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Summary: 
Edward left Bella four years ago; two years ago, he dealt with Victoria and has been moping around ever since. He is a mere shadow of his former self, and the Cullens are at a loss for how to fix him, since he won’t go back to Bella. Bella’s life is a paradox; she both fell apart and flourished after Edward left her. She is estranged from Charlie and Jacob, is lead singer of an all-girl rock band called Hamartia (literary term meaning fatal flaw), and is living in Brooklyn, NY. She is now all about sex, drugs, alcohol, and Rock n’ Roll. Along with her new lifestyle came a new outlook and personality; she has a quick temper and sharp tongue and finally puts herself first. Long gone is the selfless, long-suffering Bella that Edward left behind. What happens when Alice has had enough and brings all the Cullen “Kids” to one of Bella shows? Will the “old Bella” ever come back? Will she and Edward reunite? Can he accept who she is now and what she has done? Does she want to be changed, if everything works out? Will he be willing to do it? Read and find out.
A big thank you goes out to FrozenSoldier who made this awesome banner!!!!!!!
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 50 Completed: No
Word count: 326044
[Report This] Published: June 17, 2010 Updated: February 15, 2013
Reviewer: tracey Signed    
Date: November 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Burn
so sad.
Author's Response: I kinda agree.
5 wow, ur soo kind
till next ch
~E
Reviewer: tracey Signed    
Date: November 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Sparks
Wow! Bella really got back at them some huh?
Author's Response: hi Tracy,
this is just the tip of the ice burg.
Again 5 stars, wow! thanks
till next chapter,
~E
Reviewer: tracey Signed    
Date: September 27, 2011
Title: Chapter 38: Coming To Terms
I cried so much during this chapter. It was written so well. Having both Edward and Bella's pov's helped me see and understand everything so much better than a single pov. Can't wait for more, as usual. :)
Author's Response: Hey tracey,
WOW thanks for the awesome star rating.
you cried? really? OMG that is the greatest compliment I could recieve...thank you.
This teaser is un-beat’d and subject to change
Bella POV
“He can’t do anything right today, can he? Stop picking at him to avoid the pain of saying goodbye temporarily.
I’m not doing that.
Yes you are.
…
See no response—let it go. Be happy and enjoy this time together.”
Thank you for taking the time to read and review, I love the feedback and just knowing someone is actually reading this story.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: tracey Signed    
Date: November 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Showtime
All of the Cullens don't realize that they are all dumb asses, do they? hehehe I hope Bella tears them all a new one. :)
Author's Response: Hi Tracy,
LMAO!!!!!
OMG 5 again, ur the best!
She will, she will.
Till next chapter,
~E
Reviewer: tracey Signed    
Date: November 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Rough Day
You are an evil tease! hehehe Update soon. :)
Author's Response: Hey tracy, there is more to read luckily. thank for the stars :)
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: tracey Signed    
Date: November 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Alice
Ahhh, scheming little Alice. Gotta love her. hehehehe :)
Author's Response: Hi again Tracy,
OMG another 5 star review, ur the best.
Yes, gotta love her :)
Reviewer: tracey Signed    
Date: January 26, 2011
Title: Chapter 21: Life Raft
I'm so glad that Edward got there in time and that he didn't rub "the future" in and get all gloaty. Bella has enough to work through. She needs someone on her side. Update soon. :)
Author's Response: Hey Tracey,
OMG thanks once again for reading, reviewing and leaving and amazing star rating.
Yup he made it, exactly. he could have painted a doom and gloom picture but he told her everything without being an ass- he is treating her like a partner and not a child to scold. She does need someone on her side and it looks like Edward is trying very hard to be that person. I will update soon.
Here’s your teaser:
Edward POV
“I hated Bella’s friends. I thought they were enablers, but I went downstairs because I could tell she wanted us on better terms.
We entered the kitchen, and I was shocked by what I saw. In hindsight, though, I shouldn’t have been surprised. I walked in to find that all three of Bella’s band mates were in their nightwear—some more scantily clad than others. After taking in their scandalous attire, I noticed that there were also three men with them.”
