed by this chap that i don't even know where i found the words :) Author's Response: Sweet, torn Daddyward really plucks the old heart strings. He was so happy to meet his daughter, so overwhelemed with love, but still so distraught and terrified over Bella's condition. So much to absorb.
Charlie - his eavesdropping did more than any conversation could have done. He doesn't forgive Edward for what he did yet, and he's not suddenly start going to ask Edward fishing. But this is the beginning of a tentative truce and an understanding. Charlie is fair and he's going to do what's right before he does what he wants for the sake of his own anger.
It's definitely a tough chapter full of warring emotions.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: August 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light
Awww he gets to name his little love *sigh*
Such a precious moment and happy moment and yet it's filled with the uncertainty of Bella's fragile state :(
LOL @ Edward could name his daughter Amoxicillin and Bella wouldn't mind :)
aw HIS daughter, I still can't believe that brooding little Edward is a dad, and Little love has B's eyes and his hair :D
Which i NEVER want to change as she grows up, the bronze do is an awesome trait from her adorable dad :D
Author's Response: Yup - she got the locks:) She'll be fighting them off with a stick with looks like that!
I am so glad you're enjoying the story and thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: August 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32 - Classics
*squeeeeeeeee* Little Love has a Name!!!
And Elizabeth is a beautiful choice! It's one of my favs, so major points for you BB!. Also I'm glad your not gonna let him forget her nick Little Love even tho she has a name.
LMAO @ Jasper! omg i died with laughter during his POV! He felt a Pang of fear cuz he'd be in that posish someday and he was NOT letting his daughter be named Milan, PIXIE had another thing comin LOL.
Lol @ Esme glowing like she was radioactive!! and the wheels in her head turning as she manipulated poor little Daddyward :P
She prolly has Gran's ring being resized as they spoke hahahaha.
And of Course it's ALL about the hair!! I love her hair as much as her daddy's :D:D
Wow Charlie is really giving Edward a chance, he was so calm about the baby name and he actually asked Edward if he was ok with the name as well since it's his kid as well, So Sweet Charlie :D
I can't wait for more :D Author's Response: I am so glad you're enjoying the story! Jasper is a blast to write. He'll actually tell quite a bit of the story from here on in. And Esme... I wish all moms were that good at their jobs. Charlie... he's really making an effort here. Trying to do what's right for his daughter and granddaughter.
Again, many thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: August 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus
OMG that ws really GOOD!
We finally get to hear Bella, and the fream waas really sweet :)
So were Edward's words to her outsde the dream.
I don't know what to expect when she wakes up, which seems to be soon :S
Is she gonna be pissed at Edward or happy but slighty angry as well?
*sigh* It's so sad to see DaddyWard so unhappy and broken when Car tels him he has to leave :'(
And he told her he loves her :(
I had on my big girl panties so NO crying for Me! Yay! haha
just a bit of sad faces is all :) Author's Response: It definitely is bittersweet. Bella will have a lot to deal with when she wakes up. Which *is* soon. And yes, he did tell her he loved her - their love was never in doubt! But can she trust him again?
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: August 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34 - Deals
I just Fucking LOVE Jasper's Dirty Mouth! Just saying! lol
LOL @ edward using his big words on poor Jaz, it that translates to deal, then good.
I loved the term baby's mama, it makes me smile thinking of Edward as Sweet DaddyWard and his little love *sigh* :))
And when he shook his head violently no, that he could not leave bella and Elizabeth :D it's not just his one girl he has to think about but his 2 girls now :D
*le sigh* LOVE IT!
Author's Response: Edward and Jasper are definitely polar opposites but that is what makes them work so well together! And Sweet Daddyward is going nowhere without his girls! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: August 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing
*cry* *Bawl* Yes It was very sad....AND very Good cause I've been dying for her to wake up. I also don't expect this to be easy at all.
To be honest if I was in her position, as relieved as I'd be that everything was alright and what not and that they cared and came to see me.
I'd still be a bit angry, i wouldn't think Bella would be all happy go lucky and everything would be fine and they'd ride off into the sunset. Although I wish it could be that easy *sigh* I did love how she KNEW the hair would be the one thing she'd inherit from her father. The Hair won in the genetic lottery, there's no doubting who is the papa.
DaddyWard!!! lol. *sigh* I love that he's a daddy. Looking forward to what ever Heart Fail you have in store for me lol.
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks so much for your amazing review!
Bella still loves these people - she may be angry and hurt but she also is soo glad to see them again. She's just... torn and wary.
Alas, it won't' be easy. There's SO much healing to do. But at least now there's a chance to fix it all.
Thank you so very much for all of your support!
Reviewer: lee723 Signed
Date: September 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36 - Throw the Truth
First Off Carlisle must have been STARVING if he ate a veggie burger! Just saying lol. That's nasty hahah.
Anywho, Poor DaddyWard felt a little bad that his Bella didn't want to see him first *pout*
he understands though, he's sweet like that :D:D:D
That's why I love him lol.
Angela is The BESTEST friend ever, put your fucking two cents in girl!
She has to make a decision about seeing Edward, which I agree with.
Little Love's hair seems to be a fun topic for everyone lol.
I love picturing Edward all smiling and gaga over his baby girl.
Decisions decisions, what will Bella do?
I'm anxious to find out.
Cullen man of my choice eh?? ;)
I just want Edward, We can make our own movie with him as the leading man and myself as his leading girl lol.
Author's Response: Lol! Go! Be greedy with Edward! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
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