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Penname: Cullen Concession [ Contact]
Real name: Robin Parrish
Status: Member
Member Since: March 10, 2009
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Beta-reader: Yes
I adore Twilight Fan Fiction. I love to beta read.
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Summary:
Edward, Jacob, Demetri, and Felix are members of the Volturi Elite Guard. Their team tracks beings that have either violated the Volturi Code Of Silence or have knowledge of the existence of mythical beings. When the team is assigned to investigate the human Isabella Swan, Edward's unalterable world is altered.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes
Word count: 110683
[Report This] Published: September 10, 2009 Updated: January 26, 2010
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: November 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Subtle Web
Glad you had safe travels!
I like that Jacob, Demitri and Felix are allowing Edward a little bit of leeway here. Author's Response: It was good to visit, but good to be back home, too - thank you.
Poor Jacob and Demetri have no idea how to react to this Edward drama, but they're trying!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: November 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: Upon Your Bed
Oh my goodness. THat was great! Author's Response: For me, too - thank you!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: November 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: Prove That Warm Affection
Very fluffy! I like the perfection illustration.
Author's Response: He needs a little fluff, and some time to get his feelings in order so he can talk to B and start processing what he needs to do. Such a little planner...
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed 
Date: December 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19: Within His Little Parlour
I could get see every detail in my minds eye! So well written!!!! Author's Response: That's so cool - to hear that as a writer, well, it's better than chocolate on a bad day - and I've had both - so thank you!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: December 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21: Take A Lesson
AWESOME AWESOM AWESOME gift!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: January 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: Dear Friend
Oh my! Nice lemon! Very intriguing ending! Author's Response: Hope the rest is just as intriguing - let me know, okay? Thanks!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: January 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23: Little Corner Sly
Great way to include James and Victoria. Author's Response: Thanks! Evil vamps working for evil vamps - it just seemed to fit!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: January 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24: Evil Counsellor
Well done! I love how Edward knew he couldn't look back for fear of losing it if Bella was being mistreated. Author's Response: Thnak you! I just love protective Edward - and protective Bella, too!
Summary: 
Oct 2009: Nominee, Best AU AH, The Moonlight Awards
Winter 2010: Nominee, Best 'Under The Radar' Fic, The Faithful Shipper Awards
November 2010: Nominee, Best Angst, Best Lemon, Most Original Storyline (Rare Gem division), Rare Gem Awards
Bella Swan attends group therapy to placate her worried father, remaining mute about the events that led to her suicide attempt. Mesmerized by the sullen, silent stranger who enters five minutes late each session, she is shocked into action the day he finally speaks up, her pierced tongue forming words aloud for once...
Edward Cullen obliges his father and sees his colleague, Dr. Jones, for individual and group therapy after his near-demise - the physical one, that is. For Edward knows that inside, he's already dead, destroyed by the painful memories he commemorates with tattoos like mile markers...
Two damaged souls who speak the same language come together by chance. But can the damaged save each other in the wake of revelations to come?
This story's first chapter began as a finalist for the Tattward/Inkella one-shot contest, and is rated NC-17 for language, lemons and disturbing themes/imagery including suicide attempts, substance abuse, self-harm and scenes of violence. It deals heavily with issues of mental illness and healing; please read with care.
Canon pairings, AU-AH, somewhat OOC.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Bree, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Heidi, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Leah, Mike, Other Character, Paul, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 44 Completed: Yes
Word count: 223921
[Report This] Published: September 21, 2009 Updated: February 26, 2012
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: November 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
What is your inspiration for this story? Wow! Edward so conflicted. Great chapter.
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: January 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Beautiful chapter! I cannot wait to continue reading this story. In the mean time I will check out your other endeavors!
Very well written. Author's Response: A reward: a lost moment...
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Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: September 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Fantastic! The only word that came to mind.
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: September 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
You have really captured a lot of emotion
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: September 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
You have really captured the guilt and pain associated with everyone invovled in a situation like this.
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: October 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Wow! I read on the phone but hope to be on the computer to take advantage of the interactive part!
Very insightful update.
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: November 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Wow! Didnt see that coming.