I know this teaser is shorter than usual but I hope you enjoyed it. Thanks for not only reading but also giving me your feedback. I appreciate it more than you know.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: tracey Signed    
Date: April 18, 2012
Title: Chapter 46: Seasons of Love
I always thought Bella and Edward would be fine without the influence of others. sigh... Liza is still messing things up for Bella beyond the grave, Charlie doesn't seem to want to let go of being 'mean' to her. sigh... I don't like reading about relapse, so I hope that Bella is strong. :)
Author's Response: Hey tracey
thanks for the amazing star rating.
I felt bad for Liza. Charlie is hurt, he's...well yeah mean.
I can't say yes or no about the relapse.
This ch is un-beta’d and subject to change.
“Bella POV
I know this’ll help. It’s what I need. Can I take the plunge? Can I do this? I’ve done it countless times before, but there is a sense of uncertainly now. I know once I sit in that chair I’ve committed to this path. There’ll be no going back, I mentally battled with myself.
With a deep breath I decided to take the plunge.
No looking back, Bella. No remorse, do what you want…what you need. Hmmmm…what will Edward think…no do what you want. Remember this is your life.
I sat for a while taking in my surroundings and the eclectic group of people that were all gathered around for the same purpose.
I wait my turn patiently and then I dive into the deep end headfirst. ”
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this story. It really means a lot to me to hear from you. Know that your feedback and comments are so really appreciated.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: tracey Signed    
Date: November 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
interesting first chapter. can't wait to read more. :)
Author's Response: Hi Tracey,
OMG thanks for the rating.
I hope you like the rest and that you share your thoughts along the way.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: tracey Signed    
Date: April 12, 2011
Title: Chapter 28: Epiphany
I love that Bella seems to have taken responsibility for her actions but I hope that Edward does the same. If he stays controlling and judgemental, I'll hurl. :)
Author's Response: Hey Tracey,
Thanks for the stars.
She has, wait and see.... I doubt you'll hurl is all I will say.
Here is the UN-BETA’ED teaser and it is subject to change.
This is Edward’s POV, I hope you enjoy it.
“Bella told me that Rose and Emmett were going to go home with the rest of the family. This meant that she and I were going to the hotel they had been in this afternoon. She told me there were two rooms, and I hoped we would only be using one. Bella explained that Rose booked the hotel because she didn’t want to go into Bella’s house or deal with her friends. Apparently Rose thought, we might need some time alone, and had booked both rooms for the night.
I have to think of a great gift to get Rose and Emmett, I thought gratefully.
I led Bella out to the Volvo and within minutes we were at the hotel. The entire ride I held her hand. All the way up to the room she never let go of mine. We didn’t speak, but the electric current I always felt when I was with her was stronger than ever. I could almost feel it crackling and sizzling around us.
“Do you want me to go into the other room?” I asked, praying she would say no, when we arrived at the elevator.
“No, I want you with me,” she replied.”
Thank you for continuing to read this story. The fact that you took the time to not only read but also review means so much to me.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: tracey Signed    
Date: June 29, 2011
Title: Chapter 32: Moving Forward and Moving On
I loved that they spent the day talking and re-getting to know each other. I feel bella was justified for getting a little upset/defensive. But I really liked edward's comparison of his own shortcomingsmistakes being thrown in his face repeatedly to bella's mistakes being thrown in hers. I don't like the idea of bella being forced to deal with her parents. I'm nervous about that and bella dealing with her druggie friends.
Author's Response: Hey tracey,
Thanks for the amazing star rating- that was very nice of you.
Thank you, I'm so happy u liked it.
Well, the parents need to be dealt with...interesting conversation will come from it- I hope.
Her friends are up in 2 chapters....I'm nervous about it.
Here is the teaser:
“Edward POV
I changed into sleep pants, removed my shirt, and ever-so-gently eased my way into bed beside Bella. She looked so beautiful and peaceful while she slept. Almost as soon as I lay in the bed, she started unconsciously moving toward me. I didn’t want her to rip out the IV, so I moved closer and enfolded her in my arms.
