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Penname: Cullen Concession [ Contact]
Real name: Robin Parrish
Status: Member
Member Since: March 10, 2009
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Beta-reader: Yes
I adore Twilight Fan Fiction. I love to beta read.
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Summary: Bella is reunited with her childhood friend Alice under unlikely circumstances. When sparks fly between Bella and Alice's older brother, will she be able to resist? And what secrets is he hiding?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Renee, Rosalie, Seth
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes
Word count: 132141
[Report This] Published: June 05, 2009 Updated: February 10, 2010
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: September 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Magnetic
Loved the chapter and the tie!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: September 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Shiny Happy People
Loved that you didn't let them go to far.
Author's Response: They're not ready, you know? Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: October 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Two Steps Back
Must have more!
Awesome update. Love the ice cream
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: October 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Someday (V)
AWWW! Great update. At least they are talking now. Author's Response: Baby steps, right? Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: November 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 23: Trust (V)
Very sweet update!
Good Luck on finals! Glad you have your priorities in order! Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: January 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 26: Exhale (V)
WOW! Great Great ending scene! I am going to miss this story!
Summary: Emmett has teased Edward and Bella about their quiet sex life and framkly they have had enough. What do they young couple do to get Emmett to cringe and run screaming for the hills?
Bella is a vampire...Nessie does not exist.
Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 2179
[Report This] Published: June 06, 2009 Updated: June 08, 2009
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: June 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
You really write Emmett so well. I love the lighter side of Edward
Summary: Emmett comes up with a list of songs for Bella and Edward's wedding ... as only he can.
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 1318
[Report This] Published: June 10, 2009 Updated: July 05, 2009
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: January 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Play It Again, Em - One shot
HAHAHA! Really great! Author's Response: Thanks! I had a really great time writing it!
Summary: This story begins almost six years after Bella became a vampire. Renesmee is almost an adult and has begun to attend an all-girls private school while the rest of her family begins classes at the nearby public school. She is unaware of Jacob's past feelings for her mother. On the first day of class, Edward and Bella encounter an unusual individual who begins to suspect something is wrong with the mysterious Cullen family. The story has shifting point-of-view.
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: No
Word count: 92540
[Report This] Published: June 10, 2009 Updated: August 13, 2010
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: January 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 23: Unraveling - Jacob
What was Rosalie's motive in helping Nessie to get away? How did Edward know what Nate was doing? DId he see a vision from Alice?
Very intriguing.
Summary: Bella takes a trip to Vegas with her roommates Alice and Rosalie. After one wild night, Bella's life is turned upside down. A marriage certificate, a pregnancy, and a best friend in ICU send Bella and her friends into a whirlwind of emotions. Canon pairings and future LEMONS!
Much thanks to readergoof and annamorphos (respectively) for the awesome banners! Also, to Project Team Beta for taking this story on! You all are the best!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: Always Human
Chapters: 32 Completed: No
Word count: 206944
[Report This] Published: June 12, 2009 Updated: December 01, 2011
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: November 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Honest
I think that you really captured the emotion in this chapter. Loved the Bella explanation. Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love reading what you thought about it. This chapter was important to me, and capturing that emotion was the biggest part. I wanted their connection to overpower everything else. I'm glad it worked!
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: December 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 I Want This
Very well written. Happy birthday!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: February 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Soured Lemons
OH NO! She has to see past this compared to how he is acting. Author's Response: I sure hope she's that reasonable about it. We'll see.
Thanks so much!
Jen
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: March 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears
Yowza! Come on Bella, dont let the hormones get the best of you, listen to him, let him in, and have an awesome lemons with him...... Author's Response: I hope Bella listens to you. That's a great plan!
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: May 27, 2010
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
Didnt see that coming! I like Bella's independance but part of me knows her world needs to be re-evaluated and while single mom's raise babies all the time, it is fantastic to know that daddy wants to take part. And I guess I dont understand why she feels Edward lied. If she thinks about it, both of them wanted out immediately perhaps he forgot about the lawyer.... Come on pragnancy irrationality give E a break...please.
All that to say I loved it. Now please update quickly! Author's Response: That was a little bit of a surprise, huh? We'll see what's up next chapter.
