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Penname: Cullen Concession [ Contact]
Real name: Robin Parrish
Status: Member
Member Since: March 10, 2009
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Beta-reader: Yes
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Summary: Based upon Hagen of Baljan, Autumn Knights' Dream is a retelling of a Germanic fairy tale. It's an epic adventure involving intrigue, kidnapping, and finding true love.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes
Word count: 163407
[Report This] Published: April 19, 2009 Updated: October 19, 2009
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: October 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I enjoyed the festival being in one chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks! I didn't want to drag it out. It wasn't too important to know about the festival, but some details were necessary. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: October 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Wonderful characters!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I like them and I think they only get better further into the story. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: October 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
You did a great job!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: October 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Your research is so apparent!
Author's Response: Thank you. There was a lot of research that went into this story, but I enjoyed each minute of it.
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: October 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
I was just beginning to think the three girls were related to Esme!
Author's Response: I did drop a few hints that Esme knew who they were. I'm glad you picked up on them.
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: October 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Love it! Adore it!
Author's Response: I'm glad you are enjoying it.
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: October 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Your research is astounding.
I really love how enchanted E and B are with each other. I am also glad to hear of Emmetts healing process. Author's Response: Thank you so much. I did put a lot of research into this story, but it's been worth every minute.
I really liked writing about how enchanted they became with one another. It was just so sweet.
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: October 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Very nice. I love that you did not dismiss Jacob's temper or loss. Great way to bring in three more characters!!!!!!!!!!!! I feel there may be a HEA in the works!!!!!!!!!!! Author's Response: I am a HEA kind of girl. I'm not a fan of Jacob with Bella, but I feel like he does deserve his own HEA. It was a hard decision to have Carmen and Eleazar as Renesmee's parents, but I felt it was the best decision for the story.
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: October 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Yay!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! lol
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: October 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Ome! Didn't see that coming!
Author's Response: Yay! I surprised you with the dragon!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: October 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Awesome! I think I was holding my breath through this entire chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked this chapter! It was hard to write. The dragon part was difficult.
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: October 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Seriously? Mike is a jerk and needs to be thrown overboard!!!!!!! Author's Response: You might end up liking Mike by the end. He's just slightly delusional. lol Well, maybe more than slightly.
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: October 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Go Alice! I so have to stop reading and get to work. Author's Response: I know. I really like Alice and I felt like the others needed to say their piece as well. Edward and Bella have had a lot to say, but it was the other's turn to have a say.
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: October 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Jasper...always the strategist. Author's Response: I know. I really liked Emmett's say in this chapter as well - focusing Jasper.
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: October 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
Dang it! Dang it! Dang it!
You write so well!!!! Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. It's so nice to hear things like that.
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: October 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
Please be Edward, please be Edward!
Another awesomely suspenseful title. Author's Response: Thanks again. It's so nice to see so many reviews. Sorry it's taken me so long to respond to them all.
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: October 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
You like building the suspense, dont you?!?!?!?! Author's Response: I do. I enjoy a bit of suspense. I really liked writing the chapters when they were on the boat. It wasn't in my original outline. It just seemed to happen as I was writing and I really liked it, so I left it that way.
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: October 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
I knew it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Author's Response: Like I said, I like a HEA. It might be suspenseful, but I am a little predictable in this story.
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: October 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
Nice!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: October 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
Great way to tie up that loose end! Love it! Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! There's still a few loose ends to tie up.
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: October 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
"For the love of all thats holy do the catastrophes never end?" Author's Response: They do. I promise. I'm a HEA kind of girl. lol
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: October 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
Awesome!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: October 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
Beautiful!
Author's Response: Thank you.
Summary: Renee has a conversation with Edward. Eclipse missing moment. One-shot. Edward/Bella. Renee POV.
Categories: Eclipse Characters: Edward, Renee
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 852
[Report This] Published: April 23, 2009 Updated: May 03, 2009
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: May 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Mornings are Special--One-shot
Nice...very nice! Author's Response: Thanks...very much!
Summary: Edward puts a new spin on Renesmee's favorite bedtime tale: her parents' story.
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward, Renesmee
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 1302
[Report This] Published: April 25, 2009 Updated: May 04, 2009
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: May 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Bedtime for Renesmee
Beautiful and well written!!!! Author's Response: Thank you very much!
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