Who are you kidding? You were just looking for an excuse to wrap your arms around her, I accused myself. It was true; there was no better feeling than having her in my arms. It let me know she was really here and loved me.
A little while later, I heard her heartbeat changing. Bella was waking up. I hoped if I remained quiet, she would fall back to sleep; after all, it was only five a.m., and she could sleep for another two or three hours.
“You’re back,” she said, as she snuggled farther into my embrace.
“I’m here. Go back to sleep, love,” I cooed softly in her ear.
“No, I’m up. How was the hunt?”
“Then, I guess a good morning is in order. My hunt went well. I’ll be fine now.”
“Morning. Why haven’t you kissed me yet? I can’t roll all the way over to you with this thing is my arm,” she asked, clearly disgruntled with her IV.
“Let me correct that,” I replied.
I leaned down and captured her soft lips with my own…it was perfection.
Too soon, I pulled away because I could hear Carlisle wanting to come in and see how Bella was doing. I told her about his impending visit. She welcomed this, as it meant the IV would come out.”
Thank you so much for not only taking the time to read this chapter, but also review it. You’ll never know how much it means to me to have that kind of support/feedback.
Happy Summer.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: tracey Signed    
Date: January 23, 2012
Title: Chapter 43: Working Through the Steps
First I loved that Edward respected Bella's wishes as far as her birthday. He is learning. Now, OMG! I'm assuming that Edward will believe Bella's description of past events even without the 'reading' minds thing. I just hope that the counselor see through all of it as well.
Author's Response: Hey tracey,
Thank for the amazing star rating.
Yes, he tried really hard to repect what she wanted-it was HER birthday afterall, and not listening on a birthday started this whole mess.
You'll have to wait and see what Edward says in the next chapter.
This teaser is un-beta’ed and subject to change.
“Edward POV
“You don’t have to be strong, love,” I reassured her, hoping it would help her open up.
“I’m fine,” she replied, then attempted to pull away. I released her and she turned toward Dr. Martin. It hurt to let her go, all I wanted to do was hold her close and protect her.
“Bella, how do you feel about what just happened?” the doctor asked, yet again.
“I don’t care, Doc. No biggie,” she flippantly replied.
I’ll try again. I know she’s just downplaying her feelings to deflect, the doctor thought.
“Bella, remember I can’t help you if you won’t open up. How are you feeling?” Dr. Martin patiently tried to reason with Bella.
“I knew she would be a bitch and she lived up to my expectations. She never believed me, so why would that change now?” Bella’s voice broke a little on the end of sentence.
“You’ve never mentioned this episode with Phil,” the doctor stated.
“Yeah, well…it’s not something I like to dwell on. My Mot—Renee chose him over me. I wouldn’t want to be in her life if she can’t trust me or doesn’t…want me.” Both Dr. Martin and I took notice that Bella’s eyes had become glassy and she swallowed thickly when she finished speaking.
“Bella, would you like a moment alone before I call in Charlie?””
I hope you enjoyed the teaser.
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review, it means the world to me.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: tracey Signed    
Date: March 22, 2011
Title: Chapter 27: Things Come Crashing Down
That chapter was just so so sad... I get the feeling that Bella is about to hit rock bottom. I just hope she lives through the fall. sigh... I still think that Edward is being an ass hat though.
Author's Response: Hey Tracey,
Thanks for the stars, they are amazing.
You are right.
There is a good chance she'll live through the fall.
He's hurt and trying.
So this is un-beta’ed and subject to change but here is the teaser. This teaser is in Bella’s POV:
“Liza just glared at me, disappointment evident in her eyes.
I am so sick of that look. Apparently I was too much of a fuck up for Charlie, too much of a whore for Edward, and now not enough of either for the girls. Why couldn’t anyone let me be who I am? I’m not the goodie-goodie I was in Forks, but don’t we have to grow up sometime? Don’t they understand that I’ve done this for three and half years, and maybe I’m just tired of it all?
“What the fuck, are you looking at, Liza?”