I couldn't stand to write Bella laying in the bed and crying and wretching and mourning anymore. I needed her to get up and do what she needed to do to be okay.
As a single mama myself, I completely agree that if a daddy wants to be there he should be allowed to be. Bella won't push him out of the baby's life. It's only been two days since the Newton thing. She's just figuring stuff out. This whole jail thing may throw a wrench in her plans....
Thanks for reading and reviewing,
Jen
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: August 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Undeniably Inevitable
I am so glad these two are happy! Can't wait to read about New York!
Summary: Bella Swan awakens once morning with an epiphany: She doesn't want to look for a boyfriend anymore. What happens when she meets Edward Cullen on the very same day? One-shot with lemons, entry in the Age of Edward contest.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 12142
[Report This] Published: June 13, 2009 Updated: June 20, 2009
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: June 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: One-shot
Awesome! Needs a sequel!
Author's Response: It's in the queue...called "Frankie Say Relax." I think it is even better than Bella's version, myself. It is definitely schmexier, since it is a guy's POV.
Summary: What happens when Bella Swan meets Edward Cullen on the very day she had pledged to give up finding a boyfriend? EPOV companion piece to "Like a Virgin" one-shot/Age of Edward contest submission.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 12661
[Report This] Published: June 14, 2009 Updated: June 24, 2009
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed 
Date: June 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Sweet! Love a piece of work that quotes: Star Wars, Ferris Bueller, Heathers, and the Holy Grail!!!! Come on! This is like my dream fan fiction! Good Stuff! Author's Response: Your dream fan fiction? Really? Can you hear me squeeing? I am totes blushing. I just threw in all the things I love, so I'm glad you love it, too! Your praise is like a drug to me, bb!
Summary: Edward is nearly broken when he loses a dear friend in an accident. When he meets Bella at Forks High, not only is his heart healed, but his soul as well. However, Bella has a secret that could make or break them. AU/AH Twilight with a few twists.
 
***Nominated for Best AU-Human at the Sparkle Awards. Thanks to all those who nominated!***
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No
Word count: 41085
[Report This] Published: June 17, 2009 Updated: June 10, 2010
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: September 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Biology Blunders
Beautiful chapter! Author's Response: Thank you:)
ebhg:)
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: September 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: We Should Date
Wow! You really captured the intensity of the moment! Very well Written.
I also like the history that you gave for each person.
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: September 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Out of Body Experience
ok....I am with you, lets see how we get them together.
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: September 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Waking Up
Wow! What emotion!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: September 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Healing
So sweet!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: September 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Cafeteria Sightings
Loved that last paragraph!!!!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: September 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Fishing for Information
Loved Charlies retort!
Author's Response: Thank you! I personally love Charlie as a character. He doesn't get portrayed very well very often. I'm glad you like him here!
ebhg:)
Summary: 
THIS STORY HAS BEEN PUT ON HIATUS. At least until september-october 2010. I am getting married in august and it's hard to plan a wedding and write at the same time. I applaud those who can do that. I am NOT giving up on this story and I WILL finish it. Eventually. Thanks for understanding.
After Edward left in New Moon, Bella changed. She changed everything about herself in hopes of forgetting him. She graduated and moved down to California. The one place she knew she would never see the Cullens. 4 years later, she is now known as Elle Swan, a successful interior designer. What happens when she is sent somewhere else for her job?
Thank you to heatherdawnc for the banner!
Favorite review so far:
Ahh... so good!! A perfect mix with fluff and reality, you're soo good at writing that I gets envious *envious sigh*.
Have I told you how good this story and idea really is. There are many different stories where Bella changes her personality drastically after Edward left. And of all those stories I have been reading I think you are the one that has captured Bella's personalty best. Many of the stories have changed Bella that much that if she wasn't namned Bella you shouldn't know it was her, but you, even if you see the big changes, you can find the Bella how she was shy, sweet and madly in love with Edward four years ago. With another words - I think you are the one that have captured Bellas character best.
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No
Word count: 69614
[Report This] Published: June 17, 2009 Updated: December 27, 2009
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: November 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
I loved Edward's response to Emmett's thoughts! Great proposal! Author's Response: Hehehe, I love his response! Thank you for the review hun!
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