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Beyond Repair by GreatEscape Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 957]
Summary:

EDITED, REVISED, AND IMPROVED!!!

Same great chapters, just better! Everything is the same except all the silly typos and mistakes have been corrected!

When the Volturi arrived in Texas to put a stop to the warring vampire armies, Bella was only able to escape with her life by the skin of her teeth. Her search for a better life was not successful. When the Cullens find her many years later alone and seemingly unconscious can they help her to find the peace she once sought or is she damaged beyond repair?

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AU

Mentions of dark themes and violence.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Completed: Yes Word count: 159056
[Report This] Published: April 04, 2010 Updated: December 26, 2010


Reviewer: tracey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

It seems like Bella convinced Edward of her love. hehehe Update soon. :)

Author's Response:

Lol. She really, really did. Thanks for reviewing!

 
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Date: November 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

I'm glad that Alice (I'm guessing) saw Lucas and Bella's conversation. And I'm so glad that Edward is standing up to Bella and telling her she is being a dumb ass! hehe Update soon. :)

Author's Response:

Alice didn't have a vision of Bella and Lucas's conversation but she did have a vision of Bella actually in China. Thanks so much for reviewing! The next chapter will be up soon!

 
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Date: December 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

I'm so glad that Edward is finally cheering Bella up a little. Can't wait for the epi....

Author's Response:

Thanks!

 
Einstein's Dreams by as63926 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 136]
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Alice doesn’t come back to check on Bella after the cliff diving incident. She comes back to collect her for college. The trials and tribulations of Bella going through the motions of school, missing Edward, and finding herself in spite of everything...


Categories: New Moon, Eclipse, Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
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Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 28966
[Report This] Published: April 04, 2010 Updated: October 29, 2010


Reviewer: tracey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: With the Moon I Run, Far From the Carnage of the Fiery Sun

This chapter was shocking. hehehe :)

Author's Response: More shocking to come your way...

 
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Date: October 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Frames Won't Break and the Letters Won't Burn

I guess I should have expected it with the title and all, but I can't help feeling that all of the previous chapters that I read were a waste of time, since they didn't even happen. sigh..... Please let her change now, so it can at least have a happy ending. :)

 
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Date: June 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: The race is on, and the winner loses all

I just read all of the chapers written so far of this story and I am really enjoying it. However, I hate that Edward is still trying to control Bella's choices. Bella shouldn't even speak to him after all of the ultimatums. Update soon. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I don't think E sees it the same way as everyone is reading it, but he will explain everything soon. The next update should be within the week....

 
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Date: June 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Water for Elephants

That was a really sweet chapter. I do hope that Edward gets less controlling about what "needs to happen or not happen" with Bella's life. Update soon. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Edward has the best interest at heart. Give an alcoholic one drink and he can't quit.

 
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Date: July 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: We all need the clowns to help us smile...

That was an interesting chapter. I'm glad that Alice & Jasper took care of the black mailer. I'm sad that Edward is still technically being a prude. Update soon. :)

Author's Response: Thanks, I tried to write what actually went down, but it was not interesting to say the least. Thanks for the review....

 
Reviewer: tracey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: These trash can dreams come true

:)

Author's Response: :-9

 
Summary:

Ready for some fun?  After a confining newborn year, Izzy finds herself in more trouble than she bargained for. Dark days lay ahead as she faces new enemies, old friends, a past that won’t stay dead and a future that is alive with more craziness than you can poke a stick at. Sequel to Dirty Dancing with the Devil Herself.

 

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Categories: New Moon Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 12448
[Report This] Published: April 09, 2010 Updated: May 31, 2010


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Date: May 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: It's coming at all sides

Dam! That sucks for Tanya. Update soon.

 
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Date: April 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3:Here Wolfy Wolfy!

Wow! That was a really good chapter. Can't wait for more. :)

 
Reviewer: tracey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1:Starts with a bang!

funny first chapter. can't wait for more. :)

 
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Date: April 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2:The smelly foe!

A real werewolf!?! Dam! Didn't see that coming. Update soon. :)

 
Summary:

After the Cullens leave Bella behind she must find a way to survive her pregnancy. Betrayed by the Denali, where is she left to go and what will she become?

Is it a price Bella is willing to pay?

Every choice bears consequences, positive or negative, and results of the consequences will change the course of their lives drastically. What will their consequences be?


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Effects and Consequences
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 96247
[Report This] Published: May 03, 2010 Updated: July 09, 2012


Reviewer: tracey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Vampire Royal

Glad that they killed Aro and Caius. Update soon. :)

Author's Response:

I'll update at soon as I can... thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
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Date: September 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Charlie

That was really good and I loved Charlie's protective reaction to Bella. :)

Author's Response:

Thanks :) Glad you liked it :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
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Date: March 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Home

Well that was a good chapter. =breathes sigh of relief= hehe

Author's Response:

haha thanks!! glad you liked it!

Thanks for reading, reveiwing and sticking with me!!

 
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Date: December 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Reclaiming

Glad they got her back finally. :)

Author's Response: Honestly, I wanted to do more with this but for some reason the characters were not cooperating... Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
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Date: November 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Edward

:)

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
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Date: December 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Volterra Changed

Wow, I didn't think things could get any worse or more depressing between Edward and Bella, but, Dam! I guess that they can. That's really sad that Bella is even ignoring Ness now after all she did to save her. Update soon. :)

Author's Response:

I promise that the next chapter will shed some light... and it now waiting for my beta in the queue ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
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Date: April 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 No Longer a Lamb

There still feels like there is so much left to tell. can't wait.

Author's Response:

Oh there is... and I just put the first chapter of Cause and Effect in the validation queue so you should start seeing Edward's side of this very soon!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: tracey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Love at Long Last

I can't believe they waited 3 hours for the humans to put the bed together. LOL :)

Author's Response:

LOL... what were they going to do? Leave them alone in the house or go at it with the guys in the next room? This was inspired by something that happened to one of my husband's coworkers actually. He went onsite as a computer tech on Valentines and the couple decided to 'celebrate' in the next room while he was working on their computer... I couldn't let them do that... this is just a bit of Alice payback ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
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Date: August 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Carlisle

Wow! She sure jumped to the most wrong conclusion of that explanation. That was aweful. Update soon. :)

Author's Response:

She was convinced by Kate that he was chasing after someone else.. it didn't occur to her that Kate wasn't telling the whole truth.

The next chapter will go up at some point tonight ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
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Date: September 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Facing the Past

I'm glad that Alec and Jane are going to help Bella and the Cullens. I wish that Edward wasn't such an ass in this chapter. :) Update soon.

Author's Response:

Edward has no idea who he's being an ass to... if he did- he wouldn't have done it. He is in severe amounts of pain right now due to a recent trama which I'm not going to explain because he'll explain if I ever get Cause and Effect finished...

Thanks for reading and reivewing!

 
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Date: November 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Pain and Happiness

Good chapter. Is Edward finally going to wake up and get a clue? Dam, I hope so. Update soon. :)

Author's Response:

lol... we shall see...

thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: tracey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Revelations

I'm glad that Bella knows the truth now. I think that Edward needs to know all of Bella's truth very soon too. it's only fair. Update soon. :)

Author's Response:

I think that you are right... it is only fair after all ;)

I am putting the next update in the beta queue tonight- I hope she gets it to y'all quickly. I apologzie for the delay. With my master's life has just been crazy!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 




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