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Summary: Edward never came back. But that's okay, because Bella Swan is doing fine. Her life has been vampire free for four years and, while it was rough at first, she's content with her new life. That is, until a certain vampire casually walks back into her life. Can Bella accept the lessons that life is trying to teach her? Or is her future doomed to be dictated by her past?
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes
Word count: 74546
[Report This] Published: August 10, 2010 Updated: January 02, 2011
Reviewer: tracey Signed 
Date: September 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
He better get some venom in her quick. hehe :)
Author's Response: He does! No worries!
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That’s when she saw him. She knew him. Jasper. His ruby red eyes met hers in a silent staring contest and she knew, without looking, that her own eyes were just as red.
He had done this to her.
Rage suffused her limbs and she lunged.
He caught her easily, probably expecting an attack, and with a speed that defied all logic he had her pinned to the floor beneath him.
“Bella! Bella stop! It’s me! It’s Jasper!” he said forcefully.
“I KNOW WHO YOU ARE!” she screamed, her teeth snapping mere millimetres from his nose, “WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME!?”
Reviewer: tracey Signed
Date: September 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
The first time Jasper smiled in this story. Ah! :) Update soon.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! :)
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A female reporter appeared on the screen, “This evening, father of missing college student Isabella Swan, pleads with the public for the safe return of his daughter.”
Bella watched as the screen cut to a shot of her father, standing behind a podium stuffed with microphones. She was shocked to see how haggard he looked, how tired and run down, how...old. Like most children, her father had often seemed ageless to her, even when he started getting grey hairs and laugh lines around his eyes. Sure, part of her knew that he would die one day, because everyone died. But that was in the distant future, and in the mean time he was her father and he loved her, and he would always be there for her in his quiet, steady way.
But now, watching the usually stoic Charlie Swan attempt to keep it together for the cameras, Bella was surprised to realize that her father was not some invincible force from her childhood. He was a human man, and he was falling apart.
Reviewer: tracey Signed
Date: September 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Why is Jasper still trying to hurt her? Update soon. :)
Author's Response: Cause Jasper's in a lot of pain and he blames that pain on Bella, remember the first chapter where he blamed her for everything he has become?
Your questions will start to be answered soon, I promise!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
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Jasper’s face looked sad as he gazed out at the white tundra, “No. You can never go back Bella.”
Bella sat up, “What?”
“I’m sorry bu—”
“You’re sorry?” she screeched. In the blink of an eye Bella had flipped over and thrown herself at Jasper, her teeth bared. She caught a glimpse of Jasper’s surprised face before he reached out, grabbed her by the shoulders and threw her over him. She landed in a flurry of snow and hard ground but she didn’t feel any of it.
“Bella, sto—”
She flew at him again, snarling. This time Jasper didn’t wait for her to reach him. With equal speed he was up in a flash and charging at her. Bella felt a surge of satisfaction run through her. Finally, he was going to fight her. This could only end one of two ways; either he would take her down or she really would dance around his bonfire. She grinned at the thought.
Reviewer: tracey Signed
Date: September 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
I wish that they would sit down and talk for real without all of the anger. They both need to know some truths about the other. Update soon. :)
Author's Response: They will, soon, I promise! Thank you for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser:
“WHAT CAN I DO TO PROVE TO YOU THAT I’M SORRY?” he screamed, kicking the drawer shut. The wood split from the force of his blow.
Bella just stared at him. Looking at his dark red eyes, they were the same shade as a fine red wine, they were hard and angry as he glared at her. They didn’t seem to hold any repentance, no sadness, no remose. He was sorry? Sorry?
“You’re sorry!?” she repeated in disbelief, shooting up from her seat, “what? You expect me to say, ‘it’s okay Jasper, I understand why you did this to me?’”
“What happened to the whole, “I don’t blame you” bullshit?” he spat.
Reviewer: tracey Signed
Date: September 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
I liked this chapter. I hope that they continue to get along even more. :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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Sighing, she turned away from the mirror and put her bag down on the bed and opened it. Instantly, she was assaulted by a fresh scent, one that she had never smelled with this nose, but would know it anywhere.
It was her own.
In the bag were clothes, her clothes. Ones she had worn as a human being. Band shirts were folded neatly next to old worn jeans and over sized hoodies. It looked like Jasper had raided her closet and dresser, packing it all neatly into this giant duffle.
Ironically, this scent did not make her throat erupt in flame. It smelled delicious, for sure, but there was no thirst there. It was simply the comfort of the familiar, something that she had never realized she would miss until it was gone. Slowly, she started taking out her clothes and putting them away.Underneath some of her nicer sweaters were several picture frames wrapped in t-shirts. Slowly, she unwrapped them, the lump getting harder and harder.
Jasper had grabbed all of the pictures that littered her room.
She was holding her family in her hands.
Reviewer: tracey Signed
Date: September 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Dam! This is just so sad. I wish that they both could read minds or that they would really talk to each other. sigh I really don't like a sad despondent Jasper. It just seems to cruel. hehe :) Update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! I'm sorry that I don't have time to make this response personal but I wanted to get a teaser to you anyway! Thanks again!
Bella opened her mouth to ask ‘Why not?’ when they both heard the distinct buzzing of a cell phone. Bella knew that Jasper had a cell phone, she had seen it plugged into the wall on several occasions, but she had never heard it being used. No one ever called it and Jasper never used it to communicate with anyone. She had begun to wonder if anyone even had the number. Jasper...reached into his pocket, pulling out the small black flip phone that was flashing. He looked at the screen and frowned. After he pressed a couple buttons the flashing stopped and the phone fell silent but just as Jasper was about to slip it back into his pocket, it started up again.
He sighed, “I better answer it.”
Bella just nodded, wanting to ask who it is, but feeling that it wasn’t her place. She turned her head to the window and let her cheek rest on her knees.
“Hello, Emmett.”
Summary: There's a dusty old bookstore in Seattle where the proprietor keeps odd hours and knows the location of every book in his stock. What surprises hide in its stacks?
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 48 Completed: Yes
Word count: 122523
[Report This] Published: August 12, 2010 Updated: February 01, 2012
Summary: A stifling hot car ride leads to the encounter of Bella's life.
Birthday fic written for venis envy.
Thanks to ms_ambrosia for the great banner.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 4921
[Report This] Published: August 16, 2010 Updated: August 16, 2010
Summary: Bella and Edward return from Volterra just in time for English final papers. As they struggle to "cure" their relationship wounds, Bella's analysis of Juliet reveals just how far they have to go, and just how alike their stories actually are. Mostly IC. Takes place actually post-New Moon, pre-Eclipse, pushes Eclipse back a bit so I guess sort of Eclipse-AU?
Categories: Eclipse Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No
Word count: 19953
[Report This] Published: August 21, 2010 Updated: May 14, 2011
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