“B, she has point. You have been falling down on bookings in the past few weeks. I want to see you happy, but you were happier before he came back. I think you need to give him the heave ho and come back to us. We are your family. We have your back, we always have. All these people have done is try to make you into something and someone you aren’t anymore. I think you just need to take a deep breath, and remember who you really are, B. That’s all. Then you’ll come back to us. And I know just what you need to be able to do that, to put everything into perspective. You need to loosen up. Now you want to loosen up. Don’t you, honey? Of course you do. I have just the things that’ll help and it’ll make that hangover go away,” she said and reached into her back pocket and pulled out a baggie of white powder. ”
I hope you enjoyed the teaser. This next chapter is the longest one yet.
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this story. It really means the world to me that you review. It is how the fan fic author gets paid after all.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: tracey Signed    
Date: February 10, 2012
Title: Chapter 44: Torture
I feel drained after that chapter. I'm as exhausted as Bella probably is after that session. Bella's parents... ugggg... what a joke.... ugggg Hopefully Bella got what closure she might have needed from them, because she really shouldn't have to ever see them again. Going to that wedding would be horrible for Bella and her recovery. I'm glad to see Alice and Bella both start to open their eyes and see some truths. :)
Author's Response: Hey tracey,
OMG thank for the awesome star rating.
You felt drained? Omg that makes me happy because that means you actually felt something...that my words evoked emotion...YAY! lol.
I'm on the fence about the wedding, I had one thing planned but now I'm not so sure.
Alice and Bella both now see they share blame for thier relationship.
I’m so sorry this is late, but I couldn’t pick a teaser until the chapter was complete.
This teaser is un-beta’ed and subject to change.
Bella POV
“Let’s move on to a more pleasant subject. Since you’re cutting off communication with me next week, what would like to do when you’re released?” he asked, the light that had left his eyes when we discussed my family having returned.
“I hadn’t really thought about what we’d do, just that I would be able to leave,” I admitted.
Edward then started discussing the various scenarios he came up with. His plans were detailed and well thought out. They encompassed everything from a weekend getaway at a hotel to leaving the country for three days. He knew that my being released on the Friday would mean that Monday I had to attend my meetings, so he took all that into account.
“I know you’ve put a lot of thought into this…but I think I would really like to just go to our house. No fancy dinner, just us.”
“I like the way you think,” he replied, then brushed a piece of his unruly hair out off his forehead.
I hope you enjoyed the teaser.
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review, it means the world to me.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: tracey Signed    
Date: March 15, 2011
Title: Chapter 26: Impasse
They are both being complete dumb asses. hehe Yes, I think Alice told a bald face lie to Edward about those visions. I think she really saw Bella die from a drug over dose or something equally as horrible. It's sad when Emmet is the smartest one of all. His comment about lack of communication was the smartest thing in the chapter. :)
Author's Response: Hey tracey,
Thanks for the awesome star rating.
LOL they are, aren't they? Did she...wait to till the next chapter to find out she talks about it with Jasper. Bella die...hmmmm.... Emmett has surprising depth.
Here is the teaser as promised. To change things up this one is in Jasper’s POV.
““You okay, Em?” His mood was contemplative.
“Yeah, Jas.”
“I know you’re lying. I can feel it, remember?” I replied with a raised eyebrow.
“Fine, all this Bella and Edward business…it has me upset. Do you think she’d really string him along like that? ”
“I want to say no. I’ve felt the love between them—it runs deep. I’ve also felt hurt, resentment, and anger. I just hope it doesn’t get in the way of the love.”
“I do too. I don’t know what I would be like if this were Rosie and me.”
“I know. It’s a terrible situation.” I commiserated with my brother.
There was a lull in the conversation.
“He ran away again,” Emmett said—it was not a question but a simple statement.
“That he did.”
“I think we should leave him alone,” he stated quietly.
“I’m not sure. He might feel really alone right now.”
“I didn’t think of that. I just think he really does need some time to himself, don’t you? I mean, we barged into his room twice today. He always has to hear our thoughts on the matter, and this morning we forced him to talk to us. Doesn’t he deserve to choose what he wants?”
“Point taken. I think I’ll call him,” I told him, and Emmett nodded in agreement.
