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Summary:

When Bella has a tragic accident, it turns her entire world upsidedown and forces Edward to come to terms with her change sooner than he'd hoped.  As Bella says goodbye to friends and family, the Cullens are faced with coming up with a plan to get Bella out of the hospital without drawing unwanted suspicion on their family. Not to mention they have to talk the Quileutes into allowing an exception to the decades old treaty. On top of everything else, Victoria threatens to turn the hospital in Seattle into a killing ground. Can the vampires and the wolves come to an agreement before the Volturi descend on the Olympic pennisula?


Categories: Eclipse, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 60739
[Report This] Published: February 21, 2010 Updated: October 21, 2010


Reviewer: tracey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Ready, Too

So far, so good. No Emoward. hehehe Update soon. :)

Author's Response:

LOL. I tend to like Emoward, but I like Supportiveward better. There'll be time for Emoward later, when the major drama starts happening. :) Thanks for the review!!

 
Reviewer: tracey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Disturbing News

Good chapter. I guess Renee's visit and Jacob's visit are next. I'm glad that Edward can "hear" the conversations too. Update soon. :)

Author's Response:

Hehe...no, just Renee's, though Jake comes in during the next chapter. Bella and Jake's conversation will happen in the chapter after next. Thanks for the review!!

 
Reviewer: tracey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Something Wrong

Oh, that was a truly evil cliffy! You hussy! hehehe Can't wait for more. :)

Author's Response:

Woo! I'm not a huge fan of cliffys unless I'm the one writing them, so I can feel your pain. But, honestly, this is the first of many cliffys for this story, I think. ;) Thanks, tracey!!

 
Reviewer: tracey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Suspicions Confirmed

Still more of the evil cliffy! hehehe update soon. :)

 
Reviewer: tracey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Climbing the Walls

I'm glad that Edward is finally so determined to change Bella. I hope that Jacob will help now and not be a pain in the ass. :)

Author's Response:

Hehe...thank you. And I'm probably doing the next chapter from Jake's POV.  A major event occurs to get him in the mindset where Bella's change isn't such a bad thing. :)

 
Reviewer: tracey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: At Peace

Calm before the storm? Can't wait for more. :)

Author's Response:

That it is. There's a pretty big storm coming. Woo!

 
Reviewer: tracey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: On Your Mark...

Can't wait for the next chapter. :)

 
Reviewer: tracey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Three Seconds Too Late

Dam! That was intense. Edward better bite her quick, huh? Can't wait for the next chapter. :)

Author's Response:

Thank you. :) I tried to do justice to a vamp fight. I'm glad you liked it!

 
Reviewer: tracey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Interlude: Charlie's Determination

This chapter sure made me feel sorry for Charlie. If you do a BPOV please don't talk about dancing dust motes when she wakes up. I don't think I can take it. hehehe An EPOV during her change would be different. Update soon. :)

Author's Response:

Hehe...if I do mention the dancing dustmotes, it's only to tease you. LOL. As for Charlie, yeah. Poor man...I hated doing that to him, but I wanted to make it realistic. Bella's choice is going to hurt people, but in the end, it's for the best and unavoidable (Think Volturi). Thanks for the reviews!

 
Reviewer: tracey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Something to Cling To

Can't wait to see Edward's "acting job" with Charlie and maybe a little bit of Emmett and Bella. Update soon. :)

Author's Response:

Just for you, I'll have at least a tiny  moment for Bella and Emmett. Thanks!

 
Reviewer: tracey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Counting Down

Well that was a pretty good version of a turning, to be honest. It was different and I liked it. Update soon. :)

Author's Response:

Thanks, tracey. I'm working on the next chapter. Hope to have it finished by this weekend. :)

 
Reviewer: tracey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Out of the Ashes (shabbyapple)

Good chapter. :)

 
Reviewer: tracey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Euphoria

:)

Author's Response:

:) Right back attacha!! Thanks, tracey.

 
Reviewer: tracey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Rings and Things

Dam evil cliffy! hehehe Good chapter though. I hate that they are both being virtuous. hehe :)

Author's Response:

LOL. Aww...don't worry. They are only waiting a day and a half for the wedding.  Two more days until they can have their way with each other. ;)

 
Reviewer: tracey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Home

Can't wait for more. :)

 
Reviewer: tracey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: More Delicious Than Blood

Good sweet chapter. Was she giggling because she thought of the cell phone commercial where the guy is wondering around asking "Can you hear me now?" That's what I thought of. ;)

 
Enough by Arabella_ Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 93]
Summary:

Edward left two months ago, and Bella has slipped deeper and deeper into darkness. Her extreme solution provides a closer look at the pair as we find out what happens to their plans of forever.

Rated for suicide themes and language.

 

Enough


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 26468
[Report This] Published: February 25, 2010 Updated: January 18, 2011


Reviewer: tracey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Hurt

so sad. Update soon.

 
Reviewer: tracey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Fire

That chapter was so sad. I really liked it. Update soon. :)

 
Reviewer: tracey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Liar

So so sad. Update soon. :)

 
Reviewer: tracey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Hunting

I liked it. :) Edward needs to quit being jealous and start thinking of someone elses feelings. :)

 
Reviewer: tracey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Consumed

poor Edward..... so sad.

 
Summary:

When Bella moves to Forks she finds herself not only as Edward's singer, but as Jasper's as well. As their relationships develop secrets from the past begin to be revealed.

A B/J/E fic.

Thanks to the amazing ms_ambrosia for the banner.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 69021
[Report This] Published: March 01, 2010 Updated: December 23, 2011


Reviewer: tracey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Once

Good chapter. :)

 
Reviewer: tracey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Fire

I wish that they could just talk honestly, but sigh.... the story would end then, wouldn't it? hehe

 
Reviewer: tracey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: The Flood

So so sad.... Bella was brave and laid out all of her fears and feelings. Why didn't Jasper tell her everything then? She would have at least understood her dreams then. I'm pissed at jasper.

 
Summary:

When faced with a betrayal that could tear them apart, Edward and Bella must put their faith in the healing power of love. WARNING: this story deals with rape and its aftermath. 

Hurt/Comfort/Romance, ExB

***Gorgeous banner artwork (above) was made by the talented Fernanda. Many thanks to her for allowing me to use this masterpiece for my banner. View more of her work here***


Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: No Word count: 160351
[Report This] Published: March 04, 2010 Updated: November 21, 2012


Reviewer: tracey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Thanks for the chapter. I loved the Alice/Rose/Bella cooking interaction. It was light. Bella needed that. Jacob has to mess up everything though. Mean cliffy writer didn't tell us what he said to her though. hehehe Updae soon. :)

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing! I'm glad you liked the cooking interaction. He He. Sorry. *evil laugh* :-D

I'll do my best to update soon!

 




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