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Penname: Cullen Concession [ Contact]
Real name: Robin Parrish
Status: Member
Member Since: March 10, 2009
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Beta-reader: Yes
I adore Twilight Fan Fiction. I love to beta read.
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Summary:  
Bella had the perfect life. She was married to her longtime best friend, had a great job and a beautiful son…until a careless driver stole her happiness.
Edward was fulfilling his dreams. His residency was almost over, he had a gorgeous fiancé, and he was ready to move forward, starting a family…until a devastating break-up and a health scare in his family shake his foundation.
See, sometimes, life doesn’t go the way you want. Sometimes, things can happen that change the course you choose. And most of the time, it takes courage to walk down the new path.
What if that new path started with a tee ball team?
Big thanks to sigh-for-sigh for the banner!!
Play with me on the forum. I now have a thread in the Alternate Human thread.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie, Seth, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: No
Word count: 116372
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2009 Updated: October 05, 2010
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: November 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Holiday Plans
Loved it! Can't wait for the fireworks!
Author's Response: Thank you!!
The fireworks are coming!! Can't wait to hear what you think of them!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: November 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 The Truth
YAY! I knew a little closure would do them some good! Well written! Author's Response: Edward definitely needed the closure! Now, he can let go of the guilt and move forward. Yay!
Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: September 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 In Memory of...
Whew...Judging by the title I thought Esme was going to die in this chapter. The emotions were captured very well in this chapter. Author's Response: Sorry I gave you heartfail with the chapter title...it's all about Jake.
I'm so glad I was able to convey the emotion to you!! That means so much to me, makes me want to write faster!! ;)
Thank you!!!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: September 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Moving On
Aww, Billy. Maybe now that B has found some happiness it will not hurt so much to do more things at the reservation.
Nice chapter. Author's Response: Yeah, Billy is hurting... Bella is getting stronger all the time. It'll be good for all of them.
Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: September 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Art on the Town
FANTASTIC update.
And I second the recommendation! Author's Response: Thank you so much!! Yay!
justaskalice writes a great story!! Glad you like it, too!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: September 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 A Slight Change of Plans
Poor Edward. Is he comparing Ms. fredericks to losing his mom? Death does strange things to people, I wonder how these too will react.
If Edward needs additional help I will gladly meet him in the hot tub at the cabin! LOL
Very interesting update..... Author's Response: Edward hasn't had a good year. He will tell you all about why he took the death so hard...very soon! Death does affect people in different ways. Bella has lost someone she loves - she can help him.
I think there would be a VERY long line at the hot tub - you know, people who want to comfort Edward. Just sayin'... ;)
Thank you!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: October 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Comfort
LOVE LOVE LOVE the scar conversation. Author's Response: Thank you! That conversation has lived in my mind since I started this story. Yay! It's finally out there!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: October 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Time Together
Very nice! I think Edward should talk to Tanya. I think Bella needs to let Edward know if she is willing to have more children.
Great update. Author's Response: You are the first (probably only) person who thinks Edward and Tanya should talk. Wow!
Bella needs to decide when she's ready to broach that subject. Still holding back just a little...
Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: October 20, 2009
Title: Running Home
Good Gracious. Billy gets to me......can you write in a woman for Billy?
Way to go Esme! And little Seth making that call! So wonderfully written.
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: October 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 A Time for Everything
Awesome update! I have a feeling we have not heard the last from Tanya!
Author's Response: Tanya is still out there... :(
Thank you!!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: November 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Family
He seriously has to deal with Tanya. It feels like he is avoiding her.
Another well written update!
Author's Response: He really does need to deal with her!
Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: December 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 A Family
So so sweet and well thought out! Will the be a paper cut at the party? LOL! Merry Christmas!
Author's Response: Thank you! Sorry...no paper cuts. :D
Hope your holidays were wonderful! Wow, 2010!! Crazy!
Summary: 
All human, Edward and Bella POV. Edward and Bella live in two different worlds, even though they live next to each other. Things get complicated when Edward, the leather jacket wearing cigarette smoking rebel falls for the girl next door.
*Banner by readergoof* : )
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Robert Pattinson
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes
Word count: 97025
[Report This] Published: July 19, 2009 Updated: March 23, 2010
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: January 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Teenage Wasteland
loved the last sentence! I didnt even catch they were brothers until Jasper yelled "Cullen".
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: January 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Too Pretty
Great music categories and choices.
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: February 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 23: Whatever It Takes
Wow! It is so nice to see a story where E can't buy everything he wants, and doesnt have super human grace!!!!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: March 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 25: Waking Up in Vegas
ROTFL! I needed that! What a perfect ending!
Summary: Companion story to It Was Only His Baby written in EPOV. I suggest you read IWOHB chapters first.
Bella and Alice want what any couple wants, a baby. Bella asks Edward to donate his sperm to help her and Alice start a family. He agrees, but with one condition. What will Bella choose, and what does it mean to her relationship with Edward? A/B and E/B pairings. Lemons.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Word count: 13955
[Report This] Published: July 23, 2009 Updated: September 08, 2009
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: September 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: The Favor
Great EPOV!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: September 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Flesh For the Win
nice!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: September 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Unspoken Apology
Loved this chapter. I wonder what is going to happen with his job.
Summary: Bella isn't a werewolve, vampire, or witch. She's "something other." Vamps/Werewolves included. Cannon Pairings. Nominated for Indie TwiFic Award for Most Original Story Line WIP.
Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes
Word count: 62264
[Report This] Published: July 28, 2009 Updated: December 04, 2009
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: November 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
OME!!!!!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: October 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Very well written.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: November 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
Really sweet update. Loved the Stand by Me reference. Author's Response: Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: November 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
Wonder thinking on Bellas part for the binding!
Another great update!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: November 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
Awesome!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: December 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
Very Well Written
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!
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