I retrieved my cell from my pocket and dialed Edward’s number.
It rang a few times, and then I heard his outgoing message: “Hello, you have reached Edward Cullen, kindly leave a message with your name, number, and a brief message after the tone, and I’ll return your call as soon as possible…beep.”
“Ed, Emmett and I are worried about you, but we understand you may need your space. If you need us, call, text, or think it, and Alice will tell us where you are and we’ll be there. We’re here for you, no matter what. Talk to you soon, brother. Bye.””
I hope you enjoyed the teaser.
Thank you for reading and reviewing; it really means the world to me.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: tracey Signed    
Date: July 27, 2012
Title: Chapter 48: Dealing
I'm ready for edward and bella to finally be free from facing bella's past indiscretions. that's got to hard on both of them. ready for the family backup to arrive. :)
Author's Response: Hey Tracey,
Thanks for the amazing review and star rating.
I am too, we just had to put a bow on Forks so to speak.
I think you'll enjoy the teaser
This teaser is un-beta’d and subject to change.
“Edward POV
I opened the door to see my siblings. According to their thoughts, Carlisle and Esme were parking the cars.
As soon as Rose entered the room, she admonished me, “Can’t you go even one damn day without sex, Edward? She’s grieving for heaven’s sake. What kind of an animal are you?”
Before I could answer, Alice jumps in and said, “You knew we were coming, you could have opened a window when you cleaned up. This place reeks of sex.”
“Hello to you too, my loving sisters,” I teased.
They both glared at me, then Rose opened a window.
My brothers were both proud of me, but wouldn’t open their mouth for fear of their wives’ reactions.
Seems we all have something in common, I thought fleetingly.
Bella came out of the bedroom, tugging at the top of her dress, just after Carlisle and Esme came in.
“Holly shit, baby sis, where are you going?” Em asked before anyone else could even say hello.
“Emmett!” Esme admonished him for his cursing.
So not fair, Bella gets away with swearing, Em thought and I smirked at him.
“To a funeral, Em,” Bella spoke slowly as if our bother were severely dim witted.
“You’re kidding me right? Who is going to let her leave the room in that?” Em questioned the rest of us as he gestured to Bella’s provocative attire.”
Thank you for reading and reviewing it means a lot to me.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: tracey Signed    
Date: October 15, 2011
Title: Chapter 39: One Day at a Time
You did real good with bella's 'first day' reactions to people and situations. It was almost like you interviewed patients at a center about first day feelings. :) Even the most healthy goal oriented (wants help) addict have those feelings of not belonging there, feelings of being out of place, and feelings of wanting to bolt. Very good chapter.
Author's Response: Hey Tracey,
Thank honey. WOW that is a high compliment.
This teaser is an excerpt from a letter Edward wrote to Bella in rehab:
“When I retuned, home, it was Rose’s turn with me. She decided that both the Volvo and your bike needed a tune-up. I know that you’re thinking she did a complete tune-up on your bike already…yes, but Rose is meticulous with our vehicles. I’ll spare you the details, but we spent a lot of time on both. She didn’t let me do much, as I worked the jack and handed her tools and whatever else she needed. Basically, I took over Emmett’s usual job. Also, we detailed your bike; I bet it never looked so shiny and clean. I sent you a picture of it. Yes, I’m in the picture, wearing my coveralls. Both Esme and Alice insist we wear them when we work in the garage. Esme doesn’t want us tracking grease and grime into the house, and Alice wants to protect our clothing. I hope you got a laugh of it; I feel ridiculous in them. It was Rose that made me get in the photo. It was even her idea to take the photo in the first place.
Speaking of Rose, we kept up a quiet, yet amicable conversation. I have to say that is all because of you, love. You brought out a different side of her. We never had the best relationship, but the last few years were worse…now I owe her so much. It’s wonderful to have my sister back—something else I have to thank you for. You give me so much, Bella. You make my life full and rich. It’s my greatest hope I can give you the same.”
Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: tracey Signed    
Date: November 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: You Can't Go Home Again
I like Bella handing Edward his ass. He deserves it still. She shouldn't make it easy for him or the Cullens. Update soon. ;)
Author's Response: Hey tracey,
You are the first to respond and the first I'm responding to!
The five star rating is AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I like badass Bella too, she won't make it easy on them either. There will be an update as soon as it's validated I'm putting it in today.
HR Teaser for ch 10 of ch 11
This is the teaser for ch 11. This scene is in Bella’s POV:
“Aspirin, a glass of water, jeans and a white t-shirt.
“I said, I didn’t need anything,” I told her and started to turn away.
“Yes, I have seen that you desperately need the Aspirin, so take it.” Her tone was harsh.
“No!” I knew I was acting like a petulant child, but it was what I needed to do to stay aloof and detached.
“Why are you making this so hard? Take the pills, Bella,” Alice repeated in a severe and loud tone.
“Fuck! Not so loud! Don’t take that tone with me, and why are you being a bitch?” I volleyed back at her.
“Excuse me? I’m trying to save you from a pounding migraine and you insult me? Take the pills or I will call Carlisle!” She looked menacing and stepped closer. I might not like it, but I knew that damned pixie vampire could overpower me and asking was just her way of humoring the human.”
Again thank you for taking the time to not only read but review.
Best,
~E
Reviewer: tracey Signed    
Date: November 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: What Now!
I loved Esme tearing Edward and Alice a new one. hehehe Update soon. :)
Author's Response: Hey tracey,
OMG Thanks for the stars!
I loved it too and am so happy u did as well! it'll be with in a week.
Here is the teaser for ch 12, it has not been beta’d so be kind.
“Alice-POV
I don’t know why I was so anxious, Esme gave me Bella’s number and I knew she was going to allow me to come over. I guess it was the formality of it all.
I dialed her cell number it rang, once, twice on the third ring she picked up.
“Hello,” she said she sounded horrible and sleepy.
I guess I woke her up even though it was noon.
“Hi Bella, it’s Alice,” I chirped.
“I know it’s you, Alice. What do you want?” Her tone was weary.
“I wanted to know if I might be able to see you today? I could come over to your house?” I asked tentatively.
“Just you?” she pressed.
“Yes, just me. He knows not to come,” I informed her.
In my vision of this conversation using his name didn’t help. In fact, she would not let me come over at all. Beyond this phone call though I saw nothing.
“Okay, I’m sure you already know the address,” she said as if she really didn’t care.
“Thank you, Bella; I’ll see you in an hour or so?” No sooner did I finish my sentence than she hung up the phone. There was no “goodbye” or “see you soon.”
Maybe it’s because you never said goodbye to her four years ago? Only difference is she never thought she would see you again, I thought.”
I hope you enjoyed the teaser. Thank you for taking the time to not only read but also review this story, I appreciate it more than you know.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: tracey Signed    
Date: December 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Forgiveness Starts at Home
Good chapter. :)
Author's Response: tracey,
OMG thanks and thanks for the stars!
Here is the teaser:
“As I rattled off the all reasons I had come up with last night for being angry at the world, at my life and myself, I realized that who I hated most was Edward.
I hated Edward for a whole host of reasons. While hating him was something I never thought I would do, I never thought he would leave me, either. I decided to list the reasons why I hated him, too. I had a feeling I might be seeing him tonight, and I wanted my anger to be fresh and raw. If I made the list now, I just might be able to remember it by then and not crumble when I looked into his eyes.
I hated him for leaving me.
I resented him for staying away for four years.
I despised him for calling me "love" when he knew full well that he had lost that privilege.
I detested him for judging me and telling me what I should and shouldn't do.
I abhorred him for branding me a slut--he was too much of a gentleman to come out and say it, but I could read between the lines.
I loathed him for coming back the way he did
I was furious with him for making me remember how much I loved him.
But the real crux of the matter was that I hated him for giving me hope, only to snatch it away.”
I hope you enjoyed the teaser. Thank you for taking the time to not only read but also review this story, I appreciate it more than you know.