Summary: Edward left Bella in New Moon and she lived the normal, vampire-free life that he always wanted for her. Now Bella is almost ninety and Edward is back in Forks for a final goodbye. This is a one-shot, and was inspired by Simple Plan's "Save You."
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 2449
[Report This] Published: September 23, 2009 Updated: October 03, 2009
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: December 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Save You
Awww! Well Written.
Summary: Edward leaves Bella alone in the woods after telling her he didn’t want her any more. As she is lying on the cold forest floor; Bella remembers three important things. Edward made a promise not to leave her, and Edward never broke a promise, and third it was her body, her heart, what right did he have to decide what was good for her? All in all Bella realizes that Edward was covering up his true feeling about her. Bella goes to bring Edward home.
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Laurent, Marcus, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes
Word count: 57466
[Report This] Published: October 05, 2009 Updated: September 14, 2011
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: January 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Choosing to Exist
I am happy that ALice got through to Edward on this call. SOmetimes authors go overboard. Great job! Very sad that I am all caught up! Author's Response: Thank you so much for all your praise. I was happy that Alice got through to him as well. Yes, it's true authors can and do go over board. I will let you in on a little bit for the next chapter. Edward & Bella have to over come the biggest hurdule before they are together.
I sent Chapter 7 to my beta yesterday. So all we have to do is want.
Thanks once more for taking the time to review.
TaintedDarkInuShemeeko
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: January 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Seek and You Shall Find
Wonderful! Author's Response: Thank you so very much.
TainteDarkInuShemeeko
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: January 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Penance
I never really thought of the bond between Esme, Carlisle and Edward. I loved how you captured Jasper's great desire to atone. I can't wait to see how he tries. Author's Response: It's neat to see a story make us think about something that we wouldn't do normally. Jasper was a challenge to write, but I'm glad how everythnig came out.
Stick with me and I will do my best not to disappoint.
Thanks for the review.
TainteDarkInuShemeeko
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: January 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Mirrored Self
You really captured these emotions! I could just see the mirror breaking in my mind. Well Done! Author's Response: When I was writing this chapter, I could connect with the hidden feelings that Edward was feeling. I was in my own dark place at the time. So Edward and I kind of played off one another. If that makes sense to you.
Yes, the mirror breaking, it was one of the first things I pictured in my mind as I was working on this chapter. So I'm thrilled to hear that it came through so well.
Thanks again for reviewing.
TaintedDarkInuShemeeko
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: January 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Sky Won't Fall Forever
SO very intriguing. Love it! Author's Response: Thank you, very much. I'm happy to hear that you are enjoying it.
TaintedDarkInuShemeeko
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: January 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Dark Abyss
WoW! Very nice start. I loved how you put enough into the first chapter to make me want to continue. Author's Response: Thanks so much. I try as a writer it is inportanted to keep the reader interested.
Thank you for taking the time to leave a review.
TaintedDarkInuShemeeko
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: January 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Love the Medicine for the Soul
Your story really shows how deeply these two are connected. Love it! Author's Response: Thank you so much thank was one of my goals when I decided to write this story. So I'm pleased to hear that you are lovin' it.
Thank you for taking the time to leave a review. It means a lot.
TaintedDarkInuShemeeko
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: February 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Even Ground
Wonderful statement regarding her anger at Alice. Sometimes I wondered why Bella would just forgive her so easily. Author's Response: Thanks you for saying that. It was just one of those this that bothered me about New Moon. Thanks so much for reviewing.
TaintedDarkInuShemeeko
Summary: ...Immersion...
Suppose that vampires "imprint" based on smell and the connection is immediate and irresistible. What will happen when vampire Bella Swan meets her mate at Forks High?
Immersion: involvement in something that occupies all the time and energy available.
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes
Word count: 37435
[Report This] Published: October 12, 2009 Updated: November 21, 2009
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: November 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I really wish my computer had a scratch and sniff spot! LOL! Author's Response: Me too! Although my hubby does have some OLD SPICE cologne...and I have a couple of leather saddles and bridles...I've asked him to wear the cologne and carry the saddle around for me...he just rolls his eyes...LOL
Kathie
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