Happy Holidays,
~E
Reviewer: tracey Signed    
Date: December 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: The Line Between Love and Hate
Really good chapter. I love that Bella is still hating on them. They deserve it. But I hope that she lightens up on her health soon. sigh... Update soon. :)
Author's Response: Hi Tracey,
5 stars, for me? YAY!
Thank you so much. Yeah, they has an up hill battle ahead of them. Edward and Alice do deserve it. You are onto something about her health.
Here is the teaser for the next chapter, it answers the question of whom Bella was speaking to after the show.
“Bella POV
I exited the stage and knew I would be seeing Edward soon. He just didn’t know when enough was enough. I would have to ask him if he had fun emotionally toying with me. I must have been distracted with my thoughts because when I went back to the dressing room with Lola and Liza, I suddenly heard Liza ask someone, “Who are you, gorgeous?” I hadn’t noticed anyone by the door.
I looked up, and standing before me was none other than Jacob Black.”
I hope you enjoyed the teaser, I know it’s shorter than usually but I didn’t want to give out any other information.
Thank you so much for taking the time to not only to read my story but to review it. These reviews mean the world to me. Thank you again
Season’s Greetings,
~E
Reviewer: tracey Signed    
Date: December 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Reunion
Dam! Jake was a complete and total tool in this chapter. What a douche! LOL I'm glad that Edward is being less controlling and douche like. hehehe baby steps baby steps little Eddie. hehehe Happy Holidays and update soon. :)
Author's Response: Hey tracey,
So good to hear from you again and thank you for not only reading and reviewing but also rating, you always do and I just want to say thanks.
LOL. Yeah but I think Jake is always a tool, with the exception of a few fan fics that redeem him though not many make me like him. LOL I love your candor.
YAY! you like go-with-the-flow-ward!
exactly-baby steps.
Happy holidays to you too.
Here is the teaser of ch 17 as promised it is Bella’s POV:
“I awoke from my nap and found myself alone in Edward’s room. There were two emotions warring within me: the first was relief, as I had to think some shit over and was grateful to be alone. The second was disappointment.
Why are you disappointed? Wasn’t it you that yelled at him this morning? You’ve kicked him out of here before, not to mention you have some serious resentment and anger issues toward him, I chided myself.
I guess I wanted to see his face. He seems hopeful, and for some reason it makes me happy.”
I hope you enjoyed the teaser. Thank you for taking the time to not only read but also review this story, I appreciate it more than you know.
Happy New Year,
~E
Reviewer: tracey Signed    
Date: December 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: It's A New Dawn, It's A New Day!
I liked the give and take of this chapter. although eddie was still a little demanding in terms of bellas drinking etc.... she said that she did it to numb the pain which was a big admission to make. he should have talked to her about the pain and its cause namely him instead of making demands of her. bella took that better than i would have. i do like that edward actually kissed bella even though it seemed to be from jealousy instead of need. sigh... well he is moving in the right direction just slow as hell. hehehe happy new year.
Author's Response: Hey tracey,
Thanks for the amazing rating.
I'm happy you enjoyed the balance that has come to E&B's relationship. You pick up everything, know that the points (holes in the story) are intentional.
Here is the teaser of ch 18 as promised it is Bella’s POV:
“Then, we went back to our incredible kiss. Just before it was time for me to catch my breath again, he pulled away. I mourned the loss of his lips instantly, and I’m sure my expression showed it because he said in between pants, “Sorry, love, but some of my family are home.”
Firstly, I had made him pant! He doesn’t even need to breathe, and I had him panting! I knew I was good, but hot damn, that gives a girl an ego boost. Secondly, my stomach dropped— the Cullens were home. They had seen me in a fairly bad state last night, and well, I didn’t know how to act. I’m sure they have a low opinion of me anyway. But I didn’t give a fuck, or so I told myself. Also, I didn’t want to see that judgmental demon pixie. I was still mad at Alice for being an overbearing bitch, and that had not changed. I could feel my back arching, and I fought to not turn into super bitch Bella, again—not yet anyway.”
I hope you enjoyed the teaser. Thank you for taking the time to not only read but also review this story, I appreciate it more than you know.
Happy New Year,
~E
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